1. How to write a beautiful and attractive beginning of a composition

Generally speaking, a good beginning should grasp the following principles: ① Jane: The ancients used crested to describe the beginning of an article. This shows the importance of simplicity. In the college entrance examination, time is tight. Therefore, it is even more important to have a short opening chapter.

②Beauty: Everyone has the love of beauty. If the beginning of the article gives people a sense of beauty, or is brilliant in literary talent, or has profound artistic conception, or is full of interest, then it will surely impress the marking teacher.

③ Strange: Everyone has curiosity. If you can grasp this and design accordingly to create suspense, questions, and contradictions, the effect will be self-evident. ④Philosophy: Philosophy is a kind of depth and a kind of height.

Not everyone can achieve it easily. If you do it, what will be the effect? Below we introduce several starting methods for narrative and argumentative styles. 1. How to start a narrative (1) How to enter the title in the first sentence The cold is getting farther and farther away from us.

("The Smell of Cold") (2) Emphasis on the method of focusing on the eyes. I will never forget that experience when I was a child. ("Walking as a Lantern") (3) Declaration and momentum-building method When mentioning Switzerland, what do you think of, watches, military knives, and chocolates? Snowy mountains, green spaces, lakes and mountains? Neutrality, welfare? Live and work in peace and contentment, a paradise? ("Heaven is Man-Made") (4) A word of caution Sometimes the people we think we know, actually don't really understand.

("Why Hu Shi was Encircled and Suppressed") (5) Create environment and create rhyme. The green tiles and red walls of Guisheng Academy, a touch of moonlight, a stream of night dew, a refreshing fragrance and coolness. ("The Dream of Drama") (6) Question Orientation Why is it called the Big Wild Goose Pagoda? ("Big Wild Goose Pagoda") (7) If you want to promote, suppress it first. My mother is a tiger.

Extremely cruel, not only to her five sons, but also to my father. We are all quite afraid of her.

("Today I have understood you") (8) Comparison and thought-provoking method Xiu is a girl in the mountains, but she always likes to look at the city outside the mountains in trance. ("Xiuer") (9) Abrupt narrative method The director brought in another boy.

("The Tenth Wanderer") (10) Quote method Someone asked: What is happiness? The answers are varied. Nietzsche believed: "The happiest person is the person who can swallow centipedes, broken glass, meat worms, and stones without feeling nauseated."

The Stoics believe: "Having infinite wealth and power, and being able to deal with things calmly, that is true happiness." ("The answers are colorful") (11) Use lecture notes skillfully. Lecture time: September 15, 2000 Lecture purpose: Taking the second-year primary school students as an example, we study and discuss "Being Honest", and use "Honest Children" as the content to educate children about "Being Honest".

Lecture content: ... ("Lecture Record") 2. How to start an argumentative essay (1) Get straight to the point. Things are a unity of phenomenon and essence, and the essence can be understood through phenomena. However, when analyzing things, we must first put aside the troubles of emotional factors.

("Putting aside emotions to look at problems") (2) The story begins with Wang Xizhi, a famous calligrapher in the Eastern Jin Dynasty. Once he passed by a market and saw a girl who was pancake-making. She was skilled in pancake-making skills, fast and good. And beautiful. Witnessing this scene, Wang Xizhi... ("How can a thousand people have one skill") (3) Cartoon introduction method I have seen such a touching cartoon: Under the coconut tree, an old man who has experienced vicissitudes of life looks lovingly at the hammocks lying side by side. The three babies prayed to God: "Oh God! I love them, please give them a bowl of rice every day! Don't give them sin."

("Cut the knife and chop the rope, build the bridge to ferry people" ) (4) Skillfully use the inscription method to set up a rational balance between emotion and knowledge! ——Inscription ("Emotion * Reason * Cognition") (5) Quote induction method "I have measured my life with a coffee spoon." This is a famous quote from the early poems of the American poet Eliot.

It is very appropriate to use it to describe the viciousness of certain habits. Some habits are actually long-standing inertia, which is no more than the opium of the people.

("Speaking of Habits") (6) With the help of rhetoric The earth has mountains and valleys, and the world has noble and humble. The world is filled with smoke and fog of all kinds of emotions, and all family affection, friendship, love... are like winds from all directions shrouding this world of mixed smoke.

