is beautiful, flashing in the details.

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She turned around, smiled gently and turned away again.

a small detail, like a butterfly's transparent and delicate wings flapping gently in my eyes. The corner of her eyes bent downward was filled with the light that was about to flow out, so I remembered the expression for a moment.

It is a gentle and restrained eye, which reminds people of the slightly wet wind in the south of the Yangtze River, the mottled dream in the morning and a bowl of millet porridge with lotus leaf fragrance. Not fancy, not unassuming, sweet and waxy eyes, it makes people write it down. Yes, details, a casual expression, an imperceptible look, and those who appreciate it will become a treasure when they are dug up.

when I closed my eyes, my eyes flooded again at that moment, accompanied by lingering wind and meticulous carving. All gentle, moist and beautiful intentions are laid out with this detail. It is "three feet of rain with green willows, and a flute with cherry red"; It is "the flowers fade away, the red apricots are small, when the swallows fly, the green water people go around"; It's "the rain hits the windowsill wet" ... The blue wall is like a pencil's thin outline. The freshly dyed wax cloth hangs in the air and makes a heavy sound. The vermilion barrel with copper hoop pours water like a waterfall, and the strong tea scattered with chrysanthemum flowers gives off overlapping water vapor. All this flowed in her eyes at that moment, quietly, with the air that time and space stopped being carefree. Is it Jiangnan? Is it running water? Is it gentle? Is it meticulous? There is no need to answer more and no one will answer.

Such details are white flowers blooming in the lush greenery, giving off a faint fragrance, and he is only waiting for a willing heart to gather them.

the second

CD rotates, making a rustling sound, like a green bug flapping its wings. Music immediately flowed out, turned into smoke and dust, and spread around. This is dvorak's scherzo in G major. Too many people talk about it as beautiful as the main melody of silk, and now I close my eyes, give ear slightly, and breathe slowly ... A small detail, like tiny and clear dust in the sunshine through the skylight in the afternoon, which brushed my ears and touched me warmly and softly.

is a short triplet after the first theme. They use the fluent violin timbre to interpret, with a happy and fresh smile, like the blonde hair of an Irish girl dancing in the sun. I wonder what kind of mood dvorak had when he wrote this string of imperceptible notes. It must be a kind of loving touch, as if the sun is shining, the clouds are light and the wind is clear, and the transparent wind is blowing on the mint-colored grass. Only you know the happiness in your heart. Yes, the details, I seem to see dvorak's knowing smile, and people with a heart have noticed the excavation, which is only a tacit but unexpected pleasure.

I think of some colorful bubbles rising slowly, a delicate flower blossoming in the air, a sky touched by a bird, a lingering wind, and a group of swimming fish ... all these are brought by that series of small triplets.

This kind of detail is the silver scraps falling from the center of the church zenith with the light, which are small but shining, and they are only waiting for you.

three

women's cheongsam has a variety of customs, and the graceful and tactful lines of women are outlined. Women walk with three steps, which is a landscape.

but I caught such a detail: the small slit at the edge of the cheongsam skirt. This design, whether intentional or not, whether anyone pays attention to it or not, has indeed become a pearl in the crown of cheongsam.

In the twenties and thirties, an open and closed border, women wearing cheongsam was the first memory of that era, and cheongsam became a symbol of that era. This is a bridge, connecting the formality and rigidity of the flag-bearer's clothes and the unknown era of opening up in the future. The women in the boudoir came out, cautious, shy and hesitant, like a cordate telosma that opened alone at night. The separation of cheongsam just happens to reflect this kind of ambiguous feelings in the details. Women are walking, and the smooth skin on their calves is hidden from time to time, which is another kind of amorous feelings that they want to say and rest, but they do not lose the introverted solemnity of Shenhua.

The women in Zhang Ailing's novels are all dressed in cheongsam. They run between war and peace, between joys and sorrows, and between the stories of each year.

Such a detail is a teardrop on a cloud, waiting for the gentle care and sigh of a willing heart.

Four

Details are the subway that passes by in a flash, the fluent and clear rain, the fluttering birds, and the eyebrows of strangers ...

It requires people to touch, appreciate and feel with a meticulous and patient attitude. I was moved and serious when I chewed them carefully, so I wrote them down, wrote them down, treasured them and commented on them alone.

then, you will find that the real beauty is to shine in the details.

