Lenin once said: "People become animals without ideals, and ideals promote progress." From this perspective, everyone should have their own ideals and ambitions. But in real life, not everyone can realize their ambitions and achieve success. A writer once said, "What matters is not success, but struggle." This sentence hits the nail on the head, pointing out that the significance of struggle is far greater than success.
And Wang Anshi's "dedication" is not the "struggle" on the road to success?
Yes, success comes from struggle. However, the struggle is not always successful. Some strugglers have gone through hardships but failed to succeed, or failed to see success for various reasons, but their struggle has opened the way for successors and provided valuable lessons, and their struggle is still of great significance today. History will not judge heroes only by success or failure. Just like Rainbow An Shi, he put forward "Do your best, you can have no regrets" and tried to reform and improve people's lives. He tried some methods and struggled hard, but in the end he failed. He did his best, and he can have a clear conscience. Our descendants will not regard him as an incompetent loser because of his failure. Isn't the process he fought for equally worthy of our admiration?
Life is like a curve, and the turning point is changeable. People always want their life to be as smooth as a straight line. But it often backfires, and a curved life needs to go through a lot of tempering. Things that can't be successful even if you try your best are not uncommon in such a life. If you don't succeed just because you tried your best, how can you succeed? Therefore, it doesn't matter if you fail, as long as you feel that you have done your best on this road and have a clear conscience.
As long as there is no end to life, there is no end to struggle; As long as you don't succeed, keep trying. Even if you finally miss out on success, you don't need to feel sorry, because "if you do your best, you can have no regrets."
Thoughts on the trip of Baochan II. Wang Anshi was a famous ancient prose writer in the Northern Song Dynasty. This travel book gives full play to his strengths, and does not describe much about the scenery, but tries to tell his feelings after the visit. The whole article is about half a record and half a discussion. In the travel part, it is almost everywhere, which lays the foundation for the following comments. The parts discussed later are all about dealing with the positive. The structure of the article is very rigorous, showing the author's careful arrangement from beginning to end.
The first half of the tour clearly depicts the characteristics of Baochan. Can be divided into three small parts. The first part is about the environment and history of Baochan. I wrote the name of Baochan Mountain, the Buddhist temple in Baochan Mountain, Huashan Cave, and the distance from the Buddhist temple to Huashan Cave. Between the Zen Temple and the Huashan Cave, "there is a servant road monument, whose text is diffuse and its only text is still recognizable, so it is called Huashan". According to the inscription, the author confirmed that Huashan Cave should be a "flower cave", and expressed the author's leisure with pen and ink. The second small part is about the "front cave" of Huashan Cave, and only four sentences are written: "The bottom is flat and open, and there is a spring; There are many tourists, so-called front holes. " The third part is about "Houdong", which is the location of Baochan Mountain exploration and the most worthwhile place to visit. There are many descriptions. "Five or six miles from this mountain, there is a cave, and it is very cold. Asking about its depth, its good doers can't be poor, which is called back hole, and it is unusual to write about its depth. When the author wrote that he was swimming in the back hole, he "gave four people a fire to let them in." The deeper you go, the harder it is to get in and the stranger you see. Lazy people who want to go out say,' If you don't go out, the fire will be consumed'. Then say it. "On the one hand, this is a description of wandering during the day. On the other hand, it also reflects the strangeness and unpredictability of the back hole. The following are some supplementary notes on his trip that day. Replenish the places you have been after swimming, "not eleven times better than those who swim well"; Supplementary narrative "however, depending on its left and right, there are fewer people who come and remember, and the depth of coverage is less"; Add "the party is timely, the power is given enough, and the fire is clear"; After they come out, "they may blame those who want to go out, but they will also regret it. They may not go swimming very happily." "
Random thoughts on the trip to Baochan Mountain 3 Life is really like a pyramid. At the bottom, there are many mediocre people who have lived all their lives. The higher the level, the fewer people there are, and few people can really succeed. For those who want to go higher, how to climb to a higher tower has always been a problem that people constantly pursue and explore.
"Soldiers who don't want to be marshals are not good soldiers." Napoleon said so. Those who dare not climb to the top of the tower will never climb to the top. In an experiment, fleas were put in a shallow container and covered with glass, and the fleas were beaten back by the glass again and again. After a few days, the flea lost its ambition to jump out and could never jump out again. So if you want to climb the peak, you must be ambitious and tell yourself, "That's me, I'm leaving. There is no road longer than feet, and there is no mountain higher than people. "
Those who aim high are complicated, and those who are far-sighted are few. Where there is a will, there is a way, because where there is a will, there is a way. In the early years, human beings had the desire to soar in the blue sky, but they did not have the power to soar. It is so laborious to build a bridge between dream and reality. Gradually accumulate in peacetime and emerge at critical moments. This is strength, and at present, this is quality. Accumulate more and play well is the key.
