1. Write an essay based on the materials

Life is about tempering

- I want to improve myself

"After the storm, there is the most beautiful thing." There are rainbows, the most dazzling diamonds in the cooled lava, and the most fragrant wine in the jars that have been dusted for thousands of years.", "The sun always comes after the wind and rain..."

Jade is not beautiful without being cut, and people are not beautiful. The grinding doesn't work. Hone yourself, cultivate yourself through training, reshape yourself through training, and maximize the value of life. There are many trials in life. What we should do is not to decide to give up during the trials, but to learn to strengthen ourselves during the trials.

In the past two days, I helped my mother pack away old newspapers and accidentally saw a piece of news: 11 years ago, a rural family in Henan suffered a major change: the father suddenly suffered from intermittent mental illness, and the injured The mother left without saying goodbye, and there was still a young brother and an abandoned baby girl her father picked up after he fell ill who needed to be taken care of. The burden of the family fell on the eldest son, Hong Zhanhui, who was only 12 years old at the time.

So for 11 years, Hong Zhanhui overcame unimaginable difficulties while studying, taking care of his father who was often sick, and raising his adopted sister... During this period, he once wavered, He once thought of escaping, but a kind of responsibility finally made him "just walk silently, unwilling to give up." He began to work part-time, run a small business, and lived frugally to support the whole family. He also repeatedly refused donations from others and insisted on relying on the money he earned from his own efforts to support his family... Isn't this called self-improvement by Hong Zhanhui? This is a good example of learning to strengthen oneself through hardship.

Constant self-improvement is the mother of luck. If life is a drama, then training is the soul of the drama. Trials are all kinds of dissatisfaction in life, in study, work, etc. For some people who cannot stand the test and lack the temper of life, they will be helpless and frustrated when encountering these things; on the contrary, for a person who often tempers himself and has a strong will, he will stand up from adversity. Break out in good times!

"To temper yourself, you need to devote time and patience. To temper yourself, you need to be able to endure loneliness and loneliness. To temper yourself, you need to be unafraid of the difficulties in life. To temper yourself, you need to overcome your own difficulties. Lazy and selfish. "Indeed, even the eagle has to go through the baptism of the storm to become strong; even the big tree has to go through the sun and rain before it can thrive after being trampled by people. I would like to ask which famous and great man in today's world has not been tempered, has not experienced difficulties, and has not encountered adversity? Napoleon once said: Self-improvement, like honor, is an island without beaches.

Hardship is not only a word, but also a journey that everyone must pass on the road of life. But who can continue to walk after this period depends on your one percent Luck and ninety-nine percent good luck.

The more tempered the mind becomes, the more flexible it becomes; the more tempered the mind becomes, the more thorough it becomes; the more tempered the limbs become, the more developed they become, and the more tempered the will becomes, the more determined it becomes. Only a life that has been tempered can lead a fulfilling life, and only youth that has experienced tempering can be more radiant.

Teaching will not be too easy, nor will it be too painful. Whether you decide to give up or learn to strengthen yourself during training depends on yourself. But you have to remember: although one success does not mean eternal success, a good start is half the success after all; but on the contrary, if you cannot bear the blow and lose to yourself once, you may lose to yourself forever. You must know: It is difficult for people who have smooth sailing to achieve extraordinary results; there is no way to win over others except self-blame, and there is no way to win over others except self-improvement.

Hard work is a precious asset in life, and continuous self-improvement is the testimony of this precious life journey. Life is about tempering - everyone must improve themselves! 2. Write a composition based on the materials

The composition question in the mid-term Chinese language exam for senior high school students is a composition based on the materials.

This is what our special reporter expected: God held a meeting to learn how animals were used since they were given wings. The eagle said: "I use my wings to fly in the sky. At this height, no prey can escape my eyes, so I live a worry-free life."

The ostrich said: "I use my legs to fly Running in the desert, my wings have never been used. They have become a heavy burden on my back." The penguin said: "I have turned my wings into fins, which enable me to swim in the ocean like a fish. Come and go freely in the depths.

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God suddenly found a person sitting on the scene, and asked strangely: "You have no wings, what are you doing here? "The man said: "O God, although you did not give me wings, my soul can fly. He takes me to fly to places that cannot be reached by any footsteps. " God sighed for a long time after hearing these words.

In fact, what "that man" said also gave us all a lot of inspiration. Faced with such a piece of material, how can we write a good composition for the material? ? I think you should pay attention to the following four points when writing a composition for the material: 1. Choose a good angle and establish the topic first.

