1. Poems about final comments (when writing comments at the end of the semester, what poems will the teacher use to express his high expectations for his classmates)
Poems about final comments (in When writing comments at the end of the semester, what verses will the teacher use to express his high expectations for his classmates?) 1. When writing comments at the end of the semester, what verses will the teacher use to express his high expectations for his classmates
Wei Wind·Qi'ao
"The Book of Songs·National Style"
Looking at Qi'ao, there are green bamboos. There are gangsters and gentlemen who are like quarrels and discussions, like grinding. The sound is seductive, the sound is loud, and the sound is loud. There are bandits and gentlemen, and they should never be ignored.
Looking at the Qi'ao, the green bamboos are green. There is a bandit gentleman whose ears are clear and his ears are as sharp as stars. The sound is seductive, the sound is loud, and the sound is loud. There are bandits and gentlemen, and they should never be ignored.
Looking at Qi'ao, the green bamboos are like bamboo rafts. There are bandits and gentlemen who are as good as gold as tin, as good as jade and gold. It's wide and broad, and heavy. He is good at teasing, not cruel.
Vernacular translation
Look at the curved banks of the Qishui River and the green bamboo forests. Mr. Gao Ya is a gentleman, who is more refined in his knowledge and more refined in his moral character. He has a solemn demeanor and a broad mind, and his status is prominent and majestic. Mr. Elegant is a true gentleman, one who is hard to forget once you see him.
Look at the curved banks of the Qishui River and the green bamboos. Mr. Elegant is a true gentleman, with beautiful jade hanging from his ears, and a hat set with gems like stars. The demeanor is solemn and broad-minded, and the status is prominent and majestic. Mr. Elegant is a true gentleman, one who is hard to forget once you see him.
Look at the curved bank of the Qishui River and the green bamboos. Mr. Gaoya is a true gentleman. He is as solid as a bronze vessel and as dignified as a jade vessel. Magnanimous and open-minded, relying on the ear of the car to move forward. His conversational humor is really funny, and no one will complain if he makes a joke.
"Guo Feng·Wei Feng·Qi'ao" is a poem praising the image of men in the ancient Chinese realist poetry collection "The Book of Songs". The poem consists of three chapters, each chapter contains nine lines. The poem adopts the technique of borrowing objects to create inspiration. Each chapter is inspired by "green bamboo". It uses the tall, green and dense green bamboo to praise the gentleman's noble character and integrity, which is the first time that bamboo is used as a metaphor for people. This poem uses a lot of metaphors. From the first chapter "like cutting, like discussing, like polishing" to the third chapter, "like gold, like tin, like a guide, like a jade", it shows a change, a process, and symbolizes the beauty of a gentleman. It lies in the acquired knowledge and cultivation, sharpening morality, and praises the gentleman's gentleness and elegance.
2. When writing comments at the end of the term, what poems will the teacher use to express his high expectations for his classmates?
The Golden Thread Clothes Tang Du Qiuniang advises you not to cherish the golden lace clothes; You cherish your youth.
Break off the flowers when they bloom, but don’t wait until there are no flowers left. Notes on Words and Sentences ⑴Golden Thread Clothes: Clothes embellished with gold threads are a metaphor for glory and wealth.
⑵ Kan: Yes, able. ⑶Zhisu: No need to hesitate.
Zhi: Direct and straightforward. ⑷Don’t wait: Don’t wait.
Vernacular translation I advise you not to cherish your luxurious gold-threaded clothes. I advise you to cherish your youth. When the flowers are blooming and it’s time to break them, you should hurry up and break them. Don’t wait until the flowers fade and only break an empty branch.
"Golden Thread Clothes" is a seven-character Yuefu poem from the Tang Dynasty, written by Du Qiuniang. This is a philosophical poem with profound meaning. It tells people not to pay attention to glory and wealth, but to cherish their youth. It can be said that it advises people to pick the fruits of love in time, and it can also be said to inspire people to Establish meritorious deeds in time, precisely because it is not very specific, it feels more connotative.
