2011 National Unified Examination for General College Admissions (Guangdong Paper)

Analysis of Chinese Language Test Questions

1. This major question has 4 sub-questions, each sub-question is 3 points, ***12 points.

1． Answer D

2. Answer B

3. Answer C

4. Answer A

2. There are 7 small questions in this major question, with a maximum score of 35 points.

5. Answer C

6. Answer B

7. Answer B

8. Answer D

9. (1) Use "/" to segment the following paragraph. (4 points)

Luo Jiguan was a guerrilla/he sent someone to visit his wife/redeemed him with a large sum of money/remained as a couple as before/repay him for his duty to save his husband/this matter is not enough to teach/however, it is treated as a matter of course Young people are hard-working/those who are both expensive and disgusted with the chaff/the thick and thin areas/are almost beyond the reach of Taoism/are born heroes/are upright and fair/can be held in check by the rules of Taoists

The punctuation is as follows

Since Luo was an official guerrilla, he sent someone to visit his wife. He paid a heavy sum of money to redeem her husband, so that the husband and wife could be as good as before, as a reward for saving her husband's life. There is not enough training in this matter, but for those who regard young people as hard, noble and despise the chaff, their thick and thin areas are almost impossible to measure. Are you born a hero, upright and upright, and can you be punished according to the rules of a Taoist?

(2) Translate the following sentences. (6 points)

① Those who are good swimmers, holding a sharp saw, hide in the flowing water.

Answer: Admiral Luo recruited people (or: soldiers/warriors) who were good at swimming (or: swimming), (let them) hold sharp saws to hide (or: hide/hide) (in) the upstream In the river. (3 points. Swimming, upstream, and sentence meaning, 1 point each)

② He also asked the literati to narrate the incident, which is a strange man.

The answer (Admiral Luo) also (or: and) invited (or: hired) literati (or: scholars) to record in detail (or: clearly) his (thief) things, (this kind of Mind), he is indeed an extraordinary (or: unusual/strange/strange) man. (3 points. Li, Xun, and "Xun Qi Men Ye" sentence patterns, 1 point each)

10. (1) The answer is early spring (early spring). It can be seen from the characteristics of the word "chu" in "Yingchu Jieyu", the word "wei" in "微雨", and the characteristics of "the color of grass looks far away but is not seen up close". (The oriole has just learned how to sing a few spring songs, and a gentle drizzle has just fallen in the sky. The tender grass tips have just emerged from the ground. In the light rain, you can't notice its existence in front of you, you can only look at it from a distance. , only to find that there is a layer of green covering the ground. These scenes written by the poet are all unique in early spring.) (Write "early spring", 1 point; briefly explain with the description in the word, 2 points)

(2) Answer In the author's eyes, early spring is obviously the most beautiful season of the year and should be cherished. People will grow old before the flowers bloom, and time flies by. Don’t wait for spring to pass and regret it, so don’t waste time and get “drunk” at this time. It expresses the love for early spring, the sentiment of seizing youth and the best time in life, not wasting life and missing the great youth. It also expresses the sentiment of enjoying yourself in time and not regretting inversion and inaction when you are old. .

11． Answers (choose any 3 questions, only the first 3 questions will be scored for multiple choices. 1 point will be given for all correct answers.)

(1) Are you being unfaithful? Make friends but don’t believe it?

(2) We are both fallen people at the end of the world, so why should we have known each other before?

(3) Future generations mourn and fail to take note of it, which also makes future generations mourn for future generations again.

(4) There is no choice but the flowers fall away, and the swallows return as if they have known each other before.

3. This major question has 4 small questions, with a maximum score of 16 points.

12. Answer AE

13． Answer D

14. The former "taste" refers to the material components and material conditions of beauty. The latter "taste" refers to the fundamental nature and universal laws that make everything beautiful.

15. This example shows that (1) beautiful things are relative and can change as people's aesthetic relationship with reality changes. When a group of students look at the scenery with a relaxed mood, the scenery has original beauty. But when they get lost and night falls, the aesthetic relationship of reality changes, and the original beauty becomes a thing of fear in their eyes, no longer beautiful. (2) Beauty is also self-contradictory. The same thing can be beautiful or not. The key lies in people's understanding of specific things.

4. This major question consists of two sets of test questions. There are 3 questions in each group, worth 15 points.

(1) 16. Beginning: (1) Explain the place and time the story takes place. The sea and the sky describe the location of the story - the seaside. The setting sun and dusk tell the time. (2) Exaggerate the cold atmosphere and pave the way for the development of the story. "Huge ice cubes", "cold sea surface", "cold sunset", "cold wave that has not been seen in decades" and "desolate and clear" create a cold and lonely atmosphere, paving the way for the characters to appear. It implies that the young man has to go to the sea because of life, which highlights the young man's strong character.