Zhuge Liang had a talent for learning heaven and earth, which helped the ambition of the Han Dynasty, but he died in Wuzhangyuan. Why? A: Times make heroes. Without the external environment, success is really difficult. Some people are afraid that Hitler will use cloning technology to return to the world to wage war, which is really unfounded. Without the external environment of Germany's outward expansion during World War II, Hitler could only wander the streets. Things are always accidental and inevitable. Although external factors are not decisive factors, they may not work without them. With it, you can save a lot of trouble. For example, climbing with a rope is definitely much easier than climbing with your bare hands.
Some people may think that the journey is really long and the conditions are harsh. Actually, it's not. The three conditions of "ambition, strength and material things" are not isolated, but can make up for each other, and can make up for their own strengths and self-denial. Physically speaking, bumblebees are so small that it is almost impossible to fly, but bumblebees fly and even become the overlord in the air just because they aim at the blue sky and tell themselves: I can fly! -make up for the lack of strength and ambitious things. Sun Bin created Sun Tzu's Art of War, Sima punished him for writing historical records, and Wang Wen imprisoned him for writing Zhouyi-he can make up for things. The dream of mankind thousands of years ago can also be realized today through the plane of steel monster. As long as you use a fulcrum and lever well, even a small force can pry up the earth. -things can also make up for the lack of strength.
"But as long as you go up a flight of stairs, you can broaden your horizons by 300 miles." For us personally, the higher we climb, the deeper our understanding will be. If we make full use of these three conditions, there will be no regret of Wang Anshi, but we will certainly find an ideal height. The higher the personal height, the more gratifying the progress of the whole social pyramid.
Random thoughts on Baochan Mountain Travel Notes 4. Writing a travel note can not only describe the scenery, customs and customs, but also express the author's feelings and feelings. Generally speaking, it is common to bring some lyric elements in travel notes; It takes a lot of time to write many comments by memory, without losing the literary significance of the travel genre. Wang Anshi's Travel Notes of Baochan has done this and has been deeply loved by readers for thousands of years.
Wang Anshi was a famous ancient prose writer in the Northern Song Dynasty. He was good at writing argumentative essays. In this travelogue, he gave full play to his strengths, did not write much about the scenery, but tried to talk about his feelings after the tour. In this 600-700-word article, the part about travel and the part about discussion account for about half. In the travel part, it is almost everywhere, which lays the foundation for the following comments. The parts discussed later are all about dealing with the positive. The structure of the article is very rigorous, showing the author's careful arrangement from beginning to end.
Although there are not many words in the first half, it clearly depicts the characteristics of Baochan for readers. Can be divided into three small parts. The first part is about the environment and history of Baochan. It wrote the name of Baochan Mountain, the Buddhist temple and Huashan Cave in Baochan Mountain, and the distance from the Buddhist temple to Huashan Cave. Between the Zen Temple and the Huashan Cave, "there is a servant road monument, whose text is diffuse and its only text is still recognizable, so it is called Huashan". According to the inscription, the author confirmed that Huashan Cave should be a "flower cave", and expressed the author's leisure with pen and ink. The second small part is about the "front cave" of Huashan Cave, and only four sentences are written: "The bottom is flat and open, and there is a spring; There are many tourists, so-called front holes. " The third part is about "Houdong", which is the location of Baochan Mountain exploration and the most worthwhile place to visit. There are many descriptions. "Five or six miles from this mountain, there is a cave, and it is very cold. Asking about its depth, its good doers can't be poor, which is called back hole, and it is unusual to write about its depth. When the author wrote that he was swimming in the back hole, he "gave four people a fire to let them in." The deeper you go, the harder it is to get in and the stranger you see. Lazy people who want to go out say,' If you don't go out, the fire will be consumed'. Then say it. "On the one hand, this is a description of wandering during the day. On the other hand, it also reflects the strangeness and unpredictability of the back hole. The following are some supplementary notes on his trip that day. Replenish the places you have been after swimming, "not eleven times better than those who swim well"; Supplementary narrative "however, depending on its left and right, there are fewer people who come and remember, and the depth of coverage is less"; Add "the party is timely, the power is given enough, and the fire is clear"; After they come out, "they may blame those who want to go out, but they will also regret it. They may not go swimming very happily." "
This is all about Baochan's trip, and it can also be said to be the text of this article. Although the text is short, the description is very detailed. We seem to have followed the author out of the Buddhist temple in the mountain, walked past a monument of servants on the roadside and visited the front and back caves. When he was swimming in eastern Guizhou, he saw many tourists writing their names there and knew that many people had been there. But this is just an ordinary hole. When swimming in the back hole, you should go in with a flashlight. The deeper you go, the harder it is to walk and the stranger the scenery you see. Although the author didn't specifically describe how strange it was, it deeply attracted readers. Through the desire for cave exploration, readers are given full imagination. He still didn't see the wonders of the back hole, leaving a piece of regret. I have finished writing about travel, so it doesn't matter if the article ends here. But the author wrote this article with the intention of summing up a lesson from the regret of this visit.
