1. How to write the beginning of a composition

1. Get straight to the point and get straight to the topic

Narratives that focus on writing about people can directly describe the characters or through dialogue with their portraits. Descriptions of actions, actions, etc., go directly to the title; narratives that focus on narrative can point out the time, place and relevant background of the event at the beginning. For example:

1. Her name is Wang Qianqian, and she was the class monitor when I was in the second grade of junior high school. Although we have been separated for more than a year, the anecdotes of the class monitor are still vivid in my mind and unforgettable. ("There is such a good monitor")

2. Teacher Tang is sick. When the evening class was about to end, the students all sat in their seats sadly. The classroom was as silent as stagnant water. ("True Love")

2. Describe the scenery and exaggerate the atmosphere

Start with the description of the scenery, exaggerate the atmosphere, set off the characters and unfold the story . Such as:

1. During the flower blooming season, the fragrance is everywhere, but I have no intention of watching it, because at this time I lost my classmate Qiang ("Classmate Friend")

2. The morning sun comes out, and the lake dresses it up; the new moon comes up, and the stars accompany it; the spring flowers bloom, and the green leaves set it off; the birds sing, and the crickets play the piano for it... Everything in the world is telling us Love story. ("Love Forever")

3. The summer night is very deep. Occasionally, the sound of frogs in the water and the sound of cicadas on the trees can be heard, and the breeze blows, bringing a hint of coolness. I pondered and couldn't fall asleep for a long time. When I was in my first year of high school, by chance, my debut novel was published in the newspaper. I was so happy that I forgot about everything. ("Love, Invisible")

3. Lyrical discussion to set the tone

Use a few brief comments and appropriate lyricism to start the article or to impress the readers , or point out the main idea and lead to the following. Such as:

1. Summer vacation is finally here. Like a little bird that I have been waiting for for a long time, I suddenly burst out of the "birdcage" and flew to my grandma's house in the countryside to relax my muscles and breathe fresh air. of air. I decided to learn to roller skate during this summer vacation. ("I Can Do It")

2. Grandpa is my favorite relative. I spent my childhood at my grandfather's house. Grandpa held my hand and taught me how to walk. It was grandpa who made me understand a lot of truths since I was a child. I regard my grandfather as a crutch for my childhood. ("I Love Grandpa")

4. Set up suspense and lead to the following

Setting up suspense at the beginning can catch the reader's heart at once, inspire people to think, and play a fascinating role. Effect. For example: 1. The wall clock is walking calmly and rhythmically. "Tick-tock" and "tick-tock" are almost 4 o'clock. Why hasn't mom come back? ("Worry")

2. What will my tomorrow be like? When I am running between two points and one line of life, when I am struggling in the endless sea of ??questions, I often ask myself this. ("Facing Tomorrow")

5. Quoting poetry to highlight the center

Starting with a witty quote from a poem or a famous aphorism can not only stimulate the reader's imagination and interest, but also improve the The taste of the article; it can not only reveal the main content, but also highlight the characters and events. For example: "A person's biggest enemy is himself. As long as you believe you can do it, you will be successful." This is my favorite quote. Whenever I see it and the report card that is no longer clear in front of my bed, the dreamlike past appears in front of my eyes. ("Past Events") 2. How to start a composition about going out for fun?

The beginning of a composition about traveling: 1. I want to go to Hainan Island, which is full of coconut trees.

You can swim, play in the sand, and sit on the beach while drinking coconut juice and basking in the sun. It is a good place for leisure.

2. Today I used building blocks to build a house that can be used for traveling. The house also comes with a car that can be used to buy groceries! This makes it easier to go grocery shopping! I asked my mother, if there was such a house, would you buy it? My mother said, "Of course I want to buy it! Because you can travel with the house, you don't have to spend money to stay in a hotel! That's great!" 3. A few days ago, the three of us went to Jiuru Mountain in the southern mountainous area of ??Jinan. It was about ten o'clock when we got there. When I looked at the huge Jiuru Mountain, I thought it would take a long time to play enough. I asked the ticket inspector at the door how long it would take to play it all. The ticket inspector The answer surprised me, the fastest is four hours, my God, 4 hours! There is no other way, just take your time.

