1. Use contrasting techniques to write essays

Student:

One is Lan Lan, her dark face has a layer of fine She was sweating, and the hand holding the pen was shaking slightly. She bit her lip tightly, as if she wanted to bite out an answer with the smallest score, but... The other one was Yang Junjun, the student with the best grades in the class. At this moment, she had already finished answering all the questions on the test paper. This test paper seemed a little too easy for her. She glanced at her watch and knew that there were still twenty minutes left until the closing time. So she She looked at this classmate and that classmate boredly. Suddenly, Yang Junjun's triumphant eyes fell on Lan Lan. She looked at Lan Lan with admiration. She always felt that Lan Lan was an underachiever in the class and had a bad brain. Not smart. This feeling reminds Junjun...

A few days ago, in order to make the students more confident about getting an ideal score, the math teacher copied many difficult questions on the blackboard. When the teacher tiredly stretched out his hands covered with chalk dust and sweat to wash, he found that there was no water in the wash basin, and the towel was left alone in the cold. The teacher couldn't help asking: "Who is on duty today?" ? Why don't you fetch water? "On duty? Fetch water? oh! In order to review, take exams, review again, and take exams, the students have been unable to spare time and are unwilling to deal with these "nosy things". But Yang Junjun knew very well that today was her duty. She looked at the blackboard After reading the dense exercises, I glanced at the wash basin again, and I hesitated for a while: copy the exercises, or waste time fetching water?

Just when Yang Junjun couldn't make up his mind, Lan Lan had put down his pen and walked over silently, holding the wash basin in both hands, and walked towards the door... Yang Junjun came back to his senses and looked silently again. This poor student, Lan Lanshi, felt a sudden movement in her heart and quickly tore off a page of white paper. She quickly and carefully copied down a few questions with the highest scores. Then, when the invigilator turned around, she crumpled the white paper into a ball. Accurately throwing it at Lan Lan, who was lowering her head and thinking hard... The time to rewind the paper finally came. Yang Junjun was the first to hand in the paper. When she was about to walk out of the classroom, she glanced at Lan Lan again, intentionally or unintentionally. Coincidentally, Lan Lan also raised her head at this time and glanced at Yang Junjun thoughtfully. She smiled bitterly and hurriedly handed in the paper. 2. About writing essays that reflect the different qualities of a person in contrastive writing

Among classmates, the most valuable thing is the spirit of self-sacrifice and thinking for others. No, there are two in our class!

One day, Huang Dinghai, the most annoying naughty guy in the class, accidentally wiped the homework that had just been assigned in the previous class. The teacher looked very angry when he saw it.

"Who wiped it? The one who clearly told me to keep it for comment?" The teacher faced the whole class and suddenly said loudly.

Everyone was so scared that they didn’t say a word!

The teacher's expression changed, he walked to the podium table and asked again in a stern voice: "Who is it?"

At this time, students Huang Yonghong and Huang Rongjie were seen moving. After a moment, as if they sympathized with Ding Hai, they all stood up and said: "It's me!" "It's me!"

The teacher turned around and glanced at Rong Jie and Yong Hong. , then shook his head and said: "It's not you!"

After a while, the teacher said again: "I will never impose any penalties. Those who erase the blackboard should stand up!"

Later, Ding Hai still stood up! So the class started talking about it.

Some students said: "Ding Hai was careless." Of course, this includes me, Rong Jie, Yong Hong and others; but some people said: "Ding Hai did it on purpose." "Ding Hai always makes trouble and deliberately prevents others from copying their homework."

This possibility is very high, because who doesn’t know that Ding Hai has always been naughty, but this time he seems to be really careless... 3. Write an essay using contrastive expressions about the person I admire the most

The person I admire the most is my Chinese teacher, Teacher Li, who has been teaching me since I entered school.

Whenever Teacher Li stands in front of the podium, her slender figure is particularly eye-catching. She is graceful and graceful. Her steps are light and graceful like a willow in March. Her face is like a blooming white orchid, with a smile written on her face, always overflowing with contented joy. Teacher Li’s teaching is fun and open, and most importantly, she cares deeply about the quality of her classmates. In front of her, no matter who it is, the good ones need to be praised and the bad ones need to be criticized.

I remember one time, Yang Yong accidentally fell down at the door of our class after physical education class. Teacher Li happened to pass by, and she flew over in two steps and helped Yang Yong up. , asked eagerly: "Did it hurt from the fall? Where did it hurt..." The teacher kept comforting him, and Yang Yong cried excitedly. The teacher cared about us and loved us like a mother. It gets dark early in winter, and teachers always send students who are far away home when it snows. If a classmate is sick, the teacher will give up his precious time to visit him and make up classes for him. Therefore, our class’s Chinese scores are excellent, either first or second in grade. What surprised me even more was that she never "occupied" our precious self-study time, but sometimes ended get out of class a little late just to teach us more knowledge.

