1. How students quote poetry in their compositions

Among the famous articles selected by the People's Education Press' junior high school Chinese textbook, there are many quotes from poetry.

In "Spring", Zhu Ziqing quoted the poem "The Willow Wind Blows on My Face Not Cold" from the "Quatrains" by monk Zhinan to describe the gentleness of the spring breeze; in order to express the exploratory spirit of scientific workers, Hao Mingjian quoted Qu Yuan, a poet from the Chu State, said in his Li Sao: "The road is long and long, and I will search up and down." In "Lychee Honey", Yang Shuo only used "eat three hundred lychees a day, and he will grow up to be a Lingnan native" (from Su Shi's "Huizhou Yijue") to write about the beauty of lychees.

Some excellent compositions also rely on quoting poems. Example 1. "Today's Basketball Game"...Our class lost the last basketball game, and this time is the last chance.

Somehow I actually felt the tragedy of "the wind rustles and the water becomes cold, and a strong man will never return". Teacher Chen's whistle sounded, and my heart tightened: "It's time to go on stage!" 2 From "Heaven is about to entrust a great responsibility to this person, but he must first strain his mind, work his muscles and bones, starve his body and skin, and deplete his body." , I have understood Mencius's efforts; from "The spring silkworms will die when the silkworms are dead, and the wax torch will turn to ashes before the tears dry up", I understand the depth of responsibility.

From "Whoever speaks an inch of grass will be rewarded with three rays of spring light", I understand the sincerity of children towards their parents. From a small photo of Lu Xun, I understood the broad mind of "I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood".

Selected from "The Call of Responsibility" 3. Looking for ancient times in the sun is Tao Qian's leisurely "picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence and leisurely seeing the Nanshan Mountain"; it is the leisurely way of Emperor Wei It is the heroism of "The autumn wind blew the wind and the torrents surged"; it is the joy of Yi An's "returning to the boat late after all the excitement and straying into the depths of the lotus flowers"; "The free and easy way; looking for the past in the day, is the steadfastness of "the clothes are getting wider and wider, but I will never regret it, and I am haggard because of the loss of Yi"; it is the loyalty of Du Gongbu's "the Arctic court will never change, and the bandits and bandits in the Western Mountains will make love" Confidence; it is the surprise of "looking for her thousands of times among the crowd, and suddenly looking back". ——Excerpted from "Classical Plot" 4. "When the river goes eastward, the waves are gone, and the romantic figures of the ages" I found a kind of pride; "When did the spring flowers and autumn moon come? How much do you know about the past?" I found a kind of looking back; "Yes I can’t make an appointment until midnight, I’m knocking the chess pieces and setting off the lanterns.” I found a kind of tranquility; “I smiled at the sky from my horizontal sword, leaving behind my liver and gallbladder.” I found a kind of heroism; “Clear water brings out hibiscus, and nature removes the carvings.” I found a simplicity.

——The passages "Chasing My Dream" are all selected from the high school entrance examination essays with perfect scores. It is because the author is good at using poems and phrases at his fingertips that the language of the article is bright and full of poetic elegance. It is as refreshing as the fragrance of tea and makes people feel fascinated.

It also infiltrates the author's thoughts into some classical plots, making it thicker and thicker. It better reflects the candidates' literary accumulation and cultivation and gives people a refreshing feeling.

This is also the main reason why these articles can stand out among many compositions. At the end of a poem, there are many ways to add icing on the cake, either to summarize the whole text to reveal the main idea; to show the future to inspire fighting spirit; to express one's feelings to enhance the appeal of the article; or to make implicit words to make the reader wrap up the book and think about it. Daydream endlessly.

1. Quotes at the end of poems have strong appeal and can often give readers a strong shock. For example, the ending of "Looking at the Sea and the Sky": "If you don't see it, the water of the Yellow River comes up from the sky, and rushes to the sea and never returns.

If you don't see it, the mirror in the high hall has sad white hair, and it looks like blue silk in the morning and turns to snow in the evening." The passage of time is like a fleeting year. Water, time is like electricity. Perhaps, only history can make "the wordless monument be filled with words". Perhaps only history can best interpret the sentence that Zeng Guofan wrote about his life's mood when the city of Tianjing was destroyed and the yellow robe was about to be added to his body. Words: The sky illuminates the sea with countless flowers, and the flowing water and the high mountains make the heart aware of itself.

