Family ties are the most precious feelings in the world. It is purer than water and purer than gold, but it always comes quietly and is not found. It is not so fragile as friendship, nor so obvious as love. It is like a cup of tea, emitting a faint fragrance, which makes people memorable. -inscription

Grandma's orders

"Don't panic during the exam! Don't eat fried food, don't drink raw water, don't run around, don't catch a cold, don't ... "Grandma told me over and over again, sometimes feeling redundant and shivering. But from grandma's affectionate eyes, I know that grandma's instructions to me are another expression of my love. Grandma, you must be worried about me! Don't worry, with your love, my granddaughter will succeed.

Dad's phone

Take care of yourself, fat boy. Don't worry. How much you can get in the exam is your grade. Dad believes in you and supports you. Buy more nutrition. Don't be afraid to spend money. Dad has plenty of strength, and daughter spends money. I am very happy. Drink more milk. Dad talked and laughed on the phone. But I know, in fact, he is also very worried about me, just trying to eliminate my nervousness! Dad earns money by strength, but sends me so much money. I think dad must tighten his belt this month. I almost cried when I wrote this.

Sister's suggestion

"Kid sister, during the exam, pay more attention, get points, don't let go, be careful! ……"。 Because my sister was a little incoherent when she was about to enter the examination room, I looked back at her in the tide of candidates, and the burning sun made her sweat. I quickly turned around for fear that my sister would see my tearful eyes.

Friend, cherish what you have. When you lose it, you will know how to cherish it. Is it too late? Affection is like tea, with endless aftertaste. We should cherish it and make it forever and ever. ...

The author chooses "home" as the object of "cherishing what he has", which seems simple, but in fact it is most in line with the author's own life practice. It is precisely because the author has a profound life experience and unique feelings that the article is written with delicate feelings, natural and smooth, and sees the truth in the ordinary. It can be seen that the supplementary questions of semi-propositional composition are extremely important, and whether the choice is appropriate or not is largely related to the success or failure of article writing. In addition, the conception of this paper is ingenious and unique. The combination of three close-ups from three different angles (ancestor, father and peer) is the main part of the article, which vividly reveals the different expressions of family affection, but also shows the same concern of relatives for "I", which can be described as close to the theme. The language of the article is exquisite and vivid, supplemented by philosophical inscriptions and lyrical endings, echoing the three subheadings at a distance, and the structure is seamless, which can be called a masterpiece in the examination room.

2. cherish your youth.

I just got rid of childishness, just released perfect innocence, and my youthful smile is still reserved. ?

-Inscription?

I like the crystal clear Lijiang River, and I also like the rippling West Lake water. However, in the long river of life, the youthful water in that bay is my favorite point.

Standing by the water of youth, thinking about how to cross the river, the fish playing in the water may disturb your thoughts. Under such disturbance, you may give up your original sincerity and purity and quietly embark on the "perfect palace". Because the heart of youth is always full of fantasy, however, my friend, have you ever thought that the water of youth is urgent, and we are not allowed to pursue perfection excessively, and it is always imperfect in the end? ?

I like foggy days because it gives me a hazy picture. However, the soft and hazy moonlight of youth is also the roof of my love. ?

Covered in the moonlight, an innocent heart sublimates into frequent beats, and you may not be able to restrain the throbbing in your heart with gentle attacks again and again. In silence, you entered the "hazy palace". Because the heart of youth is full of surprises, however, my friend, do you know that the hazy moonlight of youth needs to wipe your eyes and watch the beautiful scenery calmly, and don't get lost in the hazy beauty.

I like the tender and affectionate spring vitality, because it brings me hope and peace. And the ruthless storm in summer is me, that is, from the famous Lijiang River and West Lake Water, my favorite spot and Youth Water naturally lead to the heart of love, because it symbolizes the fiery passion of youth. ?

Lying in the arms of spring in youth, because "spring is a symbol of hope", you forget to pursue. Bathing in the sun brings you comfort. However, the excessive ease of life is the starting point of extinction, and perhaps your result will be confirmed by "dying in ease". Youth is full of passion, and the passionate summer has injected new vitality into it and given it the capital to fight life. The buds in spring are still shy, and the fruitful fruits have yet to be tested by the wind and rain in summer. ?

Stroll in the four seasons of youth, don't miss the scenery of spring, hug summer tightly! ?

Cherish the youth you have, because the smile of youth is still there.

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3.[ Idea Demonstration]

Wen Yi: Polish yourself.

Ye Chaoying

A young man went to a magazine for an internship and met an editor who was famous for his strict requirements and erudition. Every time a young person submits a manuscript, the editor always says, "If you are not sure about the spelling of a word, look it up in the dictionary." Moreover, young people are required to write an article every day and put it in a box on the editing desk. He didn't, so he knocked on the table and said, "Where's the article?" In this way, over the years, young people's articles changed with each passing day, and later they made great achievements in writing and participated in drafting the American Declaration of Independence.

