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Strength.

You may not be a pilot,

But you can study aviation knowledge hard,

Become a builder of the space industry;

also

Xu Can T.

Before I went out with dignity, my pocket was full of money.

Pockets full of money, shining in front of people.

; Maybe it's just

Is a small company employee, nine to five; but

(ah)

As long as you work hard and don't waste a minute, it is success.

Life.

Just like a leaf trying to absorb nutrients and a flower trying to grow in the sun, this is ordinary success.

Care, kickback, settlement. There is philosophy in the image.

short review

This paper is in line with the meaning of the topic, with rigorous structure and rich materials. But also in the meaning of expression and the depth of thought.

Work hard. Final evaluation

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Points.

⑦ Definition of success

It is precisely because of the pursuit of "beauty" that Venus of Milos will smile; It is precisely because of the pursuit of "God" that Sakyamuni

Muny smiled at the flowers; It is precisely because of the pursuit of "freedom" that Duchamp threw away the oil painting pigments and laughed freely; It is because of "health"

In pursuit of "life", Beethoven smiled proudly in the face of the storm. The names of these people are recorded in world history without exception.

Books, their laughter explains the meaning of success; Their incomplete pursuit explains the definition of success. Can you say that they are not successful?

Work?

Rich materials, narrative and discussion. Their success is not the possession of power or wealth, but their persistent pursuit.

Interpret the definition of success. They are all recorded in the history books of the world, and there are countless creatures in the world.

Yun, how many people can go down in history?

Bernard Shaw once said:

"The meaning of life is to turn hell into heaven and man into God, in the valley of suffering.

Light a Millennium lamp and shine all over the world.

"In a person's life, there will be countless opportunities, countless struggles and countless chases.

Beg. At the same time, what I experienced,

Harvest, casting

practise

(refining)

Yes, I'm afraid it's immeasurable, but after the prosperity, it left a backward place.

Can't you call it success? At least you witnessed the wonderful moment.

Quote famous words to add color to the article. But Bernard Shaw's

Discourse means "developing self-virtue, and then universalizing all beings"

And later emphasized in the pursuit of success.

Experience and gains. There seems to be a lack of internal logical connection before and after.

Success does not require you to do something perfect, impeccable and admirable, but requires you to do it.

See how much you have paid, whether you have pursued or struggled. Success is not defined by the result, but by the process.

Shang Cheng

Discuss and show your views on success.

"How admirable" seems to contradict the example in the first paragraph.

"The sky has never left my trace, but I have flown.

Tagore went on to say, "It's like people are working for their own careers.

Strive for your goals, although you may not be able to achieve positive results, achieve brilliant achievements or finally achieve your goals, but what you leave behind is not.

There's nothing. In a subtle way

(you)

raise

you

The power of struggle has been forged.

you

Strong character. You really accepted it

You have more than you think.

Quote and inherit the argument.

For tomorrow

What do you mean? not understand

Chen Yinque washed away all the dust, put down the burden, stuck to himself and did a good job.

A pure scholar; In order to take the oath, Gao Jianli's recurrence of the tragedy of hitting the building was almost realized.

Be on top of.

It's a sick sentence. conflict

Jing Ke's

Humanistic spirit

This concept is too big.

; For the "real" China culture.

I don't think this is the reason why Lu Xun abandoned medicine and joined literature.

Is there a false China culture?

Lu Xun abandoned medicine and took up a large sum of money, which cleared up the ruined spiritual world.

Awakening medicine; For the truth, Socrates raised his glass without hesitation and fulfilled his promise to die for the rule of law. They are trying to

Insist on yourself, for the ideal, for the pursuit, do not hesitate to give up.

View from a height or a distance

Many, but this kind of incomplete success can also be called success.

Really? They left the world with precious spiritual wealth.

Rich in material,

Emphasize the persistence and pursuit of ideals.

belong to

"Residual?

The success and horror of "lack" are too apt, which is the influence of the first paragraph.

Speaking of failure, I think people who give up themselves and pursue can be called "losers", Jia Yihe.

Su Dongpo was treated unfairly by the court at that time. But they are different. One finally failed and the other finally succeeded.

After Jia Yi was demoted, she died of depression after writing Qu Fuyuan. Su Dongpo

suffer

(Accidental encounter)

After the Wutai Poetry Case, it still became

for

"Hao

Representatives of factions. Facing the ups and downs of life, only with an open mind can we finally succeed in life.

straight

Objection. Continue the discussion.

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Success is a process of hard work and an open-minded feeling. There is no narrow definition of success, even the smallest thing in life,

As long as you do it yourself, no matter what the result is, you can call it success.

It seems that I can't write the whole article well.

Fight for crossing,

Fight for crossing,

Where do you cling to life? For the definition of success,

I'm still looking.

Ask questions,

Think about it.