The candidates concluded by quoting Li Bai's poems and Zeng Guofan's own poems, which further deepened the author's point of view and left readers with endless reflections. 2. Use famous poetic lines with philosophical characteristics to summarize the full text and deepen the theme.

Good poetry and your good article are the icing on the cake. After reading your article, people will also agree with your point of view.

This plays a "finishing point" role.

The end of the junior high school Chinese textbook "Yilu Pear Blossoms" reads: "Looking at this group of energetic little Hani girls and the white pear blossoms, I couldn't help but think of a poem: 'Yilu Pear Blossoms are blooming everywhere. '. "This ending not only depicts natural pear blossoms, but also depicts Lei Feng's spirit. It corresponds to the title in structure, deepens the theme in content, and is rich in meaning.

Quoting poetry cleverly wraps up the text, leaving an endless aftertaste and thought-provoking. This is the beauty of quoting poetry.

If the poem can be quoted flexibly at the beginning and end of the article, and can echo back and forth, the effect will be better. For example, the 2003 high school entrance examination full score essay "Young Sorrow" was written like this.

Beginning: Xin Qiji once recited such a poem: "Young people don't know the feeling of sadness, so they fall in love with the upper floors; falling in love with the upper floors, they force themselves to express their sorrow in order to compose new words." We young people across the century, but I have already tasted the feeling of sadness.

This is not a matter of "telling the truth" but of "telling the truth". It is suppressing us students with tender arms and legs day by day. ...End: But no matter what, I still want to say to all the students who "know nothing of sorrow" and have tasted "the taste of sorrow": "Young people should understand the feeling of sadness, young people should look forward to the feeling of sadness, and young people should not forget the feeling of sadness. , young people are not afraid of the feeling of sorrow. "

------The poem of Xin Qiji is quoted at the beginning; it is used vividly at the end, which has a sublimation effect; of course, when quoting poems, they must be natural and harmonious. Quote for citation's sake. In short, cleverly quoting and using ancient poems can make your composition vivid and elegant, and it can also show the author's rich literary quality and extraordinary writing skills.

I hope teachers will guide students to accumulate more famous poems and quote poems flexibly, which will not only make students' compositions more inspiring, but also promote our classical culture and make ancient poems shine today. 2. How to cleverly quote poems in college entrance examination essays

First of all, how many poems do you have in your belly? Your on-the-spot reaction in the exam room should never be faked unless you know the test questions in advance.

On a hot summer day, when the doors and windows are wide open, a cool breeze blows in. Some people say: It’s such a strong wind; When you enter the examination room, you can tell who is better at a glance.

Of course, this problem can be solved in one year of high school. All ancient Chinese texts in the class must be memorized by heart, and you should be able to memorize them upside down.

Then, based on the lessons in class, look at some extended masterpieces. For example: There is a poem by Xin Qiji in the class. Look for 10 representative poems by Xin Qiji, recite them repeatedly (don’t memorize them at this time), and find the 3-5 poems that you like the most.

Everyone may say that the other songs you did not choose are the best, but the ones you choose are the ones you feel the most and understand best, and are easiest to use when writing essays. Yes, these are your poems. Personality, innovation and understanding are very important. The teacher will also find them fresh and treat them differently. There are only a few ancient poetry writers in the college entrance examination class, and after screening them all, there will only be about 50 poems. At this time, you copy one poem every day, and post it where you can see it when you look up, so that you can memorize it and understand it. It, think about it.

After looping two or three times, you can expand the scope and filter another batch. In this way, plus the ones in class, you will have about 100 ancient poems in your stomach in the third year of high school. At this time, I tell you, it is time to quote them at will without feeling far-fetched or stretched.

Of course, the above is based on the situation that you did nothing for 2/3 of your three years in high school. My favorite method is to read a lot, copy down what I like, add my own opinions, and write it into a thick book.

In this case, I can not only quote poems but also some sentences, chapters and opinions from famous articles. The clever integration of modern poetry between the lines is also a must-have in the examination room.

