How to write a composition according to the material

Composition with materials means that the proposer provides the writer with certain materials (including words or other language forms), and asks the writer to write according to the connotation of the materials, and how to write the material composition. The materials given mainly include:

1 tells a relatively complete story; Quote the complete story; Quote news reports or news;

4. Famous aphorisms (one sentence or several paragraphs) closely related to the writer's moral cultivation or a certain aspect of his study life;

5. A clear-cut and profound exposition; 6. One or several lyric words that highlight a central point;

One or more cartoons that expose ugly phenomena in social life. ...

To write a good composition for the material, you must read the material.

Since the materials for writing a composition contain profound truth, "the intention of becoming an author", then reading materials are the key to writing a good composition, and the examination of questions becomes review materials. Generally speaking, the literal surface of the material is not difficult to understand. The question is whether you can accurately analyze the profound truth expressed in the material, and then determine your correct attitude towards this truth.

Must be "consistent". The consistency mentioned here refers to two aspects. On the one hand, the theme determined by the writer should be consistent with the intention of the material; On the other hand, the materials chosen by the author should be consistent with the theme. Only in this way can we have a sense of reading.

We must make a mountain out of a molehill The philosophies contained in the materials given by the proposer are all great truths, and it is beyond the author's ability to explain these great truths comprehensively and profoundly. Therefore, it is necessary to link his familiar social life with the truth and make the big topic smaller; However, this does not allow the author to analyze the problem superficially and simply. On the contrary, what material composition requires is to start from life practice, find truth from small things and problems, and make sense, that is, to analyze the problems more deeply and sharply, which is to make a mountain out of a molehill. The "big topic" of "making the big topic smaller" refers to truth; "Make a mountain out of a molehill" refers to writing materials.

We must grasp the "requirements". "Writing for materials" puts forward specific requirements, such as the content, style, topic and number of words of the composition. A writer must master these requirements to write a composition.

Single material and multi-angle conception;

Examination process: 1. Look for element 2. Analyze reason 3. Distinguish the relationship 4. Quasi-center

Who is the hero? What's the matter? What was the result? Then analyze the reasons, and get the center of writing from the reason analysis.

Material 1 Madame Curie gave her daughter a gold medal awarded by the Royal Society of London. The visiting guests were very surprised: "madam, you gave such a heavy medal to children to play with?" Madame Curie said, "I played it for her on purpose. I want my children to know from an early age that honor is like a toy. If you let your children lie on their parents' honor books, you will surely accomplish nothing in the future. "Thanks to Madame Curie's good education, 24 years later, her daughter also won the Nobel Prize.

Choose your own angle, your own thoughts, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of not less than 600 words.

I. Finding the Element (1) Madame Curie made outstanding contributions to mankind. (2) Educate daughters to treat honor correctly and treat medals as toys. As a result, my daughter also won the Nobel Prize.

Second, analyze the reasons why my daughter won the Nobel Prize. First, she has the correct guidance of her mother. Second, she relies on her own efforts.

Third, there is a causal relationship between the three elements.

Fourthly, the center (L) can only succeed by its own efforts. (2) people should treat honor correctly. (3) The importance of educating the next generation correctly

Material: Read the fable "Fill in the blanks" for the second time, choose your own angle, your own ideas, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of no less than 600 words.

Multi-angle conception-

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(1) from the perspective of Mr South China. Positive: criticize Mr. Nan Guo for not pretending to understand and muddling along. Conversely, it is affirmed that Mr. Nan Guo's "slipping away" is a manifestation of self-knowledge;

(2) from the perspective of Qi Xuanwang. Criticize Qi Xuanwang's hedonism;

(3) From the perspective of King Qi Min. Praise Qi Min's spirit of reform.

④ From the musician's point of view. Combining with the philosophy of "good man", a common social phenomenon in real life, this paper points out that "moderation" and "good man" are still a major drawback that hinders social progress. It enlightens people that everyone should establish a high sense of responsibility for the country and the people, and be brave in fighting all the bad guys, so that China can have hope and the nation can be revitalized.

A variety of materials seek common ground and find out the center.

Example 1

Someone asked the ball king Bailey which ball he liked best, and he said, My favorite is Next.

Someone asked Xie Jin, a famous film director, which of his works he liked best? Xie Jin said: What I like best is the next one.

Liu Xinyi, the best supporting actor in Hundred Flowers Award, said: "If I want to say my favorite role, I think it should be my Next.

Choose your own angle, your own thoughts, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of not less than 600 words.

