Explain the results first, and always start with the full text. Exodus 1: Thank God and bless the Bodhisattva! This terrible big German shepherd was finally taken away from the campus by his master.
The students gave a long sigh, and a hanging heart fell back to its original place like a stone. "Terrible Big Wolf Dog" Example 2: The classmate who won the honorary title of "civilized little master" in the school was actually Feng Guangze, and the principal of the school gave him an award.
"Wow," the audience suddenly burst into thunderous applause. What a change this troublemaker has made! I didn't expect that. Example 3: I still have a lingering fear when I think of the thrilling scene in the afternoon of August 18, 2005. "8 18, hair, my cheeks are really hair."
Alas! It's all that damn wasp's fault! "It's all the wasp's fault" 2. Suspense style. Ask questions to arouse the appetite of readers.
Who is she? That skirt, that beautiful little face, looks so familiar. My cousin 3. Lyrics always start.
I began to express my feelings through the scenery, and then I always started the full text. Example: childhood is like a river, rippling with joy in the morning sun.
It's really interesting to catch cockroaches at the seaside in the crisp autumn season. "Fun by the Sea" 4. It will always be a portrait.
Write a general sentence first, and then describe the appearance of the characters. Exodus: My brother is really cute.
A pair of big eyes are embedded in a small round face, and when you smile, you will see two small dimples. My brother 5. Portraits always begin.
Write a description of the characters' appearance first, and then quote the full text in the general sentence. Example: Open the photo album. In the photo, she has short black hair, rosy mouth, arch eyebrows and a naughty smile.
She is a lovely and earnest Li Xiaohong. My classmate 6. The sound always begins.
I began to write "songs, laughter, wind and rain ……" to put down the situation, and then I always wrote the full text. Example 1: "Only mothers are good in the world, and children with mothers are precious."
Whenever I listen to this song, my mother's shadow will emerge in front of my eyes. "Unforgettable Mom" Example 2: "Whoops ..." Cried and grabbed the ground, "Dad! Father, why did you leave like this?
You are too bitter, how can you be so disobedient ... "The white gauze in the hall of Zhou Jialing, a neighbor, is full of sorrow and sadness, but it can't call back his father who was burned to death. Listening to this sad cry, I think this lesson is too painful.
"painful lesson" 7. Contrast always begins. Compare many things with people and one of them or one thing, and highlight one of them.
Exodus I have almost forgotten my childhood. Only one thing looks like a knife, and I will never forget it.
"Unforgettable things" 8. Cut to the chase. Tell people and things directly.
Example: On Saturday again, I braved the cold to go home and met my grandfather. "Grandpa's crutch" 9, scene import.
Example: The blue water is under your feet, there are groups of seabirds flying outside the window, and there are large reeds growing on the beach. Qiang Qiang's favorite grandpa's cabin is here. An ordinary reed leaf was folded three or two times by grandpa, and it became a reed flute playing melodious tunes.
Grandpa's Reed Flute ends with 1 This is the most commonly used ending. At the end of the paper, the full text is summarized, the center is pointed out, and the topic and the beginning are taken into account.
Example 1: Please! The owner of the German shepherd must take good care of this terrible German shepherd. It was really scary. So far, I am often awakened by this terrible big German shepherd in my sleep ... Example 2: What a surprise! Yesterday's troublemaker, today's Feng Guangze won the honorary title of "civilized little master" in the school.
Isn't this warm applause a heartfelt admiration for him? I didn't expect that. Example 3: Colorful childhood is full of fun, like a string of wind chimes leaving a crisp sound. Until now, catching cockroaches by the sea is still so tempting that I have endless aftertaste ... "Fun by the Sea" 2.
Write your own inspiration by writing about people and things. Example: The teacher smiled and laughed happily.
I have always realized that the best gift for students to give their teachers is to keep working hard and making progress! A gift 3. Natural style. End naturally with the result of things.
Exodus: I learned to ride a bike and felt like honey. "I learned to ride a bike" 4, lyrical.
Express your feelings in a lyrical way. Example: ah! Teachers are selfless candles, burning themselves and illuminating us; Ah! Teachers are ordinary bridges, sending off groups of students without complaint.
"Teacher's praise" 5. Memory style. Write down the people or things you don't want to forget and keep them in your heart forever.
As if it happened yesterday, my concern and love for my parents are unforgettable. Please take good care of your parents who are far away from home, and your children will not live up to your hopes.
"Parents' Love" 6, Lenovo style. Draw associations from the people and events written and write your feelings.
Exodus: Seeing this, I seem to see the innocent hearts of the old people, as if seeing the new wind of a harmonious society blowing all over the motherland. An old man repairing an umbrella.
