First, enlightenment
Is to explain your feelings in simple words. For example, in the representative work of Hunan candidates (Running of the Mind), I hope that one day I will "realize Zen". After a period of mental operation, he finally understood:
The operation of the mind is actually very simple:
Look at the world with a normal heart, live a normal life with a normal heart, and like to have a soft heart.
This ending is the most "simple and clear" answer to the beginning "I" looking forward to one day "enlightenment", which makes people clear at a glance and goes straight to the heart.
Second, implicit.
This is a technique contrary to the "enlightenment" thinking, that is, the meaning is not clearly stated, and it is included in the image described in the text. For example, the college entrance examination masterpiece (two dandelion seeds) is:
The new seed cultivated by the second seed is mature. It looked at one child after another, and suddenly thought of the seed boss:' where is my brother?' "Is it like me that it landed on the grassland so soon and gave birth to so many children?"
Here, "I left my own children" and "it fell on the grassland like me and gave birth to so many children so soon", one is the implied topic "position and value"; The second is the implicit theme: a person's life destiny and life value will be different in different positions.
Implication is not ambiguous, and its main feature is implication.
Third, embedded green.
It is to embed wonderful words describing beautiful scenery in the lyrics, giving people a poetic association and aesthetic feeling. Such as Heilongjiang examinee's masterpiece (a green confession):
In fact, I can be green, I can be beautiful, I can shelter from the wind and rain ... because I am green, I have the responsibility to wear green. I have no enchanting red, orange, blue and purple, and I have no indomitable spirit, but I can bring you fresh coolness. April has me, full of hope; May has me, looking forward to the future; June is with me, dreams and joy are together. I am a piece of green, and I am willing to make oxygen for your photosynthesis.
Here, green grass, flowers, shelter from the wind and rain, the responsibility of wearing green, the freshness and coolness of red, orange, blue and purple and enchanting words make this lyric inlaid with green and red, which makes people poetic, picturesque and memorable.
Fourth, draw immortals.
It is to skillfully intercept the instantaneous expressions of the characters, make the finishing point, and let readers see the rich, complex and subtle inner world of the characters. For example, the representative work of Anhui candidates ("What? -"That's right!" ):
"Rinrin Bell ..." "What? Is the exam over? " I'm surprised. Then I thought, "Yes, it should be like this!"
The sentences such as "I'm surprised" and "Let me think about it" here not only conceal the topic, but also vividly depict the attitude of strict candidates when they suddenly hear the bell at the end of the exam, which makes people feel as if they were there.
Verb (abbreviation for verb) discovery
Here are some suggestions to break the suspense. Suspense is a kind of "doubt" or conflict designed in the plot development of a work, and it is a method that constantly arouses readers' anxious expectation and enthusiastic attention. Find out whether it was to answer questions or to solve contradictions. This is often used in short stories, such as the representative work of Hebei candidates in the national college entrance examination in 2005 (summer night chat):
Lao Zhang pushed the door in and found that the table was empty and there was no wife. Lao Zhang shouted several times and didn't respond. Lao Zhang panicked and hurried across the hall to ask what had happened. The neighbor said, "Your wife was robbed this afternoon and has gone to the hospital. Please go and have a look! " "Lao Zhang immediately blindsided. ...
Lao Zhang is also a warm-hearted person? He is a typical figure who keeps a clear head. When he came back from work, he saw the bag snatcher running past him. He didn't ask or listen, but also made a long speech: "Look at the fierce look of the bag snatcher, I dare not ask." If I catch up with him, he turns around and gives me a knife, and I'm finished ... "It was Lao Zhang's wife who was robbed at last. The "neighbor said" in the article is "disturbing".
Sixth, symbol
It means to rely on things, that is, to express a special meaning with concrete things. For example, in 2005, the college entrance examination for Zhejiang candidates (Hong Xiuxie Hundred Miles):
Hong Xiuxie is a thing of the past. Great-grandmother will always bear all the hardships of beauty in my heart.
Hong Xiuxie, White Bree. A woman's most insipid legendary life is told in silence.
The topic is "one leaf and one world". Hong Xiuxie's "one branch and one leaf" embodies his great-grandmother's "all youth, all tears and laughter", symbolizes traditional etiquette and inspires us to think about the fate of women in China.
Seven, light beam
It is to summarize the whole article in indirect language. For example, the representative works of Hubei candidates (inside and outside):
After browsing several "wonderful" lives, I had an epiphany: the political autonomous prefecture should be "external, internal" in doing things, being a man and doing things. Only by knowing what to go out and what to go in can we grasp things from a macro perspective, analyze the overall situation, analyze the essence from a micro perspective, and integrate spirit, emotion, thought and quality. This will make your life more perfect and wonderful.
The "wonderful life" mentioned in the quotation is the three characters discussed in this paper, namely, Zhuangzi with beautiful feelings, Zhuge Liang with intelligence and beauty, and Ren Changxia with beautiful mind. The content of "epiphany" is a summary of what was discussed.
