① Reject blank: blank is the blind spot of life.
I solemnly swear by my pursuit of passionate life: I refuse to be blank. (Chinese for Middle School, No.7-8, 2006)
Xiao Juan's "My Views on Girls' Schools" begins: The so-called "girls' schools" are nothing more than building a school for female students, and all gay men are "forbidden". This is suspected of "gender discrimination", which does not conform to the principle of "equality between men and women" in China, and the criticism caused in society is inevitable. (Selected Works of China Loose-leaf, No.8, 2002)
The beginning of the two articles is straightforward, which makes the center of the article prominent, and it is easy for readers to grasp the main points, grasp the content and deeply understand the theme.
Second, ask questions to arouse readers' thinking. For example:
① The beginning of silly tea "I don't think I conquered the desert": In the 20th century, human beings loved to say "conquering nature" and "... showed human strength". Conquering nature, how can it be called conquest? Climb up the hill and kick your feet. Is that conquest? A dozen people have prepared for a year and a half, full of materials and equipment, and some people have prepared camp after camp for them, nervously avoiding storms and avalanches, and fortunately climbing to the top of the mountain and planting flags can be said to conquer mountains and even nature? (The Road to Success in Composition,No. 1, 2004)
At the beginning of "the full moon is a painting, and the lack of the moon is a poem", candidates of Fujian college entrance examination in 2006: In a colorful world, many people are busy for the sake of busyness. When I enjoy it, I often ignore the pursuit in my heart. So, when you don't feel you have to do anything, why not stop thinking like water and let time stand still? Leave a little blank for the busy life and let the real heart doodle here? ("Middle school Chinese? 6? 1 reading and writing new space, No.7-8, 2006)
There are doubts about the topic at the beginning of both articles, and the following is natural. Such a beginning not only broadens the thinking, but also makes people think deeply and arouses readers' interest in reading.
Third, the explanation of the definition is concise and clear. For example:
① Students practice the beginning of "talking about fantasy": What is fantasy? Fantasy is a beautiful idea of future things according to people's own wishes.
(2) The beginning of students' training to "aim high": ambition is the goal set in people's minds, the determination made by people to achieve this goal, and a spiritual motivation to inspire people to move forward. Ji Kang, a poet known as one of the "Seven Sages of Bamboo Forest" in history, said: "People are inhuman without ambition." It can be seen that life must have a destiny.
"Fantasy" and "ambition" are abstract concepts, and it is necessary for the author to make a popular and concise explanation through their definitions, so that readers can better read and understand the following.
Fourth, analyze cases (or allusions) and lead to topics (or opinions). For example:
At the beginning of students' practice, "talk about diligence": Ten minutes after class, students sit around and talk about things. One of the students sighed and said, "It's a pity that my parents are not college students or teachers, otherwise my academic performance is not bad." Some students immediately agreed with her, but many students disagreed with her. At that time, there was an endless debate in the classroom, and the students expressed their opinions. In my opinion, a person must have certain objective conditions if he wants to achieve something in his studies. However, it is personal efforts that play a decisive role.
(2) Students practice the beginning of Ode to Clean Hands: Yu Qian, an honest official in the Ming Dynasty, went to Beijing after finishing a job. He was advised to bring a batch of local products as usual. He declined to write a poem: "Keep your hands to the sky, lest you talk too long." What it means, but keep clean. Later generations praised the officials' incorruptibility with "honest officials".
From the case analysis, it is similar to the beginning of this topic, and it is often used to write "one thing, one discussion" argumentative papers, but it needs to be emphasized that when using this method, the cited examples should be simple and clear, closely related to the topic, and it is forbidden to elaborate.
Fifth, quote lyrics, famous sayings, etc. Establish contact. For example:
① The student exercise "Life Needs Frustration" begins: "How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain? No one can succeed casually. " On the road to success, it is not smooth sailing, and hardships and setbacks are essential.
(2) At the beginning of students' practice, "If you don't accumulate a small amount of money, you can't achieve great things": Xun Kuang, a great thinker in the Warring States period, said, "If you don't accumulate steps, you can't even travel a thousand miles; If you don't accumulate small streams, you can't become rivers and seas. " For thousands of years, this sentence has been engraved in people's hearts, because it contains a very simple and profound truth, small things can not be underestimated, and the accumulated power can not be underestimated.
Cleverly quoting the lyrics, famous sayings and epigrams related to the article as the beginning of your article can make the article read vividly and friendly; At the same time, because famous aphorisms are philosophical and authoritative, it is persuasive to take them as the starting point and can enhance the persuasiveness of the article.
