Partridge Sky

Author: Su Shi

Shi was banished to Huangzhou

The forest is broken, the mountain is bright and the bamboo is hidden in the wall 1, the cicadas are declining Grass small pond. Turn over the blank page and the bird will appear from time to time, and the water will be red and fragrant.

Outside the neighbor, next to the ancient city 3. The stick quinoa slowly turns to the setting sun 4. It rained at three o'clock last night, and it was cool all day long.

All notes

1. The forest is cut off and the mountain is clear: where the forest is cut off, the mountain peak appears.

2. Somersault: Flying in the air.

3. Ancient City: It refers to the ancient city of Huangzhou.

4. Cane Quinoa: leaning on a cane. The fifth of Du Fu's "Nine Poems of Manxing": "The stick quinoa slowly steps up to Fangzhou".

5. Floating life: It means that things are uncertain and life is short. Li She's "Inscribed on the Monk's House in Helin Temple": "I occasionally met a monk talking to him in the bamboo courtyard, and I had half a day's leisure."

This poem was written in the sixth year of Yuanfeng (1083), when Su Shi was in Huangzhou. It depicts a small rural scene after a summer rain.

Describe the scene in the upper palace. At the beginning of the poem, "The forest is broken, the mountain is bright and the bamboo is hidden behind the wall, and the cicadas and grass are scattered in the small pond." Seven typical images of forest, mountain, bamboo, wall, cicada, grass, and pond are used to describe the scene after the summer rain, giving people an airtight feeling. feeling. Finally, "Blank Bird" and "Red Pork in the Water" are compared. One appeals to vision: "always present"; the other appeals to smell: "subtle fragrance". Full of poetry and painting.

Xiaque writes about walking. After the small scene of Jiangcun was painted, the perspective suddenly changed and he stepped into the painting: "Outside the village house, next to the ancient city, the staff slowly turned to the setting sun." The inner world of the author is revealed through his external image. The last two sentences are the finishing touch. The word "engagement" is a personification technique, which contains the bitterness of self-deprecation and the emotion of the poet. "I have to live a life and be cool for a day" goes a step further and transcends the world.

Partridge Sky

Su Shi of the Song Dynasty

The forest is broken, the mountain is bright and the bamboo is hidden behind the wall, and the cicadas are scattered and the grass is falling in the small pond. I can see birds from time to time when I turn over the blank page, and the red sprouts in the water are fragrant and fragrant.

Outside the village, next to the ancient city, the staff slowly turned to the setting sun. It rained at midnight last night, and it was cool all day long.

Brief Analysis

It is appropriate to experience this from the hearts of the relegated guests who are walking slowly among the ancient villages in the ancient city with the setting sun on their bodies. In the distance, there are bright mountains, standing on the forest tops that are like fire in the sunset; nearby, there are beautiful bamboo clumps, hiding the walls of the village houses. As you move forward, the autumn grass is declining and the cicadas are noisy. Then you are delighted to find a clear pond. You can see the shadows of white birds flying in the water and sky, and smell the fragrance of red lotus reflecting the green ripples... The colors are contrasting with each other, and the movement and stillness are opposite. The outline brings such a charming charm to the picture! The poet who lingers among them must be in a particularly relaxed mood.

●Partridge Sky

Su Shi

The forest is broken, the bamboo is hidden in the mountain, and the cicadas are scattered in the small pond.

I can see birds from time to time when I turn over the blank page, and the red pods in the water are fragrant.

Outside the village, next to the ancient city, the staff slowly turned to the setting sun.

It rained in the middle of the night last night, and it was cool all day long.

Appreciation of Su Shi's Ci Poems

This poem was written by Dongpo when he was demoted to Huangzhou. It is a portrayal of his secluded life in the countryside at that time. What the poem expresses is the author's joyful and leisurely mood while enjoying a trip after the rain.

The last film depicts the scenery around the cottage after the rain in late summer and early autumn.

The first two sentences, from far to near, describe the specific environment you are in: at the end of the lush woods in the distance, there are mountains towering into the clouds, clearly visible. Nearby, clusters of green bamboos, like a green barrier, surround a walled courtyard. This walled courtyard is the poet's residence. Near the courtyard, there is a pond with withered grass growing around it. The sound of cicadas was everywhere, and their cries were in chaos. In these two sentences, there are both distant views and close-up views; both moving scenes and quiet scenes; the imagery is broad and distinct. The author uses personification and object-like techniques, and vividly uses the three highly subjective adjectives "broken", "hidden" and "bright" to make the scenery vivid and lifelike.

Three or four sentences, the meaning is deeper. In the vast sky, white birds can be seen flying up and down from time to time, soaring freely. The pond is full of lotus flowers, reflecting the green water and exuding a soft fragrance. The artistic conception is so fresh and elegant, it seems quite poetic; and the contrast between words and sentences is neat and precise. Hibiscus is another name for lotus. "Xixixiang" is a rather delicate description, which means that the fragrance exuded by lotus flowers is not a strong and tangy aroma, but a pleasant light fragrance. These two sentences describe the scenery with color and fragrance, movement and stillness. The two scenes in the air and on the ground complement each other, forming a beautiful picture that complements each other.

In the film, the author walks slowly with a quinoa stick in his hand as the sun sets, showing his contented and reclusive life. These three sentences are like character sketches, showing their inner world through external images, which is also a clever technique.

The last two sentences are the finishing touch. The main idea of ??the sentence is: God is so affectionate, it rained well at three o'clock last night, so that he spent another cool day. The word "diligence" is a personification technique. The word "Fusheng" is adapted from "Zhuangzi". "Deliberately" means "life is like floating, death is like rest". These two sentences express the author's joy in enjoying the trip.

This poem first writes about the village scenery that the author saw while traveling, and then points out that the sightseeing and sightings written in the poem were all caused by the rain last night, expressing his feelings after the rain. New cool joy. This kind of writing method avoids straightforward narration, and makes the reading tactful and implicit, with endless aftertaste.