Literary Appreciation The meaning of this poem is very simple and can be summed up in one sentence: "Don't let the good times pass you by". This is originally a kind of thought and emotion that everyone has.
However, it makes readers feel that although its emotions are simple but strong, they can linger in people's hearts for a long time and have an incredible charm. Each verse of it seems to be repeating the single meaning "Don't miss the good times!" And each verse contains subtle changes, repetition but not monotony, looping but slow, forming a beautiful melody. Repeated chants emphasize cherishing time. Don't miss out on your youth.
Literally, it is a bold singing of youth and love, a passionate and candid expression. However, behind the words, there is still the main theme of "cherishing time".
Therefore, if the purpose of "taking pleasure in time" seems to be low, if the purpose of "cherishing time" is seen, it will be swaying and thought-provoking. The first and second sentences have the same pattern. They both start with "persuading you", and the word "xi" also appears twice. This is a factor of repetition in the two sentences.
But the first sentence says "I advise you not to cherish", and the second sentence says "I advise you to cherish". "Mo" and "Xu" have opposite meanings, and they form repeated changes. . These two lines of poetry are coherent.
The "gold-threaded garment" is a gorgeous and precious thing, but "I advise you not to cherish it". It can be seen that there is something far more precious than it. This is the "youth time" that "advises you not to cherish it" "Yes. As for the reason, the poem does not say it directly, but it is self-evident: "An inch of time is worth an inch of gold, and an inch of gold cannot buy an inch of time." As precious as gold, it can be obtained again, and "a thousand pieces of gold will come back again after it is gone"; However, youth only comes once to anyone, and once it passes, it will never come back.
However, many people in the world are confused about this. There are many people who love money as much as their lives and waste their time. He repeatedly "persuades you", using a dialogue tone, paying sincere greetings, with a strong sense of song, and a charming and moving charm.
The two sentences are negative and affirmative. Negating the former is to affirm the latter. It seems to be a combination of separation and reality, forming the first repetition and chant in the poem. Its melody and rhythm are slow and slow. The third and fourth sentences constitute the second repetition and chant. In terms of poetic meaning, they are almost the same as the first and second sentences, and they still mean "Don't let the good times pass you by".
In this way, in addition to the repetition between sentences, there is also a larger roundabout repetition between the first couplet and the second couplet. However, the expression techniques of the two couplets are different. The first couplet directly expresses the feelings, which is a metaphor; but the second couplet uses a metaphor, which is a metaphor.
So there is still variation in the repetition. Three and four do not have the neat sentence structure of one and two, but they are symmetrical to each other in meaning.
The upper sentence says what it would be like if there were flowers, and the next sentence says what it would be like if there were no flowers; the upper sentence says what it would be like if it had to be, and the next sentence would be like what it would be like if it were not. There are also positive and negative oppositions. The meanings of the two sentences are closely related: "If there are flowers, you must break them straight away" means "please wait until spring" from the positive side, "Don't wait until there are no flowers to break branches" means "please wait until spring" from the negative side, which is like It is a continuation of "persuading you" by sharing the same feelings repeatedly, but the tone and rhythm change from slow and slow to urgent and passionate.
The sentence "worthy of breaking - Zhi Xu Zhe" has a short rhythm and strong intensity. "Zhi Xu" is more emphasized than the previous "Xu". This is a bold song of youth and love.
The enthusiasm here is not only straightforward and bold, but also vivid and beautiful. The word "花" appears twice, and the word "Zhe" appears three times; "Xu——Mo" and so on, and "Mo——Xu" in the first couplet, naturally form a palindromic overlapping beauty.
This series of natural and wonderful repetitions of words, sentences, and couplets make the poems catchy and the language sung. In addition to the beauty of the form, its emotions change from a slow loop to a passionate turbulence, which also constitutes the internal rhythm of the poem, making people feel even more soul-stirring when read.
