Diligence is like a pair of strong wings, which lays a solid foundation for the bird's departure; diligence is like a cluster of gorgeous flowers, which makes the conqueror's journey fragrant; diligence is like a magical paintbrush, which makes the journey more fragrant. The life of a humble person is filled with rich colors. It's a good start. I suggest that it would be better to clarify the point further, don't you think?

Diligence is the mother of success. Only by hard work can we overcome many hardships and lead our lives out of difficulties and towards success. The cohesion between sentences should be natural~~ Chen Shan grew up in a poor family, and he used all his time to do part-time jobs to pay for school fees. Although the busy life took up most of Chen Shan's study time, he still studied diligently until late at night every day without stopping. In the end, his diligence allowed him to be admitted to a publicly funded graduate school. Just imagine, given Chen Shan's conditions, if he had not had the spirit of diligence, his life would not have changed much, and he might have lived a mediocre life. However, The spirit of diligence reshaped Chen Shan in a different way, leading him step by step towards the glory of life. It was diligence that created his brilliant life. It can be seen that hard work creates a brilliant life. Argumentative papers must focus on the arguments and arguments for careful analysis, otherwise it will be difficult to support the arguments~~

This reminds me of Einstein’s famous saying: “Genius = 99% diligence +1% inspiration. "The final symbol of the quotation should be placed within quotation marks, which is a complete quotation~~ Song Lian of the Ming Dynasty practiced this famous saying. When he was young, his family was poor, so he often borrowed books and read diligently. Once he borrowed a book, he would copy it day and night. Even in the cold weather and the inkstone water froze, he would not stop writing until his hands lost consciousness. When encountering difficulties, even if you are hungry and your feet are cracked by cold, you still have to look for teachers everywhere. With decades of hard study, he finally became an important minister of the Ming Dynasty. Diligence made Song Lian's life a success and made him immortal in history. Diligence creates a brilliant life! Mei Lanfang became a famous artist of his generation because of his hard work. Mei Lanfang's eyes were dull and dull in his early years. So he would stare at the flying birds in the sky every morning, chasing them until his eyes were blurry. In the afternoon, he would look down at the goldfish and look for their shadows until nightfall. Day after day, year after year, practice without stopping. Finally, his eyes were as clear as water and full of affection, and he became a famous artist of his generation. It can be seen that it was hard work that allowed Mei Lanfang to enter the dazzling art palace and achieve his glorious life. Diligence will eventually lead to success! List two typical examples in a row. The selection of examples is appropriate, but the analysis is far from enough. I suggest you imitate the analysis at the first level of argumentation and make appropriate modifications, okay?

Coincidentally, Einstein spent most of his life in diligent study. He only sleeps 6 hours a day and spends the rest of his time exploring new knowledge. Over the past three months, he has piled up a mountain of experimental reports with errors that he discarded. After countless days and nights of hard work, he overcame all kinds of difficulties and obstacles one by one with diligence. Finally, he became famous in the world with "The Theory of Relativity" and became a scientific leader. Just imagine, if Einstein was not diligent enough, how could he become a scientific giant? Where do we start talking about the "Theory of Relativity" that has been civilized through the ages? It is hard work that makes Einstein brilliant forever. Beethoven practiced the piano so hard that his fingers became hot; Michelangelo concentrated on painting zenith flowers and ended up with a deformed body; Hugo practiced writing so hard that he forgot to sleep and eat all day long. Their outstanding achievements are the result of diligence, which makes them strong. It is recommended not to list too many examples of the same type, which can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue. It is recommended to give examples from another angle, such as analyzing from the negative side, which also forms a positive and negative contrast with the previous ones, don’t you think?

Guo Moruo once said: "The full development of talent is directly proportional to one's diligent study and practice." Yes! As long as we hold the key to diligence, we can open the door to success and move towards glory.

Therefore, diligence can create a brilliant life! Wrapping up the main points and restating them appropriately, very concise and beautiful