③ Heartache (pain) ④ Self-blame (self-blame)
18. Example 1: No; Cai Lan, a Taiwanese cuisine, commented on her mother's cooking skills, which can set off "my" feelings for her mother's kelp stewed ribs. This * * * prompted me to explore three reasons; It strongly highlights the main idea of the article: praising the nuance of maternal love and expressing the author's remorse and self-blame after the loss of maternal love.
Example 2: Yes; Taiwan Province gourmet Cai Lan's evaluation of his mother's cooking has nothing to do with my feelings about my mother's kelp stewed ribs. After removal, the writing ideas are more concise and the cohesion is smoother; After deletion, the main idea of the article can still be fully expressed.
19. Action (action) description and psychological description (detailed description of action and psychology, only detailed description will not score. ); I vividly wrote the action and psychological characteristics of saying goodbye to my mother when I left home at night. It expresses my ambivalence that I can't bear to disturb my mother and show my deep attachment to my mother.
20.
Use the rhetorical method of metaphor; Compare mother to vulnerability; Vividly wrote the characteristics that mother may leave us at any time; The author realizes that we must cherish the days when we can be with our mother.
2 1. Write 2 points; In the last three points, you can get full marks for any two points.
Example 1: The author uses the writing technique of borrowing things to express emotion; Motherly love condenses on shepherd's purse; Motherly love is concentrated in ribs seaweed soup; Motherly love is reflected in the sleeping pills my mother took when I left home.
Example 2: The author depicts maternal love through detailed narration; When my mother and I went to Purple Mountain to dig shepherd's purse, my mother's praise and reward intoxicated me. My mother stewed ribs and seaweed soup for me, which melted maternal love and made my home cooking.
Feel happy; Every time "I" leave home, my mother falls asleep after taking hypnotics, which shows that she is reluctant to give up on me.