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How to conceive a composition
An excellent composition is inseparable from ingenious ideas. Conception, like a blueprint for building a house, is the key to writing, and the quality of conception largely determines the success or failure of the article. Cao Zhi's seven-step poems make the world sigh as wizards; Zuo Si's ten years of writing Sandu Fu and even Luoyang paper are expensive, and his kung fu is all about conception. Over the years, the perfect composition articles for the senior high school entrance examination are all models of successful conception, attracting the attention of marking teachers like a beautiful scenery. So how do you conceive a composition for the senior high school entrance examination? Pay attention to the following three requirements: first, "deep". It is what Mr. Lu Xun said, "Dig deeper." Most candidates can choose typical cases around the center, describe them layer by layer and tell some truth, but there are not many profound central ideas and refreshing works. An excellent composition always digs out all the thoughts and social significance contained in the material through rational thinking, and points out the center of the article through argumentative and lyrical sentences. Second, "new". That is, through one's own observation and experience, one can discover what others have not discovered and written from what people are familiar with, and strive to write new ideas and new realms with new forms and new skills. "New" is not surprising. "New" comes from life. There are many things that can be innovated in rich daily life, which requires our classmates to accumulate extracurricular knowledge and discover the true meaning of life with a unique eye. Third, "Qiao". It is a clever idea, how to start, how to end, how to transition, which to write first, which to write later, which to write in detail, which to write slightly ... there is a comprehensive consideration. Conception is a complicated process, so you should be good at thinking. At the same time, there is no dead rule in conception, and all kinds of problems involved are flexible, so the conception process is a creative thinking process and a creative labor. Different genres and types of articles have a common way of thinking, and there are often obvious tracks to follow in the structural arrangement, such as the "total-sub-total" style of narration, the "juxtaposition", "contrast", "hierarchy" and "total-sum" style of general material argumentation and reading (observation) feeling, and so on. The significance of conception lies in the rational use of materials and the full expression of the central idea. To conceive innovation, we must break the conventional thinking mode, make appropriate changes and set off waves. Conceptual innovation of narrative. (1) The angle is clever. If everyone cuts in from the front, you might as well cut in from the back or side; Everyone focuses on the whole, you might as well focus on the part; Everyone looks at the big picture. You might as well look at the big picture from a small point, and so on. Because of the originality and novelty of the idea, it often produces unexpected strong appeal and inspiration, thus leaving a deep impression on readers. ② Sequence change. If you organize the materials in the order of occurrence and development, you may wish to use flashback or interpolation; Everyone writes the subject before the object to highlight the status of the subject. You might as well write the object before the subject, which also highlights the status of the subject, and so on. 3 the way to seek difference. If everyone narrates in the third person, you might as well use the first person or even the second person; Everyone gives priority to descriptive language, you might as well give priority to descriptive language, and so on. The structure is alive. The narrative structure should be flexible, tortuous and winding. The common methods that cause waves in the article are as follows: 1. Suppression. It means that the object of writing either wants to be promoted first, or wants to be promoted first, and then suddenly turns around, which surprises the reader and makes the article have ups and downs. The second is the suspense method. The technique that constitutes the suspense of the article is generally "hanging-cushion hanging-hanging". You can use three places, or three time periods, or three shots, or three photos, or three items, or three experiences to organize the full text, and use subheadings, such as "childhood", "youth", "shot one", "shot two" and "shot three". , so as not to be straightforward. In addition, we can also use "misunderstanding method" and "coincidence method" to cause contradictions, increase waves and deepen the theme. The details are as follows: 1. The "yang" here is yang, which is praise; "Restraint" means belittling and restraining. The purpose of intonation is to leave a strong impression on readers and avoid the dullness of the article and make the text ups and downs. If the purpose is to promote, then "promote first and then restrain" is adopted; The purpose is to suppress, then take "first suppress and then promote". In this way, we seek changes in praise and criticism, causing ups and downs to enhance the appeal of the article. Let's take a look at the following two clips. (1) I am a child in the countryside, and my family's economic conditions are not good. I go home on Sunday. I'm going back to school. My sister is filling a vegetable bottle for me to steal diced vegetables. It's all my sister's greed, my sister said. Sister, when you are not at home, we all eat side dishes. As soon as you get home. Mom always cuts meat and buys fish to nourish her body. You eat it