Reading is a kind of enjoyment. Only when you swim in the ocean of books can you know the joy and ease of reading. Below are my carefully compiled comments on my reading experience. I hope it will be helpful to you! Comments on reading experience 1

1. The writing is beautiful and neat, and the content is rich and substantial.

2. Detailed description of scenes and writing, delicate and quick thinking.

3. The beginning is novel and vivid, and the ending echoes it.

4. The text is smooth and the beginning and end echo completely.

5. The content is clearly expressed and commendable.

6. The sentences are fluent and vivid, and the wording is just right.

7. The insights are very correct and the paragraphs are clearly advisable.

8. The content is consistent with the topic and the paragraphs are well organized.

9. The description is rich and vivid, and the wording is beautiful and smooth.

10. Full of creative imagination and careful writing.

11. The paragraphs are clear and hierarchical and the idioms are used extremely well.

12. Innovative and lofty ideas, substantial content and life-like content.

13. Ability to think positively is a good idea.

14. Learn more about segmentation.

15. Learn to use punctuation marks correctly.

16. You can add more examples to enrich the content.

17. Use idioms or figures of speech appropriately.

18. Correct typos and never make them again.

19. The beginning should lead people to think more positively.

20. The thinking is not delicate enough and the words and sentences should avoid clichés.

21. Fully grasp the main idea and paragraphs.

22. Examples should be strengthened and creativity can be boldly used.

23. Use rhetorical techniques and quote idioms appropriately.

24. The sentences are too bland. Use more rhetorical skills.

25. It is advisable to read more extracurricular books and use punctuation marks correctly.

26. The handwriting should be correct and neat, and typos should be avoided and corrected.

27. The meaning of the question is not fully grasped and the narrative lacks organization.

28. There are many typos and the expression is not complete enough.

29. The content is bland and you should use more ideas and creativity.

30. Observe carefully, reduce corrections, and do not repeat words.

31. The ideas and materials are novel and rich.

32. The materials are appropriately relevant and the writing style is vivid and smooth.

33. Fully grasp the main theme and the content is rich and substantial.

34. Use appropriate quotes and idioms.

35. The sentences are smooth, the ideas are clear, and the ending is powerful.

36. The topic is correct and organized.

37. The content is a bit empty, but the subject matter needs to be enriched.

38. The article cannot address the topic and the paragraphs are somewhat unclear.

39. It is better to grasp the key points of each paragraph to avoid going off topic.

40. The content is less and not substantial enough. Modify the text to make it smoother. Comments on reading experience 2

1. The author of this article is very good at "thinking". First, I will briefly introduce the story of the article I read, grasp the purpose of the story - the importance of perseverance, and connect it with my own life and study reality, further elaborating that "life is like a ladder. Only by perseverance and perseverance can we achieve success." Only when you reach the end can you succeed." The experience is profound and it can be regarded as a better review after reading.

2. It can be seen from your composition that you have firmly memorized and deeply experienced the stories in the book "Thatched House", and your writing technique is very delicate.

You fully highlighted Sangsang's brave and tenacious spirit, and you also compared it with yourself, which made it clear to me.

3. You use parallelism many times in your composition to enhance the tone and deepen the emotion. You compared your own case with Sangsang's, highlighting Sangsang's bravery. At the same time, famous quotes and lyrics are appropriately quoted to make the composition more vivid. The transitions between paragraphs are also natural.

4. Detailed description of inner activities and clever back-and-forth support prove that you have mastered certain writing skills. From your article, I seem to have seen Ba Jin in the 21st century!”

5. I understand your emotional pain. Fortunately, you are a strong child and a sensible person. My child, because you wrote such a touching masterpiece, I am happy to have a student like you. As long as you seize today, your future will be beautiful and happy.

6 What I like most is that when you wrote your own case, you compared your aunt's red eyes to red elves, your gaze to the infrared rays released, and your own red eyes to the eyes of a little rabbit. It's very vivid. It also uses the metonymy technique I just learned to refer to doctors as "white coats", which is very interesting.

7. This essay is mainly written from Du Xiaokang's perspective and uses many rhetorical techniques, such as. Metaphors, metaphors, parallels, and quotations from famous quotes. However, I think you should write about your tenacious struggle with pinkeye, so that it is more consistent with the theme "it gave me the motivation to move forward."

8. This essay is well written, with clear expressions and vivid sentences. It is especially humorous when writing about your own examples, and it also uses the rhetorical technique of "metaphorism" that we just learned.

