Skill analysis:
Tip 1: Use rhetoric skillfully.
Function: Clever use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor, parallelism, personification and questioning can make the beginning of the article vivid, magnificent and picturesque.
Example:
(1) A few years of study and life can't be restored. Looking back, we always take struggle as the rudder. Now, the third day is coming, and we must set sail with struggle.
Life in grade three begins with hard work. I think you will build a steel-like character and make you and me indomitable.
Life in grade three begins with hard work. I think you will make new achievements and meet new joy.
Life in grade three begins with hard work. I think you will spread your wings and fly to the blue sky of victory.
(2) The morning light in March opened the window and the first ray of sunshine shone on people. In this way, spring comes to us from the window. Spring is the beginning of the four seasons, which brings us new hope.
(3) "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. question mark cleared his throat and said, "The seminar on time and space is now officially started. Today, our theme is "What is beauty". Please let scholars from different times and countries speak actively. " ? ("What is Beauty")
(4) How to describe the dance of Indian Karama sisters?
If I were a poet, I would write a long poem to describe their various dances.
If I were a painter, I would touch them with various colors and dye their bright brow and gorgeous clothes.
-(Bing Xin's Watching Dance)
Secret 2: quoting classics and literary talent flying.
Function: Ingeniously quoting ancient poems, famous sayings, lyrics, proverbs, two-part allegorical sayings or predecessors' profound and incisive expositions can save a lot of pen and ink, make literary talent soar and get twice the result with half the effort.
Example:
(1) "Like the strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows away the petals of ten thousand pear trees". In front of me is a world made up of powder and jade. I can see the beautiful scenery written by the poet Cen Can before my eyes. Winter morning
(2) We will experience many difficulties and setbacks in our life. Face it with a calm mind, meet it with high emotions, and overcome it with positive actions. You will succeed, just as the lyrics say, "How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain?" No one can succeed casually! " ("Laughing at Frustration")
(3) As the saying goes, "Everything is difficult at the beginning". When you start doing something, you will feel strange and at a loss. If we don't grasp every beginning, then we will lose not only an opportunity, but also a success. ("Seize every beginning")
(4) The aesthetic master Rodin once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ? ("Spin this kaleidoscope")
Tip 3: Set up suspense skillfully and lead the topic.
Function: Everyone is curious, especially those who love reading literary works. When you set a lot of suspense at the beginning of the article that can arouse people's curiosity, your article has undoubtedly succeeded more than half. That is, the doubts that aroused the reader's curiosity from the beginning.
Example:
(1) There was a bitten apple on the stage, and I sat at the bottom of the platform with a blank face.
-"Incomplete Beauty"
(2) "Where is the antelope?" My mother suddenly asked me. -"antelope woodcarving"
(3) I often think that everyone has his own secret garden, which is full of secret flowers and plants, and there is a pink door outside. Who can open it but himself?
-"Love, Open My Heart"
High intensity training
In your growing journey, you will always leave your footprints everywhere, with happy memories, beautiful yearning, unremitting pursuit, the joy of success and the trouble of failure; There are also parents' nagging, friends' concern and classmates' trust; There are happiness, worry, gratitude, anger, embarrassment, misunderstanding and so on, but you must correctly treat the bitterness, gain and loss, success and failure in your growth, face life bravely and face challenges, and your front must be bright.
Please write a composition of more than 600 words with the topic "_ _ _ _ _ _".
Requirements: 1. Use one or more of the opening techniques you have learned to make a good start for your composition.
2 standard writing, neat surface and fluent language.
Wonderful opening demonstration
1. Quote famous words and sentences
(1) Ask what the world is and teach people life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face. ? Shi said, "Love is a tool. ……"? ("Ask what the world is")?
In a medieval church, a saint began his speech: "I became a saint because I saw through money. What belongs to me belongs to everyone." Long years, a snap of your fingers. In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine." ? (Saints and Thieves)
Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ? ("Spin this kaleidoscope")
2. Clever use of letter format
(1) Dear Grandpa Confucius:
Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice. ? (A letter to Confucius)
(2) Damn standard answer:
Seeing you, I am really filled with indignation. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you. The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat. You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened. Here are your three major crimes: a letter with a standard answer?
3. Borrow Zhang Hui's novel brushwork
1 "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past. And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world. ? ("Heroes of the Three Kingdoms")
(2) water margin Juyitang, now is brightly lit, buzzing. One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently. It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin. That's why all the heroes gather here and argue endlessly. ? Who is the hero who fights tigers?
