I don't think so. Maybe some people do, but some people melt a cold heart through the sincerity of others. Such a magical trip, such a mysterious transformation, let's enter this transformation together! I * * * experienced two transformation trips, which had a profound impact on me.
Li Naiyue, a city girl, 14 years old. Her father is the department head of a state-owned enterprise. Li Naiyue loves beauty so much that she doesn't take her teacher seriously. She often has conflicts with her teachers, intimidating them, disobeying the rules and regulations of the school and dropping out of school many times. Luo Zhen, a country girl, died when her father was a child. She also has a brother. Although my family is poor, my academic performance is also very good.
The seven-day communication between two girls with completely different identities and personalities has produced earth-shaking changes. When Li Naiyue first arrived in the countryside, she seemed at a loss in the face of life in the mountains. The monotonous rural life made her unable to find any fun. Li Naiyue re-examined himself and began to blend in with the kindness and enthusiasm of this place. Finally, Li Naiyue repented and thanked her parents.
And Luo Zhen's journey of transformation also gave us many surprises. A country girl is considerate of others everywhere, but she is also quite touching. I am shocked that a girl who has been extremely disrespectful to her parents should have such earth-shaking changes.
And I also realized from it that the enthusiasm of rural people and the poverty of rural children are pure happiness. The "sacred" place in the countryside seems spotless, purifying everyone's heart and melting every cold heart.
No wonder the ancients lived in seclusion in the countryside when they were old. 62616964757a68696416fe78988e698331333431366334 is really a pure place. Perhaps the second thing touched me the most. Zhou Yunfeng, a city boy with two faces, a combination of angels and little demons, a cheerful and lovely sunshine boy, fought with racing cars and was the boss of the school. He was fired several times.
Chen Yulin, a left-behind child, is sensible and capable. She has shouldered the burden of the whole family since she was a child, and completely different changes have taken place after the transformation. When Zhou Yunfeng first arrived in the countryside, he was used to big fish and big meat. He couldn't get used to those local dishes, so he dumped the noodles and fed them to the dog.
Knowing the reason why my brother doesn't go to school and seeing my father's discipline, my heart is slowly changing. This country father has done a lot for this "son", buying second-hand TV, pasting wallpaper and posting Spring Festival couplets, which he can't enjoy at home. Zhou Yunfeng has also integrated into and considered this family.
That is, bad luck arrival, because my sister-in-law went to college, my grandfather was ill, and I owed a lot of debts. Creditors took a lot of things.
He wants to pay his debts for this family and go to town to transport coal himself. Grandpa broke his leg in order to let Yunfeng eat a good meal. Zhou Yunfeng cried, and he was moved, and so was I.
These things, scenes emerge in my mind, and tears unconsciously wet my face. What changed this once unruly boy? I think it's love, it's true feelings.
True feelings can touch everyone and every heart, and Zhou Yunfeng also showed me his beautiful side in this transformation. The touching events in the countryside touched the boy and showed Zhou Yunfeng his kindness.
He is in adolescence, which should be an indelible event in his life. At the moment when my sister-in-law returned the money to him, the boy's last psychological defense line collapsed and he cried bitterly. He was really moved by this feeling.
Seven days, like a century's change, a young rebellious child has become a pure and happy child at this age. The program "Deformation Meter" has given me too many miracles and too many surprises.
Let's spread our wings and fly, and don't be defeated by these setbacks on the road; Fly, don't forget whose shoulder we are flying on; Fly, fly to your dreams.
2. How to write the deformation table at the end of the deformation table?
If one day I can't move forward, would you like to spend a warm afternoon with me?
If I asked you something, would you want to wake up in your mother's dream?
If it is a home you are not familiar with, will you take kindness as a signpost?
If this is the future of a country, will you let it sleep and stop wandering? -"Deformation Meter": A force from the depths of distant mountains!
-Introduction
Deformation, is it appearance change or image? No, it has become a heart, a feeling. Since ancient times, there has been a saying that a leopard cannot change his spots. I don't think so. Maybe some people do, but some people melt a cold heart through the sincerity of others. Such a magical trip, such a mysterious transformation, let's enter this transformation together!
I * * * experienced two transformation trips, which had a profound impact on me. Li Naiyue, a city girl, 14 years old. Her father is the department head of a state-owned enterprise. Li Naiyue loves beauty so much that she doesn't take her teacher seriously. She often has conflicts with her teachers, intimidating them, disobeying the rules and regulations of the school and dropping out of school many times. Luo Zhen, a country girl, died when her father was a child. She also has a brother. Although my family is poor, my academic performance is also very good. The seven-day communication between two girls with completely different identities and personalities has produced earth-shaking changes.
When Li Naiyue first arrived in the countryside, she seemed at a loss in the face of life in the mountains. The monotonous rural life made her unable to find any fun. Li Naiyue re-examined himself and began to blend in with the kindness and enthusiasm of this place. Finally, Li Naiyue repented and thanked her parents. And Luo Zhen's journey of transformation also gave us many surprises. A country girl is considerate of others everywhere, but she is also quite touching.