2. At the beginning and end of primary school writers' compositions, there are many things in their minds, many of which have been blurred by the flowing time, but there is one thing that I can't forget. In my memory, one thing is ironic, that is, I cooked hot and sour fish for the first time. There is one thing that I will never forget when I grow up. But what impressed me most was what happened on the bus. I have experienced many things, but what impressed me the most was one thing that physical education class turned over after studying. When I was in grade three, something happened, which was deeply imprinted in my mind and I will never forget it. 6. Last summer vacation, I did something wrong, which impressed me deeply and made me sad to think of it.
How to write the beginning and end of the most beautiful person in my heart? With so much talent, she is ordinary; The world is big and she is small, but in my heart, no one can compare with her. She is beautiful and great! When you are weak, she always reaches out her warm hands, as if a powerful force is always pushing you forward; She always educates and enlightens you when you are ignorant. Although it is only a few words, the truth remains in your heart. Even God was moved by her fiery heart and gave her a beautiful name-Mom! My mother is over forty years old, and her eyes and corners of her mouth are often wrinkled, and her lips are always chapped. Compared with a few years ago, her oval face is much weaker. When she used to laugh, her dimples were deep, but now they look shallow. Her skin is still so delicate, and several tiny lines have been carved on her forehead by years. Those sparse hairs, after many years, are still so black and bright. You'll never guess what's on her mind. Ending: The most beautiful person is you, mom. Your beauty is felt with your heart, and it is integrated with your emotions. Although you may not all have pleasant appearance and elegant posture, you have sincere love and dedication. In a spotless world, I saw your heart. This is my mother, Yi.
4. Write a composition. How to write the beginning and the end? I don't know when, young hearts are always eager for independence.
How many times, I tried to escape from the shelter of my parents' wings, open up a thorny road alone, and sharpen my wings in the wind and rain. Perhaps, God discovered my greed and let me enter this full-time high school, and finally I can get rid of my mother's nagging.
The tall teaching building, the carefree canteen, the crowded supermarket and the strange faces all make me novel and excited. However, when everything is familiar, an unbearable loneliness and emptiness occupy my heart.
Heavy study makes me feel depressed and dull, and my weak body makes me feel groggy all day. I feel very uncomfortable and want to go home once, but the lofty aspirations of the past made me endure. Autumn seems to come early, and I feel a chill as soon as I enter autumn.
The cold wind of rustling blows aimlessly, making the window sing along with the gap. I sat in my seat reading a magazine and saw an article about maternal love, which reminded me of my mother.
I used to study late at night. At this time, my mother will serve my favorite mung bean soup, look at me kindly and finish the soup bite by bite.
Then make my bed and advise me to go to bed early; Sometimes I get angry outside and lose my temper in front of my mother. My mother never cares, but comforts me and makes me feel better. Before.
Only then can I realize the beauty of nagging. Those annoying words in the past are so warm in retrospect. "Bell-"* * interrupted my thoughts after class. I quickly came to the telephone booth and dialed my home phone number. Mother's kind voice came from the other end of the phone.
"Hello, who are you looking for?" "Mom, it's me." I whispered.
"* *, how are you at school? Be careful whether you are in good health or not. It's cold now, pay attention to adding clothes.
Are you used to eating? . "
"Well, everything is fine."
I cried as I spoke. Once, I thought I was a person who would not be emotional or shed tears. However, in front of my mother, I shed tears openly.
On weekends, sitting on the bus home, I feel particularly cheerful. I realized that no matter how far I fly, I will never leave my mother's sight like a kite.
Mother is a thread tied to my heart. The longer and farther you pull, the more painful your heart will be.
5. Write a composition called "Unforgettable Primary School Life", with no beginning and end, and unforgettable primary school life in the middle. Time flies, six years is like a cloud, and I am about to graduate. Primary school life is so fascinating and reluctant, and now we are going to go our separate ways. I am about to graduate, and in these more than 2000 days, we are like a seedling. Under the teacher's irrigation, there seems to be the sound of us reading in the classroom, the sound of us playing on the playground and our laughter in the school circle. We left unforgettable memories every step of the way. We have gained a lot under the education of our alma mater. We have gained many friends and gained a lot of new knowledge, which makes us polite students. We have gained many good memories and unforgettable memories. More people have compasses, so they can deal with people in the future. But we are about to graduate now, and suddenly looking back, it seems that urging our teachers, encouraging our teachers, and the lovely campus will all disappear from our songs. Moreover, I don't know when, we have also become big brothers and sisters on campus and become role models for our younger siblings. Now that we are about to graduate, the teacher's teaching, our reading sound and classmates' laughter are still ringing in my ears. Take my last few days at school for example, take a look at the lovely campus, the teachers who have taught us, the classmates who encouraged us and cherish the last few days we spent together. All good things must come to an end, and time is gone forever. We will always remember the teacher's education and be a successful person.
6. How to write universal cockscomb at the beginning and end of primary school composition?
● Youth is the blood drop of will and the nectar of hard work-Mika; Youth is a rainbow woven with eternal hope and eternal yearning-gorgeous and brilliant; Youth is an iron wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious toughness.
