Six points of guidance on the purpose of reviewing the topic of material-based composition

The first point of guidance on the purpose of reviewing the topic of material-based composition: Check the cause

A six-year-old child, after coming home from school, Pick up the knife and cut the apple. I saw him lying down on the apple, with the flower stem on one side and the handle on the other, with the knife in the middle. Just as he was about to cut it, his father quickly shouted: "Wrong cut! Wrong cut!" As soon as he finished speaking, the apple had already been cut. The son picked up half of the apple and showed it to his father. He shouted: "Dad, look, it's such a beautiful five-pointed apple." Star!? On the cross section of the apple, the outline of the core formed a regular five-pointed star.

Why does the five-pointed star pattern appear? It is because the children cut the apple horizontally without following the rules.

It can be drawn to the conclusion: Creative thinking can achieve unexpected success

The second point of the guide for reviewing the topic of material composition: clarify the relationship

A college student, School expenses were tight, so he wrote to his father, who was farming in the countryside, asking for money. The letter only contained three words: money. Son? After this three-character letter spread, people talked about it a lot. Please write a letter to this college student as a classmate.

There is an improper relationship between the son and his father. As his classmate, I wrote to him to persuade and educate him to respect his parents. This is the main contradictory relationship reflected in the materials. Don't make a big fuss about saving money when spending is tight.

The third point of the guide for review of materials and essays: Grasping the key points

Those who are born in the north and do not know the truth will work in the south. Eat water chestnuts on the table and put the shell into the mouth. Or say:? The shell of the water chestnut must be removed. ?The person protects his own shortcomings and says: ?I don't know anything about it. The reason for combining the shell is to clear away heat. ?The questioner asked: ?Is there such a thing in the northern land? The answer was: ?There are mountains in front and mountains in back, where can it not be found?

?The people protect themselves from shortcomings? This is the key sentence, this key The purpose of this sentence is to tell people that it is not necessary to protect oneself from shortcomings. Therefore, one can easily draw the conclusion that one cannot protect oneself from shortcomings. If you fail to grasp this key sentence and praise the extraordinary feats of the Northerners, you will miss the point

The fourth point of the guide for reviewing the topic of material composition: Distinguish between right and wrong

When Wiener breaks his arm When it was displayed in front of people, it attracted countless good people who flocked to it. They came up with all sorts of fantastic ideas for reconnecting Venus's broken arm. Venus's missing arm is like a seductive trap. But so far no design has achieved universal admiration.

You can refine this point of view: ① You must have unique beauty (from the perspective of Venus de Milo); ② You must let nature take its course and do not have to impose your own views on others (from the perspective of a busybody). It is incorrect to think that you should not be afraid of difficulties when refining materials regardless of their tendencies, and that you can succeed as long as you persevere.

The fifth point of the guide for review of material composition: seek similarities and differences

[1]① Marx was 23 years old and was known as the greatest philosopher in Germany at that time. ②Engels 21 wrote an article criticizing the German philosopher Schelling at that time. ③Lenin began revolutionary activities at the age of 17. ④Mao Zedong edited "Xiangjiang Review" at the age of 26. ⑤Xu Teli stayed in France at the age of 48, overcame difficulties and learned French.

[2] ① If a log is placed on a mountain stream, and the bottom is bottomless, few people dare to walk across it. However, if the crossbar is placed on the ground, everyone can walk on it. ② When Xiao Li gave his first speech, he was fully prepared in advance, but as soon as he stepped onto the stage and saw the dark auditorium below, he was sweating all over, his mind went blank, and he couldn't remember a word.

(1) The five materials all talk about the achievements of great people in their careers. This is the uniqueness of the materials. If we make the argument based on this, the point of view will lack depth. Further analysis of the materials will reveal that ① and ④ have one thing in common, that is, they produced results in their youth, while material ⑤ talks about Xu Teli studying French hard at the age of 48 and achieving success. His age characteristics are different from those of the first four great men.

Based on this difference, it can be argued that youth is the golden age for achieving results. However, age is not the only condition for achieving a career. The key lies in firm ambition and perseverance.

(2) There are two pieces of information: one is that few people can walk across the logs placed on the mountain stream, and the other is that Xiao Li cannot remember a word of his speech in the darkness. The two materials are different in form, but their results are the same? The reasons for not getting what they wanted are due to timidity and lack of good psychological quality. From this common point, we can refine this point of view: ① Good psychological quality is an important factor in success; ② Good psychological quality must be cultivated.

The sixth point of the guide for review of material composition: seek complementarity

①Florentine poet Dante’s famous saying: Go your own way and let others say it!?

②Polish proverb: ?He who often asks for directions will never lose his way. ?

Material ①? Go your own way? Emphasizes the need to have firm beliefs; Material ②? People who often ask for directions will not lose their way? It talks about being open-minded and asking for advice when walking, and listening to others. guide. Which of the two is right? Both are reasonable, but only in a certain aspect. The two are highly complementary. If the two are combined, it will be comprehensive and very reasonable. Therefore, we can refine this point of view: Only by having the firm belief to "walk your own way" and the humility of "frequently asking for directions" can you walk your own path in life.