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The meaning of the three materials is basically the same, and the direction is the same. They are all talking about the problems that a person should treat correctly, be modest and prudent, and set higher enterprising goals for himself after making achievements. From this, we can determine the center: a successful entrant should focus on "next" and "starting from scratch" and keep making progress. Achievements belong to the past. There is no best, only better (or regard today as backwardness, or unremitting pursuit, etc.) )

Find out the center by comparing and selecting various materials.

Example 2

Some people think that if everyone in the country saves me the value of a match, then I will be hundreds of thousands of rich people.

Some people think that if I can contribute the value of a match to everyone in the country, then my life is the most valuable.

Choose your own angle, your own thoughts, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of not less than 600 words.

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For yourself or for others? What kind of life is more meaningful?

Example 3

(1) near Zhu Zhechi, near the ink.

(2) The sludge is non-stick, clear but not demon.

Choose your own angle, your own thoughts, your own style and your own topic, and write a composition of not less than 600 words.

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Material ① Metaphorically shows that the environment can change people, emphasizing that the environment will have a great influence on people;

Material 2 also uses metaphors to illustrate that people may be self-perfect and innocent in harsh environments, emphasizing that people have the subjective initiative to adapt to the environment.

These two viewpoints emphasize one aspect each, although both of them are reasonable, but both of them are one-sided. In fact, these two viewpoints are unity of opposites, both of which are about the relationship between man and environment, and environment is the "contact point" between them. When writing, you can use "environment has influence on people, but people also have subjective initiative" to demonstrate.

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Material composition inspection

The first step is to read the material and grasp the main idea.

First of all, we should pay attention to the characteristics of materials:

The single material should grasp its main idea as a whole;

Many materials should find out their similarities and differences, so as to grasp the center;

Metaphorical materials should understand their metaphorical meaning;

Materials containing philosophical fables should grasp their meanings. The so-called grasp of the theme (that is, the intentional tendency and emotional tendency of the material).

The second step is to choose the angle and make an accurate idea.

You can conceive a material with a single theme according to the material.

Rich materials can be conceived from multiple angles, namely divergent thinking and multi-faceted conception. Generally speaking, a material can be viewed from at least two perspectives: the material of "one thing with many people" often has several perspectives when there are several "people"; There are several "causes" in the material of "one thing with many causes", and there are often several perspectives. An event, according to its different background and writing purpose, has produced several different perspectives.

Writing of material composition

1, write an argumentative paper:

(1) Choose a certain angle and summarize the writing topic or argument from the materials.

(2) It is best to have materials in the composition.

(3) The materials provided can be used as written arguments.

(4) summarizing the materials; You can't copy materials.

2. Write a narrative:

(1) Summarize the writing center from the materials.

(2) Draw up the title of the article around the center.

(3) Writing should stick to the center or theme to prevent digression or deviation from the center.

(4) The title (center) should be deducted at the beginning, middle and end of the article, and click the title (center).

(5) There is generally no need for materials to appear in the article.

Here are some examples from the composition questions of the senior high school entrance examination.

1. Read the following materials and write as required.

A young man contracted a highly contagious skin disease. Many parents warned their children not to contact that little friend again for the sake of their children's health.

But there was a little boy who went to school as before and played with his sick partner. The neighbors were surprised. Because the little boy's parents are both doctors, he should receive more health education than others since he was a child. He has no reason not to know the danger of doing that! A kind neighbor reminded the little boy, and the little boy replied, "Mom told me that a healthy body is not afraid of infection!" " "

Sure enough, the little boy was not infected until his sick partner recovered. He said: "If I am healthy, I am not afraid of infection. If I am a good person, I am not afraid of being taught to learn badly, because good people will not learn badly. "

Requirements: you can write a narrative in combination with real life; You can also arouse feelings from the materials and talk about your own views; Self-made topics; No less than 600 words.

Material analysis: This material tells the story of how a child got a highly contagious skin disease and how to treat it. The key point is that the little boy whose parents are doctors has been with him all the time without being infected, because "a healthy body is not afraid of infection." This reveals the profound connotation of the material. What is health? In addition to physical health, of course, it also refers to ideology and morality and so on. Only by grasping this point can the composition meet the requirements of the topic. As the little boy finally said, "If I am a good person, I am not afraid of being taught to learn badly, because good people will not learn badly."

Is it necessary to be near the ink?