4. Today we are going to Penglai with Lu Haihai and his family. I am so happy. We set off at 6 o'clock in the morning. Dad drove the car and we arrived in about 2 hours. We first We went to Penglai Pavilion. Because there are 2 islands in Penglai, we took a speedboat to a small island and played on the beach there for a while. 3. How to write the beginning of a travel composition

How to write a travel composition

1. Describe the scenery in the order of the tour. When writing, you should carefully observe and memorize the scenery you visit, and write down the scenery you see in the order you see it. Only in this way can it be clear, natural, and clear, and avoid clutter. There are usually two ways to observe scenery. One is fixed-point observation. For example, stand in a corner of the park and observe the park from far to near. Another example is when we climb to the top of the tower and observe the scenery below the tower from the four directions of southeast, northwest and northwest. The second is mobile observation, which is also called the step-by-step transposition method. Just change the position with the movement of your footsteps and observe one place at a time. Once you have chosen the observation point, you have determined the order in which you will write. For example, in the text "Visiting the Great Hall of the People", the author writes about the scenery in five places in the order he visited. First, write the national emblem and pillars at the main entrance of the General Assembly Hall, then the ceiling and floor of the central hall, then the auditorium, and then the banquet hall and conference hall. In this way, the scene that the author saw in the Great Hall was written down in an organized and focused manner.

2. Grasp the key points of the tour and write the process in detail. During a tour, we saw a lot of scenery, and we cannot keep a "running account". You should write down the things that impressed you most among the scenery you saw, and the rest can be written briefly. While we were visiting, we also wanted to capture the characteristics of the objects and observe them carefully. For example, if we want to write a narrative focusing on the scenery we saw during our trip, the focus of writing is to focus on writing down the scenery we saw. For the particularly good scenery we see, we need to describe it in detail and highlight the key points. For key scenery, pay attention to describing their location, movement, static, color, etc. in detail. For example, when we write "chrysanthemum", the color can be "red like maple leaves, white like frost, yellow like wheat ears", etc., and the shape of chrysanthemum can be like "little girl's curly hair, fluffy chick, hydrangea" etc. wait. We need to write the process in detail and concretely, so that the priorities are clear and the details are appropriate. Only then can the written articles highlight the key points and be clear and understandable. Only then can the meaning of the tour be written and have educational significance.

3. Briefly describe the before and after, combining emotion, reason and scenery. When we write travel notes, we should write the beginning and end briefly. Be clear about the time, place and people at the beginning. For example, "A Tour to Shanjuan Cave" begins with "There is a famous tourist attraction in Yixing, Jiangsu, my hometown - Shanjuan Cave." At the end, you should write down your feelings in an argumentative or lyrical way. For example, at the end of "Natural Zoo Wandering Notes", "'Haha...' We ended this happy outing with laughter. The fun of visiting the Jukumi Natural Zoo is endless. No wonder people from all over the world visit it. There’s an endless stream of people.” In this way, the article written has a beginning and an end, and gives a complete impression when read. We need to melt our emotions into the scenery and write our true meaning. When writing, we have to pour our thoughts and feelings into it. Also, while writing about the scenery, we either explore the true meaning of life, or talk about ideological issues and academic spirit, so that readers can be inspired and educated while appreciating the natural scenery

Travel notes are the most difficult thing for primary school students to write. A kind of composition, because as the journey progresses, there are countless scenes witnessed and heard, and it is difficult to organize the materials properly, so it is often written as a running account.

How to write a clear and detailed account of your travel itinerary? How to avoid writing travel notes as introductions to attractions?

The most troublesome thing for everyone is that travel involves a long time and many scenic spots. How can I write it in a way that does not look like a running account but has its own characteristics?

The first is "giving up". Only by learning to give up can we have a focused description. There are so many attractions that it would be difficult to describe them all in detail. Only by highlighting the most distinctive places can we write out the characteristics and clearly describe the travel experience. For example, if you travel to Yunnan, you will see the Stone Forest in Kunming, the Erhai Lake in Dali, the ancient city of Lijiang, and the Jade Dragon Snow Mountain. You must bear the pain and choose one of them as the focus of your writing, and mention the others in one or two sentences at most. Only in this way can you explain your travels clearly.

