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Please write an article of no less than 800 words on the topic of "passing by".

Note: 1, self-determination. 2. Choose your own style, except poetry. 3. Please don't copy or copy. 4. Do not disclose personal information. 5, writing norms, the correct use of punctuation.

Examination of problems

"Passing by" is a good topic, which can lead to infinite association. Passing by, which means "passing by on the way", can lead to infinite association. In fact, it can refer to passing through a place, enjoying the beautiful and peculiar natural scenery, witnessing some memorable events, meeting someone and starting an emotional experience; You can also refer to a period of history in vain and feel the law of historical philosophy and the development of human society. At the same time, you can pass by the deeds of some outstanding people, feel their integrity, enhance your understanding of life and enrich your life accumulation.

Students can talk about the short course of life and cherish the value of life. It can awaken the sense of social responsibility, pass by without indifference, care for others and create a harmonious atmosphere. It can arouse poetic associations. For example, Cuihu passes by Duhu South Village and meets peach blossoms, which makes people feel sorry for the Millennium. Passers-by are kissing horses in front of Sifu's window. The appearance of the season is like the opening and falling of lotus flowers. It is a beautiful mistake for the horseshoe to "win". Chang Shuhong, 1935, passed by Boccio's Catalogue of Dunhuang Grottoes at the old bookstall on the Seine River, making him the "patron saint of Dunhuang". After suffering, he never looked back, and buried his bones in the desert forever ... countless beautiful poems, stories of celebrities, people and things around you can all be writing materials.

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Luo Jieying

If you are just passing by, please don't disturb. -inscription

In the sun, I opened an adobe and immediately overturned a small world: a group of ants scattered and hid; A multi-legged worm can't spread its legs; There are also a few bugs that don't know that sentence, which are tender and white, like a few grass buds, lying stiffly in the sun. I think I did a bad thing. Perhaps just now, the ants were enjoying the cool, the polypod was taking a nap, and those grass-bud-like insects just wanted to keep themselves warm and white and face the world quietly.

Gently, I put the adobe back, but I can't be calm anymore. I am just a passer-by, but I disturb the dream of this world. This is a sin. Perhaps only by passing by undisturbed can we get the peace of our world.

Xu Zhimo met Lin in his early years and branded her beautiful image in his heart. The ends of the earth, follow her. But Lin doesn't love him. When Xu Zhimo knew that Lin and Liang Sicheng were deeply attached to each other, he chose to quietly pull away from Lin's life and never bother her again, only collecting her smile in his heart. "I am looking for the only soul mate in the vast sea of people, and I am fortunate to get it; Lost, my life. " Singing such a sentence, Xu Zhimo finally positioned himself as a passerby. After the blessing, he resigned to his fate and retired from the forest world.

Passing by, but not disturbing. Xu zhimo for the happiness of his sweetheart. I didn't insist, just endured the sadness, survived this sad and happy secret love, and let Lin's life not be disturbed. Who can say that this is not the dedication of the poet's wisdom?

Just a while ago, I heard that in order to build Metro Line 3, Nanjing planned to cut down or transplant many century-old buttonwood trees that stood in the planning line. Seeing that the tragedy is about to happen, Nanjing citizens immediately take action: tie a ribbon on the old buttonwood tree and recite their love affectionately under the tree, so as to awaken the increasingly numb heart of city managers and catch up with the "China speed". There are also environmental volunteers actively petitioning for the "tree" and calling on relevant departments to change the original plan. Write and call the Urban Planning Administration frequently. Finally, the relevant departments changed the subway line, bypassing those ancient and lovely creatures, and citizens could feel the light leaves under the trees again.

The subway passes by the buttonwood trees, bypassing them and leaving them alone, so that they can continue to guard the beautiful ancient capital of the Six Dynasties. Who can not say that this is the wisdom of China people?

Crossing the dream world without disturbing; Walk through other people's lives without interruption; Walk through the embrace of nature without disturbing. If you are just passing by, please don't disturb, the world is quiet.

Passing by, but not disturbing. It is the great wisdom of life.

