Comments: "Trying to overcome difficulties" is the harvest of the little author. The little author clearly described what happened in the labor class and the process of solving doubts from it, which gave us an inspiration in writing: in fact, there are many topics around us that need students to seriously discover and accumulate.
Comments: When waiting for the bus, the article exaggerated the number of people and laid the groundwork for "crowded cars". The moment the car door opens, the process of "squeezing" begins. Following the little author's pen, we experienced a painful but interesting process of crowding cars. At the end of the article, I said, "It feels good to walk!" It is the voice of a small author and a reader.
Comments: The fierce three-person battle shows that the life of the little author's family is very full, active and enviable. It is not difficult to find that the young author's brushwork is so fresh, natural and true. The author's language, manner, movements and psychological activities respectively reflect the different personalities of three people. Of course, * * * sex is also obvious, which has become the keynote of this article-childlike interest.
Comments: The article is a good feeling of reading enough. Starting with the content of the book read, the young author arouses feelings, makes ancient and modern associations, compares descriptions, and then connects with reality, making the article complete and fully expressing his thoughts and feelings.
Comments: The biggest touch of this composition is the child's true feelings! Everything is going on unintentionally and reasonably. Just like "it takes a heart to bloom, but a willow leaves a shade unintentionally", the child bought a gift for his classmates at first, but accidentally saw a photo, so he remembered his mother's birthday. All this is so natural and unpretentious. Judging from the use of language, it is also worthy of praise and encouragement to be able to describe a thing clearly and smoothly at the age of a child.
Comments: After reading this composition with curiosity, I seem to have experienced a false alarm with the little author. Yes, we all had this experience when we were teenagers. In fact, there are no ghosts in this world, and "ghosts" are in our hearts. The success of this composition lies in that the author can rewrite his psychology and actions when he hears the "ghost" phone ringing, thus vividly depicting his extreme fear and helplessness at that time. The last sentence is both a key point and a key point.
Comments: This composition is very novel in conception, and the young author has a bold imagination. Since ancient times, people have been praising Gong Yu's persistent spirit of moving mountains, and the completion of the wildlife park tells us that sometimes skillful work is more effective than hard work.
Comments: This is an interesting and useful article. There is no flowery rhetoric, no artificial posturing, only the change from never brushing your teeth to brushing your teeth frequently, which is just a vivid narrative close to reality and makes people feel true and credible. "Good habits benefit for life", this composition reminds me of this wise saying again. In fact, people are born with a lot of inertia. The key is how to overcome it. what do you think?
Comments: This is a very interesting fairy tale, which contains a simple but profound truth that makes people think deeply! The story itself is not complicated: two fish, accustomed to the pampered life, feel monotonous and bored, so they fantasize about exchanging places with each other. As a result, it is conceivable that an irreparable tragedy has finally happened! Hey, don't you see this phenomenon in your life? ! The little author is good at using anthropomorphic techniques, grasping the characteristics of small animals, drawing and describing shapes, and making vivid psychological descriptions. Really lifelike! The thick humorous atmosphere contains thought-provoking philosophical thinking, which is commendable! The article is rich in imagination and fluent in language, and it is a wonderful fairy tale with great taste.
Comments: The little author uses a lot of dialogue descriptions in his article, which fully shows the personality characteristics of the three characters. The title quotes folk nursery rhymes, which is very novel.
Comments: Give up your seat, which is a very ordinary little thing, but the little author can see the big picture from the small, which has triggered profound lessons and profound thinking, which is commendable! In the article, writing about the congestion on the bus is concise and vivid; The young man with yellow hair is vivid and concrete, and contains a kind of well-meaning irony. In particular, writing about teachers, without saying a word, only wrote about giving up your seat, smiling and staring, but it was so detailed, so complicated and so meaningful! How quiet it is! This paper attaches great importance to the relationship between primary and secondary details, highlighting the main detail of the article-the teacher's eyes, which has caused long-term regret and painful thinking of young authors! (A Brief Comment on Grandpa)
Comments: Life is the source of writing. The young author personally experienced two days of rural life and had many real feelings. This is completely true feelings, there is no empty slogan. Young writers use the method of restraining first and then promoting, first talking about their yearning for rural life and envy of rural children, and then using the word "but" to lead to the following, naturally. The language is simple and vivid. The arrangement of materials is very detailed. The specific process of tea picking is described in detail, but the visit of aquatic plants and hiking picnic are briefly mentioned, which makes the article focus.