4. Use rhetoric skillfully?
① "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. question mark cleared his throat and said, "The seminar on time and space is now officially started. Today, our theme is "What is beauty". Please let scholars from different times and countries speak actively. " ? ("What is Beauty")
5. Clever use of fables?
Gong Yu's family has lived here for generations, and Wangwu Mountain and Taihang Mountain at the entrance stand in the way. Life is pathetic! It seems isolated here. What's new in this city has long been old news. This life really needs to change. The foolish old man thought, I have to find a way to move Taihang Mountain and Wu Wang. ? (The Story of New Gong Yu and Zhizuo)
Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to meet the needs of the times, our school will carry out all-round quality education and all staff will learn to teach, so as to ensure that your children become all-round generalists and remain invincible in the competition. Tuition, 3000 yuan per semester; Training fee, 2000 yuan; Sponsorship fee, 15000 yuan. " ? (All-round School)?
6. Clever use of inscriptions to reveal the theme
(1) there is no tree, but there can be grass green; Without the beauty of peony, you can have the freedom of small wild chrysanthemum ... life is not necessarily brilliant, but it must be great! ?
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Butterfly was once a beautiful and excellent dancer. Her long shawl and gentle dance brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was hailed by others as China's future Duncan ... but it's all over, and fate will keep her in a wheelchair forever. Life is bleak and silent, and the "white swan" has become an ugly duckling that nobody cares about. How many times, she dreamed that she put on glass shoes and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up, she only heard the cold autumn wind. ? (starry night talk)?
If you lose money, you only lose a small part; ? If you lose your health, you only lose a small part; If you lose your integrity, you are almost bankrupt.
What is "honesty"? So is honesty and trustworthiness. Throughout history, the word "sincerity" has been saturated.
How many people shed blood and tears. ? Who is praising the emperor's new clothes? )
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7. Clever use of problem-solving forms
Once, a friend gave me a unique question: which of the following beautiful scenery do you like best?
A. A piece of pure white feather falls leisurely in the shining golden sunshine.
B. A petal falls red and floats in the quiet and deep pool water.
C. a meteor, in the deep blue sky, is fleeting.
Ending skills of composition in examination room
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and sipping fragrant teas, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted a slogan unrelated to the content of the article, which is a major theme at the end. 3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1. Natural clustering type
No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the end fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness, which is concise, lively and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law". As long as you have passion, write freely and fully express your feelings, it is a good article. But paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary thinking development. For example, at the end of Song Hui, Yunnan Province, "When I was a child, I often listened to the old woman's mantra,' It's hard to have a golden bucket in ten years', which means that the event was hard-won, and I didn't know it was like this until I attended it.
Step 2 echo from beginning to end
The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, the ending in "Back" is "Alas! I don't know when I can see him again. " That is, it echoes the beginning of the article, "I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and the most unforgettable thing is his back."
3. Zhang Xianzhi's style chess pieces
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Pearl Bird, "When my pen moves, I feel a temporary feeling: trust often creates a beautiful realm." Another example is My First Book, which ends with "One can't forget one's roots".
4. Famous aphorisms
Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". For example, at the end of Talking about Life, "Happiness is exciting, but pain is not beautiful." ? I once read a proverb, "May there be enough clouds in your life to create a beautiful night". The life of the world, the country and the individual is nothing more cloudy than today. "
5. Lyric argument
Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency. Such as "kind and dark mother earth, may her soul be in your arms forever!" (A Chang and Shan Hai Jing) Another example is the ending of Snow: "Yes, it is lonely snow, dead rain and the soul of rain."
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow. The above endings are just some common endings, so don't copy them mechanically.
A collection of excellent compositions by students at the beginning or end.