I am shocked that a girl who has been extremely disrespectful to her parents should have such earth-shaking changes. And I also realized from it that the enthusiasm of rural people and the poverty of rural children are pure happiness. The "sacred" place in the countryside seems spotless, purifying everyone's heart and melting every cold heart. No wonder the ancients lived in seclusion in the countryside when they were old. It's really a pure place.
Perhaps the second thing touched me the most. Zhou Yunfeng, a city boy with two faces, a combination of angels and little demons, a cheerful and lovely sunshine boy, fought with racing cars and was the boss of the school. He was fired several times. Chen Yulin, a left-behind child, is sensible and capable. She has shouldered the burden of the whole family since she was a child, and completely different changes have taken place after the transformation.
When Zhou Yunfeng first arrived in the countryside, he was used to big fish and big meat. He couldn't get used to those local dishes, so he dumped the noodles and fed them to the dog. Knowing the reason why my brother doesn't go to school and seeing my father's discipline, my heart is slowly changing. This country father has done a lot for this "son", buying second-hand TV, pasting wallpaper and posting Spring Festival couplets, which he can't enjoy at home. Zhou Yunfeng has also integrated into and considered this family. That is, bad luck arrival, because my sister-in-law went to college, my grandfather was ill, and I owed a lot of debts. Creditors took a lot of things. He wants to pay his debts for this family and go to town to transport coal himself. Grandpa broke his leg in order to let Yunfeng eat a good meal. Zhou Yunfeng cried, and he was moved, and so was I.
These things, scenes emerge in my mind, and tears unconsciously wet my face. What changed this once unruly boy? I think it's love, it's true feelings. True feelings can touch everyone and every heart, and Zhou Yunfeng also showed me his beautiful side in this transformation. The touching events in the countryside touched the boy and showed Zhou Yunfeng his kindness. He is in adolescence, which should be an indelible event in his life. At the moment when my sister-in-law returned the money to him, the boy's last psychological defense line collapsed and he cried bitterly. He was really moved by this feeling.
Seven days, like a century's change, a young rebellious child has become a pure and happy child at this age. The program "Deformation Meter" has given me too many miracles and too many surprises.
Let's spread our wings and fly, and don't be defeated by these setbacks on the road; Fly, don't forget whose shoulder we are flying on; Fly, fly towards your dream!
3. How to write full marks at the beginning and end of the composition? Excellent opening demonstration of the composition 1, quoting famous sayings. 1 ask how the world is and teach people to live and die together.
Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time
Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face.
Shi said, "Love is a tool. "(What is Love in the World) In a medieval church, a saint began his speech:" I became a saint because I saw through money, and what I have belongs to everyone. "
Long years, a snap of your fingers. In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine."
Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. "
Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format 1 Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice.
(A Letter to Confucius) The hateful standard answer: I am really outraged to see you. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you.
The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat. You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened.
The following are your three major crimes (A Letter to the Standard Answer) 3. Borrowing Zhang Hui's novel style 1 "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past.
And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world. The Juyi Hall in the Water Margin is now brightly lit and full of people.
One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently.
It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin. That's why all the heroes gather here and argue endlessly.
Who is the hero who fights the tiger? 4. Clever use of rhetoric ① "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. question mark cleared his throat and said, "The seminar on time and space is now officially started. Today, our theme is "What is beauty". Please let scholars from different times and countries speak actively. " (What is Beauty) 5. Clever use of fables ① The Gong Yu family has lived here for generations, and two mountains, the King of Wu and the Taihang Mountain at the entrance, blocked the way. Life is pathetic! It seems isolated here. What's new in this city has long been old news. This kind of life really needs to change.
The foolish old man thought, I have to find a way to move Taihang Mountain and Wu Wang. Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to meet the needs of the times, our school will carry out all-round quality education, learn everything and teach everything, so that your children can become all-round generalists and be invincible in the competition.
Tuition, 3000 yuan per semester; Training fee, 5,000 yuan; Sponsorship fee, 15000 yuan. "(Almighty School) (4) What comes quietly, leaving no trace, but arouses all kinds of light dances? What is it, leaving no trace, coming quietly, leaving a season of singing? What comes gently and goes quietly, leaving golden color in the harvest season? What is it, leaving quietly and coming gently, spinning a white dream for the silent earth? The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time. "
Children clap their hands with kites: "It's the wind." The tramp said, "This is just a dream."
("Happiness with Answers" 6. Clever use of the inscription that reveals the theme ① There is no stalwart of the tree, but there can be green grass; Without the beauty of peony, you can have the freedom of small wild chrysanthemum ... life is not necessarily brilliant, but it must be great! -Inscription Butterfly was once a beautiful and excellent dancer. Her long shawl and gentle dance brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was hailed by others as China's future Duncan ... but it's all over, and fate will keep her in a wheelchair forever.
Life is bleak and silent, and the "white swan" has become an ugly duckling that nobody cares about. How many times, she dreamed that she put on glass shoes and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up, she only heard the cold autumn wind.