Standing between heaven and earth, who can break away from the fetters of the mortal world, and who can put aside all worldly thoughts? ("Emotion and Cognition") (7) Question interpretation method Habits are behavioral characteristics or tendencies formed over many years. Chinese people have many habits, including both behavioral habits and ideological habits.

For example, we were used to supplying non-staple food on a budget, used to the price of things not increasing, used to be ranked based on seniority when raising wages and promotions, used to produce goods according to the instructions given by the leaders... ( "Habit") (8) How does the suspense method treat gains and losses? The key is to look at why you gain and why you lose. If you sacrifice some personal interests for the benefit of the country and the people, such a "loss" is worth it. On the contrary, in order to pursue personal interests at the expense of the interests of the country and the people, the price of such "gain" is to be despised and reviled by others! ("On Gains and Losses") (9) Argument first method When the British philosopher Russell came to China to give lectures, he asked a question to the students attending the lecture: 2 2=? For a moment, the whole place was silent, and the whole audience was dumbfounded.

In fact, this was a question that even primary school students could answer, but the audience never expected that the answer would be so simple, so no one answered it. People are superstitious about authority and often lose their self-assertion. They should have their own heads on their shoulders, broaden their horizons, use their brains, and think for themselves.

("Don't Believe in Authority"). 2. How to start the essay "The Most Beautiful Heart"

One day, a young man stood in the center of the town and claimed that his heart was the most beautiful in the entire valley. A large crowd gathered around, everyone admiring that his heart was indeed perfect, without a single scar or blemish. They all agreed that it was the most beautiful heart. The young people were deeply proud and started to advocate even more.

Suddenly, an old man appeared in front of the crowd and said: "My heart is more beautiful than yours." Everyone looked at the old man's heart. This heart beats powerfully and is covered with scars. In some places, there are even deep ravines, where entire parts are completely missing.

People stare and think - how can he say that his heart is more beautiful? The young man looked into the old man's heart and laughed. "You're kidding," he said. "Compared with my heart, yours is full of scars and cracks, and mine is so perfect."

"Yes," the old man said: "Your heart seems to be perfect, but I will never exchange it with you. You see, every scar represents my love for others - I give a sincere heart, and they often give a piece in return and fill it in my heart. Because the gaps are not completely matched, scars will remain on the edges of the wounds. I cherish these scars very much. They often remind me of the love we have. Sometimes, I give sincerely, but I don't get anything in return. These gaps appear - giving love is actually an adventure. Although it hurts, these gaps remind me of the love I have given to others. I hope that one day, they can come back to fill my heart. "Now, do you understand what true beauty is?"

The young man stood silently, with tears streaming down his cheeks. He walked to the old man's side and put his hand into his body. The young heart tore off a piece and dedicated it to the old man with trembling hands. 3. Sixth grade composition: How to write the best and most beautiful way about rain

Rain

The gentle clouds are floating in the sky with the wind. Gradually, the clouds became thicker, heavier, and gray. The rain left her at this moment and came to this world. The rain fell lightly on the fields, moistening the fields, falling into the long rivers, intertwining melodious tunes, falling into the ocean, and becoming water that will never disappear.

The rain is fierce and fearless. Accompanied by thunderbolts, the roar of wind and the roar of thunder, it comes to the land of the north and composes its own symphony. The rain hit the roof, splashing water and hitting the windows with a loud popping sound. The rain is like a huge waterfall, sweeping across the northern land from the southeast. Thunder rumbled in the low clouds, accompanying the rain. Lightning occasionally used its dazzling white light to cut through the dark night sky, illuminating the fields wildly arranged in the wind, whipping the earth like golden threads. The rain and the figures struggling to move in the rain. Although the rain is fearless, the life of the rain is very short. It only lasts for a short moment. Gradually, the rain was conquered by the sun that just jumped out from behind the clouds.