First, read the material carefully and summarize the "person" from the material. "The following perspectives can be summarized in what he said: 1. Let the wings of the soul fly, 2. Don't rely on other people's gifts, 3. Don't complain about God's injustice, 4. God is fair.

From the same wings, different animals have different uses, the following points can be summarized: 5. The road is made by people, 6. Destiny is in one's own hands. You can also use the theme of "Eagle, Ostrich, Penguin". Talk about adapting to the environment, surviving and developing in a harsh environment to achieve success.

Then choose the most relevant content that you are familiar with from many angles to write, so that you will be comfortable writing. Classmate Ji Min's composition "Fly with the Wings of the Soul" has an eye-catching, vivid and vivid title.

2. The structure of the composition must be reasonable. The structure of the composition must be composed of at least three parts. .

That is, the reading material summarizes the arguments, analyzes the arguments in connection with reality, and summarizes the full text to emphasize the point of view.

The linking to the actual part is the focus of the whole text. , should be written in detail. The final part should summarize the text, refer to the material, and be concise and concise.

3. A good article should not only have a correct viewpoint and a reasonable structure. Have beautiful language.

Using more metaphors in the article will make the article more vivid and interesting.

The use of parallelism in the article will make the article more powerful. The use of rhetoric and careful wording will add a lot of bright color to the article.

As the saying goes: A person's kindness, cruelty, humility, arrogance, elegance, and rudeness will all be reflected in his articles. Do you want your articles to impress others with kindness, humility, and elegance? Don't write questions that are vicious, arrogant, or rude into your article.

After reading a neatly written and fluent essay, people will think that the author is a serious and responsible person. A meticulous person. The marking teacher will always give you a few extra points.

It is natural to give a cold reception or even be criticized for an article with many typos and illegible handwriting. .Whether the words are appealing and whether the copying is neat is also a very important part of the examination composition.

High school entrance examination compositions can be divided into two categories: one is proposition composition, which includes full proposition composition and semi-proposition composition; The second is to compose based on materials, which includes topic composition, reading composition, and picture composition (topics, articles, and pictures are all materials). The characteristic of composition based on materials is that candidates first read the materials and then write their own composition based on the materials.

Composition based on materials has been the highlight of composition in the high school entrance examination in previous years, so it is the focus of composition review; in previous years, candidates tended to digress when doing this type of composition, so it is also a difficulty in composition review. Once the key and difficult points are broken through, other types of compositions will be easier to solve.

How to write a good composition for the material? The first step is to accurately grasp the gist of the material. This is the most critical step in writing this type of essay.

In previous years, candidates tended to go off-topic when writing this type of essay because they did not accurately grasp the main theme of the material. So, how to accurately grasp the gist of the material? Here are some easy-to-master methods.

1. Pay attention to the title of the material (article) (if there is a title). For some articles, the title is the topic of the article.

2. Pay attention to the beginning of the material (article). In some articles, the center of the article is highlighted at the beginning. 3. Pay attention to the end of the material (article). More articles will have questions at the end.

4. Pay attention to the lyrical sentences in the materials (articles). Authors often use argumentative and lyrical sentences to highlight the center of the article.

For example, there is a composition material for the high school entrance examination. It first writes the story of two calligraphers. One strives to be like the ancients with each stroke, while the other strives to be natural with each stroke. The last paragraph of the material is: "Mr. Qi Baishi said: 'Those who learn from me will live, and those who are like me will die.'

'If you cannot get out of the framework of your predecessors, you will naturally not have your own world." This paragraph Words are discussions.

Considering this discussion in conjunction with the story, it is not difficult to see the theme of the material: dare to innovate. 4. Pay attention to the requirements or prompts behind the materials.

For example, in a high school entrance examination essay question, it first attaches the original text, and then makes a request: "After reading the article "One Tree Three Lessons", we have been inspired a lot. Please give us one aspect ( Such as success and failure, temptation, opportunity...), write your own topic, choose your own style, and write an article of no less than 600 words. ”

After reading the materials carefully, it is not difficult to find out the requirements. , the three meanings in the material: "success and failure", "temptation", and "opportunity" are the three scopes of writing, and the composition can be based on one of these aspects. 5. Pay attention to the logical relationship between the content in the material.

Some materials, especially pictures, do not contain questions or prompts. It is up to the candidates to grasp the gist of the materials based on the relationship between the content of the materials. For example, look at the essay title "Donkey Eating Sketches".

There are five scenes in the picture: 1. Two donkeys with the same rope go to eat grass in opposite directions; 2. Both donkeys are pulled by the rope; 3. Two donkeys They came together to discuss; 4. The two donkeys walked to the left together and ate grass; 5. The two donkeys walked to the right together and ate grass. From the front. 3. Write an essay based on the material

Precious things always grow slowly - this is the focus of this material and the main theme of the article.