The sentence "So I have a sigh" suddenly changed the subject and caused a big discussion in the second half.
Therefore, the author thinks that ancient literati often gain something by observing mountains, rivers, plants, insects, fish, birds and animals, which is the result of their painstaking exploration and in-depth efforts. Most people just want to take a flat road and wander around, just like most people who travel around only look at the hole in front. They don't want to go to dangerous and far-reaching places, but the "wonders" of the world are always in "dangerous" and inaccessible places. If you want to go to "dangerous places" to see those "wonders", you must first set your ambitions; Set an ambition and have the ability; Ability, but also perseverance; In a "dark and confused" place, you need help, just like you need fire lighting when swimming in the back hole. Don't stop if you have enough ability, it will make people laugh and leave endless regrets in vain.
This is a learning truth that the author realized after this mountain tour. This truth is vivid not only because it is said through his personal experience; And the language is also written with charm and charm. One of the characteristics of this passage is that there are many changes and twists and turns. "The ancients' views on heaven and earth, mountains and rivers, vegetation, insects, fish, birds and animals are often valuable; As it thinks deeply, it is all there. "This is a general discussion and the procedure of this paragraph." If you are close, you will have many tourists; The farther the risk, the fewer people. "These words are specifically combined with the experience of this mountain tour, but this is still an overview, which comes from the above." The strange view of the world is often that it is far from danger, but it is something that people seldom realize; Therefore, people without will can't come. "There is a turn here." Aspiring, not stopping; However, people who are not strong enough can't reach it. "There is another turning point here" is ambitious and powerful, but not lazy; As for darkness and chaos, nothing can be compared with it, nor can it be achieved. "There's another turn here", but how powerful is this? People can be ridiculed, but they have regrets. There is another turning point here. Do my best, not to people. You can have no regrets. Can this be ridiculed? -What do you get from this? "In the end, it comes down to the author's thoughts. There are so many changes and turns in sentences to promote the truth to be spoken layer by layer. But turning is effortless. It can skillfully use function words at the turning point, so it is so smooth. However, it is vigorous and powerful. This passage complements the above travel notes, which is inseparable from its good use of language.
After making these comments, the author reviewed what he saw in front of him, and finally wrote a few words: "If you give a servant a tablet, there will be no ancient book of sorrow and joy, and those who cannot be named as fallacies in future generations will not be able to gain enlightenment!" This is another question, but it is related to the truth of learning, so I immediately wrote: "So scholars can't think deeply and have to be cautious." This gathering shows that the author is thinking all the way. In the article, it also has wonderful aftermath.
This article combines travel and study very well, which makes people never tire of reading it. The thought it expresses is profound, and the artistic technique of prose is unique.
Thoughts on Baochan's Journey ―― Reading Wang Anshi's A Journey to Baochan
(1) "Do what I want, but don't do it, you can have no regrets, and who can laugh at it? This is also given. " This is Wang Anshi's deep feeling when he visited the mountains. It's amazing.
(2) Living and studying are also like traveling. To be an accomplished person, you must aim at a "dangerous place". Even if you don't reach the top, you can have no regrets.
Everyone has a life, and ambitious people can make flower of life invincible. Only those who "gradually widen their belts and never regret" can stand the wind and rain, make unremitting progress, and "ride the wind and waves to make and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" and make flower of life invincible. People are like this, so are things. Zheng Banqiao once said: "Insist that the green hills are not relaxed, and the roots are in the broken rocks. A thousand blows are still strong, and the wind is east, west, north and south. " This is the noble quality of pine trees.
Only those who are determined can make extraordinary contributions. Darwin wrote the Origin of Species in 22 years, and Sima Qian endured humiliation to complete the historical records. /kloc-during Su Wu's detention of the Huns in 0/9, he was a patriot who was unyielding in bullying, unwilling to be lured, and loyal to the motherland, and eventually "made a name for the Huns and made contributions to the Han Dynasty". When Pu Songling tried again and again, he quoted a poem to encourage himself: "Where there is a will, there is a way. Burn your bridges, 120 Qin Guan will eventually go to Chu. Hard-working people, the sky pays off, and the salary is tasted. Three thousand Yue families can swallow Wu. " Finally, it was written as Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio, which will remain in history. Faith can move mountains. I don't know how many people have achieved it at all times and in all countries.