Comments: The little author has vivid language, ingenious conception and rich imagination, which is memorable to read.
Comments: Seeing with my own eyes and observing carefully, the little author vividly described the scene of the game and his feelings.
Comments: The little author described his feelings of memorizing this text well, from wasting time playing, busy memorizing, and then to my father's education, which gave me the courage to overcome difficulties and put it into action. The whole process was clearly written and expressed my inner feelings.
Comments: This article takes both the beginning and the end into consideration, and the structure is ingenious and meticulous. Behind an unforgettable photo is an unforgettable thing and an unforgettable sentence. Because of personal experience, the writing is true, natural and smooth, and readers feel the same.
Comments: This is a profound science fiction composition. Through his magical imagination, the author foresaw the environmental prospect that made us not optimistic. What is particularly commendable is that the author puts forward the relationship between "science" and "environmental protection", which makes people think deeply.
Comments: The little author carefully observed the appearance of the monument and described it in detail. In the description, he can properly imagine and express his true feelings.
Comments: Although this article is short, it can focus on the changes before and after a small courtyard. Although the article is short, it has a deep meaning. The article uses words to make sentences more accurately, and the full text echoes before and after, forming a whole.
Comments: The author captures the characteristics of autumn; Rain, wind, fir trees and people's clothes and actions present a cool autumn picture. The explanation is fresh and natural, quite a bit of prose.
Comments: After watching Xiao Yichuan's exercise, I was also moved by this beautiful autumn color. He observed this autumn from the unique perspective of children, carefully observed the shape, color, feel and other characteristics of leaves, and with lovely and rich associations, it made us feel as if we were in the autumn colors of nature, and really felt the little author's love for life and nature. This is really a beautiful article.
Comments: This diary depicts a rain scene, raindrops and dewdrops in a few words. This kind of associative synaesthesia is really amazing. Careful observation and beautiful language make this diary fondle admiringly. Let me, a person who doesn't like rain, sigh: "The spring rain is really beautiful!" "
Comments: first "move with emotion" and then "reason". The young author can remind people to protect trees and the environment in a convincing way. Let's not talk about the importance of protecting the environment, only that the vitality of the big banyan tree is gradually losing, which makes people understand the reason in suspense. Finally, it is natural to emphasize the protection of ancient trees in my hometown. There is little boring preaching in the whole article, but it can get good results. This is the charm of emotional people.
Comments: A young and sensitive child observes the small pine tree and appreciates its perseverance. The article describes small pine trees in an unconventional way, and the language is concise. Especially from the beginning of the article, we can see that the little author's article is not only about plants, but also makes the little pine tree full of humanity.
Comments: This paper introduces spiders from three aspects: insect catching, weather forecasting and dedication. It shows that the little author is careful in observation and description, which is worth learning.
Comments: The magical Nepenthes really shows its magic in your writing, which comes from the careful observation and detailed description of the little author.
Comments: In this article, the author describes the shape, color and taste of kiwifruit. The sentence is vivid, describing the peel and pulp of kiwifruit from outside to inside in turn. The little author not only looks with his eyes, but also touches, smells and tastes with his nose, mobilizing all kinds of senses to participate in observation and writing vividly. For example: "Pick a soft kiwi fruit without lumps, peel it gently, and it will reveal the tender green jade pulp, which is fragrant, sweet and sour." "After a few bites, you can see a pale yellow heart with small seeds like black sesame seeds embedded in it, which are fragrant and crisp." Comparing the flesh of kiwifruit to jade and the small seed to black sesame, the author can be commendable that the little author also introduced the knowledge gained from his mother into the text, making the content more substantial and rich.
