65438+ dresses, dresses, etc. Portrait description should be realistic or the image of the object should be full to achieve the desired effect: I am greedy for lazy children, pigs, pigs, pigs, pigs tend to swell, and my eyes are getting crowded. Everyone should try to open their eyes to see the beautiful world (selected from "Lazy Retribution") 2- Personality characteristics are the characteristics of the object, such as personality, habits, quality and so on. The article directly expresses the characteristics of the object. The language should be concise, accurate and wonderful: blame my mother for being gentle and kind to me, gnashing her teeth, yelling, swearing, and even punching and kicking (selected from Face Mom). 3-Looking at the mountain means beating around the bush, being concise and clear, directly entering the topic, and simply and neatly explaining the articles, events, scenery, things or reasons to be written. Wang Jiali is diligent and willing to help the Heat, and all the teachers like him (selected from my friends). 4- environmental description, that is, the description of the scene background closely related to the content of the article, can set off things or show the image of things or highlight the ideological and artistic effects: it suddenly becomes gloomy in the evening, and suddenly the wind blows and the sand is everywhere, and every station is waiting for the bus (selected from "I really regret"). 5- Clever questioning, that is, the author skillfully asks questions to create suspense to improve readers. 2. ask questions; 3. No matter what form the problem plays, the theme and ideological service should be mysterious and novel: it is strange that the mother is standing in a strong position with her child in her arms, but her mother is crowded outside the column. Can some men read (selected from Fake Illiteracy)? 6- Rational description refers to accurately expressing thoughts and feelings in language and creating a rational atmosphere strongly influenced by articles for readers: First, read your own articles and publish them in newspapers. First, you can earn the excitement and pride of your skills. Self-confidence, happiness, etc. I really envy you. I want to congratulate myself (from the first newspaper). 7- Image metaphor refers to the article directly describing or narrating things, first describing related content or things with image metaphor, and then writing the content gradually and deeply. Simile, metaphor and metonymy are three forms of metaphor: do your best and be appropriate; You transport nutrient roots; You light your own candle to illuminate me; Your great soul engineer (selected from Ode to the Teacher) 8-Use parallelism skillfully, that is, use three or three sentences or phrases with the same or similar structure together to express unified thoughts and rhetoric. Hands are parallel, parallel. Narrating the characteristics of things and experiences, the expression of thoughts and feelings is full of special effects, the strong language momentum is neat, and the words, rhymes, feelings and beauty are perfectly combined, giving readers a beautiful enjoyment: I bid farewell to my hometown, my relatives, my kind folks and set foot on the train south to pursue my ideals and beliefs. From "Walking Home") 9- Contrast rendering, things are the same, things are the opposite, and the two sides play against each other, which deepens the reader's impression of things or events: thumbs up praise me for being wonderful, and my mother frowns and scolds me and my father for being terrible. Two extremes make me confident and understand, and I try to explain (selected from Two Kinds)10-revealing style, that is, the ideological content of the article or the significance of the event or the characteristics of the scenery or revealing philosophy. Writing: I want to marry a book, teach me a book, teach me how to make a book, and tell me the joys and sorrows ... Give a book) 1 1 The point-to-point style of the article means that the article points to the problem, and the content to be said is easy to digress: if I clone myself, I must clone myself to help me do various things (article title "I want to clone myself"). I read and breathe with the owner of the book. Fate forgets to eat and sleep (selected from Book Fun)13-Verbal description is the direct object language or the beginning of an article, so that readers only need to touch the article and smell its voice, which makes the image of the object fresher: the lazy man will get up at eight o'clock soon, and he will be late to listen. I want to raise my mother's roar like a lion, which makes me very willing to drill into the hot nest (selected from My Eye Mother)14-the lyric quotation is a direct quotation of a lyric in the article. I want to fly, but I fly high,,,,, and I walk home singing and carrying a heavy schoolbag. Playing the piano, listening to English, doing homework, feeling homesick and tired (selected from My Caged Bird). 15- Expression * * * is the author's beautiful and delicate language, artistic expression, self-acceptance or profound reading, which reveals the theme of the article, enhances the dyeing power of the article, and makes readers feel * * * bright: Waiting always reminds me that every alley contains a little truth and a little grass. The old wooden door in Shipu Street, with tall trees, is ordinary and ordinary ... (selected from Love in a Lonely Lane)16-flashback description refers to the ending of the first event, which creates suspense at the end, and then the narrative according to the plot development only emphasizes the importance of writing, enhances the expression effect of the article, arouses readers' interest in reading and increases the charm of the article: Haha, I read my article. Seeing the rain a week ago, I really realized the emotional description of the article (selected from My Experience)17-the original form of confession, that is, the original story was confessed first, and then relayed. When readers read this article, it will help eight-year-old children. Two pianos can make do with accompaniment. Although the course is tense now, I am fascinated by the singing skills of all subjects. I like music class (selected from my fans)18-fantastic daydream, that is, the author begins to describe his wonderful imagination or express his feelings or produce novel ideas about something in wonderful language. I went through an empty tunnel, stayed in the United States in 2035, and returned to my hometown-Xiangyang is warm, warm, fresh and beautiful, bluer than ever, with tall buildings lined with green belts. I am amazed at my hometown (selected from Untreated Hometown)19-narrative style, that is, the author's article is exposed to the owner of the article through a dialogue with a second person: Mom, you carry a camel and stop plowing with a whole piece of loess; Mom, your body is as thin as a cane, and mom's forehead is covered with wrinkles and white hair. Mom, you gave me life, you gave me wisdom, you cultivated my sentiment, you guided me on a journey without my mother, and you didn't cut it (selected from Deep). 20- Talking with readers means that the author talks with readers in friendly language or expresses his views or asks questions to make readers more interested in reading: does a friend see that he has no hands or feet and writes with his own eyes, and his beautiful brushwork is determined by his perseverance?

