1. Beginning of the composition (using quotes)

If the blackboard is the vast sea, then the teacher is the sailor on the sea.

The moment *** sounded, you used the faculty whip as an oar to paddle the textbooks moored in the port like a ship. On the desk, the problems are piled up like a reef. Your gestures are as vivid as a flying bird, waving a graceful arc on the podium - the ship passes... There is not a single cloud floating in the sky, just like your bright heart , a lofty one.

Hope comes from disappointment, and uplift comes from worry. As a poet said: Those who feel hungry must digest well, those who feel urgency must be efficient, and those who feel crisis must make rapid progress. . Don't wander under the trees, don't meditate in the rain, don't cry in the dark.

Look forward, don’t look back. As long as you have the courage to face it and raise your head, you will find that the haze of scores is just a short rainy season. Looking forward, there is still a bright sky, which will not make people feel hesitant.

The soft sunlight hangs slanting on the everlasting branches and leaves of green pines and cypresses, looking so quiet and solemn. The green lawn and white cement are peaceful, and the steps rise and fall so gently, but everyone's hearts are filled with joy. It was so exciting and full of thoughts. The ocean of life is not like the rippling blue waves of the West Lake. As time goes by, it is sometimes as calm as a mirror, sometimes with splashing waves, and sometimes with huge waves soaring into the sky... People tend to become stronger after enduring the test of strong winds and waves.

When you are in the spring scenery with warm breeze blowing, birds singing and flowers fragrant, green mountains and green waters, and vast tracts of fertile fields, you will definitely be intoxicated; In the golden autumn season, you will definitely be overjoyed. Have you ever thought that the lush spring scenery is the heroic appearance after being baptized by the severe cold, and the beautiful scenery of the golden autumn is the crystallization of the smelting heat.

…………(He Tingting) If you want to harvest fruits in the golden autumn, then in the cold early spring, you should roll up your trouser legs and work tirelessly to open up fields, sow seeds, and cultivate until the harvest day. one day. Life is like a winding path in the mountains, bumpy and bumpy, with ditches and cliffs on the sides.

I fell down. If you want to cry, just cry. What are you afraid of? Don’t worry about pretending! This is straightforwardness, not weakness, because crying does not affect the journey, but can actually increase caution. The mountain flowers are blooming and the scenery is pleasant. If you are intoxicated, just laugh if you want to, but don’t pretend to be reserved! This is straightforwardness, not pride, because smiling once does not affect the journey, but can actually increase confidence.

Love is a piece of sunshine in winter, which makes people who are hungry and cold feel the warmth of the world; love is a clear spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair regain the hope of life; love is a way to spread the hope of life. A sweet rain on the long-drought land brings immediate spiritual comfort to the lonely and helpless people. …………………………………………………… Mao Dan The days are always like fine yarn passing through the fingertips, slipping quietly inadvertently.

Those past sorrows and misused injuries have gently passed away under the wash of the passing years, while the joy and smiles left behind will remain fresh in the depths of memory for a long time. The melancholy evaporated.

12. Faded memories. 13. Gunsmoke is burning in the peaceful home again.

Some memories are burned, and some memories are buried deep in the heart. The age of innocence flows through the golden age like running water. I want to melt into the pink peach petals and wipe away the worries in your heart all day long.

16. I completely understand my parents’ minds. Maternal love is a masterpiece that I can never finish reading in my lifetime; maternal love is a sky that I can never fly out of.

...Zhang Weiwei When the withered autumn leaves swayed in the wind, the late autumn floated outside the school. Under the moonlight, the shadow of my father was very long. The huge windbreaker wrapped the skinny father in it. I felt a rush in my heart. sorrow and grief.

………………………………Lin Jingying The true love in the world is like a big net, always warming people’s hearts, just like a mother’s love, it never ends.

Time is a poem, a poem that contains rich philosophy. Time is like a camel, carrying the dreams of countless people. The fate of a boat is to drift; the fate of a sail is to chase the wind and waves; the fate of life is to grasp it, and only by grasping and trusting life can one be young and innocent.

…………………………………………………………………………Gu Weiya’s past is like a song, on the journey of life Although there have been ups and downs and regrets, the beauty of youth has not been lost. Believe in yourself, there is always hope. Let us remember that sentence: I will not cry if I miss the sun, otherwise, I will miss the moon and stars.

If you fail in life, please don't write sad tears on your face. Failure is also a kind of gain. The most important thing in life is to have full courage and the courage to start a business.

I once thought that a helpless cry was all the vicissitudes of the world; a small setback was all the failures in life. It was the age of fourteen that told me... The moonlight is quiet.