The rain is gentle and soft, lingering, pattering, and wisps. The rain is infatuated with the scenery of Jiangnan, with mountains and rivers far away, pavilions and pavilions, no waves on the water, and graceful weeping willows. It is quiet and the rain is unstoppable. I can't wait to get rid of the shackles of cloud taxis and enter the world in this painting to listen, appreciate and feel. Therefore, the rain is always gentle, soft, continuous, pattering, strands, and hazy. In the Jiangnan described by people, there is a vast mist and rain between the sky and the earth. The rain is also hazy, the scenery is also hazy, and the people are also hazy.

Rain

As soon as I woke up, I heard the sound of rain. I quickly ran to the window to watch the rain.

The drizzle of cats falls quietly and silently, like the protruding silver threads of countless silkworms. Thousands of threads, thousands of filaments, ripple in the air, misty gauze, like mist-like rain, like rain-like mist, lingering continuously.

I sighed with interest in my heart, rain! You are a little elegant, a little chic, a little peaceful, and in your crystal heart, there is more selflessness and dedication. In spring, you melt the ice and snow, awaken the little animals that have been sleeping all winter, and urge the branches to sprout. You also moisturize the land, all things, and people's hearts. In summer, you solve the farmer's trouble - drought, and your crystal body goes deep into the earth, making the farmers full. The rain is so colorful!

The rain is getting heavier! Heavy rain hit the glass window, making a loud noise. The sky and the earth seem to be hung with an extremely wide bead curtain, a vast expanse. The rain fell on the opposite roof, splashing water and covering the roof. The rainwater flowed down the eaves, starting like broken beads, and gradually connected into a line. More and more water on the ground formed into small streams. The watery road is like a sparkling river. People who had to go out held umbrellas, like petals floating on the water, and the occasional passing vehicles were like small boats swimming in the waves.

I was intoxicated. I am intoxicated in this rain. Although I don’t know why so many people hate rain and don’t like rain, rain has its advantages and disadvantages, but you must always think on the bright side.

I like you! rain! 4. How to start and end the essay "The Most Beautiful Scenery"

The Most Beautiful Scenery

In autumn, with a slight cold wind, I strolled through the streets and alleys. It was late autumn and the whole city was shrouded in cold. Suddenly, I felt a butterfly flying gracefully in front of my eyes. I took a closer look, ha! It was just a fallen leaf blown up by the wind. I looked along the direction in which it flew...

A weathered sycamore tree no longer had the vitality of summer. The branches are sparsely dotted with a few withered yellow leaves, giving it a shaky feel. A sense of desolation arose in my heart. A few sparrows under the tree were quite happy, pecking at the fruits under the tree.

A gust of wind blew, and those leaves seemed a little nostalgic and couldn't bear to leave, but they still couldn't get rid of the power of the wind. Tap your toes lightly and fall down, the farewell song is this whimpering cold wind. Farewell, right now!

I can’t help but feel sorry for them. The leaves decorate the tree’s life, but in the end they have no choice but to shed their green clothes and pass away with the wind. I think they must be a little unwilling.

The leaves flying in the air are performing the last dance of life. They rotate, flutter, sway, or wander. They dance so gracefully and naturally, without any sense of sadness. I was dead wrong.

The scenery of countless elves dancing in the gentle breeze made my sadness out of place. At this time, a fallen leaf floated into my palm, and I seemed to hear the words deep in its heart.

It said: In fact, I am very happy. Listen to the whispers of swallows in spring, and enjoy the blooming flowers in summer. Even in autumn, offer a dance to the tree when it passes away, treasure the beautiful memories in your heart, turn them into fallen red under the tree, and nourish new life in the coming year. Isn’t it also very happy? It whispered in my ear: Live without regrets and make selfless contributions.

Another gust of cold wind swept up piles of fallen leaves on the ground. Everything just seemed like a dream, but I understood them, no, it was their hearts.

People who work silently in all walks of life enjoy life while also selflessly contributing to society and spreading hope with their hard work. They work hard for the development of the country and do their best without asking for anything in return. For them, it is enough to dedicate their lives and finally return to their roots and sleep on the land of their motherland.

How can those people who are as selfish as sparrows and content with pleasure experience this silent magnificence?

They are the most beautiful scenery in my heart! 5. How to start and end the scene composition "The Most Beautiful Scenery"

Although it was sunny that day, it was chilly and the breeze made people feel chilly.