How to write the total composition score of about 2.300 words? Anyway, it's writing a composition. I have a good teacher. She is the teacher Cai who led me into the knowledge hall and traveled in the sea of books. Her black hair is embedded with a pair of big watery eyes, which are always so bright. Curved and thin black eyebrows, bent down like a herringbone. Small and exquisite nose, as if carved from ivory, is amazing in beauty. But the most charming thing is the glib mouth. In class, the teacher's clear and loud lecture voice spread to every corner of the classroom, so that every student listened with relish; After class, the teacher's kind words made the students understand the meaning of the topic and know the answer at once.

In the last Chinese class, many teachers came to attend the class. The teacher took out his notes on preparing lessons after a hard night's work, and then started class with a big smile on his face. I grew up timid, so many teachers came to class behind me, and our every move was kept in mind. If we answer the teacher's questions wrong, don't we keep them in mind? How embarrassing that is! A question I am sure of has finally been answered, but I still have no confidence in myself and have never raised my little hand. Seeing that I hadn't raised my hand, the teacher deliberately asked me to answer the question. I timidly said the answer to the question. At this time, the teacher gave me an encouraging look, as if to say yes, that's the answer, speak up. I was full of confidence at once, and I said the answer to the question loudly, and everyone clapped.

Silkworms in spring will weave until they die, and candles will drain the wick every night. Thank you teacher!

3. How to write a composition with a total score structure? The confused autumn has been replaced by a quiet and enterprising winter with a little sadness and helplessness.

But there are still traces of autumn in the arms of winter.

In the field, there are still tears of autumn sadness in the village head ditch river.

In an extraordinary period, the two most influential seasons are spring and autumn.

Spring has passed the test of severe SARS,

Autumn feels the hardships of continuous rain.

Warm spring overcame the days without flowers with her unique strength.

Rich autumn overcame the days without sunshine with her unique perseverance.

There is always a bright rainbow after a rainy day.

Winter, the last season of the four seasons, is the most promising season for next year.

Winter, mixed with the confusion of autumn, came to the countryside, entered the city, and entered you, me and him.

Early winter,

Looking at the orchard with sparse leaves, thinking about the fruits sold by fruit farmers in the cellar,

The confusion of autumn suddenly hit my heart;

4. How to write a composition with a total score structure How to write a composition with a total score structure:

1, the so-called total-sub-total structure, as the name implies, is that this composition is roughly composed of three parts: total, sub-theory and summary, and find the layout of the article.

2. Then, the composition will enter the "sub-theory" part, and discuss the phenomena, problems or viewpoints mentioned in the general part from different levels and angles in several parts, put forward the sub-arguments of each part, and then find arguments to demonstrate and discuss. And there is generally an inherent logical relationship among sub-theories, which is gradual and deepening, obeying and serving the core issues of composition.

3. The conclusion is followed. From the content point of view, its purpose is to echo the beginning of the composition, and at the same time summarize the sub-arguments formed in the sub-discussion part to present the research conclusion; Formally, a summary can be a summary by listing a title or just one or two paragraphs. Then the composition is over.

This is to talk about the overall structure from the perspective of the overall picture of a composition. If it is an internal "sub-theory" component, in fact, each sub-theory may also present a variety of organizational structures.

Extended data:

The significance of the overall structure of the total score: the "total" at the beginning either puts forward the topic or the argument; The "total" at the end is generally to reiterate the point of view or deepen the argument. What is more complicated is the middle part: it can be the juxtaposition of arguments, arguments from different angles, contrast and juxtaposition, and progressive extension.

It should be noted that no matter what kind of "division" it is, it must be dominated by and serve the "general". The general structure of the total score should be properly marked, especially in the "score" part, and there should be relatively consistent sentence patterns or words that take care of each other to express the relationship between "scores", so that the article can be clear to readers at a glance.

