A universal beginning for high school compositions: Fengtou for high school compositions

Fengtou

- An example of how to create the beginning of an article

Introduction: As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle." Everything is difficult at the beginning. This is true for doing things, and it is also true for writing articles. Ancient Chinese writers were very particular about the beginning of their articles, so there are sayings like "crested head, pig belly, leopard tail". "Crest" is the head of the legendary phoenix. No one has ever seen this kind of bird, but in the painter's painting, we can see the feathers on the little phoenix's head, which are colorful and eye-catching, giving people a sense of The feeling of beauty. To say that the beginning of an article should be like a "crested head" means that the beginning of the article should be well written and beautifully written, making people want to read, want to read, and want to continue reading.

Skill analysis:

Skill 1: Use rhetoric skillfully and write brilliantly.

Function: Skillful use of metaphors, parallelism, personification, questions and other rhetorical techniques can make the beginning of the article vivid, powerful, blending scenes, and poetic and picturesque.

Examples:

(1) Several years of study and life have gone by with a flick of the finger, like clouds and water, and can no longer be recovered. Looking back, we always use struggle as the rudder, and now, in the third year of junior high school, we must sail with hard work.

Life in the third grade of junior high school begins with hard work. I think you will build a steel-like character and create you and me who refuse to admit defeat.

Life in the third grade of junior high school begins with hard work. I think you will join the branches, create a new achievement, and welcome a new joy.

Life in the third grade of junior high school begins with hard work. I think you will spread your wings and fly to the blue sky of victory.

(2) The morning light of March opens the window, and the first ray of sunshine shines on people. In this way, spring approaches us through the window. Spring is the beginning of the four seasons, and it brings us new hope.

(3) "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. Question Mark cleared his throat and said, "The space-time discussion will now officially begin. Today our theme is 'What is Beauty', Scholars from different eras and countries please speak actively. "("What is Beauty")

(4) How should I describe the dance of the Indian Kalama sisters?

If I were a poet, I would write a long poem to describe their varied whirling dance.

If I were a painter, I would use various colors to dye their clear eyebrows and gorgeous clothes.

——(Bing Xin's "Guan Wu Ji")

Skill 2: Quoting scriptures with literary talent

Function: Cleverly quoting ancient poems, famous quotes, lyrics, and sayings Proverbs, sayings, or profound and penetrating discussions that have been made by predecessors can save a lot of pen and ink, make the literary talent flourish, and get twice the result with half the effort.

Example:

(1) "Suddenly a spring breeze came overnight, and thousands of pear trees bloomed." In front of me is a world of pink and jade, covered with silver and jade trees and branches. The beautiful scenery described by the poet Cen Shen is truly displayed in front of my eyes. "Winter Morning"

(2) We will experience many difficulties and setbacks in life. Face them with a calm mind, greet them with high emotions, and overcome them with positive actions. You will succeed, as the lyrics say, "How can you see the rainbow without going through wind and rain? No one can succeed casually!" ("Laughing at Frustration")

(3) As the saying goes: "Everything will happen." The beginning is difficult." When you start something, you will feel unfamiliar and at a loss. If we don't seize every beginning, we will lose not only an opportunity, but also a success. ("Grasp every beginning")

(4) Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery." Today , inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our heads, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective." Many times, we are confused by the incomprehension or hesitation of the problem. When choosing an intersection in Duojie, the way to go becomes a mystery in your mind, and you are often indecisive and swaying left and right. At this time, it is necessary to consider from a different angle, which will give you more opportunities for success.

?("Spinning the Kaleidoscope")

Tip 3: Create suspense skillfully and introduce the topic.

Function: Everyone is curious, especially those who love to read literary works. When you set up a lot of suspense at the beginning of the article that can arouse people's curiosity, your article has undoubtedly been successful. More than half of it. That is: to arouse the reader's curiosity at the beginning.

Example:

(1) There is a bitten apple on the stage, and I sit under the podium with a confused look on my face

——" "Incomplete Beauty"

(2) "Where did that antelope go?" My mother suddenly asked me. ——"Antelope Wood Carving"

(3) I often think: Everyone has his own secret garden in his heart, which is full of secret flowers and plants, and outside is a pink door, except for Who can open it myself?

——"Love, Open the Door to My Heart"

Intensive Training

In your journey of growth, you will leave your footprints everywhere. There are happy memories, beautiful yearnings, unremitting pursuit, joy of success, and troubles of failure; there are also the nagging of parents, the care of friends, and the trust of classmates; there are also happiness, troubles, gratitude, anger, embarrassment, Misunderstandings, etc., but you must correctly treat the pain and joy, gains and losses, successes and failures in growth, and have the courage to face life and challenges, and your future will be bright.

Please write an essay of more than 600 words on the topic of "The Taste of ________".

Requirements: 1. Use one or more of the opening techniques learned above to give your composition a good start.

2. Standard writing, neat writing, and fluent language.

Excellent opening demonstration

1. Quote famous quotes

①Ask what love is in the world, and it will teach you how to make love between life and death. Yuan Haowen is indeed easy to ask and very good at asking questions. His question can be said to be a question for the ages. Over the years, how many people have been lingering on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as each person's face. ? Xi Shi said: "Love is a tool..."? ("Asking What is Love in the World")?

②In a church in the Middle Ages, a saint began his speech: "I The reason why I became a saint is because I have seen through money, and what’s mine belongs to everyone.” With a flick of the finger, the long years passed. In a prison across the century, a thief began his life monologue: "The reason why I became a thief is because I have seen through money, and what belongs to everyone is mine." ("The Saint and the Thief")

③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery." Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our heads, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective." Many times, we are confused by the incomprehension of the problem or wandering at the intersection of multiple solutions. When you have doubts in your mind, you are often hesitant and hesitant. At this time, it is necessary to consider from a different angle, which will give you more chances of success. ?("Spinning the Kaleidoscope")

2. Clever use of letter format

① Dear Grandpa Confucius:

Hello! I am an ordinary descendant of yours. I dare to write to you after thousands of years apart, not only to express my gratitude to you. You send me respectful greetings, and I am eager for your advice on several difficult questions. ?("A Letter to Confucius")

②Hateful standard answer:

When I see you, I am really filled with righteous indignation. So, driven by the flames of anger, I write this letter to denounce you. The answers are rich and colorful, but you have to wear the "standard" hat. You know, just because of the word "standard", countless tragedies have happened. The following are your three major crimes:? ("A Letter to the "Standard Answer"")?

3. Borrow the writing style of Zhanghui novels

① "It is said that the general trend of the world must be divided over time. "If we unite for a long time, we will divide." The era when the three kingdoms of Wei, Shu, and Wu were at odds with each other no longer exists. The great rivers are moving eastward, and the waves have wiped out all the heroes of the past. And Adou, the former heir to the Kingdom of Shu, has also become "lucky to miss Shu", and the world has become the world of the "Sima clan".

?("Meeting of Heroes of the Three Kingdoms")

②The Juyi Hall in Liangshanbo is now brightly lit and full of people. One hundred and eight heroes gathered here, and everyone was quarreling. What were they arguing about? It turned out that Liang Shanbo was going to select a tiger fighting hero recently. This honorary title is a big deal, and whoever wins it will be able to sit in the second place in Liangshanbo. So all the heroes gathered here and argued endlessly. ?("Who is the Tiger Fighting Hero")?

4. Clever use of rhetoric?

① "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. Question Mark cleared his throat Said, "The space-time discussion has now officially begun. Today our theme is 'What is Beauty'. Scholars from different eras and countries are invited to speak actively." ("What is Beauty")

5. Use fables skillfully?

① Yu Gong’s family has lived here for generations. Two mountains, Wangwu and Taihang, block the way. Life is sad! It seems to be isolated from the world. Whatever is new in the city has become old news here. This kind of life really needs to change. Yu Gong thought: He must find a way to move Taihang and Wangwu mountains. ?("The Story of New Yu Gong and Zhi Sou")

② Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to adapt to the needs of the times, our school will implement all-round quality education, learning everything and teaching everything , ensuring that your child becomes an omnipotent generalist and remains invincible in the competition. The tuition fee is 3,000 yuan per semester; the training fee is 2,000 yuan; the sponsorship fee is 15,000 yuan." ("All-round School")? < /p>

6. Make clever use of inscriptions that reveal the theme

① There is no majesty of the tree, but you can have the greenness of the grass; there is no beauty of the peony, but you can have the freedom and ease of the small wild chrysanthemum... Life may not be brilliant, but it must be great!?

——Inscription

Die was once a beautiful girl who was good at dancing. Her long shawl hair and her graceful dancing posture once brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was once praised by others as the future Duncan of China... However, everything is over, and the god of fate will always be there. She was pressed into the wheelchair. Life becomes dim and silent, and the "white swan" becomes an ugly duckling that no one cares about. How many times did she dream that she had put on glass slippers and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up she could only hear the "miserable" cold autumn wind. ?("Star Night Talk")?

②If you lose money, you only lose a small part;?If you lose health, you only lose a small half; if you lose integrity , then you are almost penniless.

What is "integrity"? It means honesty and trustworthiness. Looking at history, the word "integrity" has been soaked in the blood and tears of many people. ?("Who is praising the emperor's new clothes"

——Inscription

7. Use problem-solving methods skillfully

There once was a friend who ingeniously gave I asked this question: Which of the following beautiful scenery do you like best?

A. A piece of pure white feathers, falling leisurely in the shining golden sunshine.

C. A shooting star passed by in the dark blue sky.

Tips for ending essays in the examination room

If the beginning is likened to "firecrackers", then the ending is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruits and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people think about it again and again." "Like the beginning, the ending is also important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle is disappointed by an unsatisfactory ending at the end! The ending must not only serve the content and content of the article, but In addition to the center, it must be restricted by the "beginning". In this way, the end is even more difficult to write. People call the end of a good article the "leopard's tail." The ending is always "leopard's tail", but the ending is also required to be concise, vivid and appropriate. Generally speaking, the mistakes that students often make at the end of their compositions are: 1. Superfluous words. The whole text is already thought-provoking, but the author is still worried. , I have to tremble a few words, explain the whereabouts of the characters that do not need to be explained one by one, and reveal the meanings that can be understood. ② Shouting slogans at the end to express one's position and attitude, and shout out the content of the article. Irrelevant slogans, this kind of ending ruins the theme. ③ Sloppy.

The meaning of the ending is clear, but it still refuses to wrap up, which conflicts with the theme of the article.

From this point of view, the ending of the composition for the high school entrance examination is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of the composition in the examination room? The following ending techniques are commonly used in high school entrance examination essays.

1. Natural closing style

Regardless of the style of the article, after expressing the content, the text will naturally be closed without designing profound philosophical sentences. , without carving out rich symbolic forms, this ending is called a "natural ending". It completely avoids the superfluous and pointless ending problems of the article. It appears simple, bright, and unpretentious, and is widely used in high school entrance examination compositions. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce. It is impossible to pay too much attention to what "style" and what "method". As long as you are passionate and expressive, you can write wherever you want, and you can fully express your feelings, which is a good article. However, being "natural" does not mean doing whatever you want, being sloppy, but following the natural trend of literary development to complete the overall situation. . For example, at the end of "Singing Party in Yunnan", "When I was a child, I often heard the old woman saying, "Golden Man Dou comes only once in ten years," which means that the event is rare. Only after attending it did you realize that it was like this."

2. The beginning and end echo style

The end should echo the beginning, and write a sentence that echoes the beginning without simply repeating it. This ending method is a very common way to end all kinds of articles. This binding method can arouse the reader's psychological beauty and create a sense of harmony from beginning to end. For example, the ending of "Back View" is "Alas! I don't know when I will see him again." This echoes the beginning of the text "I have not seen my father for more than two years. What I can't forget most is his back view." .

3. Ending chapter style

This ending method is to use concise language to clearly express the theme idea at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text. , or when the whole text is about to come to an end, the writing intention is clearly stated, so this ending method is also called the "drawing point of the ending". For example, at the end of "Pearl Bird", "I moved the tip of my pen, and the next feeling flowed out: trust, trust." Often creates a beautiful realm. "Another example is the ending of "My First Book" which is "One cannot forget one's roots."

4. Famous and aphoristic style

Use famous quotes, police names, and poems to end, focusing on Extended articles reveal some kind of true meaning of life. They often appear at the end of essays, narratives, and essays. In a few words, they express profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, making it deeply imprinted in the hearts of readers. To the effect of "the words have been exhausted, the meaning is endless". For example, at the end of "Talk about Life", "Happiness is exciting, but pain is not beautiful." I once read an aphorism, "May there be enough clouds in your life to create a beautiful dusk." There have never been more clouds in the world, nations, and individual lives than there are today. ”

5. Lyrical argumentation

Using lyrical argumentation to wrap up the article can express the author’s feelings, arouse readers’ emotions, and arouse readers’ cries of excitement. , has a strong artistic appeal. This ending method is mainly used in narrative essays about people's stories, and can also be used in expository essays and argumentative essays. There are many forms of lyrical argumentative endings, so it is used to end in this way. It is relatively free, and a good "lyrical argument" ending will inevitably give rise to true feelings, giving the reader a sense of reality and fulfillment, such as "O kindhearted and dark Mother Earth, may her soul rest forever in your arms!" "("Ah Chang and "The Classic of Mountains and Seas")" Another example is the ending of "Snow": "Yes, that is the lonely snow, the dead rain, and the soul of the rain." ”

The composition should be completed in one go, and the ending should be indispensable with the previous text. The ending of the composition is the same as the beginning. It is different from chapter to chapter, but there are also rules to follow. The above ending methods These are just some commonly used ending methods, please do not copy them mechanically.

Collection of beginnings or endings of students’ excellent compositions

Getting care from teachers is a kind of happiness, and getting help from others is also a kind of happiness. Helping others is a kind of happiness. (Although this is a small help, my heart is full of joy and pride. If everyone can help others, the world will become a beautiful world!) - Tan Xiutao " The Taste of Happiness"

The autumn wind gently blew the dancing leaves. The birds seemed to be tired of the dancing leaves and hid in their nests.

The grass has withered, and the cool autumn wind seems to be tired of wandering. I couldn't help but think of an incident in the third grade. Although it may seem small, it embarrassed me at the time and taught me a lot. (The autumn wind is still blowing the dancing leaves, and it is still blowing my cheeks, gently and coolly. I am much more awake, aren’t I? You have to be honest as a person. If you deceive others, you are also deceiving yourself!) - ——Liu Yingxiu "The Taste of Embarrassment"

On the road of my growth, my footprints are always left everywhere, including happy memories, beautiful yearnings, joy of success, and troubles of failure, many of which It's happiness, emotion, resentment and anger, but what I can't forget the most is that embarrassing morning. (I should be grateful for that embarrassing morning, which stopped me from being careless, but I should also say "goodbye" to that embarrassing morning, because the feeling of embarrassment is really uncomfortable.) - Zhang Xili "The Taste of Embarrassment"

Recalling my journey of growing up is like an overturned five-flavor bottle. There are all the flavors of sour, bitter, spicy and astringent, but there is no sweetness. (Although failure is hateful, failure is the first step towards success. I drank a bottle of coptis and said: "The taste of failure is really unpleasant.") - Dong Chenggong's "The Taste of Failure"

When I was a child, you spent so many happy days with me, which made you tell me that you still have maternal love. Therefore, no matter how long the sky is or how far the earth is, I am always willing to be in your arms and enjoy your love. . (The taste of longing is like a cup of bitter coffee. Although you can add some sugar, it still makes people feel haggard.) - Yang Chen's "The Taste of Longing"

"Wild fire cannot be burned out, but the spring breeze blows it again." Spring is here, Sister Willow's long hair is fluttering gently in the air, Sister Hua'er has a bright smile on her cheek, and Little Brother Xiaocao is making faces at you in the wind. Bathing in the spring breeze and looking at this graceful scenery, my thoughts drifted back to four years ago. ——Yi Yongqiang, "The Taste of Success"

People will experience a lot in their lives, but happiness is often the most desirable. Because happiness is a psychological experience, it can be said to be far away, or it can be said to be close at hand. (Happiness is like dots of stars all around us, almost readily available, don’t you think so? As long as you face the complicated life with a childlike innocence, always pursue light, and yearn for happiness, you will definitely become a happy bird. ) - Cao Li's "The Taste of Happiness"

The sky is filled with thick clouds, showing contempt; the trees lower their heads and laugh contemptuously; the grass whispers underground, as if on purpose Avoiding me. Everything is cold and heartless. I tasted failure for the first time and wandered around in despair. (The dark clouds in the sky dispersed, the trees raised their heads, and the grass showed its head. Seeing these and thinking of these, I hurried back to the classroom and picked up the textbook...) - "The Taste of Failure" by He Mingyang

Childhood dreams are colorful; childhood stars shine forever; childhood events are still fresh in my memory. Recalling the colorful childhood, that scene appeared in front of my eyes. (That time, I really succeeded. I defeated myself and made up for my shortcomings. I was really happy. That kind of happiness cannot be described in words. Please try the joy of success!) - Wang Fengqiao's "Success" "The taste of "

"Little boy, rarely worried..." Every time I hear this familiar song, I will think of myself. The boy in the song is always so carefree, why do I have so many troubles? (Studying is like climbing a mountain, and exams are like passing a test. Passing every test is like climbing a mountain. Let us say "goodbye" to our troubles and let happiness linger around us forever. Give us a blue sky and make our lives more flavorful! Please ride the horse of ideals , whipped and set off, the spring scenery was just right on the road, the sun was shining brightly in the sky) - Tang Lijie's "The Taste of Trouble"

"Oh my God, it wasn't me, it really wasn't me!" I almost wanted to. Cried out. Oh, what a bad luck, who asked me to be at the place where it happened! (Oh my God, I provoke whoever I provoke. God doesn’t need to treat me like this. It’s unfair, so unfair!) - Xia Tingting’s "The Feeling of Being Unjustly Accused"

On a hot afternoon , Class 3 of fifth grade is going to take the math test again. "Ring, ring, ring..." The class bell rang, and the math teacher pushed in with a stack of test papers. We immediately settled like carbon dioxide and clear lime water. Then there was another burst of people's voices: "Wow, there is another math test, my God! It's so inhumane!" The students screamed. Just hearing the teacher cough, the classroom became quiet again.

(Since this exam, I have understood: You must not be proud or underestimate your enemies, otherwise you will make a big mistake. It feels so uncomfortable to hand in the exam!) - Shen Xielin's "The Taste of Handing in the exam"

"Mother's love is like the sea, and father's love is like a mountain." Mother's love is like a warm spring breeze blowing gently, so gentle and loving; while father's love is like a cold winter wind, blowing heavily, so severe and deep. (Today I have experienced a love that I have never experienced before - father's love. I understand the profound charm of my father's love.) - Kang Xiaoxu "The Taste of Love"

Love is a firework that illuminates the brilliance. love is a medicine that can only heal the wounds of the soul; love is a red flag that welcomes you to the dawn; love is a torch that lights up the street lights of our lives. ——Zheng Jiabin's "The Taste of Love"

It was two years ago. Several of my classmates and I went to play in the mountains. The scenery on the mountains was so beautiful: the delicate grass, The majestic cypress trees, the graceful chrysanthemums... there is a rich fragrance everywhere. (I deeply feel the taste of happiness, and I am in a great mood! How I wish to have a happy time! Let this taste of happiness always linger around me!) - Qi Junlei "The Taste of Happiness"

In my vague memory, that summer was the happiest day for me. The hot weather became cooler, the fish were free in the water, the birds were unrestrained in the sky, and the ground was whispering. The insects, the green grass, the graceful flowers, and the swaying willows are all full of infinite vitality, and my heart is full of infinite happiness. (They are like old scalpers with their backs to the sky, working from dawn to dusk. They fight for their children. They stick to their jobs like screws. Their love is wider and bigger than the sea. Deeper than the sea, as tall as a mountain, as steady as a mountain, and as heavy as a mountain. They - my hard-working parents) - Shao Yingying's "The Taste of Happiness"

That was last year's midterm. The exam was a day that completely awakened me. That day, for the first time, I felt my selfishness, pride and willfulness. I failed miserably and I really felt ashamed. (Looking back at the past, I was selfish and would not easily teach others what I knew; I was proud, even if I taught other students how to learn, I would always do so in an admonishing tone; I was willful and would always do things as I pleased, No matter what the consequences are...I really deserve it!) - Zhang Tianyi "The Taste of Failure"