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The viewpoint that "success lies in the process of continuous pursuit" is put forward, which is in line with the meaning of the question. There are many images and rich materials.

Abundance is its biggest highlight, from which we can see the author's recent reading skills. On the occasion of the arrival of Vientiane, we should pay attention to the selection of materials and

The deletion of language makes all words and expressions stick to the center. Final evaluation

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Points.

My view on "success"

Have we ever had such an experience? When we were children, our parents pointed to officials and wealthy businessmen on TV and said, Look, son.

Cars full of delicacies, going in and out all day. How proud they are! You can be as successful as them as long as you work hard. Let's slow down.

Nodding slowly seems incomprehensible.

Have we ever seen such a program: turn on the TV, and the speaker of a lecture on "Success" is spitting and dancing.

Talking about how to work in the workplace,

Shopping mall,

Soaring in the officialdom,

It's so exciting.

From our similar experiences,

Kind and lovely. The language is concise, vivid, vivid and tasteful.

Throughout the ages, China people have a tradition of equating "success" with "prosperity". A person is rich and powerful, and has it.

Social status, the world will call it a "successful person", as for where the money comes from and who uses the power, no one cares, so

When the governor came to China, students naturally longed for a "successful" experience. No wonder people lament:

"This is an era of laughing at poverty rather than prostitution.

"

From phenomenon to essence. Deduct the test questions from the above discussion.

Come to the governor as an immigrant and say that he can make a fortune and that he is successful.

whether or not

rule

(seems to be)

There's more to discuss, but before we

It seems that the two are equated, which is a fallacy of life values. With Mr. Jin Yong's pen

(of)

leather

As far as Bao Xiao is concerned, his success was almost entirely based on deception and have it both ways's wrist, but now he is in it.

In a high position, countless people naturally envy its glory and forget its means. His life is the dream of a poor child. As for grandeur,

Lord Wei, that is, "Lu Dinggong", inspected what merits he had made for the country and the people.

?

(,

)

Nobody cares.

For example, analysis, the case is typical,

This argument is very convincing.

In my opinion, if China people want to get rid of the Wei Xiaobao complex, they must understand the concept of "success".

(

and

)

Define it.

A successful person lies not in his position of power, but in his contribution to society.

If a person creates the value of life in his limited life, then he can be called "success"

1898 was defeated in one hundred days, and the six gentlemen succeeded.

Benevolence, though ridiculed as "wealth and splendor with a sieve", was written by them in the rise of the Chinese nation.

Cold and eternal, they are successful models in the sense of individuals and countries.

An old teacher has been teaching for ten years.

Educate people, leave fragrance in the apricot altar, save the world with one doctor, and save people from danger with Xinglin, even if it is difficult.

along with

(Yes)

Enjoy the rich food in bronze vessels accompanied by chimes-live a luxurious life.

(of

Rich)

But they will.

will

It was a success.

(of a person's back)

(example)

And get rich by some quotations, and after a while,

They are left with long-term gloom and forgetfulness.

Based on the above analysis,

Put forward a positive view,

Then analyze and demonstrate with examples,

Rich in content. The last sentence is not strong enough.

There is a view of "taking people as history" in academic circles. In the long river of history,

It is countless people who have performed wonderful years, and we

Have you ever thought that if some emperors in the long river are removed, the grandeur and development of history may not be destroyed, but if it is

If we get rid of those who have been working silently and selflessly, then our nation and our history will fall into darkness.

In this way, whoever succeeds will be clear at a glance.

Step by step, hypothetically demonstrate.

Turn off the TV and let the fame and fortune of those who are angry with their clothes and seal their wives and children cool down. Our life is boring, our

Live a long life,

Our success needs a normal heart and sweat practice.

The grades are not high,

But pay.

Take care,

Close the knot.

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Points.

What is success?

Driving a famous car, living in a mansion, traveling by plane, flying first class, and having a watch in your hand are the income of others for a month or even a year.

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There is no doubt that he is a successful person in everyone's eyes, but the real success is not the case.

The so-called successful people are a group of business tycoons or political elites who live at the top of society every day.

Being in the spotlight is the focus of people's attention and discussion, so people deserve to succeed.

Indeed, such people are successful people, but they are only a small part of successful people in a certain sense, and they are truly successful.

Merit is definitely not limited to a person's annual salary of one million, and how much political influence a person has. Such talents are considered successful.

A sanitation worker, cleaning his block spotless, this is success; A postman with a strong face.

It is success to deliver the letters in the package to everyone accurately; A policeman took his patrol.

The regional management organization is good,

Let local residents live and work in peace and contentment,

No crime,

This is called success.

What is success?

Success is to do what you should do in your post.

The so-called honor, the so-called money, is just what people in different positions get by doing their jobs well.

This is just a reward.

Now many college students choose to be village officials in the countryside after graduation. Of course, some of them take advantage of this opportunity.

