1. Center: If there are any digressions, please write according to the requirements of the topic.
2. Material selection: ① Whether it is around the center. (2) Whether it is true and in line with the reality of life. 3 whether it is fresh and interesting.
3. Structure: ① Whether the hierarchical paragraphs are clear. ② Whether the transition is natural. ③ Whether the beginning and the end are coordinated.
4. Expression: ① Does the narrative make things clear and complete? Whether the order of visits is clearly written in landscape writing. (2) The details are appropriate, the important people and things are written in detail, and the unimportant places are simply written.
5. Language: ① Whether the sentences are fluent and accurate, and there are few sick sentences. ② Whether metaphor, parallelism, personification and exaggeration are used. ③ Whether to use beautiful words such as idioms, proverbs, aphorisms, famous sayings and poems; ④ Whether punctuation marks are used properly.
6. Writing: ① Whether the font is neat and there are few typos. (2) Whether the roll surface is neat and clean, and whether there is a small amount of smearing.
First, the appreciation of composition evaluation
1, you are really a master of writing! Careful description of inner activities and clever care before and after prove that you have mastered certain writing skills. And skillfully used the scenery description.
It's my pleasure to read your article. Maybe your name will become a household name in a few years.
Congratulations, another masterpiece has come out! Careful description of inner activities and clever care before and after prove that you have mastered certain writing skills. From your composition, I seem to see a little writer!
4. This composition is novel in material selection, ingenious in conception, and uses various writing techniques such as contrast and contrast to portray a detailed image, which makes people unforgettable after reading it. This is an excellent masterpiece. ...
5. The two figurative sentences in the article are wonderful and unique. I feel immersive after reading it. I like them very much and hope to like them in the future. The teacher believes that you won't let me down.
I like your composition very much. There is no lack of philosophy in humor, and the style of writing is like flowing water. If you write more beautifully, wouldn't it be the icing on the cake?
7. This article is ingenious in conception and profound in connotation. On the surface, the little author writes about squeezing mud by hand, but after careful tasting, he creates a brand-new campus with sincere childlike innocence, expressing children's expectations for the development prospect of the school, and the theme is positive. The language is lively and full of childlike interest.
8. The topic is the eyes of the article. Before you start writing, you should also spend some time. The language of the characters in the article is true, especially a passage from my mother, which is original.
9. Ending the question leaves room for readers to think. The ending is close to the theme, expressing the author's complex feelings and truth. From beginning to end, the theme was effectively expressed.
10, a narrative that only writes one thing, is very typical and can fully express the theme of the article. It can be seen that young writers will choose materials. It is a remarkable feature of this language that the structure of the paper is rigorous and the truth is seen in simple words.
1 1, as can be seen from the title, this article is also very novel and ingenious. The content is detailed and appropriate.
12, the beginning of this article directly enters the topic; The ending is concise and closely related to the theme. Vivid language and delicate description. The author described the shape, color and taste of Yali pear in detail, and used appropriate words.
13, there are many elves in nature. As long as you observe them carefully, they will give you rich associations and beneficial enlightenment.
14. Words are people's faces. The progress in writing this composition is obvious, and your face is much brighter. However, the typos you have always hated always follow you and cast a shadow over your composition. I'll give you a good prescription: look up the words you can't write in the dictionary, and ask the teacher or classmates after writing the composition. would you like to have a try？
15, the writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It is written that "I" walked by the sea, and the sea not only gave me the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea gave me a swimming space, and "I" injected life into the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking. ?
Second, the composition evaluation comments.
1, the article can read fresh and interesting language, describe things … between the lines, full of childlike interest in childhood, endless laughter, can be called a masterpiece.
2. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are the two characteristics of this article, and it is also the content of this article ... richer and more vivid.
Your article is like a slow flowing stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect! ?
4. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and it is very artistic to set off the emotions of the characters through environmental description.
5, the beginning is concise and to the point
6. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
7. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
8. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
9, the beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers.
10, the beginning is touching, and the truth is true.
1 1, the beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.
12, the article is novel in material selection, which arouses readers' desire to read.
13, the quotation of several common sayings in the full text is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
14, through hard work, your composition has improved this semester, with a clear narrative and a passion for life. Keep this enthusiasm and you will be able to read more excellent compositions in the future. The teacher believes that your writing will make greater progress. ?
15, beautiful handwriting, clear and neat structure, can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, which teachers really should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
16, the style of writing is like a person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as yours. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
17, the movements are rarely written, like branches in autumn, without a leaf.
18, Wenneng Yansheng, I think the article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you. ?
19, the beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the environmental description sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic.
20. It is really "writing like a god". It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
Third, the appreciation of composition evaluation
1, language, manners, actions, etc. The meticulous portrayal of characters is a major feature of this paper. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.
2. The article is written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.
3. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.
4. The full text is hearty, full of joy and expectation, sincere and touching. At first, it was extraordinary.
The music is beautiful, so is the language of this article. Poetic language and fantastic imagination, how beautiful!
6. The "reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related. Examples of actions are touching at the beginning and have real feelings.
7. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
8. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, and it is interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending is clear and meaningful.
9. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
10, the article is short, but the narrative is vivid. Delicate description, strong flavor of life, accurate wording and sentences.
1 1. At the end of the article, the central sentence is revealed, which is a clear pen and summary, short and powerful.
12. Through careful observation, this article vividly describes ... The article is short but not monotonous, and the language is popular but interesting.
13, the article describes the events of … according to the sequence of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it looks very happy from beginning to end.
14, the article is full of respect and gratitude to … from beginning to end, and … is deeply touching, which is the shocking force of this article.
15, the tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, which makes people fondle it.
16, the author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
17. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written.
18, the article is realistic, stereoscopic, readable and interesting. Fairy tales, with keen social insight, reflect the dark side of reality and vivid language, depict a series of greedy existence, which is profound.
19, this article takes … as a clue, and the article on the right to use is coherent and smooth, and the connection is natural. At the same time, through the comparison of specific cases before and after. Attack ..., the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.
Fourth, comments on the composition process
1, the language of the article is very smooth, and it also writes the real feelings, which is great! ?
2, focused, detailed and appropriate, specific content.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.
5、? The article melts feelings into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing feelings, and the full text of beautiful sentences adds literary interest to the article. However, the length of your article needs to be strengthened, and being too concise is also a small shortcoming. I hope you will continue to work hard and walk up a flight of stairs. Come on!
6. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, coherent connection with nature and prominent center.
7. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.
8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.
9. This article is lyrical in narration.
10, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques.
1 1. The author observes carefully and narrates orderly.
12, the use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.
13, the article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.
14, the article is reasonable in imagination,
15, through vivid language description, let readers feel like they are in a dream.
16, careful conception and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
17, the details are quite clever. Extremely rich in skills.
18. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail.
19, delicate description, strong life breath, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
20. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.
2 1. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their identity characteristics.
22. The article comes from life, so although the language is not so beautiful, it is true and interesting, and the writing is reasonable.
23、? The language is appropriate and romantic, and the context is smooth, showing the image of bookworm as a bosom friend and the affection between "I" and "bosom friend", which is smart and elegant.
24. The language is lively and interesting.
25. A lot of spoken English in life makes the article more natural and friendly.