There is a kind of lyrics that is as simple as one or two sentences. It can be sung with a beautiful melody by a skilled composer and repeated over and over again, but it can still acquire a moving charm; and "Golden Thread Clothes" has a simple but not monotonous poetic meaning. , there are back and forth, there are changes, there are many in one, one in many, as an independent poem, it is swaying and colorful, not to mention that it was sung with a soundtrack in the Tang Dynasty, so it was widely sung. Another notable feature of this poem is its uniqueness and novelty in rhetoric.
Under normal circumstances, the metaphorical techniques in old poems are often combined and used at the beginning of the poem; while the quatrains often start with scene language and then love language. This poem goes against the usual convention. It has a mood in the poem. The poem is composed first and then compared, and the emotional words are first and then the scene words, which is unique.
The sentence "I advise you not to cherish your gold-threaded clothes" is a poem, and using things to arouse feelings also has the effect of excitement. The second couplet of the poem is a metaphor, and it is also a continuation of the poetic meaning of the previous sentence "I must cherish my youth".
Instead of using the "Geometry of Life" style of direct emotion, flowers are used to represent the good times of youth, and folded flowers are used to represent the youth of great youth. It is both vivid and beautiful, creating a world of imagery. This is the expression of art, image thinking.
Missing youth will lead to endless regret. This poem could have used idioms such as "the old man is sad" but did not use the idiom "the old man is sad" to express this meaning. Instead, it sticks to the metaphor of folding flowers. Go forward, and then create the unheard-of strange saying "no flowers are empty and branches are broken". There is no word of regret, but the three words "empty broken branches" are thought-provoking and full of artistic appeal.
3. Final comments, student comments, poetic comments, ancient poetry comments
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Jiayu:
He laughs carefree and has quite a few hobbies. He is active in class and loves to talk, and his writing expressions are not conventional. Pay attention to every detail and write carefully without being sloppy. Learn to strive for excellence and look forward to overall improvement.
Ru Hua:
Careful, skillful and willing to help others, who can match his versatility? Study hard, practice hard, work hard, be self-reliant, self-disciplined and self-study.
When Xuanda is in school, study is the first priority; he listens attentively and is good at using his brain; his grades are up to standard in both culture and sports subjects; he will keep up his efforts and reach new heights. Linying:
She has a quiet personality, is simple and alert, and is willing to use her brain to get to the bottom of things. Lay a solid foundation bit by bit, and have poetry and books in your chest and exhale like a orchid!
Chujia is in school and has high ambitions at a young age; he studies hard and is willing to use his brain; he unites his classmates and is polite to others; he actively participates in cultural and sports activities. Si Qi:
Kind-hearted, gentle-tempered, slow-tempered and fresh with a smile. His beautiful handwriting is second to none, and he often takes the initiative to speak and raise his hand. Keep your feet on the ground and your knowledge is solid, and you must not follow the crowd.
Xiaomin:
Lively, innocent and lovable, and overall her studies are not bad. It would be better if you can ask questions easily, and you will improve quickly if you work hard.
Zi Shuo:
Enthusiastic, generous and self-motivated, good at homework and speaking attentively. If you think hard, ask questions and express yourself bravely, your dreams will come true.
Chen Ying:
Smart, intelligent, innovative, and diligent in thinking. Get rid of arrogance, avoid impatience, improve efficiency, be diligent and down-to-earth, and display your talents.
Siqi:
Smart, well-behaved and beautiful in speech, quick in thinking and brave in raising her hands. Make a plan first and then act, think diligently and ask questions to get ahead.
Yu Ting:
She has a quiet and indifferent temperament, is studious, competitive and motivated.
My hobbies should be broader, and I should be more perseverant and confident in everything!
Zi Qi:
Her smile is like a spring breeze, she is cute and enthusiastic in respecting her teacher. Dare to think, dare to do and be innovative, only then can you make progress in knowledge.
Yihan:
Your smile is like a spring breeze, your personality is cheerful, friendly and sincere, you study according to the instructions of your teachers, and your homework is good but you must climb up.
Zengjie:
The lush seedlings need water, and the growing young people need hard work.
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