End: deepen the theme of the novel.

At the end, "the sea is quiet" and "as quiet as a mother guarding the cradle" are used to set off the tranquility and happiness of the family after the boy completes the sea hunt, revealing the current situation of the family suffering from the hardships of life, and at the same time setting off the strength of the boy. , sensible and responsible character, which deepens the theme of the work.

17. Hard-working and strong: He went fishing in the sea for several nights in a row, causing him to fall ill and worry about his family's livelihood. (2 points) Take good care of your children: Don’t let Hailong learn primitive fishing methods, scold Hailong back, teach Hailong not to play in the sea when it’s cold, and if you don’t see Hailong in the middle of the night, you quickly go to the beach with your mother to look for it. (2 points)

18. The reasons are: (1) Dare to take responsibility for the family difficulties caused by my father’s illness; (2) I am talented and bold, not afraid of cold sea water, and have good water properties; (3) Spearhead fish can be caught in the season when they are the fattest and most valuable. A lot of fish; (4) I think catching pointed fish is very interesting and I have always wanted to try it.

Analysis of the reasons: (1) Hai Long’s father is ill and the family’s life is in difficulty. Hai Long decides to take on this responsibility. Moreover, he is the only one in the family who has such ability, which shows that Hai Long is a sensible and capable person. Responsible boy. (2) Hailong likes to bathe and dive in seawater all year round. No matter what the weather is, Hailong is not afraid at all. This shows that Hailong, who often soaks in seawater, is familiar with the nature of water and the nature of fish here, and is highly skilled. It is bold, so the sea dragon has the ability to catch the pointed fish.

(2) 19. (1) Exaggeration. It highlights that Liang Zongdai is good at running and has a strong physique.

(2) Metaphor. The vivid description of Liang Zongdai's character traits of being good at and loving debating, having outstanding debating skills, and being passionate when debating.

20. He is full of passion, and his eloquence is especially evident in debates. It is free and easy, and it is powerful when read aloud, allowing your temper to flourish. He is rigorous in his studies and talented. Pay attention to each word and strive to be consistent with the original work, so that the translated work is close to the original work.

21. The underlined part highly praises Mr. Liang Zongdai’s benevolent life, passionate, loving life, optimistic and open-minded character and personality charm, and calls on people to learn from Mr. Liang Zongdai, ignite the fire of life with passion, face life with optimism and open-mindedness, love life and Live and make your life more meaningful.

5. There are 2 small questions in this major question, each question is worth 6 points, and the maximum is 12 points.

22. (1) Answer ① Although ② Since ③ Therefore

(2) Answer

True, good, and beautiful things are always compared with false, evil, and ugly things And exists. (31 words including punctuation marks)

The true, good and beautiful things always exist in comparison with the false, evil and ugly things. (23 words including punctuation marks)

23. Answer examples

Thank you to classmate Li Ming for bringing us the "Lights Dim" Lantern Festival feast, a Lantern Festival cultural feast. Classmates, with such dim lights and such a full moon night, do you think of another full moon night? Yes, the moon is full in the sky and half-moon in the world. The bright moon is hanging in the sky again. I would like to invite classmate Han Hai to introduce to us the Mid-Autumn Festival on August 15th. Everyone is welcome!

6. This major question has 1 small question, 60 points.

24. Essay analysis

1. Question review:

There are several keywords in the prompts. "The World" tells candidates to think broadly. , the writing scope is all-encompassing; "omnipresent" means that candidates must choose an entry point; "the starting point of the road", "the source of the long river", "the center of coordinates" and "the foundation of things" remind candidates what the "origin" is, weakening It indicates the difficulty of the test questions for candidates; "connecting life experience and understanding" indicates the style of writing that candidates can choose, either narrative or argumentative essays.

What exactly is the "origin"? Its original meaning is to point to the place of departure, and the "origin" in the prompt is its metaphorical meaning. Then, the phrase with the verb-object structure of the title "Return to the Origin" means returning to the initial state. In other words, this "origin" represents or symbolizes a beautiful thing. For example, "At the beginning of human beings, nature is inherently good" is a typical example, which also answers the reason why it is necessary to "return to the origin". Of course, the "origin" also represents a kind of ignorance, enlightenment and chaos. There is a saying in the Zen world: There are three realms in life - if you look at mountains, they are mountains, and if you look at water, they are water; if you look at mountains, they are not mountains, and if you look at water, they are not water; if you look at mountains, they are still mountains, and if you look at water, they are still water. The highest state is to return to the origin, experience the vicissitudes of life, experience the changes in world affairs, return to the true nature, and return to the origin again. There is a TV series in Singapore called "Original Point". The story tells the story of three friends who made the same wish since childhood. However, due to different circumstances when they grew up, the three people parted ways. Friends turned into enemies and lovers. ground separation. This is a tragedy that cannot go back to where it started.