Lay the foundation for the future, and excuse me, how can I get promoted after staying here for one day?

Success?

Shen Hao, Secretary of Xiaogang Village, Fengyang,

He's an excellent worker,

He didn't regard the village party secretary as him.

A springboard for promotion, but he does his career in a down-to-earth manner, and he doesn't have a million-dollar annual salary, no high-ranking officials and generous salaries, just doing his job well.

Although he lost his job and finally found a job, he told us what success was.

Success is definitely not a proper term for a few people.

Any ordinary person can succeed,

Success is

Refers to a person's contribution to society, which is now determined by a person's social status.

You don't have to be a big official to succeed. When you are a rich man, an ordinary person also has success. Success is the dust behind the cleaner.

The dyed street is a myriad of lights shining behind the electric repairman.

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Attending to pick up the stones under your feet.

Different people have different understandings of success,

It's like a person standing on endless land,

I want you to pick up the stone under your feet and decide.

The success in your heart,

These stones represent wealth,

Health,

Dreams,

Are you happy? Just,

Which one would you choose to pick up?

There is a postman named Salod in England.

One day, he tripped over a stone on the way to deliver the letter.

So he put the stone

Pick it up, put it in your pocket,

He wants to build his own castle with stones.

Later, he would pick up a stranger on the way to deliver letters every day.

Strange stones. Over time, he really realized his dream and built a castle with stones. In his view, success

It represents a dream come true,

It represents the pursuit of dreams,

No matter how many people are interested in the process of building the castle.

Behavior shows that he doesn't understand and thinks he is talking in his sleep, but he doesn't choose to give up or give in in reality, but keeps on.

Stick to your original dream,

But in today's society, how many people have been fighting for their dreams? Have again

How many people choose to give up because of various difficulties? Maybe if you try harder,

Pay a little more and you will reap the fruits of success.

Real.

I think,

That postman must be very happy in the process of building the castle.

Because he watched his castle become

Higher and bigger, this should be the joy on the road to success! Because watching your dream come true step by step, you should

It's time to put more energy into it. Just like studying. We are senior three now. Ten years of hard study at the cold window is coming to an end, leaving only.

It has been 246 days since the decisive battle. We have been baptized by exams again and again, and we have encountered countless problems, but we

Are you still holding on? For what? Do you study for your parents and teachers? We do this for our dreams,

We are working hard to make our dream come true next June. We are studying for our future. Don't throw

Give up, don't give up. On the way to the college entrance examination, if we really persist, we will definitely win the first big battle in life.

Success. Some people say that the college entrance examination represents nothing, but can you really ask yourself, does the college entrance examination really represent nothing? this is mine

The mark of children's growth is a transit point in life. How many people have realized their dreams and achieved success because of the college entrance examination?

On the road, bend down, pick up the stone representing your dream and move forward bravely! Success can't be achieved without dreams, but dreams are.

The best interpretation of success.

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⑾ Success is regardless of size.

For "success", many people regard this word as unattainable, and think that success is only successful if you achieve great things.

Work.

Success can be great. Perhaps the success of one thing can benefit human society and make you go down in history. This is a great achievement.

Gong, there are many positive meanings, and it is a heavy political achievement. Success can be so great, because your success has improved the arena.

The environment has created a new pattern, and this great achievement is certainly successful.

But success can also be small, maybe so small that no one cares, but you know its value. Here you are.

Bringing value is also a success, just like you worked out a difficult math problem, just like you provided lost tourists with.

Speaking of help, this is success under different definitions. As long as one thing has positive significance when it is completed, I think it is success.

Gong.

The reasons for success, big or small,

Because what is more important is your efforts and changes towards success.

Every time I do something,

Your sense of accomplishment, your feeling of being suddenly enlightened, all come from your overcoming the last failure.

You finally got here step by step.

The ending of "success" starts from doing one thing at a time, and ends with overcoming difficulties in the middle and then embarking on success. The procedures in the middle continue to accumulate.

This has become a valuable experience.

Maybe the result after success is great,

Maybe after the success, the result has not been asked.

Tianjin, but their craft is the same. Man proposes, God disposes.

The reasons for success, big or small,

Because the meaning of success in everything is different for everyone.

Did it succeed?

There is no standard definition, which is better than "manned spacecraft successfully launched" and "finding a matching kidney"

Out of a need

For people who want a kidney transplant

"Find a matching kidney."

The success of this matter is far greater than

"Manned spacecraft successfully launched"

The meaning of,

On the contrary, for those who develop the national aviation industry, the significance of these two things is different. The meaning of success lies in correctness.

As far as the participants are concerned, every success will have its meaning. Its meaning is not absolute, but people's own views.

Just different.

Success, big or small, is like a dream, and there is no distinction between high and low. The success of everything is the same, so

The so-called "big" success is only because of its high utilization value to mankind. All success is great, its process.

