Five principles for the universal beginning and end of college entrance examination Chinese compositions

Principle 1: Rigorous structure from beginning to end

Example:

1. (beginning) At the end of the city, there are no bustling streets and shining neon lights; at the end of the city, there are only dilapidated shantytowns with people who have experienced the hardships of life; at the end of the city, there is a group of people like them.

(End) The sun rises from the horizon, lighting up the end of the city and lighting up their lives.

2. (Beginning) Standing on the banks of the Seine, you can feel the fashionable and elegant pulse of Paris; standing on Fifth Avenue, you can feel the gorgeous and gorgeous atmosphere of New York; walking on the streets of Ginza, you can appreciate Tokyo Ancient and modern culture; staying by the Huangpu River, can you appreciate the inclusive and unique spirit of Shanghai?

(End) I face the city in infinite thinking, touch its shell, and long to touch it its soul. I hope that one day its inner substance can be as beautiful and moving as the outer shell. I hope that one day those falsehoods and frivolities will become real and solid. I hope that "clouds disappear like rain, and colors shine brightly". I hope that we can touch it again. The beauty of the city that scales like a flower from the inside out.

Principle 2: Natural restraint

Example:

(Beginning) Life is actually a process, many things, many people, failed and experienced Only then will you understand and mature. When failure comes, don't be sad, but regard it as an opportunity for growth and an opportunity for exercise. If you rush forward, a better and more splendid life will be waiting for you, and you will have a sense of accomplishment; if you retreat and do not move forward, you will only usher in more failures and more regrets in life.

(End) When we are about to finish our life, we will look back on this life, especially those difficulties and failures, and we will feel that perhaps it is precisely because of these that we have enriched our lives and defeated and overcome them. They make our lives more perfect.

Principle Three: The finishing touch

Example:

(Beginning) Sad disasters have existed since ancient times. However, throughout history, who has ever seen such inspiring and earth-shaking unity? "Historical Records" says: If the people are of one heart, the family will be safe; if the king and the people are of one heart, the country will prosper. Today, this is the hand in hand of people and people, people and country, country and the world. Why worry about the unrest of the family and the failure of the country?

(End) Together with the green mountains, we have gone through the wind and rain together and are reunited. Perhaps the link that brings together people from all over the world is this expectation: to establish a heart for the world, to establish a destiny for the people, to continue the unique learning of the saints, and to create peace for all generations!

Principle Four: Use poetry

Example:

The flowing light can easily throw people away, red cherries and green bananas. As you walk down the path of your life, sometimes it’s hard to see if you’ve taken a detour. You might as well jump out and adjust the focus to capture the best life.

Principle 5: Use rhetoric

Example:

Although our lives are not like Li Bai's "If you are proud of life, you must have all the joy, and you will come back after all the money is gone" It is heroic, but ideals make it bright, struggle makes it real, and harvest makes it have a golden poetry.

Use perseverance to break the shackles of fate, live a poetic life, plant your ideals, and work tirelessly. I believe that you will eventually reap the rewards of "the geese lead away the sorrowful heart, and the mountains carry the moon"!

Nine classic tips for the beginning of a composition

1. Use parallelism to get the head start

Life is like wine, either fragrant or strong. Because of honesty, it becomes mellow; life is like wine. Songs may be high or low, and they become melodious because of trustworthiness; life is picturesque, whether bright or elegant, and they become beautiful because of honesty.

("Brewing Life with Integrity")

Parallelism can increase the momentum of the article, make it catchy, and make the article full of rhythm and phonological beauty. Used to describe things, it can create colorful scenes; used to narrate, it can be hearty; used to reason, it can be majestic; used to debate, it can overwhelm mountains and seas; used to express emotions, it can be overwhelming.

2. The whole is scattered and staggered, and the theme is dexterous.

If I can pick up a handful of moonlight, I will choose the softest one; if I can pick the red leaves of Xiangshan, I will choose the most gorgeous one; If I could pick the stars from the sky, I would choose the brightest ones. Maybe you will say that my choice is not the best, but I believe in my choice. ("My Choice, I Like")

The combination of whole and prose sentences can make the sentence patterns flexible, add melody and phonological beauty to the article, and give people an aesthetic feeling. At the beginning, "moonlight"? "soft", "red leaves"? "gorgeous", "stars"? "bright" are used to form the layout. The colors are bright, which has the beauty of "color" first and the beauty of music.