Because I was still a novice, I was defeated after a while, and the ball was hit on the path. I quickly went to pick up the ball. I subconsciously looked up and saw two old people at the other end of the path. The old lady may be paralyzed and in a wheelchair. The skin on his face has become loose, and his face is covered with heavy wrinkles. His short hair seems to be covered with a layer of white frost, his big eyes have been sunken deeply, and his teeth are almost full of teeth. Her rough hands were covered with blood vessels like earthworms, but there was a smile on her face and happiness in her eyes. Followed by an old grandfather. The ruthless years have carved deep wrinkles in the corners of his eyes and forehead, and a thin layer of white frost has stained his temples. His back is already hunched, and his head is hunched over. The crutches couldn't support his body, and he always staggered when he walked, which made people worried. The old man walked with difficulty, and a gust of wind blew him. The old man immediately took off his coat in a panic. When the old woman saw it, she opened her mouth with difficulty, and it was very difficult to speak every word, "It's cold, you can put on your own clothes, I'm not cold." "I can hold on, it's okay." The old woman listened. Face 6. How to write a good beginning of a composition

The ancients said that "a crested head and a leopard tail" means that the beginning should be written in a colorful way, like the head of a phoenix. Some people say: "A good beginning is equal to Half the battle”, these all illustrate the importance of the beginning. Similarly, a good beginning is also of great significance for college entrance examination composition.

So, what kind of beginning is good? There is no set method for writing, and there is no fixed format for the beginning. There is only one criterion for measuring quality, and that is whether it is an integral part of the article, whether it can serve the content and center of the article, and whether it can attract readers to continue reading.

Due to time and space constraints, the beginning of the examination essay should be concise, vivid, and beautiful. You may consider using the following opening method.

1. Straight to the point

The so-called "cut to the point" is a metaphor, which refers to a way of writing an article that gets straight to the point. For example, "Talk about Backbone" states the point of view at the beginning: "We Chinese people have backbone." "Praise to Poplar" touches on the theme at the beginning: "The poplar tree is really extraordinary, I praise the poplar tree!" This method is widely used in the writing of various articles, accounting for a large proportion. Its expression angle can be to directly describe the ability at the beginning, or to highlight the topic; it can be a clear introduction to reveal the main idea, or it can be straightforward to point out the enemy's theory. And so on. Because this writing method is crisp, quick to enter the topic, and has no branches or branches, it should be the preferred way to start the essay in the examination room.

2. Background Gradual

Natural science tells us that the universe is a large system, and social science tells us that human society is also a large system. A tree is within the system of a forest, and a leaf belongs to the system of this tree. A person belongs to the system of society, and a finger belongs to this person's system. Therefore, any single thing or any phenomenon is inseparable from the system to which it belongs, that is, the social or natural background on which it depends for survival. For example, "Kong Jiji" begins: "There is a large square-shaped counter on the street... where you can warm wine at any time." "Under the Scorching Sun and Heavy Rain" begins: "On June 15th, the weather was crazy hot!" These beginnings may explain the time, place, season, climate, or the background and environment of the topic, etc. When composing in the examination room, some questions may seem abrupt and elusive at first glance, but after thinking about them in context, they suddenly become clear. For example, the title of the college entrance examination essay in 1999 was "If Memory Can Be Transplanted." In conjunction with the development of science and technology in recent years, cloning technology has been developed, genes can be transplanted, and aerospace technology has advanced by leaps and bounds. In recent years, my country's economy has continued to develop and economic construction has made outstanding achievements. With these backgrounds in mind, the content of the article can be written, and association and imagination can gain a foothold.

3. Set questions and doubts

First recount the outcome of the plot and set up suspense, or set up questions to solve the problem and arouse explanation or discussion. For example, the beginning of "Jujube Core": "Before leaving for the United States,...but it was very strange." Another example is the beginning of "A Colorful Flower" asking: "Why do flowers have all kinds of beautiful and bright colors?" This kind of opening method, its purpose is to set up suspense, attract readers' attention, stimulate readers' interest, and at the same time increase the twists and turns of the article and show the beauty of the layout of the article. This opening technique is very common in high school entrance examination essays. Of course, this opening form should be used skillfully to avoid being singular or pursuing formal curiosity.