They are noble, regardless of the impact of success, this spirit of struggle and perseverance for success is the most valuable.

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⑿ also means success.

Success is what everyone yearns for. However, this word should not have only one color, it symbolizes the status of power.

The color of money, etc. It should be colorful and allow multi-level and multi-angle understanding.

Success is like a certain frequency. We are like different radio stations. Everyone has his own foothold, as long as I

We will stick to our goals, not afraid of difficulties, and move forward actively. We always adjust ourselves and accept what belongs to us.

The frequency of. No matter what our goal is, there is no need to adjust ourselves and persevere on the way to it.

Breaking through ourselves, we are all successful and can all serve the radio audience.

Among the ancients, there were many successful people. With his sword, Qu Yuan did not cut off all the courtiers in the DPRK, but cut off his own heart.

Sleeping at the bottom of the Miluo River. He succeeded because he stuck to his beliefs and didn't go with the flow.

In the end, he runs a noble sentiment, which is his life goal.

Yue Fei was loyal to the country and fought bloody battles. I don't know how much Land Rover meat he ate.

"Drink up" how much Hun blood, finally.

The reputation of "it is easy to shake the mountains, but difficult to shake the Yue family" has brought a stable life to safeguard national unity and the people.

Brave generals and great heroes of the motherland. Unexpectedly, his head became a sacrifice to the "skylark". Even so,

He is still successful and a good hero in the hearts of the people! His outstanding achievements have proved this, and more importantly, he

Never disgrace the mission of defending the country.

Their success made us see different colors. Success is like a pair of shoes. Not the most expensive, not the most expensive.

The most gorgeous, not even the most beautiful, but the most suitable for yourself. They all found their own shoes and put them on.

Yes Because they know what it is to be themselves and what success is.

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Nowadays, cruelty is almost materialistic for a bad word. We are about to enter the society. At this time, it is even more important.

Remember what success is; You need to keep your own frequency more. You can adjust it, but you must never adjust it with others. You should establish yourself.

I, thinking independently, find the shoes that suit me. Just as there are never two identical leaves in the world, neither is there in the world.

There will be two identical shoes and identical feet.

A good life will always be accompanied by successful flowers. The reason why life and the world are so beautiful instead of boring and monotonous,

Because there are flowers of success. Their colors and smells are different, varied and colorful. Let's all use it

The heart blooms different flowers of success, making the road of life and the world more beautiful and colorful!

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[13] Don't judge heroes by success or failure.

People, life is different. Through life, success or failure doesn't matter, it's just external pronoun. On the road of life,

The real hero is a man with a rich mind.

In a remote mountain village in Shaanxi, there is a special teacher-German teacher Lu Anke. For more than ten years, he silently guarded.

Children in this barren land. Make a sunset at sunrise, write a child's life with chalk, and practice yourself with both hands.

Life. That's all.

When Chai Jing interviewed him, he asked bluntly:

"As a foreigner, why did you come here?" His answer is also very simple:

"There is no why.

"It is such a man who touched many people. Is he successful in life? At least so far.

No one asked him:

"How did you succeed?" Indeed, he did not have lofty goals, nor did he achieve amazing results. Why?

For success? But in my opinion, he is the greatest success in life. Like he said, I don't want to change anything, but it should be

What changes will naturally change. In view of this small change he brought, he became a great hero, and he was moved by his success.

Millions of people's hearts are filled with their own.

According to the old people don't understand. Everyone has his own concept of life, some are great careerists, and some often turn to heaven for help.

Some people think they can save society. This is their glory, and I have no intention or right to interfere.

But can we invite them,

Don't impose your outlook on life and values on others.

Sympathize with a heart that thinks it is merciful.

The loser in their eyes. Every ambition in life has its own success.

The family is rich, powerful and powerful. You can enjoy your success if you like. But they are also our own.

Heroes on the road of life: they also strive to make rice fields as bright as the autumn sun; Brick by brick, they built the buildings in this city.

Reach for the sky; Step by step, they try to live every day well. They work in their own world,

Dedicate your sweat and enjoy life. They are full and comfortable, and they are heroes whether they succeed or fail.

Shi Tiesheng said that life is nothing more than this. What matters is what you leave to others. After you die, you can't take what you call

Success, but if you can harvest the sincere tears of others, then these pearl-like water drops will reflect your brilliant life.

Briefly comment on the use of short sentences in this article, which express the characteristics of power and language-from the author's reading and understanding, we can see Chai Jing.

The influence of words. The content of the discussion is within the scope of the test questions, but some sentences expressed by "hero" are somewhat free-

The problem lies in your understanding of "success"

, rather than what kind of "people" are "heroes"

. It can be seen that the author's exam-oriented writing skills.

Lack. Final evaluation

50

Points.