The patter of raindrops hit the hut, and under the dim light, my mother was sewing the clothes of the wanderer closely. Suddenly, a gust of cold wind squeezed through the window of the hut, and my mother seemed to catch a cold, with a thick He coughed a few times out of fatigue. I woke up from my dream and stared blankly at my elderly mother under the lamp... At night, the spring breeze blew softly.

I held my chin and sat on the colorful steps, and another unforgettable thing came to mind. I once thought that a helpless cry was all the vicissitudes of the world; a small Frustration is basically all the failures in life. It was the age of fourteen that told me... The moonlight is quiet.

The patter of raindrops hit the hut, and under the dim light, my mother was sewing the clothes of the wanderer closely. Suddenly, a gust of cold wind squeezed through the window of the hut, and my mother seemed to catch a cold, with a thick He coughed a few times out of fatigue. I woke up from my dream and stared blankly at my elderly mother under the lamp... At night, the spring breeze blew softly.

I held my chin and sat on the steps with colorful fallen leaves, and another unforgettable thing came to my mind. The fallen leaves were fluttering. The fluttering yellow leaves were about to wither in the breeze. The moment the leaf took this step to complete its final mission, the leaf turned into a fallen leaf. I don’t know whether to be happy or sad. In the sky, the wind is accompanying the leaf, and the leaf is spinning with the wind, dancing like floating, like falling. The fast, seemingly slow melody was so beautiful during the short journey. Until the moment the dust settled, I just felt like falling leaves. 2. The beginning of all kinds of compositions

Please keep a piece of simplicity, so that you can be more friendly with others and less cold and numb in the soul; please keep a piece of simplicity, so that you can have more happiness in life. , less mental aging and fatigue; please retain a piece of simplicity, so that you have more strength to forge ahead and less pretentiousness to see through the world of mortals.

2. Success is the red rose you dream of, and setbacks are the needles all around you. Happiness is the fruit of your hard work, and sadness is the grain before it matures.

3. The sky accommodates every cloud, regardless of its beauty or ugliness, so the sky is wide and boundless. The earth embraces every inch of land, regardless of whether it is rich or poor, so the earth is vast and boundless.

The ocean accepts every river, regardless of its size, so the ocean is vast and boundless. 4. When Jane Eyre said: "We are equal, I am not an emotionless machine", I understood the self-esteem of women; when Petofi said: "For the sake of freedom, both can be thrown away", I understood When Lu Xun said: "If you don't explode in silence, you will perish in silence", I understand that people should have a spirit of resistance; when Browning said: "Take away love, the world will become a tomb", I learned the importance of giving love to others.

5. The building stands tall because it has strong pillars. Ideals and beliefs are the pillars of the building of life; the ship cuts through the waves because it has a compass that indicates the direction. Ideals and beliefs are the compass of the ship of life. The train runs thousands of miles because there are rails to guide it. Ideals and beliefs are the rails on the train of life. 6. What is happiness? Happiness is the joy on the faces of the fruit farmers in the orchard when they look at the fruits on the branches. Happiness is the touching smiling faces of the students in the classroom looking forward to the future. Happiness is the relaxed brows of scientists in the laboratory when they make new discoveries. Happiness is the podium. The athletes shed tears when they looked up at the national flag rising.

Happiness is the crystallization of struggle and the monument of hard work. 7. How can one know the value of the Sunshine Avenue without experiencing the ups and downs and muddy difficulties; how can one appreciate the loveliness of the sunny wind and sunshine without experiencing the dark night of wind and snow; how can one appreciate victory and success without experiencing the test of setbacks and tribulations? of joy.

Frustration, it is not easy to hate you... 8. Happiness surrounds you all the time. If you take over the job from your mother and feel warm in your heart, that is happiness; if you read letters from friends under the lamp and savor friendship, that is happiness; if you sit alone in a corner, listen to songs quietly, and contemplate, then that is happiness. It is happiness 9. Some people say that happiness is the interaction between delicacies and delicacies in a star-rated hotel; some people say that happiness is the dancing to the moving melodies in a high-end stage hall; some people say that happiness is the sound of Audi and BMW cars among the crowds of people. People are swaggering on the street; some people say that happiness is staying in a secret room and counting stacks of hundred-dollar bills; however, I want to say: having these does not necessarily mean you really have happiness! 10. The birds that fly away are forever concerned about the old forest; the boats that are drifting are always thinking about the harbor; the travelers on the road, whether they are returning home in a hurry at night or leaving home, have countless connections in their hearts and miss this place all the time. , or home.