9. .You are the first person I have seen who said that he would "cry half to death" if he did not go to school. I am moved by your persistence in learning. I believe that with your own efforts, you will definitely become better in your studies!

10. When Teacher Wu came to the classroom that day with several composition books, I knew that they were compositions that were about to be published in the class tabloid. I was extremely looking forward to it, and sure enough, my composition was published. Selected. Under the guidance of Teacher Wu, I worked hard to revise the composition. As Sun Wei said, there is a mysterious force pulling me.

11. You are a child who loves reading. What's even more valuable is that you can think deeply and understand after reading. You can keenly grasp the reason for the failure of Laisi's experiment introduced in the article: "It was tightened by one-half turn - about 0.5 mm" and tighten it tightly. Focusing on this detail, compare it with Bell, and derive your own feelings: "If you miss it by a hair, it will be a thousand miles away. The difference between success and failure is only 0.5 mm! "It all comes naturally. It's a meaningful and profound review.

12. In the article, you told us the story of the "Black Storm", but this is not your purpose. You are using the help of Such a story raises a topic - the issue of environmental protection that everyone is concerned about. The story is clearly narrated and examples are readily available. At the end, "I hope the black storm will never blow up" is a heartfelt appeal. Real and touching.

13. Your essay uses appropriate words and is clearly organized. You first briefly sort out the content of the book, and then cleverly use the protagonist Sang Sang to write about your own personal experience and interact with Sang Sang. Contrast. It can be said that this is a very good review.

14. You are good at using novel words and phrases to write every essay. You have written many wonderful essays, but you have never been proud of it. Because you know that "humility makes people progress, and pride makes people fall behind." You are an example for me to learn from!

15. Hua Yuhang, can you reflect the idea of ??"giving is joy" with your own real examples? theme, it can be seen from the article that you have deeply realized the true meaning of happiness.

I will definitely learn from you!

16. You are a child who loves to read. What is even more valuable is that you read thoughtfully. Combined with the content in the book, you grasped the details of the discussion of the three passengers and described the boy in the article in detail. The performance gave rise to my own feelings, and finally I said with emotion, "Let us establish a firm patriotic spirit from an early age!" The full text is fluently narrated, profound in understanding, and logical. This is a better review after reading it.

17. This article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's love for... from between the lines. The full text is clear in level and the sentences are fluent.

18. The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and it is consistent with the previous metaphor... Finally, the author uses a few words to express his emotions towards..., which is touching.

19. Your composition is very clever in eliciting what you want to express from a famous saying. You also compared the contents of the book with the scenes in the movie, and saw that there was a deep friendship between Sangsang and Du Xiaokang. The disadvantage is that the content is not vivid enough and some rhetorical techniques can be added appropriately.

20. Yes, sometimes there will be some misunderstandings between friends. As long as you say "I'm sorry" or "It's okay", it may not make the matter bigger. As the saying goes, "take a step back and the world will be brighter"!

21. Your composition is very good! You connected the movie with the book, and also wrote about your own childhood memories, but the language is a bit bland and the psychological description is insufficient. If you revise it, it will definitely be better.

22. Your essay is really touching. I have also experienced the loneliness of staying at home due to illness, and my heart is filled with the desire to go to school - because for me, going to school is a kind of happiness.

23. The article can use fresh and interesting language to describe... The words between the lines are full of the true childishness of childhood, and the laughter is endless. It can be regarded as a masterpiece.

24. You can write around a theme about childhood. It’s so enviable to see you and your friends happily playing carefree in the rapeseed field!

25. Although it is not long, the language is concise and clear, and it can closely focus on the theme. The content in the book can lead to the scenes of playing with friends in the past. It is well written.

26. It seems that you, who usually have a little sense of humor, are not inferior in composition. Your title is well written, yes, how can we forget the best childhood days? I hope you will continue your efforts and reach higher levels!

27. Your usual compositions are not great, but this one is great. You also listed the times when you gave up your seat and experienced the joy of giving. Thank you for letting us understand this.

28. Your act of giving up your seat deeply affected me. You set a good example for the whole class. “Giving is joy” – you said it so well! May you use your actions to influence everyone around you and let everyone know the joy of giving. come on!

29. Although it is very common to give up your seat to an elderly person, through your pen, this matter is vividly presented to us on the paper. Hope you keep up the good work!

30. A good writer, good insight, good at reading history, and knowledgeable in making arguments can make a young man become a great person by working hard. "The future is promising and limitless. Congratulations to the twelve-year-old, another excellent article has been published! It is no wonder that no one in the motherland can say this."