It is a pleasure to be cared for by teachers, a pleasure to be helped by others, and a pleasure to help others. Although this is a little help, my heart is full of joy and pride. If everyone can help others, then the world will become a beautiful world! )-Tan Xiutao's "The Taste of Happiness"
Autumn wind gently blows dancing leaves, and birds seem tired of dancing leaves and hide in their nests. The grass has withered, and the cool autumn wind seems to be tired of drifting. I can't help but think of one thing in the third grade. Although it was very small, it embarrassed me at that time and was a great education for me. The autumn wind is still blowing the dancing leaves and my cheeks. It's mild and cool, and I'm awake a lot, aren't I? As a man, you must be honest. Deceiving others is also deceiving yourself! )-Liu Yingxiu's "The Taste of Embarrassment"
On the road of my growth, I always leave my footprints everywhere, with happy memories, beautiful yearning, joy of success and trouble of failure, most of which are happiness, emotion, resentment and anger. However, what I can't forget most is that embarrassing morning. I should thank that embarrassing morning for letting me stop being all thumbs, but I should also say "goodbye" to that embarrassing morning, because the taste of embarrassment is really hard. )-Zhang Xili's "The Taste of Embarrassment"
Recalling one's own growth process is like an overturned five-flavor bottle, sour, bitter, spicy and astringent, but not sweet. Although failure is hateful, it is the first step to success. I drank a bottle of Rhizoma Coptidis and said, "The taste of failure is really unpleasant." )-Dong Chenggong's "The Taste of Failure"
When I was a child, it was you who spent so many happy days with me. Let you tell me that you still have maternal love, so no matter how long the days are and how far the land is, I want to enjoy your love in your arms. The taste of missing is like a cup of bitter coffee. Although you can add some sugar, it still makes people haggard. )-Yang Chen's "The Taste of Missing"
Wildfire never completely devoured them, but they grew taller in the spring breeze. Spring has come, Sister Liu's long hair flutters gently in the air, floret's cheeks show a bright smile, and naughty little grass makes faces at you in the wind. Bathed in the spring breeze, looking at this beautiful scenery, my thoughts drifted to four years ago. -Yi Yongqiang's "The Taste of Success"
People will experience a lot in their life, but happiness is often the most desirable. Because happiness is a psychological experience, which can be said to be far away or close at hand. Happiness surrounds us like dots, and it's almost at your fingertips, don't you think? As long as people face the complicated life with a childlike innocence, always pursue the light and yearn for happiness, you will definitely become a happy pony. )-Cao Li "The Taste of Happiness"
There are clouds in the sky, with a straight face and contempt; Trees bow their heads and laugh contemptuously; The grass is whispering in the field, as if deliberately avoiding me. Everything is ruthless. The first time I tasted failure, I wandered in frustration. The dark clouds in the sky cleared, the tree raised its head and the grass showed its head. Seeing this, I thought about it, and quickly returned to the classroom and picked up the textbook ...)-He Yang Ming's "The Taste of Failure"
Childhood dreams are colorful; The stars of childhood shine forever; Childhood is fresh in my memory. Recalling my colorful childhood, scenes emerged in front of my eyes. At that time, I really succeeded. I overcame myself and made up for my shortcomings. I'm really happy. That kind of happiness is beyond words. Please try the joy of success! )-Wang's "The Taste of Success"
"Little boy, I seldom worry ..." Every time I hear this familiar song, I think of myself. Teenagers in songs are always so carefree, why do I have countless troubles? Studying is like climbing a mountain, and passing the exam is like climbing a mountain every day. Let's say goodbye to troubles and let happiness haunt us forever. Give us a blue sky and make our life more interesting! Please take the ideal horse and start with the whip. Spring has just started, and the sky is sunny. )
"Oh, dear, that's not me. I really didn't do it! " I almost cried. Alas, unlucky, who let me at the meeting! Oh, my God. Who did I piss off? God doesn't have to treat me like this. It's not fair. It's so unfair! )-Xia Tingting's "The Taste of Being wronged"
On a hot afternoon, Class 3, Grade 5 will have a math exam again. "Rinrin Bell ..." The bell rang, and the math teacher opened the door with a stack of papers. We immediately precipitated like carbon dioxide and clarified limewater. Then there was a voice: "Wow, there is a math exam again, my God! It's inhuman! " The students are screaming. Only when the teacher coughed did the classroom become quiet again. From the beginning of this exam, I understand: never be proud, never underestimate your enemy, or you will be all wet. The taste of the first volume is really unpleasant! )-Shen's "The Taste of Holding Hands"
"A mother's love is like the sea, and a father's love is like a mountain". Motherly love is like a warm spring breeze blowing gently, so gentle and loving; However, fatherly love is the winter wind, so severe and deep. Today, I realized the love I didn't know before-fatherly love, and I understood the profound charm of fatherly love. )
Love is fireworks, illuminating a brilliant life; Love is a medicine, so it needs to be traumatized; Love is a red flag that welcomes you to the dawn; Love is the torch that lights the street lamp of our life. -Zheng Jiabin's "Taste of Love"
That was two years ago. I went climbing with some classmates. The scenery on the mountain is really beautiful: delicate grass, domineering cypress trees, graceful chrysanthemums ... everywhere exudes a strong fragrance. I deeply feel the taste of happiness, and I am in a great mood! How I wish I had a happy time! Let this happy smell haunt me all the time! )
In my vague memory, that summer was my happiest day. The hot weather has turned cool. Free fish in the water, free birds in the air, insects whispering on the ground, green grass, graceful flowers and swaying willows are full of infinite vitality, and my heart is full of infinite happiness. They are like workhorses facing the loess and facing the sky, working from morning till night. They are fighting for their children. They stick to their jobs like screws. Their love is wider, bigger and deeper than the sea, as high, steady and heavy as a mountain. They-my hardworking parents.