You can use it based on what happened in life. , for example, many fake pearls are actually pearls now. People put large plastic balls into clam shells and let the secreted substances of the clam shells wrap the plastic. In this way, you can get a very big pearl in just a few months, because pearls The shell is thin, so if you polish it a little, the plastic inside will be revealed. But what about real pearls? It is the result of fine gravel being wrapped in clam shells. This process takes at least several years, decades or even hundreds of years. There is a natural difference between real pearls and fake pearls, whether they are used for medicine or decoration, or in price. Therefore, they are precious. Something grows slowly because it has to withstand the test of time.

Okay, now you can extend, what can withstand the test of time and become a treasure? Ideas, literary classics, and good works may have taken the author a lot of time or even a lifetime to complete. However, it is because they are hard-won and have withstood the test of time that they become more precious.

Of course, you can also express your own opinions based on the fast food consumption and fast food culture that are now emerging. Combine it with reality.

Good articles must not only accumulate, but also learn to diverge. Good articles Come on! ! 4. Write an essay based on the material

Question analysis

1. This question is an essay topic that leads to the writing scope from the material. The "material" refers to the world-famous rock musician John Lennon. famous quotes. The famous saying has two meanings: the first level is "If you can't change yourself, you change the world"; the second level is "If you can't change the world, you change yourself." In short, one is to change the world, and the other is to change yourself. The material is concise, comprehensive and full of philosophy.

2. Thinking deeply, John Lennon’s words reveal a basic social reality - in the relationship between people and the world, they always have to experience a history of "conflict-harmony". From the perspective of ideological roots, this sentence embodies the dialectical philosophical view. "Changing the world and changing yourself" are in a contradictory movement of the unity of opposites.

3. Candidates are "required" to write that this famous quote triggers their own thinking. They can write about their own experiences related to this famous quote in their lives, or express their understanding of this famous quote, whether it is "experience" ” or “understanding” must be consistent with the style of your choice.

When writing, you can choose to write "change the world", you can write "change yourself", or you can write both, but no matter how you write, you should reflect the inner conflict between the two. If you choose to write about one side, you should also use the other side as the background. , if one side is completely put aside and the other side is written in isolation, although it is not a deviation in conception, it is obviously not the best angle.

For example: The examination article "Change Yourself" has three sub-themes in the whole text, focusing on the specific methods of "changing yourself". To change your mentality, change your thoughts, and change your methods, the focus of the writing falls on In terms of mentality, thoughts and methods, if you ignore the opposite of "changing the world", you will naturally not be able to get high scores.

4. The material raises a question about the trade-off between "changing yourself" and "changing the world". It is both a restriction and a prompt. If the candidate only uses examples to confirm the prompt, it will be comprehensive and without his own analysis and Without understanding, it is impossible to achieve high scores.

For example: Candidates rigidly apply the hierarchical formula "What is to change oneself and change the world", "Why should one change oneself and change the world", "How to change oneself and change the world". Although such an article will not go off topic, but just by looking at the arguments, you can basically judge that the article has no thoughts and insights of its own.

Perspective of intention

"The perspective of an essay can distinguish the candidate's thinking and comprehensive ability." A clear perspective is a prerequisite for a high-scoring essay, and scattered perspectives will result in no center. The argument may not be written thoroughly within the limited space of 800 words. Chen Miaoyun once said that for an 800-word essay, it is better to write only one angle. If you write two angles, it means that the candidate has reduced the level of the essay to a 400-word essay.

What elements should a good "angle" contain?

First, it must be realistic and targeted. "Articles are written according to the times." Any article should be based on the present moment and reflect an attitude of paying attention to life and reality. This question is directly related to the current "democracy and freedom", "innovative development", "social harmony" and "following the trend". It is best for articles to be based on reality and think about fashion and the future through history and tradition.

Second, there must be the manifestation of thinking. Writing ability is first of all thinking ability. The ideas expressed in many candidates' articles are superficial and outdated, lacking thinking. Sticking to the facts and discussing the matter, the result is that the article has no new ideas and ideas. This is firstly related to the choice of conceptual perspective, and secondly, students lack basic perspectives to understand the world and themselves, and often make partial generalizations, which blinds the vision.