3. Quotes into the title, elegant and profound

Zhang Chao of the Qing Dynasty said in "Out of Dreams": "The chrysanthemum regards Yuan Ming as its confidant, and the plum blossom regards He Jing as its confidant. Bamboo takes Ziyou as its confidant. "When facing the sea; facing this blue sky, I can't help but think: Who does the sea take as its confidant? ("Facing the Sea")

Quoting the ancient sayings, Follow the literary tone of the quotation and cleverly introduce the topic.

4. Delicate description and vivid imagery

I once looked at life with the eyes of water, and life was once as gloomy and distant as autumn water. The sun shone through the maple forest, and I looked up along the beam, but I seemed to see an endless expanse of japonicas, as white as mist and snow, and as soft as water plants. In the blur, I saw my mother's eyes, and saw the moment when my mother made her choice. ("Let eyelashes carry love and happiness")

Descriptive language often tends to become rigid and plain, but if candidates can cleverly grasp the characteristics, pay attention to reference, and flexibly innovate, they can Breaking the rigidity of description and the blandness of narrative, the description of the image embodies a poetic and picturesque atmosphere that is heart-wrenching.

5. The aphorism emerges and enlightenment enters the topic

Life is accidental, and death is inevitable. Life and death, apart from a few cheers and a few bursts of crying, there is nothing else. So, what about life between life and death? ("What is Life")

The aphoristic opening is eye-catching. "Life is accidental, death is inevitable, and between life and death is life." Concise, simple, profound and incisive.

6. The opening of the dialogue is fascinating

Before his Nirvana, the eminent monk Hongyi said to his disciples: "Look at my teeth, what do you think?" "All of them have fallen out." "What about the tongue? Is it still there?" "It's still there." "So, tough things are always better than hard things." ("Tenacity? The Character I Pursue")

A profound Zen dialogue leads to the concept of "tenacity" and launches the point of view of the article.

7. Begin with an example and present it concisely

Choosing is difficult, let alone a choice of the soul. Gao Jianli chose to die for Jing Ke; Ma Benzhai's mother chose to sacrifice for the revolution; Zhu Yingtai chose to transform into a butterfly for true love. This is how they choose between friendship, family and love. ("Between Life and Death")

The article begins with a concise introduction to the deeds of famous people: Gao Jianli chose death for friendship, used his own head to defend the wise saying "a man who knows himself will die", and became a great scholar through the ages; Ma Benzhai’s mother chose to devote herself to sacrifice for human justice with her sincere and profound maternal love, setting up a monument of personality for her son and future generations; Zhu Yingtai chose to transform into a butterfly and used her soul to sublimate Liang Shanbo’s love. It sets an example for lovers to last forever.

8. Symmetrical opening, neat and bright

In the eyes of the butterfly, the flower is an angel, because the flower gives her the nectar of life. In the eyes of the flower, the bee is a close friend, because the bee gives her the nectar of life. The continuation of life. ("Learning to Observe Historically")

The article begins with a set of symmetrical sentences to give the temperament of butterflies, bees, and flower people. Through vivid and appropriate anthropomorphic techniques, the form and content are perfectly unified. It reflects the candidates' superb language skills.

9. The opening line of the poem highlights the underlying content

"It is the sorrow of separation that keeps cutting, and the reason is still chaotic, but it is not a feeling in the heart." This is Empress Li's sentiments; " I can't help but feel ecstasy, the west wind blows behind the curtains, and people are thinner than yellow flowers. "This is Li Qingzhao's feeling; "I left gently, just as I came gently, I waved my hand gently to bid farewell to the clouds in the western sky." This is Li Qingzhao's feeling. Xu Zhimo's reluctance; "People have joys and sorrows, separations and reunions, the moon waxes and wanes, this matter has never been complete in ancient times." Is this Su Dongpo's magnanimity? ("Beautiful Farewell")

10. Lyrical Discussion , extraordinary momentum

In fact, tranquility is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and a heart that can contain everything are enough to relax a tense face and let a smile appear. People's faces bloomed gently, and the smiles were like clouds wandering in the horizon, gently dotting the blue sky, fresh and natural, (selected from the Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination full-mark essay "Thoughts from the Sky")

Spring is like the sea, youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and hard work. I hope that people all over the world can let their youth bloom with the fragrance of flowers! (Selected from the full score essay "In the Mood for Love" in Jilin Province High School Entrance Examination)

These two paragraphs are written from the heart, out of emotion, and use Parallelism, metaphor, and beautiful words are used to express the true inner emotions, coupled with appropriate discussion, making the end of the article powerful and powerful.