5. How to write the "total-sub-total" structure with the total score method? That is, summarize first, then divide, and then summarize. This relationship can also evolve into a structural model of "dividing first and then combining" and "combining first and then dividing". For example, when a classmate writes about winter, he always writes "I love winter" at the beginning. Then write "winter is like a naughty little fairy in white, beautiful and pure;" Winter is like a magician, snow is its prop, playing so many tricks; Winter is Santa Claus, kind and friendly, which brings us endless happiness; Winter is an unparalleled Hercules who can support such thick and heavy snow. Finally, I express "I love you in winter, and I love your whiteness, nobility and beauty!" " This is a typical "total-sub-total" structure.

Example:

Sometimes, I can't figure it out.

"Blue sky, yellow leaves ... the mountain reflects the sunset and meets the water. The grass is ruthless, and the sunset is also outside. "

Looking at the prompt "Sometimes I want to" in the title of the composition, my mind flashed a picture and my mind was full of thoughts. It took me a long time to get back to the examination room. Somehow, with the growth of age, I feel my heart is getting heavier and heavier. I often tell myself not to be so positive, but I can't help it.

I once wanted to go down in history.

What have I shed in these fifteen years?

Going to Qiu Lai in spring, fifteen cycles, fifteen years of vicissitudes of life, made me weather-beaten, but I never really understood that "the blade comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold".

I wanted to be strong and brave.

I feel really guilty about Pavel Colta King. When you encounter difficulties, you will shrink back, you will be depressed if your test scores drop, and you will cry when you cut your hand ... I really want to be strong in the face of difficulties, not shrink back, bravely face difficulties and challenge myself; Sometimes, I also want to be strong under the impact of my achievements: learn lessons, sum up experience, catch up and go forward bravely; Sometimes, when my hand is dripping blood, I want to be strong: wipe away my tears, pick up scissors and gauze, and reluctantly dress the wound. But I can't seem to do it.

I once wanted to study hard and honor my parents.

Recalling the two enduring idiom stories of "picking a beam and stabbing a stock" and "sleeping on the ice and begging for carp", I can't help but hang my head and reflect on myself. Think about the hero of the story, how brave and hard they are, even hanging their heads and stabbing their legs in order to study hard! I, on the other hand, never make sacrifices for good grades. Think of the ancients, in order to satisfy their mother's wishes, even lying on the ice and melting the ice with their own body temperature to catch carp for their mother, but I have never paid anything for my mother, which is shameful.

I once thought about being serious.

Look at your classmates, your deskmate, listen attentively, take notes carefully, and answer questions with a loud voice. As for me, I am distracted from time to time in class, my handwriting is messy, and I always keep my head down when answering questions. Occasionally, I wonder if the strange poem "Four-headed Students" is talking about me: "The class activities are crowded, the teacher lowers his head when asking questions, and every time he takes an exam. Although I didn't "overdo it", I almost "achieved" other "three heads".

I have also thought: I have always been impetuous, and sometimes I want to go deeper; I have always been careless, and sometimes I want to be serious; Sometimes I want to be brave in difficulties; I want right and wrong of justice; The so-called "hardships, jade ru Yu Cheng", sometimes want to be tenacious in setbacks. ...

I really want to put aside selfish distractions and thoughts, but I just can't.

If I can think less or not, then my fifteen years may not be "grey" clouds and yellow leaves, but "blue sky and green leaves" Then, fifteen years of wind and rain, fifteen years left a brilliant page.

Really! Sometimes, I can't think.

6. Primary schools write a composition of about 250 words in the form of a total score. It's best to care about picturesque spring scenery. The colors of spring are really colorful: the sun is red, the sky is blue, the treetops are light green, and the winter jasmine is delicate yellow ... No wonder so many literati love to praise spring with beautiful poems since ancient times, because spring is a beautiful fusion of everything.

The spring wind, warm and fragrant with earth, gently stroked my face, inadvertently reminding me of the poem "Blowing my face and chilling the wind". Willow and poplar branches fluttering in the wind are full of longevity colors, which look like a touch of faint smoke from a distance, but have no color at close range.

Spring rain, thin, hits people like a gentle mother stroking you gently. It nourishes the earth and fills it with spring scenery everywhere. With the cooperation of wind and rain, I feel the true meaning of "Spring Breeze and Green Jiang Nanan".

Look at the sky again. Why is the sky colorful and dazzling? Ah, it's a child's kite. Against the blue sky and white clouds, kites in various postures fly freely. Spring belongs to those who love it. Look, these children have added a splendid stroke to spring.

The tall and green pines and cypresses have gone through a winter test, and the green remains the same. Facing the cold winter, they are fearless and relaxed. Isn't this spirit worth learning from each of us? However, if you look down at the ground, you will find some scattered yellow, which is the trace left by the remnant winter. You may sigh, the fly in the ointment is! However, if you look carefully again, you will be surprised to find that it is green inside! It turns out that yellow grass is also gestating new life and a better spring. This charming scenery was obtained through a cold, closed and dreary winter, but generate showed an inspiring force and played an exciting and unforgettable spring rhythm.

I love picturesque spring scenery! Students, are you like me? Thank you for your adoption.