The second is "short". This "short" does not mean that the length of the article is short, but that the time span involved in the article should be short. Don’t start writing from the departure point and continue writing until the end of the full day trip. There will be a lot of unwarranted details, which will disturb your thinking. Just start writing when you arrive at this scenic spot and end when you visit the scenic spot. Concentrating your time will help you better organize the materials and highlight the features of the attractions.

"True" again. This is the point that students are most likely to overlook, and it is also the point that best reflects their writing level. Many people think that writing travel notes means telling others about the scenic spots. Not really. Travel notes are records of travel, which emphasize one’s unique travel experience. When visiting the same place, adults and children will have different feelings, and boys and girls will also have different feelings when visiting the same place. How to express your unique feelings? That is to write down what you “discovered” during your travels. These discoveries can be "touch," "smell," "listen," "look for," or even "guess." Think about it and write it down. The most taboo thing in travel notes is to describe the scenery throughout the whole article. If you have your own activities that appear during the tour, that is your own tour experience.

Finally, there is "fun". The reason why travel can attract people is that it is interesting first. Then, your travel notes should also express the fun you felt during your travels. This kind of "fun" has a broad connotation: it can be wild play, leisurely strolling, funny scenes, or different customs... As long as you find it interesting, you might as well write a few more strokes to describe it. Share your happiness with everyone!

Finally, there is another very important thing: in any travelogue, the description of the environment of the scenic spots is an essential part, and it must be written in detail and vividly! 4. How to write a travel essay at the beginning of the essay

There are also many statues. The statue of Qin Shihuang is made of metal.

I really couldn’t bear to leave the sea and the fish in it. I took a car all night and arrived the next morning, as if I was going to fall into the sea. The scenery there is so beautiful! The next morning we went to Yantai for a trip. On the evening of August 21st, our family went on a trip. After dinner we are going home.

One of the best speedboat turns around! Swim! I happily picked up many. I let the waves wash my feet with my bare feet. Everyone became frightened and ran over to see it was a small shell: "I will come again next year."

There are statues of Pegasus and Qin Shihuang in the square. The waves washed away everyone's footprints.

In the supermarket, you can taste the seafood first. They are all products from the sea! As soon as I got off the car, I threw myself into the embrace of the sea. It's so fun, my mother said.

The first day of the trip was to Penglai. The boat was high on one side and low on the other. It was really thrilling. Then we went to Weihai to go shopping.

The Pegasus statue is made of stone. After leaving the embrace of the sea, we went to the square of Yangma Island! I found something shiny on the sand.

Me to Dad. It's beautiful. Two of the largest shells are like small fans, shining brightly in the sun.

We bought a lot of delicious food. After lunch we went on a boat ride, it was so beautiful.

Swim in the sea! It's so beautiful.

5. Primary school students should travel at the beginning of their essay

There are many beautiful scenery in the world, such as sunrise and sunset, spring and spring, clouds and snowfall, mountains, seas, lakes, places of interest, towns and villages, streets and courtyards...where It is also not worthy of us praising it in poetic language, but scene composition gives primary school students a headache. Why? One is that there are no good words or sentences in mind, and the other is that the composition is out of order.

The first unit of the ninth volume of Chinese language for six-year primary schools published by the People's Education Press focuses on the composition of scene description. Based on the current situation of primary school students' scene composition and the arrangement of textbooks, how do I train scene composition?

1. Close connection with the text to guide writing

The first unit of "Sunrise on the Sea", "Sunset", "Charming Zhangjiajie", as well as the accumulation and application of "Dali Three "Tower", these articles are all good examples of scene descriptions.

