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Where are you from? Who are you? Where are you going? ...Only when a person has opened up time and found his connection with history, individuality and ethnic group can his life be positioned, can he have the "in and out" and coordinate system, can he have a complete feeling of his life role, can he "establish himself" and Hold the ID card of life. (Excerpt from Wang Kailing's "Being a Person with "Ancestors")
What kind of thinking did the above material trigger in you? Please write an essay of no less than 800 words based on your own experience and insights.
Teacher’s analysis
This is a theory and viewpoint material, and it is no longer a pure expression of material composition writing requirements. The omitted sentence is preceded by three consecutive questions, and the sentence after the omitted sentence is an answer to the previous question. The general method of reviewing the topic of this type of composition is to grasp the overall situation and grasp the essence. The first step is to find the key sentences, and the second is to deeply understand the key sentences and interpret them in a concrete, clear and popular way to form an accurate conception.
Key sentence one: "Where do you come from? Who are you? Where are you going?"
Tips for selecting materials: Socrates once suffered from exploring the nature of human beings A lifetime. "Who was I before I was born? Who was I when I was born? Who was I when I grew up, and who am I when I close my eyes?" This was the great confusion that Emperor Shunzhi of the Qing Dynasty could not solve for a long time. It can be seen that as long as these three questions can be effectively answered for other similar materials, you can use them appropriately in the article to express your own opinions and insights.
Key sentence 2: Only when a person gets through time and finds the connection between himself and history, individual and ethnic group, can life be positioned...
Tips for selecting materials: This material The key to the composition lies in the understanding of the answers to philosophical propositions. Wang Kailing answered these philosophical propositions with the assertion of "opening up time and finding the connection between oneself and history, individuals and ethnic groups". He has his own unique insights, which requires a certain amount of philosophical accumulation and critical thinking ability. When reviewing the question, we need to find key words such as "life positioning", "ins and outs", "life role" and "life's ID card", combined with the key sentence "open up time and find the connection between ourselves and history, individuals and ethnic groups", we can determine Wang Kailing's conclusion is to determine a person's "sense of life", that is, to be a person with "ancestors" in terms of spirit, culture, feelings and memory of scenery. If it is concrete, the scope of the selection can be refined to be a person with a motherland, a person with a hometown, and a person with family heritage. The big life experience is the cultural tradition and national history of the nation; the small life experience is the family genealogy and the history of our hometown.
The composition requires combining one’s own experience and insights, which reminds candidates to rely on the materials to start thinking, to think about individual life, life groups, and the entire human race. When selecting materials, they can use their own unique experiences to express their “sense of life.” understanding. If you understand "sense of life" perceptually, you can write excellent prose or vivid narratives; if you think rationally about the connotation of "sense of life", you can write a wonderful argumentative essay based on your own insights.
High score material
Famous quote material: "When we have people, we begin to have history." This is probably Engels, the great teacher and leader of the proletariat around the world, who needs the least A sentence that makes a profound explanation.
Material inspiration: Whoever understands the ins and outs of life will become a profound book. What is history? It is not only the words printed in the book, but also around us. Today's news is tomorrow's history. Therefore, recording the lives of people around you is also another kind of history.
News material: CCTV has a program called "Where Are the Guests Coming From?" This is a show about celebrities searching for their roots. In the first season, Yi Zhongtian, Chen Chong, Ma Weidu and others started from a few clues to explore the life trajectories and destiny details of their ancestors.
Material point: Although "Where Do We Come From" borrows from the foreign program "Who Are You" in form, it is of particularly great significance to the Chinese people because there is nothing better than traditional Chinese culture and spirit. I even recommend "recognizing our ancestors and returning to our ancestors", which can help us become "Chinese" - the kind of "Chinese" that is implicit in our bones. Yi Zhongtian wrote many works, but they were just words, but now they are words. The Chinese need a way "home". This road, once bustling with people, is now sparsely populated. This is called "people's hearts are not ancient".