Second, let’s talk about the way of citation. The poster who raised this question must have said it from the teacher. Extra points will be given if you quote more.

This is the truth, but many people use the truth in a disgusting way. In fact, it is just a poem: Moisturize things silently.

Quotation marks in articles are the worst. The second worst thing is that the entire paragraph and sentence are used exactly the same.

Both of these methods are contemptuous of the IQ of the marking teacher. Don’t you know the poetry teacher who knows this? Do they want you to carry it? No, even if you want to show off how much you know and how remote you are, don’t provoke the teacher by repeating the same sentence. In fact, if you look through some college entrance examination essay selections, you will know that these two are really very low-level.

The word "clever" seems simple, but it is actually very mysterious. There is one person whose articles are an example of the wonderful use of poetry: Yu Guangzhong.

Let’s take an example: in autumn on the mainland, whether it’s sparse raindrops on the sycamore trees, or showers hitting the lotus leaves, it always sounds a bit desolate, desolate, and sad. When I think about it now on the island, it’s In addition to the sadness, there is another layer of sadness and confusion. No matter how heroic and chivalrous you are, I am afraid you will not be able to withstand the wind and rain over and over again. ("Listen to the Cold Rain") Can you count how many verses are used in this sentence? Li Qingzhao’s search, desolation, desolation, misery, and sorrow are all in this sentence. If you open this poem by Li Qingzhao and compare it, are the sparse rain, parasol trees, drops, and melancholy all present? Not to mention the heroic spirit and heroic spirit, and the rain and wind blowing away.

After reading more of his articles, one day I will suddenly be able to learn from him, which is also an unexpected gain. Yes, as I just said, this is called transformation.

Phrases are the introduction to clever citations. But what kind of teacher can’t help but give you high marks at the first sight? What follows is my favorite quoted image.

There is something that appears repeatedly in ancient Chinese poetry: rain, ape cry, weeping blood, Jiangnan, Guhong, climbing a building, flowing water, chrysanthemum.

These have fixed meanings and context associated with them.

In composition, I recommend that when expressing expressions, you can pile up a large number of similar images to achieve the effect of directing emotions to ***. This is very difficult. You can give it a try, but if you don't have enough confidence, you will look extremely stupid.

To summarize, the ways of clever quotation are arranged from high to low: stacking similar images, using verses, quoting the whole sentence, and quoting in double quotes. Note, don’t stop quoting in double quotes at all just because I said it’s silly. If you really quote exactly the same thing individually or use double quotes, it will show that your writing skills (application of punctuation marks) are very good. First, use it in a standardized way. Use Chinese and think about how to write better.

One more sentence: These four methods work best when mixed, and the real beauty is the patchwork. Finally, let’s talk about a situation where going too far is not enough.

In the college entrance examination sample essays of the past few years, there was a kind of article that got a lot of high scores, that is, the whole article was filled with a lot of poetry. In fact, the thinking was very little and very thin. It was extremely gorgeous, and the real point of view probably had no logic. One or two. I don’t want the poster’s composition to become like this after I finish writing this article. This is a tragedy.

Quoting poems is just a rhetorical method, a quick way to get high scores, but the best articles are high-scoring articles in anyone’s hands, they are thoughtful articles and they are logical. An article with clear lines and profound discussions. Some people say that it is not important what you say, but how you say it is the most important thing. This is either true or not.

Of course, how you say it is the most important, but what you say is what the teacher wants to see, and what you say is the best way to take exams, right? Think more about everything you see, debate with your classmates and teachers, and observe the students in the class who write really well. They are the ones who think and read the most. Well, I wish you success! come on! ps: If you have any questions, please feel free to ask more. 3. Composition passages quoting verses

Soul Purification Department Dongguan Xiaojudeng Composition School Grade 1 Liu Yuan In the center of the campus, there was a faint scent of books, ethereal, but refreshing.

School is over. Unconsciously, with tiny steps, I came here again.

The library stands proudly in the wind. This holy place contains priceless treasures and supports the pure land of the soul for people. I walked in, and the scent of sandalwood spread through the title page of the book, through the interlayer of the bookcase, through my skin, and spread to every blood vessel and nerve in me.