"He who is near the ink is black" is a long-standing proverb. People often regard it as truth. There is a story: a partner has an infectious skin disease, and many parents tell their children not to be with him, but a little boy whose parents are both doctors continues to go to school and play with his partner. A kind neighbor reminded him: "if I am healthy, I am not afraid of being infected by others;" If I am a good person, I am not afraid of being taught to learn badly, because good people can't learn badly. "Sure enough, the little boy was not infected until his sick friend recovered. After reading this story, I am puzzled: Is it necessary for people who approach Mexico to be black?

I once heard of an example: before liberation, a young writer named Mu Shiying once named "The North and South Pole" as a novel to expose the darkness of the old society, which caused quite a stir at that time. However, after he entered Shanghai Shili Foreign Firm, he was influenced by decadent lifestyle and even sang praises to people who lived a drunken life. This is an excellent example of "those who are close to ink are black". Mr. Lu Xun, a writer who also lives in Shanghai, has always maintained the true colors of a revolutionary, with a pen as a knife and a gun as a gun, and waged an indomitable struggle against the dark society he hated.

Whether a person who is close to ink is black or not depends on a person's will quality and whether he can "get out of the mud without being stained". If his will is weak, I believe he will soon catch a "virus". In today's society, some people can't help being tempted. The balance of the soul tilts towards money and power, falls down and finally becomes a sinner. Really good people maintain a strong will, excellent quality and upright style, only for the masses, not for individuals. They can really be called "the backbone of China". "Always walk by the river, you don't have to wet your shoes." This spirit that those who are close to the ink are not black should be carried forward in our generation.

Comments: This is a relatively successful composition. It seems that the student has mastered some writing skills. First of all, he chose the angle of "what kind of will quality should he have" to explain that a healthy body is not afraid of infection, and the theme is concentrated and clear. Secondly, the structure is also very clear. In paragraph 1, the proverb is quoted at the beginning, but there is no hurry to discuss it. Instead, the main content of the material is quoted, and then the question "Is it necessary for people close to Mexico to be black?" "Doubt" actually contains the author's distinct attitude. The second paragraph and the third paragraph are demonstrated by positive and negative comparison. Finally, it ends with one sentence. The language is also clean and tidy, and proper quotation adds a lot of color.

2. Read the following text and write as required.

The ant's footsteps are always so persistent and hurried, but as long as he gently draws a line on his way forward with moth balls, he will immediately turn around in panic; Draw a line in front of it and it will run away at once, turning over and over again. When it is tired of running, draw a circle around it, and the ants will turn around without a clue to narrow the encirclement. After diving left and right, it found that there was no way out and had to get up the courage to break through.

Isn't life like this? In the face of many obstacles, we were so heavy and helpless at first, but when we got up the courage to overcome them, we found that it was just a mothball line in front of ants; Ants finally dare to stand for the last time, but how many people have been unable to lift their heads in front of obstacles!

Requirements: write a composition of not less than 600 words in connection with reality. Self-created topic

Material analysis: this material is an experiment made by ants, and then it is discussed in connection with social life, indicating that we should get up the courage and dare to overcome all kinds of difficulties. It is worth thinking that the experiment itself provides some intentional angles, because ants "break through" after repeatedly "hitting the wall" This provides more room for thinking.

Brave choice

Lev tolstoy said: "A person's life is an experience of struggling with difficulties and setbacks. Only if you have the courage to overcome obstacles can you become the ultimate winner. "

I once read such a short article: Draw a line with mothballs in front of an ant in a hurry, and the little creature will go with the wind; When you get to it, draw a line with camphor and it will leave immediately in panic. It's the same over and over again. Finally, when he got tired of running, he drew a circle and put it in, and the little guy just wandered around in the circle without a clue. Then gradually narrow the encirclement, it will jump left and right inside, and when it finds that there is no way out, it has to bite the bullet and rush out. ...

Seeing this, I think the ants have finally rushed out of the "defense line" drawn by moth balls and can move on. This kind of courage is commendable, otherwise it will only be trapped to death, but if the ants can cross the first camphor tree defense line, they must have gone further by now!

Pushkin once said, "Just as God didn't create a smooth road, God didn't give anyone a smooth life." Friend, do you realize now that our life is also struggling with the "camphor line" in front of us?

He who hesitates in front of the "camphor line" will accomplish nothing.

Those who hesitate in front of the "camphor defense line" may get up the courage to rush out at the last minute, but they will certainly succeed. However, I admire those who never retreat before meeting the first "camphor line of defense", because when they face obstacles and setbacks like "camphor line of defense", they don't think about how to escape, but bravely face them, boldly abandon their confusion and fear, and meet these difficulties with fearless spirit.

