Two basic methods of task-driven composition writing
Note: This article is suitable for students who are new to task-driven composition writing. It has an obvious structure, clear ideas, and clear structure. The idea is suitable for examination composition. This article is from Chinese Monthly. For more details, please follow the WeChat official account of Chinese Monthly.
One of the methods: state the reasons and solve the problem thoroughly
——The basic framework of "task-driven composition" writing
The full name of task-driven composition It is a task-driven composition based on new narrative materials. Its essence is what some places call "current commentary" composition. Its essence is still composition based on materials, but on the basis of materials, clear directional tasks are added to enhance the purpose of writing and prevent duplication. This kind of essay question focuses on testing students' attitudes and views on a thing or social phenomenon, the depth and breadth of thinking, and the clarity and clarity of expression. Therefore, when writing this kind of composition, some basic things are indispensable. Only by possessing the basic elements can we meet the requirements; only by possessing the basic framework can we be invincible in the examination room.
What are the components of the basic framework of task-driven composition? The author believes that there are five parts as follows.
(1) A resounding title
On the basis of reviewing the topic, clarify the intention, choose the writing angle, and formulate an eye-catching title. This title should try to be a "core idea" extracted from the material, and a concise phrase or sentence composed of key phrases in the material. Try to use opinions or opinions instead of attitudes. It would be better to use conventional words and phrases to modify them. It would be even more ideal if you can do something new and different.
(2) Quote + Expression + Opinion
The first paragraph of the text uses the form of "Quote + Expression + Opinion" to achieve the effect of "dazzling debut". Quotes can be direct or indirect, but they must be specific. The stance must be firm, decisive and clear. When presenting your opinions, don't be vague, but get straight to the point.
(3) Point-by-point explanation of reasons
With attitudes and opinions, it will not stand without reasons. Therefore, the third step of the essay must explain your reasons. The explanation must be organized, that is, divided into points; we must also pay attention to the hierarchical nature of the content, such as from shallow to deep, from surface to interior, from concrete to abstract, etc. Only in this way can the depth and breadth of a student's thinking be demonstrated.
(4) Further in-depth explanation
This step is difficult for ordinary students to perform. How can we go deeper? The author believes that the most basic method is to propose feasible and contemporary solutions to the problem, that is, to solve the problem. In addition, you can also "expand horizontally", "excavate vertically" and conduct simple criticism. Especially for refutation, you can preset the opposite side and then use tactful persuasion to reflect the author's thoroughness of thinking and meet the requirements of "civilized reasoning" in task-based compositions.
(5) Connect with reality and finish quickly.
Any article must consider its practical significance. If it does not have practical significance, the article will be much inferior
. Therefore, whether it is student homework or examination composition, it is necessary to connect it with reality. However,
this link should not be too grandiose. It should be like a piece of music that has been played and ends suddenly, with endless aftertaste.
An exercise is composed of the above five components. It is already well-formed and satisfactory. If you can add some necessary condiments, such as ginger, onion, and garlic to dishes, then it will be Can get high scores and praise.
Example Analysis
Read the following materials and write an article of no less than 800 words as required.
In order to supervise students' learning, Teacher Jiao from a certain vocational and technical college came up with a "new trick" of using WeChat to send red envelopes after class. He also sent red envelopes to students with high attendance, good academic performance and serious class. Got a red envelope. As soon as this move came out, none of the students in his class skipped class, the classroom atmosphere was active, and the teacher-student relationship became better. When the incident came out, teachers and students at the school expressed their approval and felt that this approach was innovative. After media reports, controversy arose. Some parents clearly opposed the teacher's approach, believing that using "money" to guide students to attend classes would make children utilitarian and make education taste bad.
What do you think about the above matter? Please express your attitude and your views on the performance of Teacher Jiao, students or parents. It is required to comprehensively integrate the content and meaning of the materials, choose a good angle, determine the intention, and complete the writing task.
Teaching and educating people should also have "new tricks" (concise and loud titles)
In order to supervise students' learning, Teacher Jiao from a certain vocational and technical college came up with the idea of ??using WeChat to send messages after class The "new trick" of red envelopes is to give red envelopes to students with good attendance, good academic performance and seriousness in class. As soon as this move came out, teachers and students recognized it, and it caused controversy in the society. Some parents thought that this would make education taste bad. I think Teacher Jiao is an innovative teacher. In such a dull educational background, there should indeed be new strategies for teaching and educating people in order to activate the positive energy of education. (Quotation + Attitude + Opinion)
First of all, the traditional way of educating people is based on the class collective teaching system. The exam-oriented education based on indoctrination makes students resistant and bored, which is far from the goal of education. Purpose.
Under such circumstances, it is natural for teachers to adopt some new tricks that adapt to the times. Only by constantly updating methods can the motivation for learning be continuously activated.
Secondly, WeChat’s new method of sending red envelopes has obvious effects. No one skipped class in Teacher Dajiao's class. The classroom atmosphere was lively and the teacher-student relationship was very good. Regardless of the durability of its effect, at this point, the feasibility of the new trick has been proven.
Thirdly, if the new thing of "giving out red envelopes" can be organically integrated with the traditional teaching and educating methods, it can also provide people with a new way of thinking and educational concepts. For example, in the Internet age, making good use of mobile technology to guide and educate students everywhere will surely stimulate countless energy. Therefore, Teacher Jiao’s new strategy is sure to create ripples in the education world. (The reasons are explained in detail)
Some parents are clearly opposed to the teacher's approach, believing that using "money" to guide students to attend classes will make children utilitarian and make education taste bad. Indeed, modern students have grown up in a "materialistic" environment. Blindly using money to guide learning is very likely to become utilitarian and change the taste of education. However, education cannot be timid or hold back because of certain risks. As long as it is "after class" and "with small money", the method is appropriate, the cost is kept constant, and the red envelope is used to motivate while still focusing on spiritual influence and positive education, new actions such as giving out red envelopes will definitely play an important role in activating education. Auxiliary effect. (Presupposed opposition, simple refutation)
As the old saying goes: follow the teacher and believe in the way. Sending red envelopes can bring students closer to their teachers, and it goes without saying that they “believe in their teachings”. Another saying goes: Teaching and learning. Students' enthusiasm for learning is aroused by red envelopes. Then, students' enthusiasm will inevitably affect the teacher's enthusiasm, and the purpose of "mutual growth" will eventually be achieved. The key to a teacher’s charm lies in academics and personality. If a teacher can rely closely on his own academic and personality charm, supplemented by new and ingenious methods, he will surely make various factors complement each other, form a synergy, and promote a huge improvement in the function of teaching and educating people. (Horizontal expansion)
Today, education in our country is full of difficulties due to various reasons. A few more teachers like Mr. Jiao who are unwilling to be mediocre and dare to innovate and come up with more new methods will surely be able to break through. Amidst all the gloom, we are on the road to becoming a powerful nation in education. (Contact with reality, finish quickly)
Comments
This exercise is basically written according to the five-part basic framework. The reasoning is clear, organized, deep and broad, with appropriate quotations. The famous quote has strong contemporary significance and is a rare and excellent essay worthy of reference by candidates.