Therefore, candidates from this starting point can easily associate with all the truth, goodness and beauty, pure natural environment, simple folk customs, etc., then the scope of topics related to this will be wider.

2. Intention:

After solving the "origin" problem of "returning to the origin", the next step is to solve why we need to "return to the origin".

Obviously, the reminder is that we should go back to the source, and this "origin" should be beautiful.

Therefore, the intention should be within the scope of this theme. As the saying goes, "At the beginning of human beings, nature is good." A river without pollution is pure, a starting point without a starting point is full of hope, and a society without moral degradation is harmonious and conflict-free. Family is happy, this is the connotation of "origin". Therefore, the article has many perspectives. Humanity returns to its true nature, morality returns to truth, goodness, and beauty. Life, growth, youth, struggle, environment, soul, integrity, ethics, etc. are all the focus of the article's purpose.

The best intention lies in its strong realistic relevance and timeliness, as well as the selected angle: the conflicts of a family, the return of a friendship, and the self-reflection of a growth path. These are the aspects of life that candidates are most familiar with and can be learned at their fingertips.

3. Conception:

The difficulty in conceiving this question lies in the distance between the prompts and the title of the essay. The prompts only simply indicate the origin, but the title has the added word "return" , therefore, the key to conceiving the full text is "why we need to go back to the original point." In other words, whether it is a narrative, an essay, or an argumentative essay, there must be such a process: the beautiful origin—destruction, contradiction and conflict—returns to the origin. For example: pure environment - development and destruction - governance and restoration of the environment; happy family - conflicts - return to happiness; pure friendship - injury - restoration of friendship.

4. Style selection:

The "life experience and understanding" in the writing requirements tells candidates that they can be written as narratives, prose, or argumentative essays.

According to the requirements of the program, it is estimated that the proportion of narrative essays will increase compared with previous years, and family love and friendship will be the most popular themes among candidates. There are also single-parent families among the candidates. If the candidate comes from a divorced family, it will be a masterpiece to write a story about the harmony of parents. In particular, writing about candidates walking among their parents and actively matching them will be the biggest highlight. Narrative essays require candidates to pay attention to detailed description and psychological portrayal, which are the keys to success.

Argumentative essay writing is still the first choice for candidates. Philosophical thinking is the first criterion for measuring composition. If the candidate can conduct a dialectical analysis on the "original point" and arrange the writing in depth, it will be a top-notch work. For example: a positive and negative comparison argument, where the beauty of "returning to the origin" is compared with the tragedy of not being able to "return to the origin", the philosophical meaning will be stronger.

5. Material Application:

The prompt "Back to the Origin" and "The World" tells candidates that there are many materials to choose from, but the Guangdong College Entrance Examination composition pays attention to materials. Although you can write about history and humanities, you should be cautious in using them and choose more materials from real life. The war and peace of the world and the changes in historical dynasties can all be used.

There are more materials in real life, from counterfeiting to brand effect, from cheating and stealing to an honest society, from Shi Yuzhu to the 3Q dispute, they can all be used as materials; for negative examples, you can choose "My dad is "Li Gang", "Yao Jiaxin Case", "Sudan Red", "Clenbuterol", "Sanlu Milk Powder Incident", "Drunk Driving" and so on. The selection of these fresh materials lies in the philosophical thinking in the writing. The positive examples should illustrate the "return to the original point" after the lost experience, while the negative materials should explain that there is no danger of "returning to the original point".

The famous saying can be quoted: "Those who have achieved great things and learned great things in ancient and modern times must pass through three realms: 'Last night the west wind withered the green trees. I climbed up to the tall building alone and looked at the end of the world.' This is the first realm. "The clothes are getting wider and I don't regret it, because I am so tired." This is the second state. "I have been looking for him for thousands of times, but when I look back, there is that person." This is the third state. . These words are not something that a great poet can understand. However, Yan Ou may not be allowed to interpret the words in this way. "Looking at the mountains is a mountain, looking at the water is not a mountain." Water; look at mountains as mountains, water as water.

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