Teacher Li is strict and methodical, strict and measured with us. He is worthy of being a good teacher with both ability and political integrity. Six years of primary school life is coming to an end, and I really can't bear to leave her - the person I admire most, Teacher Li. 4. Use contrasting techniques to write a 300-word essay to express a distinct character image of a certain person.

Walking down the spiral staircase and picking up a colorful shell, the owner of the memory appears faintly.

Alas! This delicate girl like me really gives my mother a headache! He doesn't do any housework, and he always curls his lips when he encounters food he doesn't like. These are all very exhausting, so my mother made a big plan - let me pick tea during the summer vacation! I thought to myself: It’s just tea picking, what’s so difficult about it? So, I agreed without saying a word.

Bucai didn’t know, but Yicai was shocked! Arriving at the tea garden, the aroma of tea hits your nostrils. I followed the example of an adult, placed the tools, and soon started picking tea.

I watched my grandma’s tea-picking technique: pick up the petiole with her index finger and middle finger. There are usually three or four leaves on the petiole. So, I started a "tea picking trip" in the tea garden and gave the tea leaves a "haircut".

I was in high spirits at first, humming a little tune, but when it was almost noon, the sun was burning fiercely on the earth, and I felt that my hands were sore and my legs were numb. , and my stomach started to growl. Finally it was time to eat. I walked with my grandma, thinking about where to go for lunch later. What was the meal like? Unexpectedly, the place to eat was just a shabby shed nearby - so shabby, my aunt opened the lid of the rice cooker, and a burst of hot air rushed over. I looked down and saw that it was just some vegetables and rice that I didn't like to eat. , the soup lid was also opened, and a few pieces of fat meat were floating on the soup, which looked so disgusting.

However, I was so hungry that I couldn’t care less about reading. I devoured two large bowls.

After eating, I suddenly felt itchy on my feet. When I lowered my head, I saw that my feet had been bitten by mosquitoes. After picking tea this time, I finally realized: how delicious the food at home is and how easy the housework is! After picking tea, I grew up.

You must learn to compare your situation with others and see how happy you are in comparison. Don't be in the midst of blessings and not know your blessings. 5. What are the benefits of contrastive writing?

Contrast deliberately puts two opposite and opposite things or two opposite and opposite aspects of the same thing together, and uses a comparative method to describe or illustrate this kind of contrast. The rhetorical technique is called contrast, also called contrast.

The use of contrast can reveal the opposition between good and bad, good and evil, beauty and ugliness, giving people a deep impression and inspiration. From the perspective of composition, there are two situations in comparison.

1. Comparison of opposites; 2. Comparison of opposites. Contrast also means to make the characteristics or essence of opposite or opposite things stand out and make them more vivid and prominent.

The difference between contrast and foil: 1. foil can be divided into subject and object. foil things serve the things being foiled and are meant to highlight the things being foiled. Contrast shows the phenomenon of opposition. Two opposite things are in a parallel relationship, and there is no distinction between subject and object.

2. foil describes two things; contrast can be two things, or it can be two different aspects of one thing. 3. The rhetorical effect of foil is mainly to highlight positive or negative things, express strong thoughts and feelings, and deepen the central idea of ??the article.

As the saying goes, "red flowers need green leaves to support them." The rhetorical effect of contrast is mainly to use comparison to remind the essence of things, making the good appear better and the bad appear worse.

Let people identify in comparison and leave a deep and distinct impression on them. 6. Use the technique of contrast and foil to write a composition that begins with a description of the scene

The beginning of the composition (Shunde Teaching and Research Section) Jia Baoyu said a very insightful saying when commenting on the Grand View Garden: Everything that is beautiful must "have The principles of nature lead to the interest of nature."

Millions of candidates across the country are competing to write outstanding college entrance examination essays, and it is inseparable from a "reason" and "interest". "College Entrance Examination" magazine has collected and sorted out the excellent college entrance examination essays in recent years and found that there are many remarkable things, but all of them are shining with "wit" and "rational interest".

Just looking at the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel gratified and inspired. We have made some classifications of them for you, maybe you can also learn from them.

1. Be the first to read the opening chapter. The most taboo thing about the opening chapter is that it gives people the feeling of digressing from the topic. It tells the marking teacher directly that the author has not reviewed the meaning of the question, and the composition score will be greatly reduced. Please look at the beginnings of several essays from the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination.