"Sunrise on the Sea" writes the process of sunrise in the order of the development of things; "Sunset" writes the poetic sunset in chronological order; "Three Pagodas of Dali" writes the three towers in spatial order. look like. Through study, students learned that scene compositions should be written in a certain order and experienced various orders. Students also learned that when describing scenery compositions, they should "embede emotions in the scenery", describe with emotion, develop rich imagination, and try to use vivid language and appropriate techniques. Such as: association, metaphor, exaggeration, etc. Only in this way can boring descriptions of scenery become full of life, full of interest, and attract readers. Of course, students also know that the article is written so meticulously and vividly thanks to the author's careful observation.

2. Read thousands of books and pass the sentence barrier.

"It is difficult for a clever woman to make a meal without rice." Only by reading thousands of books can one travel thousands of miles. In order to write a good scenery composition, it is imperative to accumulate a certain amount of vocabulary for describing scenery. It took two weeks to intensively train the words. Students read articles about scenes and accumulate good words and sentences through reading, memorizing, and excerpting.

3. Observe carefully and grasp the characteristics.

After the above two links, students are ready for the scene composition, and the next step is the actual practice. It just so happens, God helps me! It rained heavily that day and the sky was dark. Heavy rain fell. I took this opportunity to let the students observe the sudden rainstorm. The students observed it very carefully. Then the students wrote about the rainstorm in the order of how things developed, and also wrote out its characteristics. One of the students wrote about the heavy rain: Thick raindrops fell violently on the roof, and the whole sky seemed to collapse. Lightning, thunder, and storms seemed to engulf the world. The rain fell harder, and a huge bead curtain seemed to be hung on the ground. Another student wrote this about the time when the weather is sunny and rainy: The heavy rain finally exhausted itself, the rain gradually lightened up, the trees stood up in high spirits, the dark clouds gradually receded, and the sun showed its smiling face.

After this exercise, I asked the students to observe the campus and write about the scenery of the campus. When writing about the autumn campus, the student captured the "ugly chrysanthemum" with his keen eye, and used his unique perspective to write about the withered white flowers, but the ugly chrysanthemum shines alone. He wrote in his composition: The colorful flowers in autumn don’t want to wither first, and want to keep competing. At this time, the ugly chrysanthemum bloomed. When other flowers saw the beautiful and tender flowers of the ugly chrysanthemum, they all lowered their heads willingly.

Through the interlocking of these three links, students can write satisfactory compositions. Of course, this is not the end of the play, the key is persistence. I believe that students will open their eyes to see the world in their future lives, pay attention to observation, pay attention to life, and retain the wonderful things! 6. How to write the beginning of a travel composition

Get straight to the point. For example, if you visited Lushan Mountain, you can write like this:

. A group of us finally arrived at the famous scenic spot Lushan Mountain. Unexpectedly, the weather was not kind and it began to rain lightly. Everything was so gray that it was hard to tell where the clouds were and where the mountains were. Suddenly, I was reminded of the famous saying of the great writer Su Dongpo, "From a distance, it looks like a ridge and a peak on its side, but the height is different from near to far. If you don't know the true face of Mount Lu, you just feel like you are in this mountain."

After that, you can Tell us what you saw and heard, so that people who have never been to Lushan can enjoy the beautiful scenery of Lushan through your description. You can also use rhetorical methods such as lyricism, discussion, description, etc. to create. It should be written eloquently and truly, it is a good travel article.

If you are satisfied with my answer, please reply.

I wish you a good article! 7. How to write a composition that begins with a description of scenery

1. Life is like poetry, and the poetry is endless; life is like tea, and the fragrance of tea fills the mouth with a lingering taste; life is like a song, and it is hard to stay in love until the song is deep; Life is like wine, and when the wine is almost drunk, it is full of laughter... - (Wuxi City's "Wonderful Scene") 2. Life is the ocean of love, everyone breathes and feels love.

