My topic is "The Heart of a Childe", and the center is probably: Holding a heart in your hand is like holding a drop of water, which will drop if you are not careful, so take good care of it. Then, I explained the current hot spots, such as food safety, Xiaoyueyue, and the brother of conscience fritters (later I remembered that a famous saying was not written, and a historian was useless. It's a pity to cram before the college entrance examination. All these reflect the lack of authenticity in the present society, that is, the pure heart is drifting away, so I will always guard the pure heart.
I didn't think about it at all when I wrote it, because there was not much time, only 50 minutes, and we had been training in hot spot analysis recently, so there were many hot spots, so I thought about it in the first paragraph, and then all the compositions came out. At that time, I felt that I was still writing well because of it, but the more I thought about it, the more I felt that I was writing off and empty. But then I asked our head teacher (he is a Chinese teaching and research researcher) if I was biased, and he said no, he said that as long as I extended it with water as a symbol, it would not be a big problem, and he said that my "guardian" was not biased at all. I am afraid of those who honestly write about water, such as someone who writes about cherishing water resources. . . . My only feeling when I hear this is that this person is sincere!
Therefore, as long as water is used as a symbol and then materialized, it should be nothing, so you should stop worrying all the time. Believe in yourself. Besides, if this year's topic is so difficult, just keep the language simple. How dare he make language stupid again? Right? Hey hey.
Besides, I don't agree with the one upstairs Nowadays, teaching is socialized and life-oriented, and the composition also pays great attention to the opinions of candidates combined with their own actual situation. Connecting with practice is what our teacher has repeatedly emphasized. So your examples about yourself are of course no problem, but I hope you don't write too much too early. Best of all, after you have finished the celebrity examples and expressed your opinions, you can turn to yourself with a related word, so that the depth of the article will come out immediately.
Eeeeee ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Why did you write so many things unconsciously? I'm too wordy, haha.
I hope it works for you. You can relax.