(Starry Night) If you lose money, you only lose a small part; If you lose your health, you only lose a small part; If you lose your integrity, you are almost bankrupt. -What is "sincerity" when signing? It is also honest and trustworthy.
Throughout history, the word "sincerity" has soaked many people's blood and tears. Who is praising the emperor's new clothes? A friend once asked me this question: Which of the following beautiful scenery do you like best? A piece of white feather falls leisurely in the golden sun.
B. A petal falls red and floats in the quiet and deep pool water. A meteor, in the deep blue sky, is fleeting.
D. A drop of crystal dew slipped quietly on the tip of the green grass. After reading this question, I suddenly froze. The ever-changing nature, the rising sun, the ebb and flow of the tide, how many beautiful scenery is exciting and fascinating.
..... (Infinite Possibility, Infinite Beauty) 8. Clever use of celebrities for question and answer ① Someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is rich.
4. Original Publisher: How to write the beginning and end of quality education?
How to write the beginning and end of a composition How to write the beginning when writing in the examination room, you must write the opening paragraph, firmly grasp the reader's eyes, and let the reader follow your thoughts involuntarily. Generally speaking, there are many ways to start, and one of them is the most important, that is: concise and clear, and quickly get to the topic. Tip 1: Design suspense to attract readers. I'm dying-I'm lying in a hospital bed, surrounded by darkness, very quiet, and I can only hear my weak breathing in a big room. Nurses only come in when taking medicine or giving injections, and seldom talk to me. I'm used to it. I won't complain too much, because I know I'm dying. I stared out of the window and told myself to face death calmly. (Feel the beauty of life, the perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Shaanxi Province) Skill 2: Cut to the chase and make your point clear? When you are in pain, you will go home and vent in tears; When you are upset, you will go home and let the warmth of home dispel the dark clouds in your heart; Home-what melts in is sadness, and what melts out is happiness; Home-accept sadness and release happiness. What a nice home! (selected from the composition "Home, It's Good" in the senior high school entrance examination in Yunnan Province)? Tip 3: Associating memories, cleverly describing the independent small courtyard, the moonlight is like water, flowing quietly around me, feeling the coolness of my heart sinking into the bottom of the water, causing endless thoughts about you! I remember it was a moonlit night. I put you on the train to a foreign land ... at an early age, you struggled alone in a foreign land. Is everything all right? (Selected from the perfect composition of Henan senior high school entrance examination "When I Face" Dissolved Moonlight ") Tip 4: Highlight the contradictory atmosphere" It's too hot this summer, just buy an air conditioner tomorrow! " Mom said while eating. ? "Buy air conditioning, buy air conditioning, you only know to enjoy! Some money should be saved for children.
5. How to write the beginning and end of the composition Students who seldom practice writing always feel that they can't write at the beginning. Every composition has its central meaning, which is often the theme. At the beginning of the composition, the writing method of "straight to the point" is often used, which goes straight to the subject and does not beat around the bush, such as "The Character of Grass". At first, it can be like this:
Every spring, when the branches begin to sprout, the weeds on the roadside also begin to show a faint light green, which is the grass that people often ignore.
This is the way to write directly to the topic. A few words will get to the point relatively simply. As long as you often do composition exercises or keep a diary every day, it is often not difficult to write.
The ending paragraph is generally a summary of the central meaning of the article. Try to be concise and respond to the theme, which is what we often say, "echo from beginning to end", leaving a deep impression on readers and stimulating imagination.
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Every spring, after several strong winds, the south wind blows slowly. Inadvertently, I found that the branches gradually had new buds and the grass gradually added new green. The weeds by the roadside suddenly caught my attention. How does the grass tenaciously drill out solid land? Where there is soil, there are weeds.
Incredibly, the grass is growing tenaciously all summer, no matter how stormy it is or how hot it is. What difficulties and hardships, in front of them, have become indifferent, they are fearless. Just like the growth of a tree, as long as spring comes, it will take root and sprout. This makes me suddenly feel that the grass is so lovely, so lovable and so tenacious.
Looking at them carefully, it turns out that at first it was just one or two spikes, then a ball, and in a few days, even a piece. It's them, decorating the green of spring. Soon after the grassland turned green, all kinds of wild flowers bloomed. I suddenly realized: without grass, flowers look boring, without flowers, grass looks monotonous. It is the most beautiful only when grass and flowers are everywhere. They set each other off and become interesting, which is really a masterpiece of nature.
Unconsciously, I formed a habit. Every spring, I like to watch the germination of branches and the green of weeds. It is the grass on the ground that tells me this truth: life and the earth are both natural, and life shows its greatness in its struggle with nature. Perseverance through storms is the original meaning of life.
6. How to write the beginning and end of the composition? Say the end first, then the beginning.
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable."
Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending.
People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1, natural beam. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you are rich, you can write freely, and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool."
Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life.
It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits". Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green?
At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", and then skillfully uses Xu Zhimo.
Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on.
Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training The ancients said, "A good end is like chewing.