Comments:

Three fragments and three details are really due to her careful consideration and clever choice. The exquisite expression and beautiful language style are in high harmony with the described object and the atmosphere the author wants to construct, which should be an ideal "aestheticism" of the author.

details, after all, are details, the key is "detail", and the elements are "moved" or "moved" or "touched". But if you want to "touch" yourself and want to "touch" others, you have to rely on the power of description.

this little author has done very successfully. (Yan Huayin)

The second article

Did you see it?

did you hear that?

Maybe you are boring to do "head-on" exercise with toes and stones, and you are absent-minded and don't pay attention. Maybe you are carefully conceiving a beautiful lie, a successful prologue, and then cleverly avoiding asking your parents how you did in the exam when they opened the door. Maybe you are listening to the vulgar jokes of your future husband with garlic nose on your mobile phone. Or you are holding a heavy new year's goods in one hand and a lot of couplets in the other. What a mess is blocking the sight on both sides. Or you just glanced at it contemptuously and then stepped up your pace, and your nose rolled across like a cannon ...

At this time, the wind blew up and the snowflakes began to fall in pieces. I noticed this intermittent, if there is no shouting, just let it sink into the long streets and hurried people.

Closer, I can finally see it clearly, but it's still a little fuzzy. Come closer, I can finally hear you. It's just that there is some desolation in shouting. Not far ahead, a broken flatbed car stands on the left, next to which is a thin farmer who is nearly sixty years old, and his mouth emits a wisp of smoke from time to time. Closer, some are clear. There is a khaki dog lying under the stone pier of the flatbed car. The dog wagged its tail and swept away some bloody foam, just like a loach in dry land. No, there is also a ball-like child in the car, with a red face wrapped in a beige tiger hat-a common gray hat at a junk stall. The characters of green vegetables are neatly placed on the car board.

"There are fresh vegetables."

the snow has begun to grow, and large pieces of velvet flowers are crashing on the ground, making a crunchy sound. The child slipped out of the car and wriggled in front of the old farmer. The old farmer put out the cigarette butts in his hand and threw them away. He kept rubbing his blushing face with his hands, and his mouth wriggled a few times, as if he had said something to comfort the doll. The child was still not coaxed. Two white hands grabbed the old farmer's dark green army trousers with little oil stains and kept shaking, shaking and shaking.

the snow is getting heavier, and there are no pedestrians on the road. Straight white fog appeared at the smoke crossing of several low-rise tile houses, which was soft.

The old farmer finally couldn't bear to pester him. He took out a black plastic pistol from his pocket and gave it to the doll. I seemed to vaguely see the smiling face of the child like a lotus flower. The shouts rang again, and there was a despair in the turbidity. Leaves of green vegetables are frozen and rolled up, like a curled up green elf. The old farmer wiped off a layer of Bo Xue on the green vegetables with his hand, put it in a leisurely pattern again, then carried the child to the car and gave a short cry to the dog curled up under the wheel, as if to call it time to go home.

Snowflakes quietly collected their wings and landed quietly on the ground, roofs and treetops.

The gray-black world is from light blue to light white to angelic pure white. Shouting is still the same, just a dumb one. The whole world gradually tends to be quiet and serene.

The flatbed car is drifting away, and occasionally one or two guns are fired, because the last night of the year tonight is New Year's Eve. The child was naively pointing at everything in the car, and the little yellow dog was not in front of the car for a while, and then he showed his short body like a loach ...

The snow was still falling, and it was very heavy.

did you see it?

did you hear that?

Comment:

I was deeply shocked when I first read this composition. This is due to two points: first, the young author's selection of materials, aiming at life and the other side of life, can also be called the bottom piece, that kind of cold but not sensational sympathy, which is impressive; Second, the author's meticulous description is consistent throughout, and the details and sketching constitute scenes, which can almost be said to have brought the detail description to the extreme.

In the face of more and more so-called "new concept" compositions and "innovative compositions", reading so many more and more weird and absurd or "juvenile maturity" and most of them are moaning without illness, suddenly seeing such a composition is the joy of spring breeze and the excitement of being overjoyed. Although slightly dignified, although not very sunny, but it is the value of this article.