Six, incisive metaphor, image reveals the topic. For example:
1 revel in the beginning of "maturity": mature people have their own charm. Like a reed in the wind, it shakes but does not fall; Such as water hibiscus, gorgeous but not demon; Like the blue of an empty valley, fragrant but not arrogant. Keep a low profile, the essence is contained, the edge is gathered and the truth is returned. (Yomiuri Shimbun, June 2005)
② Students begin to practice "Water Drops and the Sea": the relationship between individuals and collectives is just like the relationship between water drops and the sea. Water drops will dry up when they leave the sea, and individuals cannot live without the collective. Each of us must understand that only by putting individuals in the collective can our intelligence be brought into play and we can make a difference. We should straighten out the relationship between individuals and the collective.
Both articles use appropriate metaphors at the beginning, which are not only vivid, but also reasonable and intriguing, making the writing of the articles eye-catching.
Seven, positive and negative contrast, clearly reveal the topic. For example:
1. Strict lightweight binding: Prometheus in ancient Greece was tied to a post because he stole fire for human beings, and has suffered from all kinds of torture since then.
His pain comes from that heavy bondage.
However, there is another constraint on human beings opposite to the sky, which is light constraint. Its name is freedom. (Chinese for Middle School, No.7-8, 2006)
② The beginning of students' practice "The giving of time and the value of life": Time, step by step, never stops and never looks back. It is neither fast nor slow. After seconds, minutes, hours and days, it accumulates into weeks, months, years and generations. It is selfless and gives to everyone equally. However, it is heartless. Whoever follows the footsteps of time and doesn't let it take a step will live a valuable life. Anyone who wastes time and idles around will live a meaningless life. In the end, a detailed settlement will be made.
In contrast, the pros and cons, right and wrong, positive and negative contrast is very clear, leaving a deep impression on readers.
Eight, "Rebound Pipa", reverse introduction. For example:
At the beginning of students' practice of "fishing for three days and drying the net for two days", people always think that the idiom "fishing for three days and drying the net for two days" has a derogatory meaning, saying that it is "a metaphor for lack of perseverance in study or work, often interrupted and unable to persevere". In fact, "fishing for three days and drying the net for two days" is correct to some extent.
(2) Students practice "Can ninjas be safe? At the beginning: Now, there is a "desire" craze all over the country. Everyone is full of affection for the heroine Liu Huifang, who is regarded as an ideal figure and a perfect embodiment. However, I will vote against it-Liu Huifang is not perfect.
The beginning of this thinking mode of seeking differences is manifested in the reverse thinking and exploration of some inherent concepts and common views. This opening is unique and gives people a refreshing feeling.
Imitate famous articles and bring forth new ones. For example:
At the beginning of "Zhong Yong Becomes Many People", it was written by a student imitating the famous book "The Theory of Six Kingdoms". Zhong Yong became many people, but he has no talent. His disadvantage is that he will not learn the day after tomorrow, so his special talent of "writing poetry at the age of five" is useless. Maybe someone will ask, "Is he unwilling to study?" The answer is no, because his father only cares about immediate interests, which leads him to "visit his hometown" and get some food from the appreciator, which makes him lose the opportunity to learn. From this point of view, Zhong Yong, who has not achieved great success, has indeed not been tortured by others the day after tomorrow.
The imitation at the beginning of famous works should be based on the in-depth analysis and deep understanding of the original works. It is often an emergency in desperation. Never copy mechanically, there is nothing new, and you can't take over-reliance on imitation as a writing habit.
There are many ways to write at the beginning of the article, and several methods can be used at the same time. For example, in the third case, how to start an argumentative essay should be based on the central idea of the article and flexibly grasped and applied according to the actual needs of the argumentative essay. No matter which method (or methods) you use at first, you should pay attention to being meticulous, natural and concise. The scores of articles in the college entrance examination are between 5 1-60. If you want to get high marks in a literature class, you must carefully carve the "phoenix head" to make your opening beautiful, exquisite, novel and appropriate, creative, shocking and fascinating, so that readers will fall in love at first sight and want to read quickly. How to carve a kind of phoenix head? The following successful examples can guide you:
1. Modify the image to make your eyes clear.
For example, at the beginning of "Commemorating the Lost Beauty":
"I look up at Li Qingzhao's beautiful and thin back with a new latitude, listen to her drifting away, and lean over to hold up the treasures accumulated in the long river of history, in order to commemorate Li Qingzhao in my heart and the graceful beauty that passed away."
At the beginning, the author points out the image of writing-Li Qingzhao, and then makes a light and sad woman look brand-new with the dress of "beautiful and slim" and "graceful and beautiful". At first glance, readers feel fresh and bright, with extraordinary significance, and unconsciously applaud her poetic literary talent.
2. Rendering the atmosphere makes people feel.
For example, at the beginning of Red Country Shoes in White Cloth:
"Mei Huang's misty rain hangs over the picturesque south of the Yangtze River, but I often dream of a sunny and warm afternoon in winter. In the backyard of the old house, my great-grandmother leaned against the door and smiled slightly with a needle and thread in her hand. All nostalgia comes from a pair of embroidered shoes, all youth, all tears and laughter. "
With meticulous brushwork, readers are introduced into the realm of poetry and painting, and then memories of great-grandmother and tears and smiles treasured in their hearts are introduced, and readers are also moved. The ancients said, "articles struggle together." Such an ingenious style of writing is naturally wonderful and wins the favor of readers.