Faith is the pillar of towering buildings. Without it, it's just a pile of scattered bricks. Faith is the bed of a surging river. Without it, there is only a tidal wave. Faith is the beacon of blazing fire. Without it, there is only a cold firewood. Faith is the main engine of ocean-going ships. Without it, there is only a paralyzed giant frame.
Standing on the coast of history, tracing back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on both sides of the Zehe River and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.
● Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap. Only by pursuing can we taste honest people.
● If friendship is an evergreen tree, it must be watered by a clear spring from the heart; If friendship is an unbeaten flower, then it must be the rising sun in my heart.
How much laughter friendship has aroused and how many tears friendship has dried. The harbor of friendship is warm and affectionate, and the breeze of friendship sails. Friendship is not an emotional investment, and there is no need for dividends and dividends. (Friendship can be changed into other words)
Yingying moonlight, I scooped up the clearest glass; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; In the long life, I want to pick out the most important thing in the world-perseverance.
If life is a solemn castle, if life is a lush tree, if life is a flying seabird. Then, faith is the pillar of the dome, the deeply rooted root and the fluttering wings. Without faith, there is no motivation for life; Without faith, the beauty of life will disappear. (You can change other words where they are underlined.)
Perseverance is the condensation of a sand and a stone on a thousand-mile levee. Only by accumulating bit by bit can there be a grandeur that has never been seen before; Perseverance is that spring silkworms spin silk one by one, and only by persisting one by one can they break out of the cocoon and see the brilliance again; Perseverance is the sail of a long-distance ship. With sails, the ship can reach the other side of success.
Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes poor and sick people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.
The true nature of the heart should be like this. Success, like the moonlight shining on flowers, the deep pool is slightly blue, regardless of good or bad, regardless of the detachment of success or failure, is a post station that raises its whip and rides a horse to climb high; Defeated, still dripping water wears away the stone and merges into the sea. There is a kind of pride that is poor and strong and does not fall into the blue sky. There is a kind of stubbornness of "being a self-taught person and constantly striving for self-improvement". Rong, Jiangshan is still the same, the painting style is still the same, just like the sea and mountains, familiar with the years, flashy and arrogant; Bear the burden of humiliation, Han Xin, snow pine, like a fairy with feathers, know how to take a step back and broaden the horizon, and refuse to give up eating because of choking.
● Happiness = material/desire. This is the happiness equation put forward by American economist Samuelson. From an economic point of view, the greater the material consumption, the smaller the desire and the greater the happiness, which is exactly in line with the old saying of China people that "contentment is always a pleasure". On the contrary, what happens if a person's material consumption is limited and his desire is infinite? Mrs. Loizai has so many "dreams" and so many "intoxicating people", how can she not be sad from them?
Russian writer Chekhov said: "there are big dogs and puppies, and puppies should not be disturbed because of the existence of big dogs." All dogs should bark and let him use the voice God gave him.
● Maturity is a bright but not dazzling brilliance, a mellow but not greasy voice, a calmness that does not need to look at others, an atmosphere that eventually no longer appeals to the surrounding, a smile that ignores the hustle and bustle, and an extreme indifference that washes away. A thickness that does not need to be revealed,
Not steep height.
Low love, sometimes don't need a vow of eternal love, but she must need meticulous care and greetings; Love, sometimes does not need Liang Zhu to become a butterfly's tragic, but she must need tacit understanding and congenial; Love sometimes doesn't need to be followed by a man and a woman, but she must need mutual care, support and understanding.
● Smile and sing the song of life. Don't complain that life has given too much hardship, and don't complain that life has too many twists and turns. The sea has lost its grandeur without the rolling of huge waves; The desert has lost its splendor without the wild dance of flying sand. If life only wants two points and one line of smooth sailing, life will lose its meaning of existence.
7. How to write the beginning and end of the composition you appreciate: Time flies, and it passes in a blink of an eye. Some things and people will go with them,
However, there is one person I will never forget. He left a deep impression on my mind. He is the person I admire most. Fine water and blue sky, life is like running water, and water will be more beautiful only against the blue sky. I am a clear stream, xxx is the blue sky that shines on me. The only person I admire is him. If fate is that shabby flower stand, then mother will make it colorful. If fate is a dark night sky, then mother will make it full of stars. If fate is barren, then mother will turn it thousands of miles away.
Ending:
The teacher's teaching, like spring breeze and rain, makes us grow sturdily. How much effort we children who are not sensible have paid! The so-called "Spring silkworms die, night candles burn their wick", even this immortal sentence can't express our respect for teachers! The teacher's words and deeds made us feel deeply moved! I have no flowery words to praise you, only one heartfelt sentence: "With a teacher like you, we are happy!" "
8. The beginning and ending written by primary school students are wonderful. Say the end first, then say the start.
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable."
Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending.
People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1, natural beam. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you are rich, you can play freely and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool."
Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life.
It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits". Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green?
At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", and then skillfully uses Xu Zhimo.
Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on.
Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training The ancients said, "A good end is like chewing.