Comments: This composition is not difficult to examine, but it is more difficult to write features. Many students express kindness, dedication, wisdom and choice in a flat way. This article expresses the viewpoint of "passing by and disturbing". The article is light and knowledgeable, especially "not disturbing" is indeed a rare realm. There are too many things that like to disturb others now, and Taoist inaction has been replaced by omnipotence. The mainstream of our future society needs this kind of knowledge too much.

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Dong

Night has fallen, the noisy city is calm, and only the newsstand next to the dark street is still shining with a faint light, which always makes me feel a little puzzled. Yes, every time I pass this newsstand, I am moved by what I see.

The birds singing in the morning broke the silence of the night, and I started a new day with sleepy eyes. When I rode past this newsstand, I saw an old man busy. He is the owner of this newsstand, in his sixties. His movements were amazing: he picked up the newspapers one by one and put them on the table, pressing them tightly with iron ruler. No impatience, no sound. He is not sorting out newspapers, but sorting out works of art one by one. At that moment, the fatigue and irritability brought by getting up early disappeared. Yes, the old people don't regard all this as complicated work, but regard it as a part of life, complete it with heart, feel it with heart and enjoy it with heart. So you won't feel tired, you will feel the value and meaning of life. Thanks to the old man, I can calm my fidgety mood.

The rising of the sun awakened the city from its deep sleep, and the quiet streets were reborn here. People come and go, and the old man's newsstand becomes lively. Most of the people who come to buy newspapers from the old man are regular customers. People who buy newspapers choose the newspapers they need before the newsstand, put the money in the iron box next to them, and turn around and leave. This seemingly ordinary move made me very moved: the old man trusted his customers, and the customers also believed in the old man's humanity, and the flower of humanity quietly bloomed at this moment. There are no earth-shattering scenes, no tearful words, but people's hearts are infinitely moved. Thanks to the old man, I felt the warmth and strength of human nature in this complex world when I passed by your newsstand!

The scorching sun at noon made the streets calm again, and people began their lunch break after dinner. In a clearing in front of the old man's newsstand, several old people are fighting on the chessboard. The newsstand owner leaned back in the chair under the tree and closed his eyes. He can't seem to hear cicadas and the noise of fighter planes ... his face is quiet and leisurely. Although life is not rich, people feel his happiness and detachment everywhere. Yes, things outside the body disturb our lives too much, and too much material demand makes our hearts have nowhere to park. Thanks for passing by, thanks to the old man, let me feel the true meaning of life in this boring afternoon and pursue the direction of happiness!

Night comes again. When everything is silent again, you are still waiting in the dark, waiting for the workers who come back from the night shift. The faint light stretches your slender figure longer. This kind of waiting is not for money, but to bring a little comfort to a tired heart. Not too many emotional encounters, not too many language embellishments, eye contact and hand-in-hand warmth are the best expressions of love and responsibility!

In my life journey, I am glad to have such a newsstand, I am glad to have such an old man, and I am glad to pass by every day. Passing by here, I saw the most beautiful scenery in the world; Passing by here, I see the brilliance of human nature; Passing by here, I feel the value and significance of life.

Thanks to the newsstand, thanks to the elderly, thanks for passing by!

Comment: The little author of this paper turned his attention to life and paid attention to ordinary people. He carefully selected four scenes: preparing in the morning, selling newspapers during the day, taking a nap at noon and waiting at night. He described an old man's life in the newsstand in the chronological order of one day, which seemed casual, but showed an old man's positive attitude towards life, life and others from different aspects. The casual description conveyed the author's understanding of social life. Plain narration is not without skill: the structure is round from night to night, and the light is weak but warm; Clever tailoring of four scenes; In the last scene, there is a natural transition from the third person to the second person, which is more lyrical; What is more worth mentioning is a strong sense of topic selection. The theme explanation after each material is convenient for the marking teacher and also enhances his awareness of topic deduction. How to deduce the questions naturally is particularly important in marking the college entrance examination.