This young man is Joe Franklin, a famous American scientist and democratic revolutionary. Point out that his editor's name is fern. Franklin has always been in awe and admiration, honed himself according to Fern's strict requirements, and finally succeeded. Later, when Fern died, Franklin saw this sentence while sorting out Fern's legacy: "I'm not who you think." I don't know how to write. Look up every word in the dictionary, and read a manuscript dozens of times. I have created an authoritative image for myself. You let me teach you, and I will try my best to do it. In fact, most of the time you are polishing yourself. "Polishing yourself? Franklin couldn't believe everything in front of him and pointed out that his writing authority was similar to writing blindness! My writing ability is actually polished by myself in the accumulation of one article a day! The old editor is just persistent and strict with him! Franklin didn't believe everything he said until he read Fern's other manuscripts-they were so naive that a writer was heartbroken!

Many things are like this: don't pin too much hope on celebrities or authorities, it is more important to polish yourself in life! If time is a grindstone, then a person's talent is the knife on the grindstone, and the sharpener who holds the handle is himself. Only by constantly honing yourself, constantly tempering yourself, forging and tempering in the fire of diligence, will your talent be sharp and bright, and finally radiate dazzling light.

Cherish yourself and you will have the resilience of "grinding a sword for ten years"; And with the hard work of "grinding a sword for ten years", why worry about the day when there is no "who will try"!

(From Thinking and Wisdom, No.3, 2004)

[opinion]

Although the article is short, it is rich in connotation. In the story, Franklin "respects and worships" editor Finn, thinking that he "met an editor who is famous for his strict requirements and erudition" during his internship and made continuous progress under his guidance. Unexpectedly, Fern's death revealed a big secret: Fern "didn't know how to write", "every word had to be looked up in the dictionary, and a manuscript had to be read dozens of times", "You asked me to teach you, and I did my best. In fact, most of the time you are polishing yourself. " What a shocking discovery, and what a thought-provoking philosophy. Yes, the profound truth that "the more important thing in life is to polish yourself" is really worth remembering. Cherish yourself and polish yourself, which is the message of this article.

Article 2: Learn to cherish.

Yu

Learning to cherish having said so much may create an impression that true friendship in life is not easy.

In fact, to sum up, the problem is that human beings have added too many other things to friendship, too many utilitarian obligations, too many impurities, and too many shadows brought by intimate relationships. If we can get rid of these attachments, everything will become clearer.

How to make it clear? My opinion is roughly as follows-

One, life is alive, you can have no achievements, but you can't live without friendship. If you use friendship to help your career, you will succeed. If you find friendship for your career, your friendship will die. The two are irreversible.

Second, people have to contact many people in their life, so friendship should have two levels: friendship in a broad sense and friendship in a strict sense. Without the former, it is hard, without the latter, it is difficult to be profound;

Third, friendship in a broad sense is the bright side of a person's whole resume. Its width is in direct proportion to the pleasure of life. But no matter how wide, we should be alert to evil, hypocrisy and betrayal;

Strictly speaking, friendship is a spiritual village that a person has been looking for all his life, and there are no practical road signs on the way. When you can't find it, you can only look for it, not stop it with your feet. Therefore, we can't talk lightly about "bosom friend". In most cases, people who are satisfied with friendship in a broad sense are more comfortable with each other.

5. Once you get a strict friendship, you should support it with your life. But it should not be hidden in the exclusive shadow because it is precious, but should be exposed to the sunshine of love to prevent psychological black-box operation.

Let's just write these articles. The article can be finished, but there seems to be some thread left at the bottom of the pen. What is this?

Think about it, I still find it difficult. The dense layers of "friends" are combined into a desert of friendship, not to mention friendship in a strict sense, even in a broad sense. If it's true and pure, it's hard to find. However, the object you are eagerly looking for is likely to pass you by, and you don't care or recognize it.

Where is our spiritual village?

I remembered a sketch written by a distant friend. When two ants met, they just touched their antennae and crawled in opposite directions. After climbing for a long time, I suddenly felt very sorry that in such a vast space-time, the same kind with such a small body met unexpectedly, "but we didn't hug."

Yes, there should be no such regret. But with the new development of space, our bodies have become smaller. When can we meet a few ants who can only touch the tentacles, then look at each other for a long time and finally hug each other tightly?

Is it easy to come to this world once?

Is it easy to meet once?

Is it easy to call a friend?

Again-learn to cherish and learn to be careful.

(Selected from Selected Essays)

[opinion]

This article talks about cherishing on the topic of friendship. Because we "human beings add too many other things to friendship" and "it's really hard to find it", we should cherish friendship. Then the article points out the importance of "cherishing friendship" from two aspects: friendship in a strict sense and friendship in a broad sense. At the same time, the work tells us from the difficulty of cherishing friendship: "Learn to cherish and be careful." This is teacher Yu's heartfelt warning, simple and sincere, and worth learning.