and take it to school. If only you were at home every day. (2) On weekends, neighbors greet their daughters who come home from afar. ~ Baby "kept screaming. My mother just smiled at me. I am very unhappy. My elder sister ate diced meat in the dish while filling it for me, which made me even more angry. But what my sister said made me feel ashamed. Sister, when you are not at home, we all eat side dishes. As soon as you get home, mom always cuts meat and buys fish to nourish your body. You eat it and take it to school. If only you were at home every day! "How do you feel after reading it? The first material selection has its own characteristics. It praises the deep maternal love, but writes about things. Not necessarily a masterpiece. The second material is to rewrite the first material with the method of restraining first and then promoting, and the heavy maternal love will be promoted. At the same time, this writing will make the article tortuous and vivid. Second, metaphorical conception Metaphorical conception can be said to be the most important method in all laws. It is a gorgeous flower born of similar associations, which is the easiest to make the article shine. Let's enjoy the wonderful fragments of the masterpiece "Taste Life and Feel Happiness". Childhood life is like a cocktail. Although father's slap and mother's reprimand are as chilling as rock sugar in wine, the ice will eventually melt, but sugar is still sweet in wine. ..... The days of youth are like beer in Munich. The pressure of study and the hardship of job hunting are just like the faint bitterness in wine. But beer, after all, is not high. After all, there are parents in your life to shelter you from the wind and rain. ..... into middle age, life is like a glass of hard liquor. With such a heavy burden on your shoulders, you can still help the old and carry the young. The taste of wine will also vary from person to person. ..... In old age, life is like wine in a wine cellar, which will last for a long time in Micari. Although the difference between "wine" still exists, what you can taste is the same taste-sweet and fragrant. ..... So, I said that life is like wine, and it takes a long time to make Mika sweet. The key is to savor it. Only by savoring carefully can we feel the happiness of life. This little author uses appropriate and exquisite metaphors to connect in series, which builds an excellent platform for the full-text clues to express his feelings and intentions. When using this method, we must pay attention to the similarity between ontology and vehicle, and use metaphorical sentences to be concise and meaningful. If you put it at the beginning of a paragraph. Can make the context clear at a glance. Third, the so-called dialogue conception. It means that the overall structure of the article is mainly based on questions and answers, which can be answered one by one or several times. If you have questions, you must answer them, and there can be no phenomenon of "answering irrelevant questions". If you ask several questions and answer them several times, the previous questions and answers should be logically related. All questions and answers should be combined around a big central question in the same thinking process. Note: When writing a dialogue, you should write the tone, rhythm and modality of the speaker. As for taking notes through dialogue, we should also pay attention to the advancement, development and change of the plot when writing dialogue. Let me show you the highlights of the masterpiece The Generation Gap. Mother: Can't you turn down your "three turns left" and "three turns right"? Aren't you tired of "twisting your neck and ass" every day? Woman: Mom, your Yue Opera has been crying for a long time. Aren't you in a hurry? Mother: Your skin itches, doesn't it? Let me ask you, who is the boy who called just now? Female: classmate! He asked me homework questions, so don't guess. Mother: There is no silver here for 320! Do you laugh like that when discussing topics? I already talked to you. Girls should be reserved, understand? What a big girl. Laughing with boys all day! When we were studying, boys and girls were afraid to say a word. Woman: Times have changed! Mother: No matter how different the times are, you are also my daughter. I warn you: don't imitate others' puppy love! Woman: Mom. Where did you get so much "love"? Boys and girls fall in love when they play together? That's friendship! Don't treat "friendship" as "love"! Mother: What "friendship"? It is "problematic" for boys and girls to be together. Don't think I don't know what you're thinking all day. You think it's written in a diary and locked in a drawer so no one knows? Woman: Mom, you have gone too far! You read my diary! This is an invasion of my personal privacy! Mother: Privacy! Before the wings are hard, there is privacy? Tell you what, kids. There is no "privacy" for parents! Woman: Everyone is equal! Mother: Equality? As long as I am your mother and you are my daughter, there is no equality! Woman: You-this ... is ridiculous! How's it going? How do you feel after watching this clip? The author of this article skillfully depicts the vivid picture of the generation gap between mother and daughter with the dialogue between mother and daughter, which reflects the voice of middle school students today and arouses the condemnation of you and me. You might as well try this method. Maybe your composition will be better! 