Life is like a night sky, in the wonderful moment of shooting stars, people feel the magnificent beauty; life is like a trickle, in the wonderful moments of passing through stones, people feel the beauty of persistence... …but the most beautiful thing in the world is love. ——(Wuxi City's "Wonderful Moments") 3. I can't finish throwing away the lovesickness and blood and tears, and I can't finish the spring willows and spring flowers filling the painting building. The brows are even more obscure, just like the faint green mountains that can't be covered, and the quiet flowing green water... - (Fuyang City's "Infatuated Scenery on the Heartstrings") 4. I love "turbulent rapids, arrows, and fierce waves." The dancing energy of "Ruobeng" drives my youthful and upward soul; I think about the homesickness of the wanderer in "Little Bridges and Flowing Waters", affects my young thoughts, and plucks the homesick strings of my heart; I realize that "sunrise" The flowers in the river are as red as fire, and the water in the spring is as green as blue." That silence and peace caressed my young and arrogant thoughts and gave me calm thoughts.

——(Xiamen City's "Shore? Flowing Water? Unrestrained") 5. The flowing water is clear, rippling the rhythm of sound and color, and emitting the brilliance and splendor of life. The flowing water is soft, tinging with the gentleness of emotion, and spreading the spring dew of love.

The flowing water stirs up the symphony of strength and beauty, bursting out the tenacity of the soul. ——(Xiamen City's "Water Rhythm") 6. When the Dongpo layman sang under the surging Red Cliff: "The great river goes eastward and the waves are swept away, and the romantic figures of the ages...".

We think this is a breathtaking and breathtaking scenery. When layman Yi An sang softly under the falling red: "The cherries are red, the bananas are green, and the rain hits the window lattice and wets the silk silk."

We think this is a peaceful and indifferent scenery. When the Qinglian layman sang to the sky when the moon and stars were sparse, "The world is full of humiliation and humiliation for the powerful, which makes me unhappy."

We think this is a helpless and distant scenery. Many beautiful scenery make up our vast country, and many cultural landscapes make up our splendid and rich history.

—— (Fuyang City's "Heart and Scenery Harmony") 7. The night was so quiet, and the soft moonlight spread all over the ground; the night was so deep, and my father's snoring was like a song. The moving moonlight music echoes in the night sky. Looking at my sleeping father's face, my thoughts drifted to that holy night sky... - (Jinhua City "Remembering My Father's Old Face") 8. "Singing to wine and singing, how is life.

For example, like the morning dew, there will be more suffering in the past days..." Prime Minister Cao wrote a poem lamenting the shortness of life. The imperial bandits marched in the wind, free and easy; Zhuang Zhou was not afraid of the burden of the world; Li Bai was indifferent to fame and fortune and left a lasting legacy.

On the other hand, Zhou Xing and Lai Junchen were greedy for money, which made them uneasy in their lives; Wei Qing once made great achievements with Huo Qubing in resisting the Huns, but killed Li Guang for fame, and he also died in depression. Life should be treated kindly, but those who pursue fame and wealth without resorting to any means will have a dull life.

Although they all appreciate the philosophy of life that "life is precious, love is more valuable, and both can be thrown away for the sake of freedom", life is the first thing people cherish. Only with the existence of life can it be possible to speak of other things.

——(Nantong City "Be Kind to Life") 9. If spring is a set of cheerful songs of the four seasons, then the sunshine is the rhythm of smart jumping. Spring, the green messenger, the symbol of hope; sunshine, the gentle angel, the symbol of light.

With spring, everything is full of vitality and flowers are blooming; with sunshine, everything is warm and comfortable.

——(Jiangxi "Let me hold out my chest and bathe in the sunshine of spring") 10. What is "holding out my chest"? Is it to hold one’s head high, to be self-reliant, to keep one’s body clean, and not to go along with the world? Is he a man of iron bones, willing to die rather than surrender, sacrificing his own life for righteousness? Is it to be elegant and free, to express one's personality, and not to flatter the powerful? How many people with lofty ideals in history have explained the meaning of this word to us time and time again with their actions and even their lives... - (Jiangxi "Standing with Chests Tall") 11. In spring, pick up a wisp of spring breeze and put it into your heart, Let it blow my happiness; in summer, pick up a ray of scorching sun and put it into my heart and let it illuminate my warmth; in autumn, pick up a red leaf and put it into my heart and let it harvest my mood; in winter, hold a handful of sunshine , put it into my heart and let it cleanse my soul... I cherish every inch of life, I long for beauty, and I enjoy life, so no matter when, I will have a good mood! ——(Changzhou City "Let Good Mood Lead Us to Success") 01. Balzac said, "Unfortunately, it is the ladder of advancement for genius, the baptismal water for believers, and the bottomless abyss for the weak."