(Actually, the form of this opening is very rich, such as:

①First raise an unsolved question.

②First intercept a wonderful Event fragment.

③ First describe an object that serves as a clue

④ First arrange a scene that triggers the story

⑤ First introduce it. Relevant characters.)

4. Famous aphorism style

Quoting aphorisms, famous quotes, poems or sayings, proverbs, etc. at the beginning can attract readers and help highlight the center. For example, "Echo" quotes a poem by Ai Qing at the beginning. "Doubt and Knowledge" begins with a quote from Cheng Yi: "A scholar must first understand doubt" and so on. This opening method is also easy for ordinary candidates to master and use. Just imagine, which candidate can't remember a few ancient poems, a few maxims, and a few famous quotes? The essays in the examination room vary from topic to topic, so why not quote them on camera? Famous and aphoristic openings used freely can often enhance the momentum of the opening, making people feel abrupt, majestic and lofty. Of course, you should try to be as accurate as possible when citing to avoid intellectual errors.

5. Incisive metaphor

Use a metaphor at the beginning to arouse the reader's interest in the thing or principle to be explained. For example, "Chinese Stone Arch Bridge" begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge is arc-shaped, like a rainbow." "Horse Theory" begins: "There is Bole in the world, and then there is a thousand-mile horse." The central argument is introduced by using the story of Bole and the thousand-mile horse as a metaphor. Incisive metaphors are often used at the beginning of argumentative essays. They can make the article start fresh and enhance the attractiveness and expressive effect of the article. Since it is a "metaphor", we must pay attention to the fact that the "other things" mentioned have certain similarities with this topic and cannot be far-fetched.

In addition, there are also opening methods such as lyrical discussion style and character description style.

In short, how to start the composition determines the content of the composition, the nature and uniqueness of the article. Conception. After getting the topic, don’t think twice before taking action, and don’t act hastily.

7. How to write the beginning of a composition with beauty as the topic

Lying on the prairie, looking at the sky, I can’t imagine how sad the world is; every time the raindrops fall, they drop on my heart, I can't imagine that the world is so beautiful; every time the first ray of sunshine in the morning shines, I can't imagine that the world is so warm; and when those people who don't know how to appreciate others spit on ugly girls, I always feel cynical. Angry and vulgar mentality.

What’s wrong with ugly girls? Since ancient times, women’s lives have been worthless because of their beautiful appearance. What does external beauty mean? Does it mean that you can live forever? Represents eternal peace in this world? Represent your country as the strongest? Does it mean you are invincible in the universe? Or does it mean you can increase the earth’s natural resources? Neither will work. Today's men place great importance on a woman's external beauty. Do they think that because they have the most beautiful wife in the world, they are the happiest people in the world? No, she is just Lotus when she is the most beautiful. Everyone will grow old. As long as your heart is the purest, it is the most beautiful. As long as you go through the torture of the world and in the end, you are not allowed to change your most beautiful thoughts. Always maintain a pure mind, that is the most beautiful thing.

If that woman is very ugly, you don’t need her, but you will miss a lot, miss eternal happiness, and miss the most beautiful wife... On the contrary, if that young woman has such a deep heart, How bad, just like the evil queen in Snow White, she will harm you sooner or later. Beautiful women in people's minds often have evil intentions, and they commit heinous crimes just because of their beauty. Are there many such examples in the world? ? But often those ugly girls will not compare themselves with others in this way. Although it is not good to have low self-esteem, people must have low self-esteem in areas where they are lacking, but her low self-esteem will not last forever. On special occasions, she It can exude the most beautiful scent, which cannot be smelled or touched. She can also be of great help at that time. She must have a side that few people know, a real beauty that ordinary people don't have and are hard to discover.

Lying on the prairie with stars dotted, looking at the sky, slowly falling asleep, slowly realizing that the ugliest woman is the real woman. I can’t understand why other girls use special Things cover up your own beauty. I believe that only ugly women in the world are beautiful under the stars! 8. How to write the beginning and end of the sixth-grade elementary school essay "The Most Beautiful Person in My Heart"

"Shine your shoes! Shine your shoes!" I heard shouts from downstairs.