Eight, blank space
It means a lot, say five or six, get through one or two points, and leave one or two points for readers to think, imagine and ponder. Such as Gansu examinee's masterpiece (Milu and Kongming):
Why do thousands of years of cultural accumulation make us more utilitarian and short-sighted? "Why do we bathe in civilization in modern society, but grow narrowness in our hearts?" Milu and Kongming, why are we treated so unfairly? Should we re-examine and treat forgetting and memory in this way?
The four rhetorical questions are thought-provoking and memorable, which are two points for readers to think about: Milu and Kongming were once brilliant, failed in the same great cause and left the same place. Why do you have different views? "Thousands of years of cultural accumulation" and "civilization of modern society" are getting narrower and narrower in their hearts? "
Nine. mind
It refers to the echo with the content of the text. For example, the representative work of Fujian candidates (8? Eighteen? Twenty-eight): One day, I went to the kindergarten to pick up my daughter, and her daughter came crying. "The teacher said that the sun is red and the grass is green. But the sun and grass I saw with my father's yellow glasses were yellow. The teacher said no and hit me. " My daughter was crying and talking, and these words suddenly hit my heart, and the door of the long-sealed memory suddenly opened. I think of the yellow grass and the yellow sun. My mother is a bookboy and my father is a coachman. I think of the irregular polygon that has not been polished by the world.
My tears slipped quietly. For irregular polygons, we no longer have ...
Here, "I think of yellow grass and yellow sun" echoes the story in the first paragraph, "My mother is a bookboy and my father is a coachman" echoes the story in the second paragraph, and "I think of irregular polygons that have not been polished by the world" echoes the title material.
X. viewpoint
Outlook is an affectionate call and an emotional exchange, which can boost morale and inspire people. For example, the representative work of Jiangxi candidates (face-to-face):
Friends who love beauty, if you want to have a beautiful face that everyone loves, please throw away the plastic surgery knife. The only thing we have to do is to make our hearts pure and beautiful.
Please remember and believe that the face is born of the heart.
What is used here is the method of calling, talking directly with "friends who love beauty" and sincerely "calling deeply".
XI。 cite
At the end of the article, quote poems, lyrics, famous sayings, etc. , can metaphor personal feelings, reveal the central idea, enhance persuasiveness, and receive concise, intriguing and finishing touch effects. For example, Jiangsu examinee's masterpiece (night sound):
Reasoning, let's end with this little poem by Han Han:
You put your bloody head
On the scales of life.
Keep everyone alive.
All have lost weight.
This poem touches the reader's heartstrings and sublimates the main idea of the article: Ji Kang wrote the last journey of his glorious life with "blood gushing from his unyielding neck" and wrote down the reader's self-esteem, which not only expressed his admiration and admiration for the sages, but also permeated his feelings and thoughts on the tragedy of the times.
XII. Deduction
Stick to the topic or the topic, or both. For example, the representative work of Jiangxi candidates (face change):
Lao Zhang came to his senses and scratched the word in a slap. The "sight" came back and said, "hey, director, look at you. Oh, really, my smelly mouth! Bah ... Xiao Wang, pour the tea quickly. " After that, I almost helped the director to a chair, and the two pieces of meat on my face were crowded together, much like traitors in war movies.
Xiao Wang heard the shouts and ran helplessly to make tea. At this time, there was a Sichuan opera changing face on the TV in the office. Xiao Wang thought at that time: Did Lao Zhang learn to change his face, too? Why did he change his face so quickly?
The topic is "face" and the topic is "changing face". I have followed FACE/OFF three times, seeing the big from the small, and implicitly flogging the "chameleon" in my life with humor.
Deduction is not a simple repetition, it is the refinement and sublimation of a theme, which is often manifested in the expansion of scope and deepening of degree.
Deduction is a kind of writing accomplishment. From a certain point of view, no matter how an argumentative or narrative article ends, it is necessary to "deduct the topic".
Thirteen, all of them.
Is to use all kinds of methods in the end. In actual writing, the ending technique is often not used alone, but in many ways. For example, the ending technique of Two Dandelion Seeds, the representative work of Jilin candidates in the national college entrance examination in 2005, is "hidden" from the implicit and explicit meaning; As far as the topic is concerned, it is "deduction"; As far as rhetorical methods are concerned, it is symbolic and personification. Another example is the ending technique of Hebei examinee's masterpiece (summer night chat) in the national college entrance examination in 2005, which is said to be "disturbing" from the plot; Judging from the article clip, "Lao Zhang suddenly blindsided ..." The article came to an abrupt end, and Lao Zhang's thoughts at this time were all in the ellipsis above, which made readers imagine that it was "blank space" again; The words "unexpected" and "reasonable" do not appear in the whole article. But the image described is written around this topic everywhere, and it is "implicit".
The above methods sometimes overlap each other, so when understanding, we must not fix our thinking and do not know how to be flexible; When you use it, you should look at the content and never copy it mechanically.