The brown-red paint decoration makes the library as a whole echo the fragrance of books here, making people want to make a cup of hot tea, sit down and start rich reverie. Think about it, there is a China in the far east... The fog dissipated, and on the distant pavilion stood a scholar, looking at the distant river, softly reciting his own poems.

What a Su Dongpo, what a song Nian Nujiao, what a sentence "The great river goes eastward, the waves are gone, and the romantic figures of the ages"! Only the water in the distance is still rushing and everlasting. Flowing water, flowing water, Li Qingzhao was riding a small boat. When she was intoxicated, she accidentally entered the lotus root and startled a group of gulls and herons.

Flying and flying, it arrived on a beautiful morning after the storm. The curtain roller said, "The crabapples are still the same." She shook her head and said with a smile, "They should be green, fat, red, and thin." The beautiful begonias floated and floated until the end of the Northern Song Dynasty. At this time, Li Qingzhao only had the sadness and sadness of "searching and searching, deserted, miserable and miserable".

Walking into the depths of the library, opening a book, I accepted the baptism of spirit. The arms of the Opium War were burning on the land of the Central Plains. The Japanese invaders began to invade and massacre the sacred China. On September 18, September 18, the helpless people lost their homes.

What the fate will be, what the outcome will be, and whether the sins will be washed away, can only be known by the sentence "The People's Republic of China was formally established." Resist! If you stand up, you will not be the sick man of East Asia! Do whatever it takes for your homeland and motherland! In this way, I completely purified my soul.

And in the center of the campus, the place where the soul is purified, sandalwood remains everlasting for generations to come. 4. Teach you how to quote poems in compositions (reposted)

Teach you how to quote poems in compositions. In the writings of ancient poets, grass often represents the poet's feelings. It can express the vitality of people and make people Praise for its strong spirit, such as: "Wildfires never burn out, but the spring breeze blows and grows again"; it can express the vibrant spring, making people feel the vitality of the beautiful spring scenery, such as: "In February and March, the grass and water are the same color"; and It can express sadness and melancholy. When you see lush vegetation, you will think of life, and can express your own melancholy, such as: "The Qingchuan is full of Hanyang trees, and the grass is luxuriant and the Parrot Island is green."

When we quote poems in our compositions to express our feelings, it can make the article even better and more colorful. How to use poetry in the text? I believe students will understand after reading the following examples: Example 1: In spring, everything seems to be vibrant and full of vitality.

Look, the willow branches swaying in the wind, "The jasper is as high as a tree, with thousands of green silk ribbons hanging down. I don't know who cut out the thin leaves. The spring breeze in February is like scissors."

Beautiful! The grass that is growing happily under the spring rain, "The light rain on the street is as moist as crisp, the color of the grass looks far away but not up close." Cool! The flowers that are competing to bloom, "it is easy to recognize the east wind, and it is always spring with its colorful colors."

Wonderful! While you are admiring this beautiful scenery, there may be some drizzle that looks like cow hair, like flower needles, like filaments, and more like naughty children. "There are many fragrant grasses in February in the south of the Yangtze River, and spring is in the drizzle." strange! And the gentle, cool wind also joined the spring rain on the stage beside the ancient canal.

"The apricot blossom rain makes your clothes wet, and the willow wind blows on your face without chilling it." Refreshing! In spring, it is impossible to live without children. Look, those children are running happily, trying to catch the butterfly, but they can't find it. "The children hurriedly chased the yellow butterfly, flying into the cauliflower and nowhere to be found." ”

Interesting! Look over there, there are a few people still flying kites. "Children came back early from school and were busy taking advantage of the east wind to fly kites." Happy! Example 2: The most beautiful thing in the Humble Administrator’s Garden is the lotus pond.

"Lotus can be picked in the south of the Yangtze River, and there are fields of lotus leaves." There have been countless chants about lotus. The three lotus ponds in the Humble Administrator's Garden each have their own beauty, creating a spacious but not sparse garden scene. , all built according to the lotus pond.

Large clear lotus leaves are stretched and stretched at random, and red and white lotus flowers are in bud, delicate and beautiful, and are scattered in an orderly manner, like girls standing gracefully and gracefully in a sea of ??green.