I looked down and said, "Wow!" Are these my shoes? So dirty. Look closely, they are really my shoes.

"Mom, I went down to polish my shoes." "Go, I wanted to polish them earlier, but I was too busy."

As soon as I left, I found My favorite "Chibi Maruko-chan" was playing and I returned to the TV. "Go quickly." A harsh voice woke me up.

I hurried downstairs and saw an old woman sitting on the bench waiting for work. She is in her sixties, and her dark face is covered with wrinkles.

The old lady may have noticed that I was looking at her, and said with a smile: "Kid, would you like to shine your shoes? My mother-in-law will clean them for you, and I guarantee that you will be satisfied." I nodded, "Yes, yes! But "My shoes are very dirty. Do you want to wipe them?" "Only wipe them if they are dirty. You won't let me clean the new ones, right?" She carefully tied the shoe covers on my feet. Pick up a wet cloth and wipe the mud and dust on the shoes several times.

I applied some shoe polish to the shoes, picked up two brushes and brushed them carefully, giving them a "double-sided attack". Finally, I wiped the shoes with a rag again and again. The mud and dust were unbearable and the torture was revealed, and the shoes returned to their original luster.

After polishing the shoes, she handed them to me. The shoes were polished clean and the toes were shiny, like new ones. But looking at the old woman again, not only were her hands black, but her clothes were also stained with several stains.

I was in a hurry to go home and watch "GT;", so I threw away two yuan and hurried home. The old woman chased after me and called me with a smile: "Son, you gave me an extra dollar." The extra money was brought to me.

Looking at the old lady’s chrysanthemum-like smile, I discovered that she is also very beautiful, beautiful in her heart, so beautiful that people will never forget it! The moving "traffic light" The moving "traffic light" I thought: "The person who loves his job is the most beautiful person. He will be in his job..." "Kids, please go here." The traffic police uncle said. It broke my deep thoughts.

He led me across the road and looked at his amiable look. I don’t know why, but a deep respect suddenly came to my heart. Friends, have you ever seen a moving "traffic light"? The "traffic light" can move anytime and anywhere. What's going on? The "traffic lights" set up on the road are telling people that these are the warnings and restrictions of traffic rules and the guarantee of the safety of vehicles and pedestrians. You must strictly follow the instructions of the "traffic lights" to decide whether to "go" or "stop". ".

This is familiar to everyone, but what I want to say is another kind of "traffic light" that is more diligent and hardworking. Whenever I see vehicles driving in an orderly manner, I can't help but think of the traffic police uncle.

Their figures always appear at our school gate facing the morning light, and always leave with the afterglow of the setting sun. Now, there are zebra crossings on the road. What makes me even more happy is that although there are no traffic lights, there are police officers on the road in front of the school directing passing pedestrians and vehicles.

Elsewhere, the traffic lights are on duty in turns. When the red light is tired, the yellow light is on. When the yellow light is tired, the green light is on duty. Here, the traffic policeman is the best traffic light.

When a car passes by, the traffic police uncle directs the children to walk aside. When there are no vehicles, the traffic policeman will instruct pedestrians walking on the road to move faster, and at the same time, he will also prepare vehicles to pass.

After a while, many vehicles drove forward in an orderly manner, and the long queue slowly decreased. With a "beep--", the whistle sounded. It turned out that someone wanted to stop the vehicle when it passed by. Cross the road. The traffic police uncle immediately pulled him back and gave him criticism and education.

The traffic police uncles were so busy that they were sweating profusely, but they always smiled. It was the most beautiful smile in the world and the happiest smile in the world. Nowadays, traffic accidents rarely occur at the school gate.

This is first of all thanks to the traffic police uncle. No matter it is day or night, whether it is a scorching summer or a biting winter, they always stick to their posts and conscientiously maintain traffic order on the road.

I thought: "The person who loves his job is the most beautiful person. He will be in his job..." "Kids, please go here." The words of the traffic police uncle interrupted my deep thoughts. .

He led me across the road and looked at his amiable look. I don’t know why, but a deep respect suddenly came to my heart.