Prepare suggestions:

Observe life with your heart and learn to think about life. The vividness of life needs to be captured by heart. Second, learn to cut. After determining the topic or choosing the topic, we should mobilize the accumulation of life, choose it properly, pay attention to interpreting the topic from different aspects, and avoid repeated planarization of materials. Finally, consciously use writing skills. Determine the writing clues, carefully choose the symbolic intention, pay attention to the repetition and reinforcement of some details, render the environment, contrast sharply, and skillfully use rhetoric to make the language vivid. The use of skills is to make emotional expression better and more natural. Never show off your skills.

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Qing Li

Zhang ailing said, among thousands of people, meet the person you foresee; In thousands of years, in the boundless wilderness of time, there is neither an early step nor a late step, we just arrived.

Xi Murong once wrote that the Buddha prayed for 500 years in his last life, only to get a look back in this life.

What a precious fate this is!

If it's a wet blanket, the probability of two people passing by on earth is one in six billion. It's unlikely, but it really happened! So cherish our journey and cherish every encounter in life.

The Wenchuan earthquake seems to be fading out of people's memory, but one of the fragments makes me remember it vividly. That is a girl trapped in a crack in the ruins. It was difficult to lift her neck every day, surrounded by crumbling walls, and she persisted for 57 hours. She was still trying to look up at the sky when the rescuers rescued her. She said, "I saw a bird fly by!" " "Everyone froze, and then the girl pursed her lips and said," When I couldn't hold on, I saw a bird. "A bird came into her sight, and the passing of one life aroused the hope of another. Such a passing is hope!

Passing by should not be indifference. The indifference of the 18 passers-by in the "Little Yue Yue Incident" once again hit our boiling hearts and made people feel cold. If the city has a kind of pain, it should be this kind of pain! Although the "supporting body" blog of the vice president of Peking University is funny, it has left us endless meditation after laughing. If you pass by "Xiaoyueyue" or grandparents, will you reach out? Will you reach out and pick up "Xiaoyueyue" to help grandma regardless of being misunderstood and worldly gossip? I don't know the answer, but I think passing by is a responsibility!

Stendhal's tombstone is engraved with the words "I lived, loved and wrote", which reminds me of Caesar's famous saying "I came, I saw, I won", both of which are heroic. Humans have a passing mentality, because the universe is so big and the wilderness of time is so vast. Man is just a reed in this vast universe, thin and helpless, and will die in a blink of an eye. Heaven and earth are opposite, and life passes by. Yang li Ping said that she would like to be a bystander of life. She came to this world to see how clouds float and how water flows. Yang li Ping understood life, so did Stendhal and Caesar. This kind of transmission is poetic.

All the roads converge into a brightly lit river. There is a clear voice on the river. Listen, it's saying, "Passing by is fate. Please cherish such a pass! "

Comments: This article is an essay with mixed feelings. It revolves around the theme of "passing by is fate, cherish passing by", which is imaginative and easy to put away. Many students also hold the idea that "passing by is fate, cherish passing by" when reviewing questions. This article stands out from the extensive and rich accumulated materials. At the beginning of writing, a long sentence in Zhang Ailing's novel Love suddenly caught the reader's heart. Xi Murong's poems have created a strong literary meaning. The article is rich in materials, widely drawn from all over the world, including the experience of ordinary people (Wenchuan girl) and the philosophical speculation of great men (Stendhal's epitaph), which not only pays attention to reality (Xiaoyueyue incident, supported by Professor Peking University), but also poetic life. Rich materials come from her daily reading accumulation, which also highlights her ability to master materials skillfully. In fact, these materials have been used many times in other compositions.

Prepare suggestions:

Many students like to write prose, and the biggest feature of prose is "scattered in form and gathered in spirit". Therefore, it is necessary to carefully accumulate materials, enrich materials and temper sentences to make sentences meaningful, so as to achieve the purpose of adding color to the composition. In the later period, the composition review is mainly to write by yourself without listening to the teacher, and insist on practicing writing once every two weeks. Improve your writing ability and express your true feelings by using the materials in your life. At the same time, we should pay attention to political, economic, scientific and cultural events and accumulate writing materials. Pay attention to the following points: ① pay attention to training the ability to examine questions. Even the open composition in recent years, it is difficult to write a good article with profound content if the questions are not properly examined; Pay attention to life, excellent cultural traditions and society, enrich your thoughts and improve your cognitive ability; ③ Pay attention to the universality, flexibility and creativity of thinking, encourage innovation and strengthen the training of innovative thinking on the basis of writing good rules and regulations; (4) Strengthen ideological cultivation, pay special attention to healthy and positive thoughts, conform to the mainstream ideological trend advocated by society, and conduct conscious ideological and emotional training; ⑤ Pay attention to expression, make good use of rhetoric, flexible sentence patterns and even the proper use of punctuation, pay equal attention to love and writing, and strengthen targeted training.

