So I signed up for Huai Zuo's "2 1 day writing training camp".
There are two kinds of homework in training camp, one is zero-based and the other is basic. I position myself as a basic student.
After listening to Huai Zuo's second class, novice writers easily fall into the writing pit and find that they should be a zero-based student.
There are three points to reflect on my shortcomings in writing:
1, the article is slightly dry, and it is not easy to cause others' * * *, and it is not easy to enter the reader's heart.
2, the article is too casual and not logical enough.
The article lacks famous sayings and is unconvincing.
4. There is no benchmark analysis.
Improvement method:
Me, the article is slightly dry, and it is not easy to cause others to scream and enter the reader's heart.
The article Ganba lacks detailed description and detailed description of the scene, in order to strive for more verbs and nouns, fewer adjectives, more observation of life and more rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification.
2, the article is casual and not logical enough.
Before writing an article, make an outline, clear your mind and don't stray from the topic. You can also use subheadings to make all the content of the article close to your idea.
The article lacks famous sayings and is unconvincing.
Collect more famous sayings and aphorisms at ordinary times, and read the collected materials regularly to ensure that you can remember them when writing and call them at any time.
4. There is no benchmark analysis.
Try to figure out the excellent articles, study the logic, structure and style of the articles, and then find your own gaps and correct them.
The improvement of writing ability is not achieved overnight, and we need to study consciously and regularly to improve our ability.
The path of writing is Xiu Yuan Xi, and I will pursue it from beginning to end.
Reporter: This article is the homework for the third day of Huaizuo Training Camp.