Comments: The little author vividly publicized the necessity of environmental protection in the form of fairy tales, which was easy to accept and impressive. The article is clear and imaginative.
Comments: I carefully observed, personally practiced and searched for information, which made this composition very vivid.
Comments: If you want to write an article well, you should focus on determining the central idea and narrative content. In this composition, the little author spent a lot of time in the form of fairy tales, cleverly expressing the theme of "Everyone for me, I for everyone, so that our life will be sweeter and purer than honey", which is thought-provoking. The content of the article is imaginative and reasonable, which makes people admire the young author's rich imagination and his observation and understanding of life.
Comments: This is a simple article, but between the lines, it reveals the author's deep gratitude and understanding of chalk. Although the life of chalk is short, it is not sad in the pen of the little author. He understands chalk from his own perspective, from things to people, which arouses readers' association.
Comments: Poetry looks easy to write, but once you really want to write, it's not that simple. It is not easy to write a good poem. I feel good after reading this poem today. Small authors can develop rich associations and imaginations, describe ordinary umbrellas in daily life beautifully, and discover the beauty in life. This is the charm of poetry! The beginning and end of the little author's poem are well written and poetic, but the word "green" in the second sentence seems to limit the imagination of the full text in color.
Comments: It's easy to write empty articles, but your writing is so specific and touching, which shows that you have made great efforts.
Comments: This is a narrative about a teacher, and there are a lot of teachers' exercises, but the little author uses a unique voting angle and flexible writing techniques to portray the characters vividly. This paper only focuses on the teacher's first class, highlighting the teacher's teaching style and spiritual outlook from its humorous language, unique teaching methods, teaching content, facial expressions and movements, and students' reactions and feelings. The ending is also very artistic, which not only shows the author's nostalgia for the teacher, but also takes care of the whole story and naturally solves the topic.
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6. Your article is like a slow stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
7. The style of writing is sharp, with extensive quotations and deep roots. Although the analysis of social problems is still absolute, the article is still moving with a kind of enthusiasm and frankness. Further research and thinking on history books and social commentary. I believe your article will become more mature and lasting!
8. It is wise for a teenager who is not deeply involved in the world to approach a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual, as if leading readers to stroll on the Yuan Ye of the mind. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. You know, incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!
9. The writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It's about "I" walking by the sea. The sea not only gave me beautiful enjoyment, but also aroused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea has given me a space to swim, and I am immersed in life for the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking. 10. School life seems dull except for class, but this paper is good at finding the extraordinary from the ordinary and showing it with relish: nervous morning, noon of fighting, tired night, and every time I choose a lens full of life interest to decorate it. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the positive mental outlook of contemporary middle school students.
1 1. This article is highly ideological and artistic, which makes people think for a long time after reading it. Ingenious conception, using comparative techniques to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
12. This article gives a comprehensive introduction to my father: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
14. The quotation of some common sayings is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
15. Your article is very creative-complete the idea in the form of geometric proof questions. The full text is very literary!
16. The author has a strong ability to control the situation, and the whole article is written in one go, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling!
17. As a casual feeling, your article is quick-thinking and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
19. This article has chosen a brand-new angle and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
2 1. Your writing is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
22. I think this article reflects your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
23. The language is clear. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
27. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable. 28. Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "You can appreciate the sea as much as you appreciate it." You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.
29. Exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Steady and down-to-earth, is the direction of your writing efforts in the future.
30. Careful conception and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
3 1. Although you don't like writing very much, you keep writing like a snail at every step, and never stop writing. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to collective life with a brand-new attitude to adapt to the development of society.
33. There are always many absurd stories in the life of teenagers; There are always many magical dreams in the hearts of teenagers. This essay, like a boat full of dreams, is full of the author's innocence, dreams, yearning and just beginning to mature, and sails far away.
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