Structural language

First, multi-domain + individual thinking. Candidates should choose the stylistic themes that they are good at, and after understanding the meaning of the question and determining the basic point of view, they should quickly search for personal life experiences and various materials that can prove their opinions in the material library, and choose a touching life experience to write a narrative, or a relatively novel one. Write argumentative essays based on viewpoints and relatively fresh materials. At the same time, candidates can try different and reverse ideas to achieve breakthroughs in theme ideas, such as: changing oneself and changing the world, in addition to the relationship of exclusion and opposition, can also be unified and transformed. It can be said that "changing yourself is the first step to changing the world." "One step" and "Although we cannot change the world, we do not need to change ourselves." This idea shows the personality and depth of students' independent thinking.

Second, there needs to be a point of view that governs the entire article. The content of your article should have internal logic to avoid the article looking fragmented. Many candidates write in a three-paragraph format. This structure is correct, but if candidates mechanically fill in content according to the three-paragraph format, the contents of the three paragraphs will be disconnected and isolated.

Third, be able to focus on and summarize the materials in the text, and unify the viewpoints with the materials. The examples you give must be consistent with your point of view. Many students are wrong when they give examples of changing themselves. They are just examples of changing the world, or the examples do not show how they changed themselves or the world. Also, the point of view is to "change yourself", but using "Jobs", "Qu Yuan" and others as examples is obviously difficult to justify.

Before you start writing, you must have a good idea and clarify the central idea, paragraph layout, detailed distribution, etc. You should be confident and do not think about it while writing. Should I write sub-arguments to highlight the structure? If the sub-arguments can be summarized and focused on a general argument, you may wish to write the sub-arguments; if you do not write the sub-arguments, you should pay attention to "different examples and synonymous analysis".

Detailed reference: Primary and secondary school essay reading answer website 5. Please draw up your own topic based on the materials and write an essay of about 600 words

Teach children to learn to be independent and self-reliant

"Sweat one's own sweat, eat one's own food, do one's own work, rely on heaven, earth, and ancestors. This is not considered a hero." This is Zheng Banqiao, a great painter of the Qing Dynasty and one of the "Eight Eccentrics of Yangzhou" The case of godson. He disciplined them very strictly and never indulged them. Zheng Banqiao's method of teaching children has given us a profound revelation: Parents should first teach their children to learn to "hands-on" and master some basic life skills so that children can learn to be independent in practice. This is an effective way to cultivate children's good character.

It is better to walk your own path and create your own life. It is better to rely on yourself than rely on heaven and earth. In order to completely eliminate children's dependence on their parents, today's parents should pay attention to the cultivation of children's self-improvement spirit, and parents should play an important role in this.

The so-called spirit of self-improvement refers to the spirit of struggle that focuses on exerting subjective initiative to overcome all difficulties, independence and perseverance. It is the ability to discover and solve problems independently. The spirit of self-improvement is an excellent tradition of the Chinese nation. From Kuang Heng, who cut through walls to steal money, to Sima Qian, who endured humiliation and wrote books; from Lu Xun, who gave up medicine and turned to literature to save the people, to Zhang Haidi, who was disabled and determined to challenge himself, the spirit of self-improvement of many people with lofty ideals has inspired generations after generations. youth.

The spirit of self-improvement is the foundation of success. Only with the spirit of self-improvement can children have the motivation to move forward, proactively solve problems, and show perseverance and tenacity in the face of setbacks.

On the contrary, in real life, many children seriously lack the spirit of self-improvement. They pursue enjoyment and are weak-willed. Even if you have certain ideals, it is for the various honors and enjoyment after realizing your ideals. But in the face of reality, there is no countermeasure and they are unwilling to make efforts. If there is no harvest, they will be dejected, even disheartened, and unable to recover.

The awareness of self-improvement and self-reliance is the inevitable result of children's physical and mental development. Middle school students long for self-care and self-reliance and hope that others will recognize their adult status. If this psychology is not satisfied, they will form a strong dependence due to "over-protection" and become timid and cowardly.

To get rid of children's dependence, we first start by changing the parents. Parents should try their best to create opportunities for their children to exercise. Start with the trivial matters in life and let your children do what they can. Encourage them to actively participate in school or social organization activities. Take on more tasks during activities so that you have the opportunity to face problems independently. After they complete something independently, they should be encouraged in time to enhance their self-confidence. When children encounter setbacks, give them more help and understanding, analyze the reasons for failure with them, and study solutions to the problems.

"If you want your child to be independent as soon as possible, then you should teach him how to do work, complete tasks and achieve results." 6. Based on the following materials, write an article, no Less than 600 words

Be brave in innovation and break through yourself

Einstein said, "He who walks in the footsteps of others will never leave his own footprints." In the journey of life, we need innovation.

If you follow in the footsteps of others, you will always follow the path of others.