No one can find a more vivid and appropriate description than Zhou Bangyan's "The early sun shines on the leaves and the rain lasts, the water surface is clear and round, and the wind lifts each one one by one." Standing in the lotus pond and watching the dragonflies flying, I couldn't help but think of the classic words in Yang Wanli's "Little Pond": "The little lotus has just revealed its sharp corners, and the dragonflies have already stood on it."

Every step is beautiful. It is a new scenery, which is a portrayal of the Humble Administrator's Garden with "lotus on four walls and willows on three sides, half a pond of autumn water and one room of mountain". Example 3: Happy, I always miss you infinitely, like white clouds missing the blue sky, like green grass obsessed with the earth, and as deep as trees taking root.

The naughty and childish feeling I once had is still lingering in my mind... "In February and March, the grass and water are the same color." I put on bright clothes and walked leisurely among the flowers and trees, watching Breathing out the fragrance of spring, I feel the scenery of "the light rain on the street is as moist as crisp, and the color of grass looks far away but is not there"; in summer, I wear a printed vest and shorts and run among the groves, stop by the noisy pond, and look at the "trees" "The trees are luxuriant and the grass is luxuriant", and I feel the perfect atmosphere of "the leaves are endlessly green, and the lotus flowers are red in the sun"; in autumn, the ancient canal adds a sense of calmness and stability. I step in the golden fields and look at the fiery red fields. The maple leaves "stop and sit in the maple forest at night, the frost leaves are as red as the February flowers", listen to the touching story of the fallen leaves returning to their roots, and feel the magnificence of "the autumn wind is bleak and the waves are rising"; in winter, I linger in the snow-covered scenery, watching The sky and the earth are colorful, and you can feel the magnificence of "thousands of miles of ice and thousands of miles of snow". Spring is emerald green, summer is fiery red, autumn is golden, and winter is snow-white. My childhood was also colorful.

In the above three example paragraphs, the verses learned are appropriately applied to the paragraphs, and the verses are used to show the author's feelings. These verses are like beautiful pictures or close-up shots. It left a deep impression on the readers. There is a poem that says, "Ask the canal where it can be so clear, so that there is a source of living water." If you can quote from scriptures and references, it will definitely help you write wonderful articles. 5. Composition quoting verses

The sky is a season full of vitality, and it is also a season of beauty, magic, and hope.

Spring is here, and all kinds of gorgeous flowers are in bloom, all so gorgeous and eye-catching. The oilseed crops planted by the farmer uncle in the field - rapeseed flowers are also blooming. The golden rapeseed flowers have become a paradise for butterflies. Beautiful butterflies dance softly and gracefully on the golden stage. They are flying in the air for a while, and staying quietly on the rapeseed flowers for a while. It is this that adds a lot of fun to spring. The beauty of rapeseed flowers also attracts many "working people" - bees. Bees always work tirelessly to pollinate the rapeseed flowers day and night. Occasionally, a breeze blows, and the golden rapeseed flowers immediately surge into undulating "golden waves". Looking from a distance, it is really beautiful!

Spring is the season that people yearn for, and people always make their own plans in this season. As the saying goes: "A year's plan begins in spring, and a day's plan begins in the morning." It is telling us: a year's wishes should be planned in spring. The most important time of the day is morning. In spring, people start to Farm work such as plowing fields, transplanting rice seedlings, planting trees, etc. Migratory birds also moved from the south to the north to cheer for the farmers working in the fields. Some birds stand on tall trees, some simply on the field ridge, and some stand on the "staff". It is this that makes the farmers in the fields feel more happy and everything becomes lively.

In spring, animals also wake up from their slumber. The grass began to sprout, and there were flourishing scenes everywhere on the earth. At a glance, there is a green scene everywhere, just like a watercolor painting.

Spring warms the heart and spleen, "My clothes are wet with the rain of apricot blossoms, and the wind from the willows blows my face without chilling."

Spring is fleeting, "The flowers in the forest wither in spring." "Red, it's too hasty." So "if you have flowers, you have to break them, don't wait until the flowers fall."

Spring is cool and moist, "The light rain on the sky street is as moist as a crisp, but the color of the grass looks far away but close up." None.”