Hot material: First, Jackie Chan insisted on speaking Chinese during overseas performances, and then Han Han criticized today's China, "I close my eyes and think I am in Oxford, but when I open my eyes, I am in Tianjin", denouncing the proliferation of English in China.
Material tips: As a Chinese, the first thing is to learn the mother tongue, the second thing is to inherit and carry forward the mother tongue, and then absorb the excellent foreign culture. As the mother tongue is the first language that people are born with, we have reasons to maintain it and promote it. Only by preserving and carrying forward our own traditional culture can we have the foundation for our country and be able to better absorb the cultures of other countries. Only by keeping our roots can we carry them forward.
Material practice
Looking for roots and ancestors
Wang Lixing
I accidentally opened "Smile by the Fragrant River" by Singaporean female writer You Jin. , a proverb jumped into view: "A person without ancestors will always be lonely." From this point of view, asking about ancestors is a good way for people to get rid of loneliness.
Where are the ancestors? In my hometown. In the place where our blood originates, the stories of our ancestors continue to happen and be passed down, and generations of people are born and die. People in their hometown are blessed, because they have opened up time and can wander into the stories of their ancestors, so that they can answer the three questions of the soul with sufficient confidence: Where are you from? Who are you? Where are you going? After that, they will finally find their place in life.
Sadly, Chinese people today often regret it after forgetting their ancestors. Wang Kailing once talked about such a friend in his book: he left his hometown to work hard in Beijing. After many years, he finally earned a house in this land with a lot of money. But one day when she was looking downstairs at the "home" she had sacrificed her youth for, she found that among the densely packed windows, she couldn't tell which one was hers. A huge feeling of weightlessness overwhelmed her.
Yes, an empty house, crowded among thousands of identical houses. In such a place, no "ancestor" can be found, no roots can grow, and loneliness will crush everything here. On a certain midnight in complete silence, it made people shed tears that they did not understand the reason for. Without ancestors and lost hometown, people feel so lonely that they feel like they are about to die.
So how should we ask our ancestors? I thought that I might as well go back to my hometown and find the roots of my life in the place where my blood originated. After that, our lives will be connected by the word "ancestor". From now on, we will no longer drift with the wind, but can thrive, because our hometown can take root everywhere. No wonder the "son of nature" Yesenin also said: "I will be victorious when I return to my hometown."
This reminds me of Solzhenitsyn, who once treated his compatriots coldly and wandered abroad for half his life. I still returned to my motherland. This great lion-like writer said with profound eyes: "Understanding the past means no future." So he returned to the place where his ancestors were, found his roots under the apple tree after the rain in his hometown, and life could continue. .
And Haizi also shouted loudly: "I want to return home/I want to turn back to my hometown/I want to be silent or talk loudly under the sky of my hometown/!" Yes, we in the independent world need this of seeking roots. Whether we return to our hometown or visit our ancestors, no matter how we do it, we should ask about our ancestors and homeland. Then the wind from the ancestors' world will drag away the confusing smoke and clouds, allowing us to see clearly the coordinates of our lives.
Go back and smell the smell of your hometown, which contains the smell of ancestors and roots. Asking about ancestors and seeking roots is to find the soul’s way home.
Teacher comments
It is human nature to look for roots and ancestors. This article is an excellent exercise in exploring the "sense of life experience" based on "Searching for Roots and Asking Ancestors". At the beginning, I quote You Jin's words and click on the word "asking about my ancestors" in the title. In the second paragraph, I elaborate on the content of the material. Then I use the example of "Chinese people often regret after forgetting their ancestors" to analyze and quote You Jin's words to tell the story of whether there is no There is a reason why ancestors will feel a huge sense of weightlessness when they lose their hometown. Then, the importance of root-seeking is explained and analyzed through materials such as Yesenin, Solzhenitsyn, and Haizi. The arguments are sufficient, the reasoning is concise, and the logic is strong.