11. What is happiness? Is it to become famous and admired by others? Is it quiet, leisurely and carefree? Is it a place full of guests and friends, surrounded by children and grandchildren? I said: Happiness is... 12. Life is like a mountain, what matters is not its height, but its beauty; life is like a rain, what matters is not its size, but its timeliness.

13. To get a new cup of spring water, you must pour out the existing stale water; to get a rose, you must give up the rose you got; to have more unique experience, you must More mental trauma. 14. "Pointing to the country and inspiring words" is a kind of heroic and unrestrained, "I am born with talents that will be useful" is a kind of confident and unrestrained, "Fishing for the snow in the cold river alone" is a kind of noble and unrestrained, "Unless the Loulan is broken, it will never be returned." "It is a kind of tragic and unrestrained.

15. The wind passes through the water, leaving behind sparkling ripples; the sun passes through the clouds, leaving a trace of warmth; the years pass through the woods, leaving behind rings of growth rings, friends, we After passing through the stage of the times, what is left behind? 16. I hope the sea will be calm, but there are often strong winds and rough waves. I hope that rivers will flow for thousands of miles, but there will always be whirlpools and rapids. I hope that life will be happy, but there will always be sadness and sorrow.

17. The river in winter has dried up, but I believe that the spring water will come again. At that time, the white sail will be the idol in my heart; the leaves in the wind have withered, but I believe that the dreams in the soil will come on the branches. Flowers and fruits. 18. The wings of angels were broken and fell into the world, becoming our sorrow; those who were honest were thrown away from the bag and scattered into the world, becoming Satan's wand.

19. No kind of rouge can smear time, no piece of clothing can conceal the soul, and no set of ancient books can decorate emptiness. 20. It may be a mountain to make you feel majestic, it may be a sea to make you feel the majesty, it may be a symphony to make you appreciate the excitement, it may be a stone sculpture to make you understand the majesty.

21. After experiencing failure and setbacks, I learned perseverance; after suffering misunderstandings and grievances, I learned tolerance; after experiencing loss and separation, I learned to cherish. 22. It’s not that there are too many worries, it’s just that we don’t understand life; it’s not that there is too little happiness, it’s just that we don’t understand how to grasp it.

23. The sense of responsibility is Zhuge Kongming's "Execution of a Teacher" written by "devoting his whole life and dying"; the sense of responsibility is the public servant monument established by Kong Fansen when his mother left home and shed her blood on the plateau; the sense of responsibility is Beethoven's challenge in life to surpass himself Composed "Symphony of Destiny". 24. Money can buy expensive watches, but it cannot buy precious time; money can buy delicious food, but it cannot buy a bad appetite.

25. It is a clump of autumn chrysanthemums, but it also needs to emit fragrance; it is an autumn leaf, and it also needs to decorate the earth; it is an ancient cypress, and it also needs to hold up the blue sky; it is an ancient well, and it also needs to flow out clear springs. 26. Respecting others is a virtue, and being respected is a kind of happiness.

27. Books are good medicine. Liu Xiang said: "Books are like medicine. Good reading can cure stupidity." Books are good friends. Zang Kejia said: "Reading a book is like making a good friend." "; Books are windows, Gorky said: "Every book opens a window in front of me." 28. Maturity is a quality, a quality derived from the soul expressed in action; maturity is an ability, an ability to self-discipline and self-management; maturity is an attitude, a calm attitude toward everything. ; Maturity is a state of mind, a state of mind that can look down upon everything and everything is as light as water. 3. Find good beginnings for various types of compositions (must be complete)

1. Learn how to start and end a composition.

2. Improve composition writing skills. How to write the beginning of an essay. The ancients said that "a crested head and a leopard's tail" means that the beginning should be written in a colorful way, like the head of a phoenix. Some people say: "A good beginning is equal to half the success." These all explain the beginning of the article. important.

Similarly, a good beginning is also of great significance for high school entrance examination composition. 1. Ten taboos at the beginning of a composition: ① Avoid cliche statements.

② Avoid being mysterious. At the beginning of some articles, they deliberately play tricks and go around in circles to make people confused and confused, and they are unwilling to write the meaning directly.

In fact, this kind of mystique is precisely the shortcoming of writing. ③Don’t start suddenly.

Some articles lack proper explanation at the beginning, seeming to come out of the blue, clueless and unclear. ④ Avoid unnecessary explanations.

At the beginning of the article, it is impossible not to explain something unexpectedly and not to explain it, nor to make unnecessary explanations. ⑤Don’t express your emotions out of thin air.