4. short essay conception short essay conception means that an article consists of many small short paragraphs, each of which is small and beautiful, concise and rich in content: this conception method. It can describe not only people, but also scenes and objects. You can also express feelings and discuss, which is widely applicable and easy to master. For example, after reading the article "Learn to be grateful in ordinary life", readers will see pictures of gratitude. Let's take a look at the highlights. My mother smiled and said "thank you" when I staggered to the dining table with a soup bowl. I felt the joy of working for the first time, so I became diligent. When I ironed my clothes in a strange way and put them in front of my father, my father smiled and said "thank you", which made me feel the joy of success for the first time, so I became confident. When I cleared the gravel scattered in the middle of the road, the eyes of passers-by were full of praise and gratitude, which made me feel that it was a happy thing to help others, so I became kind. When I put a stack of exercise books on the teacher's desk, the teacher kindly said "thank you", which made me feel happy for the first time, so I became cheerful. The word "thank you" runs through the whole article. The author thinks it is very important to learn to be grateful in life. The gratitude of family members, passers-by and teachers can be described as "I am grateful and I am growing". Very sincere and to the point. 5. The idea based on the title There are several advantages to using subheadings in the article to help the idea. First, it can make it easy for us to deviate from the subject when writing every small paragraph. Write one thing around a subtitle, paragraph by paragraph. Or write a fragment separately, which is simple and convenient for us to operate. Second, when you conceive, you can know what you haven't written and what you are repeating when you see the subtitle, so that you can fully consider all aspects of the composition when you conceive. When you conceive an article in this way, you should pay attention to the carving of the subtitle and be "small". Its extension must be consistent with the content of this section; Second, be "short". If it's short, it's concise. Third, be "smart", or play hard to get, or suspense, or humor. Still step by step; Fourth, we must be "new" and avoid similarities when we are new. It has a unique attraction; It is also necessary to have literary talent, quote famous poems, use rhetorical methods such as metaphor and exaggeration, use special sentence patterns, and properly use mathematical symbols and punctuation marks. For example, in the excellent article "Good Teacher", the author skillfully adopted three subheadings: "I have a piece of green in my heart", "I have an old cow" and "I have a flock of geese in my heart", respectively, and wrote the feelings gained from the images of grass, old cow and goose. From these three things, I realized that I should be strong, practical and United, so they are all "my" good teachers. Six, the idea of scattered points refers to starting from several points and diverging around a center. Every point is a beautiful sentence, and when several points are connected into one, a beautiful essay is formed. The most outstanding advantages of this decentralized exercise are clear hierarchy, beautiful language and strong emotion. This kind of layout can often win by surprise. Look at the following clip: What is health? I take this ancient and eternal proposition to find the ancient soul. Seven, the concept of word (word) runs through the word (word) from beginning to end, which means that when you conceive an article, you choose a keyword or word closely related to the central idea to connect all the materials of the article, thus forming the skeleton of the article. For example, in the article "Back", the concept of "one word" is adopted, and the word "back" runs through the whole article from beginning to end, so that readers can deeply understand a loving heart and the deep affection between father and son. In this way, we should pay attention to the fact that the article should be written closely with a word or word. Only in this way can we take this as the radiation point and think from multiple angles, which will be conducive to hierarchical and in-depth description or lyricism, and make the article full and charming. 8. Fragment conception and fragment combination refers to the conception method of selecting some vivid and typical characters, events or scenes in the text to express the theme within the scope specified by the topic according to the needs of expressing the theme. Articles that remember people, narrate and write scenery conceived in this way can express people, describe events and describe scenery from many angles and sides in a very short space. Using the idea of fragment combination, we should pay attention to the following points: a, the form of combined fragments should be unified: either a series of characters, an event or a scene. B, the narrative of the fragment itself must be concrete, vivid and vivid. C. segments can be arranged horizontally or vertically. Horizontal arrangement should arrange the relationship between primary and secondary, virtual and real, and vertical arrangement should pay attention to the time sequence. 9. Suspense setting of suspense conception means that when selecting materials for conception, the plot is arranged to be included but not disclosed, so that readers can look forward to its development with anxiety and have the conception method of "knowing what will happen next time". X. Contrastive conception Vertical and horizontal contrast refers to a method of describing opposing people, events and scenery in the same article. Conceiving in this way forms a sharp contrast and leaves a deep impression on readers. Or dynamic and static contrast, or beauty and ugliness contrast, or true and false contrast, or good and evil opposition, or winter and summer contrast, or heaven and earth contrast, and so on.