After the wind and rain, you will see the sky and water with flying gulls and fish swimming in front of you; when you walk out of the thorns, you will see the broad road covered with flowers; when you climb to the top of the mountain, you will see the green mountains at your feet. In this world, if one star falls, it cannot dim the starry sky; if one flower withers, it cannot make the entire spring barren.

You should try your best to get through every hurdle in life. No matter what difficulties you encounter, never give up. "Facing Suffering" ●02. Standing on the coast of history and tracing the historical ditches: Dr. Chu meditated on the riverside and never regretted his death; Emperor Wu of Wei raised his whip to the east and was ambitious; Tao Yuanming leisurely strolled through the Nanshan Mountains, drinking wine and picking chrysanthemums... They Choosing eternity, even if you are flattered, falsely accused, and scorned, you will not let it spread. This is a persistent choice; even if your body is wrapped in horse leather and your soul is lost in the smoke, it is just a heroic choice; even if you are in poverty and cannot have enough to eat all day long, you are still willing to enjoy yourself and bow down. Plowing long acres is an elegant choice.

In a choice, the emperor will achieve his unparalleled great achievements, and the migration of wise men will achieve his eternal legacy. ●03. Only by setting off can you reach your ideals and destinations. Only by hard work can you achieve brilliant success. Only by sowing can you reap the rewards.

Only by pursuing, can you taste upright people. ●04. Although you are still just a young seedling.

However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; although you are just a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; although you are just an eagle now, as long as you have a heart Gaoyuan, after falling a few times, will eventually occupy the blue sky. ●05. Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walk on both sides of life, sow seeds at any time, bloom at any time, make this long path embellished with fragrant flowers, so that pedestrians who pass through the branches and leaves can step on the thorns. ... The sea of ??clouds.

The peak is more than 1,800 meters above sea level! "It has been many days since I returned from Huangshan. Huangshan has been a tourist attraction since ancient times.

After visiting Huangshan, Xu Xiake, a great traveler in the Ming Dynasty, highly praised Huangshan. He said: "When the five mountains come back, they don't look at the mountain. It seems to be falling, which is frightening. The steepness of Huashan Mountain. Huangshan Mountain is indeed unusual. , it has the majesty of Mount Tai.

There are several ancient pine trees near Yuping Tower, one of which is called the Welcome Pine, which seems to be always welcoming tourists. Pine, it seems to be saying: "I wish you a good trip and welcome to come again next time."

The scenery of Huangshan Mountain is beautiful and magical, especially the strange rocks, which are very interesting. One day during the summer vacation, I came to Huangshan Mountain with great excitement to travel, which is known as "the most amazing mountain in the world". Huangshan is located in the southern part of Anhui Province. It covers an area of ??about 1,200 square kilometers and has 72 peaks. Huangshan is still in my mind all the time without seeing its peaks after returning home. I want to tell everyone. "

This sentence means that after visiting the Five Mountains, there is no need to look at other mountains. After visiting Huangshan, the smoke and clouds of Hengshan are the interesting "Tiangu looking at the moon".

There are many strange rocks in Huangshan, such as "lion fighting for the ball", "monkey watching the sea", "turtle and fish looking at each other", etc., which make people feel that it is more difficult to climb than to reach the sky, especially those strange-shaped rocks on the mountain.

Let’s just say “The Fairy Plays the Piano”. With its wonderful pines, looking up at the moon, it seems like you want to go to the moon to see it. The hot spring is famous for its “Four Wonders” and is known as “the best in the world”. Strange Mountain". The highest peak in Huangshan Mountain is Lotus Peak. The waterfalls in Mount Lushan are in various forms and lifelike, but the beautiful scenery is like a beautiful picture.

Look, the clouds are shrouded and mysterious. There is a cute puppy on the steep mountain, and the beautiful fairy is playing the piano: Huangshan is worth a visit. If you don’t go, it will be your whole life. regret.