11. The scenery contrasts and the scene merges into one

The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the setting sun. . The sun gradually faded in the distance and disappeared into the sunset. The two merged into one, without any distance. (Selected from "Reading in the Rain", a full-mark essay for the Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination)

The characteristics of the ending of this paragraph are very prominent, and the role of scenery is also obvious. The author hints at the relationship between two generations through the description of the scenery after the rain. The emotional barrier disappears, and emotions and scenes are organically combined. Subtle and timeless. Endless aftertaste.

At this moment, a ray of sunlight shines into the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded tree bathing in it. Oh, on the road of growing up, although the wind and clouds are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Selected from "Growing Up in the Sun", a full score essay for the high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province)

The ending of this paragraph highlights the role of sunshine, combines sunshine with growth, and implies that although the road to growth is not smooth, it is full of sunshine. , expressing an optimistic mood. It not only responds to the theme, but also appears to be deeply emotional.

Tips on ending techniques for college entrance examination essays

As the saying goes: "Weaving baskets is all about closing the knot." The end of the article is very important. It cannot end in an anticlimax or add anything superfluous. The ending should be concise and meaningful, with a lingering aftertaste that readers can remember long after they finish reading the article.

An exquisite ending can make the overall structure of the article more rigorous, natural, complete and unified, make the content and purpose of the article more profound and distinct, add to the artistic charm of the article, and make people feel like tasting fragrant tea and chewing it. The olive flavor is endlessly memorable. There is a method for ending but there is no fixed method. Appropriate methods should be adopted according to the overall layout of the article. Only in this way can the end of the article leave a beautiful and deep impression on people.

A beautiful piece of music must have a good ending, either lingering or shocking.

The end of an argumentative essay can play a role in summarizing the entire text, echoing the entire article, and deepening the main idea. It can also comprehensively use argumentative and lyrical methods to make the article meaningful, thought-provoking, and endlessly memorable, also known as the leopard's tail. Such endings usually have the following types:

1. The finishing touch

Therefore, when you are racking your brains about a thing or a problem, you might as well put it away When you taste it, you will suddenly find that distance is not important, and distance is not a tie. Things that are far away have a different world!

"No gold is pure, and no one is perfect." "No one can boast that they are perfect and represent the eternal truth; but at the same time, no one is useless, so we must believe in ourselves and others. Believe in yourself when you are "confident" and believe in others when you are "confused". Only by letting the two cooperate and complement each other can we have a wonderful life.

Small elements such as calligraphy, painting, and music constitute the magnificent five thousand years of Chinese culture. This kind of broadness cannot be covered by listing the subtle elements one by one. We need to go on a cultural journey, taste the splendor of culture from branch to branch, accept the baptism and influence of Chinese culture, and make ourselves gain in personality. Enrich, refine and sublimate!

Use concise or philosophical sentences to summarize, reveal the center, point out the meaning; or wrap up the discussion and highlight the main point. At the end of these compositions, very concise or philosophical language is used to clarify the topic, highlight the center of the article, enhance the strength of the argument, and increase the integrity of the argument structure.

2. Sublimation type

For example, the author of "The Way of Civil and Military Affairs, One Zhang Yi Relaxation" ends like this: In summary, busyness can make us feel the fullness of life, but our Busyness should be relaxed, so that the quality of life can be guaranteed, and everyone can be productive and productive, thereby bringing prosperity to the country and happiness to the people. (The author extends the effects of relaxation from individuals to the country and the people, enriching and deepening the meaning of the text, and naturally sublimating the theme.)

3. Anaphora type

Ending anaphora The title of the article may echo the beginning, echoing the previous and later, and connecting the blood. Anaphora can be divided into two types according to the specific expression method.

"Don't judge it by your likes and dislikes" ends: Don't judge it by your likes and dislikes, maybe you will find that Setaria sibirica will also bloom beautiful flowers! At the end, the topic is mentioned, and the title of the article is echoed, forming a symmetrical beauty in the structure. Give people a clear and profound impression, stick to the topic, point out the argument, and conclude effectively.

4. Quotation style

Use famous quotes, sayings, aphorisms, lyrics and poems to end, with a strong ending and a lingering lingering sound.