Paying attention to life and people on the earth should be the life of an article, especially an article. (Yan Yinhua)

Examples of "details" in topic composition

Composition topic:

There are often some details in life that we ignore, and some things fall short because of one detail; In life, we are often moved by some details, which makes us feel the love and warmth of this world. Are there any details in your life that you will never forget? Have you ever been sad about some details? Have you ever been moved by some details? What do you want to say most in the face of details?

please write an article with "details" as the topic. Requirements: ① Self-made topic ② Style is not limited to about 3,8 words

Writing instruction:

Details are tiny components of a whole, or links that are easily overlooked by people in a system. In a sense, life is made up of details, and we often pay a heavy price for not paying attention to certain details, such as misspelling a word or miscalculating a number. We are often moved by some details, such as a warm word and a subtle move. Behind the details is life, emotion and career. "Taishan does not refuse fine soil, so it can become high; Jianghai does not choose a trickle, so it can be deep. " It's about the importance of details.

the success or failure of topic composition depends on the thought. Some candidates think that topic composition is enough as long as it stays on the topic. In fact, topic composition requires profound ideas like other compositions. If you want to have a profound idea, you must understand the connotation of the topic, put the topic in the context of reading, life and society, make some serious thinking, and then find an ideal angle to write.

There is a thought-provoking example in Mr. Wang Zhongqiu's book "Details Decide Success or Failure". Shanghai Metro Line 1 was designed by Germans, and Line 2 was designed by ourselves. Shanghai is located in East China, and its terrain is only a little higher than the sea level on average. In summer, rain often traps some buildings. German designers have noticed this detail, so every outdoor exit of Metro Line 1 is designed with three steps. To enter the subway entrance, you must set foot on three steps and then go down to the subway station. This simple three steps can prevent rainwater from flowing backwards in rainy days, thus reducing the flood control pressure of the subway. In fact, the flood control facilities in Line 1 have almost never been used; Because of the lack of these steps, Metro No.2 was flooded in rainy days, causing huge economic losses. We often think that Germans are a bit rigid in their work, but it is under the rigorous and meticulous work attitude and habits that details will be valued.

Our traditional thinking has always held that details are not important, and "great things are done without restraint" was once our proud saying. Some people say that in China, there are many people who want to do great things, but few people are willing to do small things in detail; We don't lack great strategists, what we lack is the executors of Excellence; There is no shortage of various management rules and regulations. What is lacking is the implementation of the rules and regulations to the letter. These words deserve our deep thought. We must change the habit of being impetuous, dabbling, and not asking for a very good understanding, and advocate paying attention to details and doing small things in detail ...

In content, we can write about trivial things that are ordinary but lasting, or stories about great men who pay attention to details, or write about the bad consequences caused by ignoring details or the success caused by paying attention to details in a market economy. All over the world, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, things about details can be transferred to the pen. But remember, these details must be meaningful, interesting and closely related to social life. Never write details for the sake of writing details.

in writing, it can be written as prose, narrative, argumentative and novel. However, when assembling materials, we should highlight the details, either by selecting several life segments to highlight one or several details, or by taking a certain detail as a clue and conceiving; If you write an argumentative essay, you must have a clear point of view, grasp a certain aspect of the details, and make a reasonable argument.

In short, no matter what form it takes, it is necessary to properly focus on the topic, expound the deep connotation of "details" and show positive value orientation.

[ Example 1 ]

Touching things are often just the details

Xia Jingjing, Class 3, Senior 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province

The details are the mother's asking after school, the father's saying to go to bed early after finishing his homework, the teacher's eyes asking if you know anything after finishing his homework, and the meticulous notes handed by friends after illness. The details are small, but they are lasting.

we are all just ordinary people, and sometimes we can only be regarded as mediocrity. Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the drama in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series.

Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "carefully she sews and thoroughly she mends, dreading the delays that will keep him late from home", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "Advise Jun to drink more wine, and there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made lovers all over the world sigh. It's just details, not just details, it includes the deep feelings behind the details themselves.

I am often moved by Rembrandt's The Jewish Bride. The couple in beautiful clothes have gloomy and restrained expressions. Under the dark background, two people snuggle up to each other, with no eyes facing each other, no ups and downs, only a handshake, as if it were a casual moment, which grabbed the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently.

For the viewers, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection.