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How to make the composition material vivid and novel, and live a wonderful life composition material?
Writing is a difficult problem in junior middle school Chinese teaching. The use of typical examples, famous sayings, epigrams and ancient poems enables students to properly express their themes in their compositions, or add literary details and paint them with bright colors. However, due to monotonous living environment and heavy academic burden, students' material selection space is extremely narrow, and students' composition materials always have a sense of sameness. Li Yu, an ancient Chinese opera theorist in China, once said: "Corruption leads to change, change leads to life, and life leads to rebirth." So, how can we keep the composition materials fresh and make readers feel refreshed?

First, imagine boldly, avoiding similarities and seeking differences.

In the face of materials, we encourage students to have the spirit of playing the pipa, break through the mindset and achieve convergence while reserving differences. That is to say, in terms of materials, we put forward a unique point of view different from tradition and secularism, so that students can learn to use negative materials or positive materials, let them see what others have not seen, think of what others have not thought of, and write what others have not written, so that the written composition will not be stereotyped and unique. For example, many students praised Yugong's indomitable spirit for a material called "Yugong Mountain". However, some students think that "fools are fools" with reverse thinking; Some people think that moving mountains in Gong Yu is not as good as saving manpower, time and material resources; Some people think that Gong Yu is not as good as the whole family working together to develop airplanes or explosives; Some people think that it is better to dig tunnels than to move mountains in Gong Yu; Some people think that there is a beautiful scenery of "one field of water keeps green, and two mountains make green flowers", and there is even a feeling of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely", which is beneficial to health. Gong Yu should not move mountains. How creative these ideas are!

Everything in the world is interrelated and developing. Therefore, it is necessary to teach students the method of divergent thinking, so that students can focus on something and think around something, so as to "think for a thousand years and see through Wan Li". In the vast space-time field, find out the materials related to this material, and select novel and vivid materials from many materials through in-depth thinking and excavation. We should put the materials in different spaces at the same time to expand the association. Or social, family, school, nature and other space fields; Or choose domestic and foreign materials, so that you can look at the materials from multiple angles, directions and aspects, so as to obtain a novel perspective and unique experience. At this time, the material will be extraordinary.

Second, bring forth the old and bring forth the new, new wine in old bottles.

Idioms, proverbs, stories and myths in ancient books have strong vitality, and ancient documents are concise. More importantly, this part of the content has a lot of room for re-creation. As long as the author has ideas and creatively creates with his own insights and ingenious ideas, it is entirely possible to create more vivid images and extract them. "Get rid of the old bones and follow the standard" has achieved a series of beautiful articles with novel ideas, unique materials and exquisite ideas. We might as well use the following three methods to bring forth the old and bring forth the new, and use classical old bottles to hold mellow jade liquid. It's intoxicating after reading it.

1. This story is newly edited and has new ideas. It is to take history, myths and legends as the theme, on the basis of the original plot, use the existing cultural accumulation, boldly and reasonably imagine, inject new flesh and blood into real life, and create new story images to express the content and theme of real life. That is, by borrowing old themes, some details in the story are expanded, continued, abbreviated and rewritten by appropriate means.

2. Absurd humor, clever tailor. It often uses the method of "illusion" to turn the real thing into the thinking mode of illusory thing, "using symbols, metaphors, puns, dislocations, etc." Expose innocent and unreasonable things in life and express the theme through people and things that are untrue, unreasonable and ridiculous. For example, in 2005, the essay "God is Confused" made Tagore, Einstein and Madame Curie born in China through "God", which helped China realize his dream of winning the Nobel Prize but failed. It truly reflected the seemingly absurd stories of family doting, killing genius and despising girls in contemporary education in China, and failed to provide enough run-up lines for talents to show their superhuman talents.

3. Change the theme and use "live" materials. When writing a composition, we often use people as the main body of writing to quote materials. In fact, if we break away from convention, skillfully change the angle, take animals, plants or other things as the main body of writing, and adopt personification, symbolism and other means to let them interpret the story as people themselves to express the theme. Subsequently, we also broke the traditional method of using materials-quoting, but let the people or things in the materials "live" and stand up and express the theme with their "self-presentation". This makes the article find another way to shine. For example, the autobiography of consolation adopts the form of first person, and visits Guan Yu and Newton with "consolation" as the main body of the article. Let the characters in the material-Guan Yu and Newton "stand up and express their views" to prove the role of encouragement: encouragement gives people strength. This autobiographical form makes the materials fresh, vivid and interesting.

Third, pay attention to life and keep pace with the times.

The selection of materials should be innovative and pay attention to the "newness" of materials, that is, choose fresh materials with the color of the times. This requires us to pay more attention to the "hot" materials in social life: various social realities, viewpoints and opinions that attract attention and have different opinions. Grasp the pulse of the times, cooperate with the situation, embody the new look of the new era with new people, new things, new ideas and new materials, thus enriching our material inventory, and we can win with freshness.

First of all, we should pay attention to broaden our reading horizons, read more newspapers and pay more attention to current events: watch more TV programs such as Focus Interview and Tell the Truth. Secondly, we should pay attention to observing and experiencing life, look for novel materials from ordinary life and give new life to some stale materials. Third, be diligent in writing and record new things, new insights and new feelings. Then analyze and think, optimize the combination. As time goes on, new themes will come alive.

In short, the composition is not a lack of fresh materials, but a lack of innovative minds, keen eyes and diligent hands. As long as we dare to innovate materials boldly, pay more attention to observing and listening to the changes around us, and record them, the materials we use will certainly maintain fresh luster, fragrant smell and magical charm.

(Author: Xuanjiangying Middle School, Fengning Manchu Autonomous County, Hebei Province)