3. Typical cases, one thing and one discussion.
For example, the beginning of Su Wu Forever:
"He put a sheep whip and a gold hat mink to the depths of the sky; Take a bald pen, the short paper is oblique, and he is engraved with the deepest concern for the big man. On the one hand, he is a senior official, on the other hand, he is a loyal minister: standing between forgetting and remembering, between leisure and worry, he chose forgetting wealth and loyal minister, which made a strong stroke on human nature. "
Narrating Su Wu, 100 words, depicting the contrast and sketching the image. Summarize the events and reveal the spiritual essence. Su Wu's Forever is endowed with a "concrete and subtle" display, and also points out the topic of "forgetting and memory". How can such a start fail?
4. Quote into the topic and quote the whole article.
For example, "On both sides of forgetting and memory" begins:
Xi Murong said: Life is a flowing river, and we are all people crossing it. The left bank of the river of life is forgetting, and the right bank of the river of life is memory. Only when we shuttle between the left bank and the right bank in our unique boat do we know-forget what should be forgotten and remember what should be remembered.
Quoting Xi Murong's famous sentences at the beginning plays a leading role at the beginning. It is not only relevant but also enhances the cultural charm and philosophy of the article, which is thought-provoking.
5. Explain the sentence and explain the problem.
For example, the beginning of "this year's flowers are redder than last year":
"Ouyang Xiu's" Langtaosha "? The phrase "this year's flowers are brighter than last year" in Wish Dongfeng means that this year's flowers are brighter than last year's. More prosperous, but the original intention is to' write sadness with joy' and express sadness. At the moment, after chewing this sentence carefully, what I have learned is not that "each generation is stronger than the next" or "sesame blossoms are higher and higher", but that "if you want to live better this year than last year, you must be confident and try not to give up."
It is really brilliant to wander in Ouyang Xiu's poems from the beginning and explain the meaning in the realm of poetry. When you are in high spirits, you can turn your pen sharply and express your views quickly. Although it is between the size, it can make waves. That's great!
6. If you start writing, you will be alert.
For example, at the beginning of Peer-Win-Win Wisdom:
"Times make competition a heavy topic, but we can cut the edge of competition with win-win wisdom, compete with a smile and walk hand in hand."
Although there are only two sentences at the beginning, it has a shocking effect and will last for a long time after reading it. It shows that the author is familiar with the method of "getting to the point", thus receiving the merit of "opening up a new look with simplicity without branches and vines" and the effect of "fascinating" with quick words and quick intentions.
7. Neat sentence patterns, making waves.
For example, the beginning of "Brave Running and Brave Transcendence":
"Life is full of twists and turns, and things overlap. Enthusiasm to run, to surpass, and then pick up the calm of setbacks, unyielding after setbacks, and calm after difficulties. "
At the beginning is a poem, a couplet, poetic and picturesque, with extraordinary momentum; In addition, the phrase "calm after setbacks, unyielding after setbacks, calm after difficulties" has given birth to another trend. Decorating the "phoenix head" with poetic language so skillfully naturally shows the author's rich talent and cultural background, which makes people fall in love at first sight.
8. Metaphor, analogy and suggestion.
For example, start to find the right place to create value:
"Without the depth of the blue sky, there can be the elegance of white clouds; Without the breadth of the sea, there can be beautiful streams; Without the straightness of pine trees, you can have the charm of grass. "
The opening is small and unique, and the title is poetic: Where does "value" come from? Lies in "creation": Where does "value" come from? It is necessary to "find the right position", and "Baiyun", "Stream" and "Grass" are so elegant, "beautiful" and "charming" because they have found their respective positions. Such a beginning is fresh! Wonderful!
9. Compare doubts and stimulate interest.
For example, the beginning of Snail on the Peak:
"It is said that there are two kinds of animals that can reach the top-the eagle and the snail. With its superior innate conditions, it seems not surprising that eagles soar to the top of the sky, but what about snails? How can such a clumsy little animal climb to the top? "
Two kinds of animals: eagle, with unique qualities; Snail, conditions can't be mentioned. The contrast between the two shows the clumsiness of snails. Then ask questions, set suspense, and secretly deduct the topic of "unexpected, reasonable", which greatly stimulated readers' interest in reading and made them get full marks.
10. That's what it means, and the winding path is secluded.
For example, the beginning of a beautiful life:
"Some people like to compare life to a road, some people like to compare life to a glass of wine, and some people like to compare life to a mess. I like to compare life to flowers. "
After laying out others' understanding of life, the little author changed the subject and showed his point of view: "I like to compare life to flowers." This leads to the main part of the article, which can be described as saying one thing and doing another, playing hard to get, winding path leading to a secluded place and endless charm.