You will never forget the story of the famous inventor Edison. In that era when there were no lights at night, people could only light candles and work and study by the weak candlelight. The diligent and studious Edison had a sudden idea: Maybe he could invent something to change this situation. With this curiosity for invention and love for knowledge, he began the path of exploration. Failures one after another did not discourage him, but gave him the motivation to move forward and inspired his fighting spirit. How many people advised him to give up and stop wasting time, and how many people laughed at him when they saw him failing again and again. After people's ridicule and countless failures, he succeeded. The world's first light bulb turned on, emitting a dazzling light in the dark night. Edison also received the title of "King of Inventions".

Edison was lucky. He dared to break through himself and innovate. It is he who allows people to live a life of light at night. If Edison, like others, was willing to work in the dark nights and be satisfied with the environment at that time, then the electric light would not have been invented. Perhaps on a dark night today, you still have to study and work quietly.

Edison told us with his practical actions: Life needs innovation, and science needs innovation.

No coincidence. Our country's great thinker and writer Mr. Lu Xun lived in a dark feudal society and was oppressed by feudal ideas since he was a child. But Mr. Lu Xun, who had advanced ideas, was not restrained. He knew that if he wanted to save China, he must first liberate the minds of the people. This was not easy in China at that time, but Mr. Lu Xun, who was determined, did not back down. He knew very well that as a Chinese, he had to shoulder the heavy responsibilities on his shoulders and defend his country. Therefore, a vigorous "Vernacular Movement" emerged. As the founder of the "Vernacular Movement", Mr. Lu Xun was greatly influenced by the people at that time. The oppression of many feudal people. He has been persecuted to a greater or lesser extent both mentally and materially, but how could our Mr. Lu Xun be easily defeated? He withstood the pressure of feudal secularism and created a large number of literary works, such as "Wandering" and "Scream". These works are like a sharp sword in the hands of Mr. Lu Xun, used to analyze the cannibalistic feudal system in feudal society. Mr. Lu Xun used his "vernacular movement" to launch an ideological emancipation movement and liberated people's minds. Lu Xun was brave. He was a member of the feudal society who dared to resist. He was also the founder of the "Vernacular Movement".

Mr. Lu Xun was unfortunate to live in a feudal society, but he dared to resist and picked up the "sharp weapons" in his hands to fight against the feudal society.

Innovation is like a closed door, we need to open it. If you have the courage to innovate, you will discover a lot. If you have the courage to innovate, you will know a lot. Only those who have the courage to innovate are strong in life.

=========================================== =============================== I am a small sailing boat, but I don’t like to hear “smooth sailing” or “bon voyage” "These words of blessing are because I know that when there are good winds in the world, there are also headwinds, and when there are good times there are also adversities. And I have never been afraid of headwinds, because I know how to set up my sails and control my rudder so that I can still move forward at a forty-five-degree angle in the headwind.

Of course I also know: the bigger the sail, the better it can ride the wind; the stronger the wind, the better it can blow the sail. But I know better: a small boat cannot use a sail that is too big. Too much wind will capsize my boat.

Just because I know how to restrain my desires and know how to deal with adversity or good times, I can become a successful little sailboat;.

Not everyone can succeed. I wonder if you have ever heard of such a story: Someone asked three bricklayers what they were doing. The first man said: "Laying bricks." The second man said: "Making money." The third worker: "I am building the whole world." The most distinctive house in the world." Later, the first two men remained ordinary bricklayers throughout their lives, while the third worker became a famous architect.

Why the third person became an architect is worth thinking about. You must know that having your own ideals is the first step towards success. Romain Rolland once said: "A person without ambition is like a kite with a broken string. It will only waver in the air and eventually lose its future." Having an ideal is a successful beginning. Although ideals are important, in other words, without effort and dedication, it will still be nothing. Only when you have ideals and work hard at the same time, don't become weak before the storm, but be strong. Of course, on the way to success, there are bound to be setbacks and failures, and many people shrink back because they can't bear it. Only those who do not want to bow to setbacks and failures have their own ideals, and those who work tirelessly are qualified to enjoy success.

I am a small sailboat, sailing on the vast sea. Sometimes the sea is calm, and sometimes the sea is rough. This is not a setback, it is a test of nature, but many of my companions sank into the sea as a result. I am still a small sailing boat, carrying my own ideals and my own hopes, sailing to the invisible other shore, where I firmly believe that there is my own success and my own infinite glory.

Li Bai once received this sentence: "There will be times when the wind and waves break, and the clouds and sails will sail across the sea." It tells us that success is achieved through unremitting efforts. Don't give up easily, let alone lose the struggle. determination. Success is not far away.

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