[Achievements of Acupuncture]

Cherish the smile you have

Chen Chuanqun, Class 0306, Huoqiu No.2 Middle School

The long road of life, blooming and falling, are all moving scenery on the road of life. We should not only welcome all kinds of colors with open arms, but also hold our heads high and laugh at the ups and downs of life.

Everyone knows that we don't know how to cherish until we lose it. However, what can we cherish until we lose it? We may all have such life experiences, such as youth, happiness, time, friendship … these are all worth cherishing. What if we lose it? Friend, please smile! I think as long as we smile, all the losses can be recovered. Please cherish the smile!

Life is like chess, and it is inevitable to lose; Life is like a road, and it is inevitable that there will be some bumps; Life is like a mountain, and it will inevitably be a little steep. Yes, who hasn't stumbled on the long road of life? Don't be discouraged in the face of the ups and downs of life. You should let a smile dissolve one bump after another. Smile can make you young, smile can make you successful, smile can cheer you up, smile can make you make a comeback ... A poet said, "You chose success, so you chose failure." Indeed, life is a long road, and failure is an unavoidable stumbling block. Being frank and open all the way is just a mediocre dream. Please give yourself a smile in the face of failure! Only in this way can we find hope in disappointment.

We should smile in the face of failure and smile in the face of difficulties. Our Chinese teacher wrote an article "Three Ways to Solve Difficulties", in which he wrote: "Difficulties are little angels, which can make you think repeatedly and broaden your mind. It can lead you to collect pearls of wisdom on the treasure island of knowledge, and it can make you sing passionate melodies on the stage of life forever. Therefore, when you encounter difficulties, you might as well say: difficulties, you are an angel. " Reading these confident words, I feel more confident. I believe that my indomitable will and my confident smile must be in the face of difficulties.

There are failures in life, and there are difficulties one after another in life, and there is infinite hope in life. My friend, Mr. Lu Xun once said that the road is trodden from a place where there is no road, and it is opened from a place where there are only thorns. Let's smile to dispel the dark clouds of failure and difficulties and welcome a brighter sunrise.

[opinion]

This article is a wonderful work on the spot, which was conceived by on-the-spot argumentation. The author shows us the infinite charm of smile from two aspects with a confident and smooth style. In particular, the whole sentence is used to make the article full of emotion, and the wonderful paragraphs of the teacher's article and Mr. Lu Xun's famous words are used to add a lot of color to the article.

Cherish your tears.

Xue Zujiao, Class 03 10, Huoqiu No.2 Middle School

"The top 20 students are ..." The class teacher read out the list loudly on the platform. When the girl heard her name, the tears in her eyes fell quietly and slowly flowed into her mouth along her cheeks. "Oh, it's so sweet this time," the girl said to herself silently.

The girl is an ordinary high school student, and her grades are as ordinary as hers. Except Chinese, other subjects can only be judged by case.

The girl likes poetry and prose very much, and sometimes she writes some essays at will. Although she is ashamed to take them out to meet people, she is still very satisfied in private. Her dream is to become a great writer in the future, praising the truth, goodness and beauty in the world with her own pen, and lashing the false, evil and ugly, which may be one of the reasons why girls like Chinese better. She also has a small wish, that is, to win a place for herself in China. The school is going to hold a Chinese competition for senior one. Many students signed up, and so did the girl. Although she doesn't think she is sure to be selected, she doesn't want to quit the competition. A few days later, the selected players were finally determined. When the list of selected players was sent out, the girl found that she was not among them, and suddenly she was utterly confused. She knows that her language ability is not worse than Selected Graduates's, just because she didn't get into the top 20 in the last big exam. That day, the girl was in a trance and her class notes were scribbled. She bit her lip to hold back the tears of injustice, but her lip was almost bitten, and the tears of disappointment rolled down involuntarily. Tears are sour and astringent, and the girl is still very painful in retrospect.

The girl secretly made up her mind that she must be admitted to the top 20 and regain her dignity. Since then, the girl has worked harder: the stars study with her at midnight, and the moon at dawn studies with her. In this way, the days passed day by day, just like the pages kept turning in the hands of girls. Finally, when it came to the big exam, the girl was very serious and confident.

Now, she really got her wish, and the hard sweat watered the sweet fruit, but the girl will never forget the tears she shed last time. So bitter ... she knew that it was this unbearable bitterness that inspired her confidence.

[opinion]

This article is a rare masterpiece in this composition exercise. From her writing style, we can see that she writes about herself, but she is very clever. Instead, we use the third-person bystander narrative to interpret the topic of "cherishing". The writing style is exquisite and smooth, the feelings are deep and sincere, and the theme is positive and confident. From the birth of this article, we can learn a more real writing essence: simplicity is our eternal pursuit of writing realm.