Xiashui composition

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The sun passes through the earth, warming the snow, the glaciers and the whole winter;

The spring breeze passes through the earth, blowing green the green hills, blowing green vilen and wrinkling a pool of spring water;

Spring rain passes through the earth, nourishing seedlings, flowers and plants, and nourishing the lush everywhere.

Dear friends, what should I leave behind when I pass by the post station of life and the scenery along the way?

It is said that life is like a play, and everyone is the protagonist on this huge stage, either sad or happy, or sad or happy; In fact, life is more like a trip. We are all long or short travelers, and we are all appreciators of the scenery on both sides along the way, either stopping to stare or taking a quick look. The person who stops appreciates the scenery, and at the same time he becomes the scenery in the eyes of others; People in a hurry missed the scenery and became veritable passers-by on this trip. Li Baiyun, a time traveler, has been a traveler for hundreds of generations. In that case, should we be residents rather than passers-by?

Passing by requires a correct attitude towards life. On the night of Xunyang Jiangtou, I heard Yue Xian, who was only in the sky. As a disgraced person, Bai Letian did not become a passer-by, but dismounted, boarded the boat, gave a banquet, listened to the pipa and made a pipa for you. A "Pipa Journey" has become an eternal swan song. Su Shi lived in eight States all his life and went through hardships. Although he is like a boat, he always maintains an optimistic and open-minded attitude towards life. In Chibi, Huangzhou, he stopped at the Yangtze River and realized life among the cool breeze and the bright moon, so he left the "Red Cliff Fu" which was circulated through the ages. Huangzhou became an important post station in Su Shi's life, and also completed a cultural breakthrough that will go down in history forever. It is Su Shi's luck to stop like this, and it is also the great fortune of our descendants.

When passing by, you also need to keep a positive attitude. "What kind of life is everywhere? It should be Hong Fei stepping through the snow. " Nine times out of ten, people who are unhappy in life will sigh that it is useless, and the only thing they can do is to act. Tao Yuanming once passed the officialdom, but was unexpectedly sent to meet him. He was preoccupied with something, which made him feel uncomfortable. So, he left the official seal ribbon behind, ran in the forest like a bird with joy, rode the starlight, stepped on the morning fog, carried a hoe and crutches, planted chrysanthemums at the edge of Nanshan, and wandered in the country. He wafted a thousand-year-old chrysanthemum fragrance, and the leisurely Nanshan has become a spiritual home guarded by people. Tao Yuanming did not pass by passively, but wandered in the officialdom, wasting his life. Instead, he chose the countryside, found the inspiration of poetry, and achieved the reputation of "pastoral recluse poet".

Passing by, you need to be grateful. Love is the warmest placenta in life, and loving or being loved is the eternal blood of life. When we pass by every post station in life, we can't live without the blessing of love. This requires us to abandon indifference and choose to help each other. We despise passers-by walking beside Yue, and we are moved by Krym who helps others by making money with kebabs. We despise those unfilial descendants who abandon their loved ones for their own selfish interests. We were moved by Meng Peijie, who has taken care of her unrelated mother for more than ten years. Compassion is on the left and love is on the right. Only in this way can life be happy all the way. This kind of life is called passing by in vain.

Cao Mengde's poem says: The geometry of life is like morning dew. Because he is eager for talents to unify the world; Su Dongpo's words say: Life is like a dream, you go out early and return late. That's when he lamented that his achievements were not completed and his ambitions were not paid. Nowadays, when we are traveling, we should be generous and hold fast to the clouds, otherwise it will be a waste of time and sadness!