⑥Avoid going in big circles. ⑦ Avoid piling up famous sayings.

⑧ Avoid repetition at the beginning. Some articles introduce the background at the beginning. After writing, they feel that the center of the article should be revealed first, so they start again.

⑨ Avoid blindly describing scenes. The main purpose of describing a scene is either to highlight the theme, or to depict the characters, or to enhance the atmosphere. If it has nothing to do with this, generally speaking, such a scene description is meaningless.

⑩Don’t quote blindly. Quotations should be based on the needs of the topic and center, and blind citations should be avoided as much as possible.

2. A good beginning should follow the following principles: 1. Move closer to the theme: Liang Qichao: "The most important thing about an article is that its purpose should be clear at a glance, so that it is easy to move people." The beginning must be consistent with the full text. The main content and central ideas are closely connected and serve to highlight the center.

For example, "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms": The general trend of the world: if it unites for a long time, it must divide, and if it divides for a long time, it must unite. 2. Be short and concise: The beginning should not be too long, it should be like a firecracker, short and powerful, refreshing and shocking.

For example: Mao Dun's "Miscellaneous Memories of Hainan" begins: "We have arrived at the famous 'Tianya Haijiao'." 12 words clearly explain the place we visited, which provides the basis for the following historical understanding caused by what we saw and heard. Memories open the way.

Another example: "Early morning, heavy fog." The beginning of Chen Guokai's "Fog" contains only four characters, which explains the time and environment in which the story takes place, and also hints at the ending of the story, which is profound and meaningful.

3. Be engaging: The beginning should not make people feel bored after reading it. Try to use beautiful language and novel ideas to catch the readers' attention. For example: “Youth is a nectar made from the blood of will and the sweat of hard work—it lasts forever.

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"Youth" 3. Writing skills at the beginning of the composition: (1) Get straight to the point. That is, at the beginning of the article, do not beat around the bush or talk in circles, but directly state the main people, things or things to be described. , introduce the text.

Directly express the author's emotions, point out the center, and guide the whole text.

For example: ① My father and I are not the same. It has been more than two years since we met, and the last thing I can’t forget is his back. Zhu Ziqing’s “Back View”; ② “Talking about Backbone” makes a point at the beginning: “We Chinese have backbone. ”

This kind of opening directly cuts into the title and reveals the theme. 2. The beginning of the sentiment is as follows: The poplar tree is really extraordinary, I praise the poplar tree! Mao Dun’s "Praise to the Poplar" This kind of opening begins with The story is so touching that readers can't help but immerse themselves in it.

3. Go straight to the plot. For example: I went to school very late that morning, and I was very afraid that Mr. Hamel would scold me. Besides, he said he wanted to ask. We break up the words, but I can't even say a word. I think I should stop going to school and go to the wild to play.

When using this opening method, you should pay attention to: before writing. It is necessary to think carefully and refine the beginning that can lead to the main content of the whole article. The language must be very concise and have an engaging effect to arouse the reader's desire to read. (2) Use techniques, that is, use suspense, contrast, and comparison at the beginning of the article. Use techniques such as excitement and foil to set up a clever beginning and strive to leave a deep impression on people.

1. Set up questions and doubts first to narrate the outcome of the plot, set up suspense, or set up questions to solve the problem and arouse explanations. Or discussion. For example: "A Colorful Flower" asks at the beginning: "Why do flowers have all kinds of beautiful and bright colors?" "Another example: Zong Pu's "Wisteria Waterfall" "I couldn't help but stop. ”

Method: ① First raise an unanswered question. ② First intercept a wonderful event fragment.

③ First explain an object that serves as a clue. ④ First arrange a triggering story

⑤ First introduce the characters closely related to the plot 2. Pros and cons: For a person like me, it would be a miracle if there is no strong wind in winter. ;..., and with warm and sunny weather, Jinan is really a treasure.

Lao She's "Winter in Jinan" makes comparisons between positive and negative, which is easy for readers to grasp and can skillfully use imagination. The technique of promoting first and suppressing makes the article full of waves. 3. The introduction of memories is as follows: It was a sultry day in Philadelphia in July.

Although fifty-seven years have passed, the sweltering heat still remains with me. You can still feel it. Morton Hunt's "One Step, Another Step" (3) Using rhetoric, using quotations, metaphors, parallelism and other rhetorical techniques at the beginning of the article can also give people a refreshing feeling.