Little ants dare to stand in the end. Those of us who call ourselves "creators" dare to move forward from the beginning and give up from the beginning. So, my friend, when you meet a series of "camphor defense lines", do you go ahead from the beginning, work hard at last, or give up halfway? The answer should be clear.

Comments: The author of this composition can carefully read and inspect the materials, and analyze three situations from the materials: rushing to the "defense line"; Hesitate before rushing over; Choose to give up in front of the "defense line". This dialectical understanding of the problem and the thinking method of analyzing the problem from the objective reality are essential in writing. Therefore, the theme of this article is clear and profound. The article quoted famous sayings, which enhanced the persuasiveness. The language is concise and fluent.

3. Read the following text and write a composition as required.

Whether unintentionally or intentionally, each of us hides ourselves to some extent. Especially when we live in the public or engage in what we think is important, the trace of "performance" becomes more and more obvious.

Have you ever "disguised yourself"? Please write it down.

Requirements: the narrative should be true, clear and vivid; Self-made topics; No less than 600 words.

Brief analysis of materials:

This material is divided into two paragraphs in three sentences. The first paragraph clearly points out that people love to "hide" their psychological characteristics. The second paragraph shows the content of writing: "you" and "covering yourself" scenes. These two paragraphs are the basis of students' composition.

Dilwale

Memory is like an endless river, flowing endlessly in every minute of life. The ripples at that time were my true portrayal, and I still can't forget the scene that made me blame myself countless times. ...

When I was in primary school, I was a good student in the eyes of my teacher. "Being sensible, obedient and earnest" has almost become the six essential words in my comments. But that time, I took advantage of the teacher's trust in me, betrayed honesty and made a mistake that I can never forgive. ...

In the fourth grade of primary school, there was a new classmate in the class. His name is Lu Feng. He is not tall and has a dark face. It is said that he comes from the countryside and his mother sells vegetables. His family did everything possible to send him to our school. The school asked him to try for one semester and transfer immediately if he didn't perform well. After he came to our class, he became the object of ridicule by his classmates. Not only because of his appearance and clothes, but also because of his nondescript accent. Maybe he wants me to help him. The teacher arranged for me to sit at the same table with him. I was reluctant at first, but gradually, I found that he was a very good person. Although Lv Feng doesn't study well, he is kind and honest, and he whistles fluently. The whistle is like a bird's song, loud and tactfully, making people feel like they are in the forest. Whenever there are free activities during recess or in physical education class, he always sits alone at the edge of the campus flower bed, holding a small leaf in his hand and blowing happily. This also makes many boys envy and girls admire.

Sitting at the same table with him, my greatest wish is to learn his set of ventriloquism, and I also want to feel the taste of being amazed by my classmates. Therefore, I often pout and make the same sound as his mouth. Gradually, I can whistle.

In Chinese class, the class teacher once again concentrated on the beautiful scenery depicted in the text. In my mind, I immediately saw a natural scenery of birds and flowers, and a kind of joy rose in my heart. I couldn't help screaming and broke the silence in the classroom. The eyes of classmates and teachers are fixed on our desks. "Which one of you whistled?" The teacher's voice came from my ear. I panicked at that time. In order to "clarify" myself as soon as possible, there is no expression of shame on my face. I stood up solemnly and said, "teacher, it's not me." The teacher nodded at once, expressing sympathy for me and gesturing for me to sit down. The students around me also talked about: "It can't be Zhu Haiyun, she is so timid." "It must be Lu Feng, who whistles best in the class ..." These words are like needles, how to write a good material composition (). I regretted it at once. At that time, I said that sentence without hesitation, just because I didn't want to destroy my good image in the teacher's mind, I didn't want to be treated as a bad boy by my classmates, and I didn't want to ... in short, it was all for my poor vanity and good face. I don't know why I chose the latter between honesty and hypocrisy, and I made it so real. Just as my thoughts were surging, the teacher stopped Lu Feng. "Lu Feng, did you blow this whistle?" Lv Feng blushed. "I, I ..." He wanted to explain, but when his eyes met mine, he couldn't help lowering his head. Because my eyes seemed to beg him and remind him, "Don't forget, I have taught you many questions …" So he hesitated for a while and finally said, "Yes, it's me!" This time, I was relieved, and the "crime" was covered up. After class, Lu Feng was called out by the teacher and severely criticized. I secretly went to the office door to listen, and every word rang in my ear from time to time like thunder, as if there was an unspeakable taste that had been filling my heart.