Example 1 "Remembered by Language and Communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, and the clouds rolling and relaxing. The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; the lush green clothing in midsummer indicates autumn. The abundant harvest; the abundant fruits of golden autumn indicate the bleakness of winter.

The four seasons cycle, autumn passes and winter comes, and everything in nature performs wonderfully.

If we have not experienced the baptism of severe winter, how can we look forward to the hope of early spring? Our human society is also like the natural world. Without the connection of language and a common way of life, how can we connect the world as a whole and build a bridge of communication? "This metaphor at the beginning is inappropriate, and the previous metaphors did not pave the way for the similarities.

Why do you say this? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, and "green clothing" and "harvest" How can there be such a relationship between "fruit" and "bleakness"? Especially the rhetorical question "How can we hope for the hope of early spring without going through the baptism of severe winter" is even more inaccessible to the topic. Example 2 "Soul Interaction": "The big trees never laugh at the weakness of the grass. Although the grass is weak, it adds to the greenness of the grassland; the peonies never laugh at the simplicity of wild flowers. Although wild flowers are simple, they bring infinite vitality to the earth.

The reason why big trees and grass, peonies and wild flowers can live in harmony is because they have the same language, mutual communication, and spiritual interaction. " When moving closer to the topic, this beginning also fails to identify the similarities and seems far-fetched.

Example 3 "Language and Communication": "Language is a small grass, communication is a green shade. ; Language is a white cloud, communication is a cloud; language is a flower, communication is a sea of ??flowers. "This beginning treats "language" and "communication" as the relationship between the individual and the whole, and also fails to understand the connection between the two.

The above three examples are all metaphors used to increase literary talent. This is also the usual writing method of many candidates. If the candidate does not have an accurate grasp of the topic and gets off track at the beginning, it will seriously affect the score.

The following example is more accurate. , vividly illustrates the role of language. Example 4 "Communication starts with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth.

Only when language is expressed accurately can communication be successful. If the language is wrong, it may cause unpredictable consequences.

So how can we express language accurately and promote successful communication? ” Therefore, whether the opening is well written or not, the core issue still lies in reviewing the topic; when reviewing the meaning of the topic and solving the topic, seek accuracy first, and then seek image. The following introduces many ways to open the article.

1. Quote famous quotes ① Asking what is love in the world can directly teach people how to make love in life and death. Yuan Hao is really easy to ask and he is very good at asking.

His question can be said to have asked many people throughout the ages. How many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price?

But each family’s words are as different as each person’s face. Xi Shi said: “Love is a tool. .

..." ("Asking What Love Is in the World") ②In a church in the Middle Ages, a saint began his speech: "The reason why I became a saint is because I saw through it. Money, what's mine is everyone's. "Long years, a snap of a finger.

In a prison across the century, a thief began his life monologue: "The reason why I became a thief is because I have seen through money. Everyone is mine. " ("The Saint and the Thief") ③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery. "

Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our heads, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. "Many times, we are confused by the incomprehension of a problem or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go becomes a puzzle in our hearts. We are often undecided and swayed. At this time, it is necessary to think from another angle. This will Give you more chances of success.

("Spinning the Kaleidoscope") 2. Use letter format skillfully ① Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am an ordinary descendant of yours. Thousands of years later, I dared to write you a letter, not only to send you my respectful greetings, but also to urgently await your advice on several difficult questions ("A Letter to Confucius") ②Abominable standard answer. : When I saw you, I was filled with righteous indignation.

So, driven by the flames of anger, I wrote this letter to denounce you. The answer is colorful, but you insist on wearing it. The hat of "standard".

You must know that countless tragedies have occurred just because of the word "standard". The following are your three major crimes:... (One of the "standard answers". "Letter") 3. Borrowing the writing style from Zhang Hui's novel ① "It is said that the general trend of the world must be united if it is divided for a long time, and it must be divided if it is united for a long time. "

The era when the three kingdoms of Wei, Shu, and Wu were at odds no longer existed. As the Yangtze River moved eastward, the waves wiped out all the heroes of the past. And Adou, the heir to the former Shu Kingdom, also became "lucky to miss Shu." Now, the world has become the world of the "Sima clan"

("The Meeting of the Heroes of the Three Kingdoms") ② The Juyi Hall in Liangshanbo is now brightly lit and full of people. Gathered here, everyone is quarreling.

What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select a tiger fighting hero.

This honorary title is a big deal, and whoever wins it will be able to sit in the second place in Liangshanbo.

So it caused all the heroes to gather here and argue.