1. Quotes such as: "Please take my song back to your home, please leave your smile..." Whenever this familiar melody sounds in my ears, it feels like I have met someone I haven't seen for many years. Like an old friend, I feel extra cordial. (Selected from the essay "Songs and Smiles" that scored full marks in the Gansu Provincial High School Entrance Examination) You can also quote poems to arouse readers' screams; or quote proverbs to explain things.

In this way. The beginning of the sentence is concise and clear, which can enhance the momentum of the beginning, but care should be taken to be as accurate as possible to avoid intellectual errors. 2. Parallel repetitions such as: "A friend is someone for whom I can devote my sincere feelings; a friend is someone for whom I can devote my sincere feelings." A person in whom I can put all my trust; a friend who shares with me joys and walks with me in times of crisis.

Living without friends is like living without sunshine. I have such a good friend. "

"Friends" 3. Incisive metaphors such as: Love is a ray of sunshine in winter, which dispels the biting frost; love is a sweet rain after a long drought, which moisturizes the cracked In the heart; love is a beacon in the ocean, pointing out the hope of new life (selected from the essay "Bringing Love to Others" from Hubei Jingzhou High School Entrance Examination).

4. Please quote the beginning of the composition by quoting ancient poems or famous sayings

1. "The edge of a sword comes from sharpening, and the fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold."

Everything you do must go through difficulties and obstacles. can succeed. After experiencing that incident, I suddenly understood this truth.

(The following is about writing about that thing) 2. "Only mother is good in the world, and a mother's child is like a treasure." This song is well-known to every household, but how many people have really experienced it? As Mother's Day is approaching, let's celebrate a holiday for mothers! 3. "If a young man does not work hard, the old man will be sad."

We must cherish the time now and study hard so that we can achieve something in the future. 4. "With perseverance, gold and stone can be carved."

In everything we do in our lives, we can only achieve success through persistent efforts. 5. "Friendship is the light of our lives."

Since reading the book "Charlotte's Web", I really feel that friendship is priceless and we must cherish it. 5. Quoting several ways to set up suspense at the beginning of a composition

Cleverly setting up suspense at the beginning of a composition and creating a certain atmosphere will make the article fascinating and exciting, making the readers eagerly expectant and extremely concerned. Emotions have received good results. Here are several ways to set up suspense at the beginning: 1. Flashback method. Use flashback techniques to put the ending of the full text at the beginning, so that readers can fall into doubts and have questions from the beginning. , there is a desire to read on and solve the mystery. For example: "Comrade's Trust" is an excellent example. At the beginning of the article, it is written that Mr. Lu Xun met a strange young woman, and the young woman handed over a paper bag and a letter Leave it to Mr. Lu Xun. After reading the beginning, readers will naturally ask: What is hidden in this paper bag? What is this letter about? With so many questions, readers are forced to have the idea of ????investigating the origin, and they can't help but read it impatiently. It is difficult for readers not to say yes to such an article, and to achieve a fascinating effect. 2. Contrast method. This method is often written first. People have identified certain things and then put forward opposing views. Because everything has two aspects, positive and negative, positive and negative. In daily life, people often only admit one aspect and ignore the other. If we Seizing "this other aspect" to make a big fuss will make people feel abrupt and realize the novelty of the theme. A student once wrote this at the beginning of an essay: "Foolish Old Man, has long been known as hard work." , a role model of perseverance, but I think Yu Gong is indeed a fool." After reading such a beginning, readers will have doubts, so they must read on. 3. Abnormal behavior method. The article begins with the character's abnormal behavior and introduces People think and have questions. "Two Short Novels" in junior high school Chinese is an example. This kind of beginning is good because it can mobilize the reader's thoughts: Who is this tall figure that the little shoemaker looks at at the intersection every day? Why are you looking at him? The beauty of it is to make use of the abnormal behavior of the little shoemaker. Fourth, the recall method. First, the author's views and evaluation of things or people afterwards at the beginning of the article. This method is used in "A Little Thing". Second, the content of the article The beginning is touching and sad. For example, one student essay begins with this: Whenever I open that collection of portraits and see that familiar face, my thoughts go back to my childhood. So the reader’s thoughts also Taken to the author's childhood. 5. Quoting fables. Begin with a fable to arouse the reader's interest in the principle or thing to be explained. The above three short fables are used to introduce the principle to be explained. This method is mostly used in discussions. The beginning of the article can make the article start novel and enhance the attractiveness and expressive effect of the article. In short, the specific method to be used in "There is no fixed method" depends on the content of the article. However, when setting up suspense at the beginning of the article, you should pay attention to: First, The setting of suspense at the beginning should be concise and to the point, not wordy, do not write content that has little to do with the suspense, and focus on the suspense points.