After that, I seldom talked to Lu Feng. Many times, I went to apologize to him alone, but he didn't say anything but smiled bitterly, which made me feel more guilty. Like a scar that will never heal.

I didn't know that Lu Feng had transferred to another school until one day in the second semester. I heard that it's because I can't keep up with my studies, I don't perform well enough at ordinary times, I whistle in class, and I don't have a good relationship with my classmates ... After listening to this, my eyes are wet. I wish I could go back in time and call back my deskmate who whistles well.

Many years have passed, and when I recall this incident again, my heart is not only full of deep remorse, but also I know that I was a hypocritical person in that place. After all, I hope to tell you with my experience that a person should be honest and kind!

Comments: This is a narrative that describes how I covered up my mistakes and was finally tortured by self-blame. It's not a big thing, but it's thought-provoking: I whistled and refused to admit it, but my deskmate took responsibility without whistling. So why are other students and teachers so arbitrary? In fact, they are hiding themselves to prove that their understanding of things is consistent and correct! This reminds us that concealment is often successful because of people's thinking inertia and once people's understanding is formed, it is difficult to change. The words used in the article are accurate, the description is vivid and the language is plain and fluent.

Read the following fable and write a composition as required.

A lot of honey was spilled in the warehouse of a honey processing factory, which attracted many flies to eat. Because honey is too fragrant, they are reluctant to leave, and soon these greedy flies are stuck with honey because of their feet. When drowning, they all said sadly, "We are too greedy, and we lost our precious lives for short-term happiness."

Requirements: You can write narratives and personal experiences; You can also write argumentative papers and express your views; Self-made topics; No less than 600 words.

Material analysis: Material is a fable. Its main content is to write about a group of flies that were stuck and drowned because they were greedy for honey. At the end of the article, the topic is "I lost my precious life for short-term happiness". In the language of fly regret, the fundamental reason is "too greedy". The article reveals the harm of "greed" and warns people not to fall into the trap of "greed". The irony of this fable is very obvious.

Eliminate greed

Everyone has something they like. Undeniably, whenever we can get or enjoy these substances without restriction, human greed will be exposed, and we will often plunge into this joy in despair and be carried away.

Excessive greed will bring us misfortune. Just like a fly in a fable, it lost its life because it was greedy for honey. Indeed, it is not worth it. But do they think of this when they eat honey? Of course not. They have long been overwhelmed by a greedy word. Creatures are all the same, and they will become crazy when they see what they like. In the well-known story "Alibaba and the Forty Thieves", when Alibaba's brother entered the cave, he saw countless treasures and didn't care about anything. As a result, the robber found him in the cave, which caused his death. Liu Xiaoqing, a movie star, was immersed in this kind of "joy" because her tax evasion was not discovered again and again, so she simply dared to do it. However, "the French Open is restored, but it is not leaking", and she can't escape legal sanctions. My whole life's future is ruined in a cold prison. Why don't many people in today's society embark on the road of crime in this way? It can be seen that the word "greed" is untouchable!

But maybe some people are still lucky: I am greedy and cheap, so I will be fine. In fact, even if your greedy behavior doesn't bring you disaster for the time being, over time, greedy moths will get into your heart and let you develop the bad habit of being greedy everywhere. Besides, temporary happiness will only go to your head. What benefits can it bring? You didn't harvest a piece of meat, and you didn't harvest any knowledge. Your own is your own, not your own. "Reaching out will be urged." Therefore, it is no good to covet temporary happiness, it will only bring misfortune.

Others say that I just can't control myself. what can I do? Being bound by greed only shows that your will is not firm enough. Truly determined people can completely control themselves, which also contributes to their career and academic success. For example, when Li Bai, a famous poet in the Tang Dynasty, was young, he neglected his studies because he was playful every day. But when he heard the old woman's story about "the iron pestle was ground into a needle" and made up his mind to study hard, he finally became a great poet. And 1993 Song Tao, one of the top ten young pioneers in China. He has been suffering from insulin-dependent diabetes since he was 4 years old. You know, children love candy, but at a young age, he knows very well that he can't eat candy, so he never asked adults for a candy since he was a child. He never wanted to taste sugar, but he forced himself not to think about it. Therefore, Song Tao developed an indomitable spirit in the process of studying and fighting diseases. Aren't their deeds worth learning?

In short, you can't be greedy. I lost my precious life for a short time of happiness. I believe that such a stupid thing, smart people will not do. Put away our greed!