In fact, not all dreams can be realized in time. Tracing back to history, not everyone can go to "dangerous places", but there are not a few people who "aim high and work hard" and even more people who "make heroes cry". However, "those who do my best can have no regrets." Life and study, "the road is long and Xiu Yuan is Xi, and Xiu Yuan is Xi", regardless of risks or difficulties. People with lofty ideals will certainly "go up and down" and go to dangerous places without regrets. Tan sitong, a contemporary martyr, was determined to save the country and the people from an early age, and was incompatible with water and fire. However, the political reform he presided over wholeheartedly ended in failure, and he was arrested and imprisoned. He wrote a poem on the prison wall and said, "Watch the door and stay in James Zhang. Be patient for a while, Dugan." I laughed from the horizontal knife, and I went to stay in two Kunlun mountains. "Although the reform failed, he was willing to sacrifice for the reform, hoping to repay the emperor with his own blood and alert the world.
Where there is a will, there is a way. It's really beautiful. Where there is a will, there is a way, which is also a great beauty. "Those who do my best can have no regrets." I remember Zheng Banqiao once casually said, "If the name of a subject doesn't come, the knowledge is with me, so we can't trade at a loss." .
All landowners are determined to be in me, pursue in me, achieve in me, and learn in life. If you have an attitude of "don't rejoice in things, don't grieve for yourself", you can have no regrets.
Thoughts on Baochan's Journey 6 —— Thoughts on Baochan's Journey
Wang Anshi said in "A Journey to Baochan Mountain": "A magnificent and extraordinary world outlook often lies in obstacles, but what people lack is extremely difficult, so where there is a will, there is a way."
Yes, its meaning is easy to see: success lies in ambition and determination is the secret of success.
Looking around the world, romantic figures throughout the ages are all ambitious and determined to be lofty. Madame Curie is a famous female scientist in Poland. She decided to devote herself to science at an early age. Under difficult conditions, she extracted a ton of pitchblende residue day after day with simple experimental equipment. After 4 1 month's struggle, she finally discovered radium in 1902, which opened up a new field of science and was called "the mother of radium". In her footsteps leading to success, she embodies the hardships of life, the chagrin of failure, the slander of others and the grief of losing her husband. She fell down, but she stood up stubbornly. She is supported by an invisible pillar, which is to realize her ambition.
Another example is China historian Sima Qian. In order to complete the glorious work of Historical Records, he traveled all over the country, visited historical sites, investigated local conditions and customs, lived a wandering life, and accumulated rich historical materials for Historical Records.
It can be seen that once a person has an ambition, he will persevere and advance towards the established goal without hesitation. What's the point of suffering and danger? Once a person has a firm ambition, he will be full of vigor, go forward bravely, discuss and study, and it is likely that the tiger will go down the mountain and the dragon will go into the sea.
Stop and look at the pride of our Chinese nation! In ancient times, there were Gou Jian, the King of Yue, Zu Ti who heard chickens dancing, and Sun Kang who was reading in the snow. Today, there are Xia who stood up under the enemy's gun, Li Siguang who freed China from the name of an oil-poor country, Zhang Haidi who has physical and mental disabilities, and so on. Which of them has no ambition? They dare to rise, they dare to struggle, they persist in their pursuit, and their internal motivation is self-evident.
"Where there is a will, there is a way." How many people dream of success; How many people expect success. However, success will not come soon. As the ancients said, men aim everywhere. But where are some men in today's society They are determined to eat, drink, gamble and fight, and expect wealth to come as needed, which is ridiculous. What's more, being overwhelmed by success, in order to succeed, no, it should be said that it is to achieve a certain purpose, by hook or by crook, opportunistic. On the surface, it seems that men are very classy, and some snobs and ignorant people even give them thumbs-ups. Sad! As we all know, there is no room for falsehood on the road to success. This practice is not done by a willing person, but a mediocre performance.
Ask: How can we embark on the road to success? Why not ask yourself first: where is my ambition?
[brief comment]
This student's feeling after reading is rich in content, informative in examples, a little comprehensive, in-depth in reasoning, concise and to the point; Strict structure, straight to the point, simple beginning and end, extensive argumentation, positive and negative comparison; His writing is sharp, vivid and fluent. He can use some classical Chinese sentences and has a certain literary foundation.
From the perspective of writing review, we should closely follow the original text for analysis in the argumentation part. For example, "reaching the' extraordinary, magnificent and extraordinary land' means' success'. This kind of language is not available in this paper, and its connection with reality is slightly rough, which weakens the persuasiveness of the article to some extent.