The end of "Unreliable, Must Be Reliable"? Finally, "All emotions are good in nature, what we should avoid is just their abuse and misuse." Descartes also told us that when we recognize things, we should be cautiously based on reason, supplemented by emotions, and strive to make the closeness and distance of emotions play a positive role in the process of recognizing things.

At the end, Descartes’ famous sayings are quoted, which not only summarizes the previous article, but also further demonstrates the argument. It not only closely corresponds to the beginning, but also clearly points out the central argument of the whole text, giving people a clear and clear view. Deeply impressed. Ending with famous quotes, aphorisms, sayings, etc. not only improves the article as a whole, but also makes the article more philosophical and thought-provoking.

5. Parallel style

This kind of ending can reflect the previous text in terms of content, but it is not a simple repetition, but has the function of deepening the theme, and is also intimate and touching in semantics. It is rich in rhythm and rhythm, which can make the scorers sigh in admiration.

For example:

The busy figure has also contributed to the modernization construction;

The busy figure has also made the world move and shout for you;

The busy figure also expresses the call of love to the people who care about you!

The author intentionally placed the three parallel sentences in independent lines, which strengthened the intention of the ending and left a mark for the markers. A deep impression.

The above three ending forms are often compatible with each other, making the ending form richer. Obviously, to write a good ending, the author must have a strong overall sense of the context of the whole text, a strong awareness of deepening the center and sublimating the theme, and the words and sentences must express full passion, so that the ending is shocking.

6. Asking questions

The ending of the question is thought-provoking.

Ending of "Mi Lu and Kong Ming": Why have thousands of years of cultural accumulation made us more utilitarian and short-sighted? Why are we bathed in civilization in modern society, but narrow-mindedness grows in our hearts? Milu and Kong Ming, Why is our treatment so unfair? Should we also re-examine how we should treat forgetting and remembering?

The end of a certain candidate’s college entrance examination masterpiece "Life is also an Answer Sheet": On the big examination paper of life, the question It seems simple and the answers seem colorful, but it is not as simple as imagined to give a satisfactory answer. How would you answer?

End of "The Tireless Life": In a busy life, there is a lot of happiness but not a lot of pain. When your mentality is calm, the road will naturally be smooth. Although "Walk Away" has long been withdrawn from the pop song rankings, why not take a walk in life?

The above-mentioned masterpieces all use questions at the end of the article, which not only arouses people's Deep thinking will also produce a strong appeal and achieve a better ending effect.

7. Lyrical style

A lyrical ending can express the author's emotions, show his views and attitudes, arouse readers' excitement, and enhance the appeal of the article.

Ending of "Forever Su Wu": Magnificent, that eternal Su Wu! Magnificent, that shocking forgetting! Magnificent, that earth-shattering remembering! Magnificent, that thousand-year ode to forgetting and remembering !Ah, our eternal Su Wu!

Expressing admiration and praise for Su Wu with "magnificent", "great", "wonderful" and "majestic" is contagious.

Ending of "Ordinary Achieves Greatness": The earth is speechless, the green pines, flowers, grass and waves are all waving to us. We should always remember: Ordinary things can also achieve greatness.

End of "What Should Be Forgotten and What Should Be Remembered": Let us forget what should be forgotten and remember what should be remembered! This is the sacred mission entrusted to us by the times.

8. Contrastive ending

A contrasting ending can highlight the theme of the article in sharp contrast.

Ending of "Tug of War with Eternity": On the balance of life, some people choose personal honor and disgrace, but even more people choose the unimpeded release of individuality, the prosperity and peace of the country, and the steadfastness of the nation. And it is often these latter people who hold up the balance of life, hold on to the rope of eternity, and explore the eternal answer in the tug-of-war between life and eternity.

9. Repetitive style

The same sentence appears repeatedly, sighing three times in one sentence, and making people feel angry.

Ending of "Walking Along the Road": Forgetting and remembering the journey together brings the experience and experience given by life; forgetting and remembering the journey together brings the beautiful gains and contributions of life; forgetting and remembering the journey together brings the beautiful harvest and sacrifice of life. Keep in mind that we are walking together along the way, and we feel happy and happy along the way!

10. Postscript type

The ending is in the form of a postscript to express emotions through vivid metaphors, which is both literary and elegant. Implicit and philosophical.

For example, the postscript of "That Fish, That Eagle, That Man":

After all, fish cannot do without the water that gives it the source of life.

After all, the eagle cannot do without the sky that gives it the source of hope.

I can never escape the web of happiness woven with love by my parents, relatives and friends?