Writing is a creative mental labor process in which people use language symbols to reflect things, express thoughts and feelings, transmit knowledge and information, and realize communication. The following is the composition writing guide I edited for you, quoting famous words to strengthen the persuasiveness of the article, and welcome everyone to read it!
Rhetoric can make words and expressions more accurate, vivid and vivid. "Rhetoric" in a broad sense includes the choice of words, how to use different words and sentences to enhance the expression effect and polish sentences or articles. "Rhetoric" in a narrow sense refers to the use of various figures of speech, such as metaphor, exaggeration and antithesis, to improve the effect of language expression. There are more than ten kinds of commonly used figures of speech, and "quotation" is one of them.
The so-called "quotation", in short, refers to quotes from celebrities, or poems, allusions, fables, idioms, proverbs, proverbs, etc. of celebrities to support the author's position. Because quotation is a rhetorical method of appealing to authority. Therefore, quotation can strengthen the authenticity, rationality, expressiveness and persuasiveness of speech, so as to obtain concise expression effect and strengthen the persuasiveness of arguments. At the same time, it can also make the meaning of the text more subtle, inspiring, concise and expressive. Citation can be divided into explicit quotation, implicit quotation, cultural use, etc., which will be illustrated by examples below.
to quote clearly means to clearly point out where the quoted words come from, so that readers can see the quoted content at a glance. For example, Hu Shi's "On Short Stories" said: "To describe the word' economy', it is best to borrow Song Yu's words:' increasing one point is too long, and reducing one point is too short; Fu fen is too white, but Zhu Shi is too red. " "
Pragmatics requires mastering the sense of language
Implicit quotation, that is, without indicating the source when quoting, can make the article read more smoothly and naturally. For example, Xie Bingying's "Autobiography of Female Soldiers" wrote: "Later, I grew older and read more books day by day. The so-called" learning and then knowing enough "is really good."
to make use of it, that is, without pointing out the source of the quotation, the quoted content is integrated with one's own article. Pragmatics requires a higher sense of language, and the articles are more elegant and refined after use. For example, Lu Xun's Miscellaneous Talks after Illness has the following passage: "In fact,' a gentleman is far away from cooking' is a way to deceive himself: a gentleman has to eat beef, but he is merciful and can't bear to see the dying swaddling clothes of the cow, so he walks away, waits until the steak is cooked, and then slowly chews it. The steak will never be swaddled, and there will be no conflict with compassion, so he feels at ease, full of interest, picks his teeth, touches his stomach, and' everything is ready for me'. "
Classical poetry is also a common method of quoting, which we used to call "allusion" or "pragmatic". Wen Xin Diao Long holds that the function of "using allusions" is to "help the ancient and prove the present". Ancient people often embedded some historical facts of people, places, things and things in their works, or some stories with sources and basis, such as historical myths and stories, to enrich the content, make the works more subtle and elegant, and make the words beautiful.
For example, Li Shangyin's Jinse: "the sage Chuangzi is day-dreaming, bewitched by butterflies, the spring-heart of Emperor Wang is crying in a cuckoo." There are two allusions in the two sentences, namely "Zhuang Zhou Meng Die" and "Du Yu Hua Juan". This technique of "intertwining texts" makes the works more attractive and meaningful to read.
Look at Su Shi's "Hunting in Jiangchengzi Mizhou", which says: "Report the whole city to the prefect, shoot the tiger and see Sun Lang."
The Sun Lang mentioned here is Sun Quan. The biography of Sun Quan in the History of the Three Kingdoms, Wu Zhi, says: "In October of the 23rd year, the power will be like Wu, and he will shoot a tiger in Lingting with his own horse, and the horse will be hurt by the tiger. Power is invested with double halberds, but the tiger is abolished. Often from Zhang Shi, hit Ge and get it. " Su Shi used Sun Quan as a metaphor to express that he was as young and courageous as Sun Quan.
writing skills of travel notes
1. Describe the scenery in the order of sightseeing.
When writing, on the basis of carefully observing and remembering the scenery you visited, you should write the scenery you saw in the order you saw it. Only in this way can we be clear, natural and clear, and not be messy. There are usually two ways to observe the scenery. One is fixed-point observation. If you stand in a corner of the park, observe the park from far to near. Another example is that we climb to the top of the tower and observe the scenery under the tower from four directions: southeast and northwest. The second is moving observation, which is also called moving step transposition method. It is to change the position with the movement of footsteps and observe one place at a time. Choosing an observation point is to determine the order of writing.
second, grasp the key points of the tour and write the process in detail.
There are so many sights during a visit that we can't keep a diary. To write down what impressed you deeply, you can write the rest briefly. While visiting, we should grasp the characteristics of the scenery and observe it carefully. For example, we should write a narrative about the scenery we saw during the tour, and the key point of writing is to write down the key points of the scenery we saw. For the particularly good scenery we see, we should describe it concretely and highlight the key points. For key scenery, we should pay attention to describe their position, size, dynamic, static and color in detail. If we write chrysanthemums, the colors are red, such as maple leaves, white, such as frost, yellow, such as wheat ears, and so on. The shapes of chrysanthemums are like little girls' curly hair, furry chickens, hydrangeas and so on. We should write the process in detail, specifically, with clear priorities and proper details, so that the articles written can highlight the key points, clearly understand, write the meaning of the tour and have educational significance.
Third, before and after sketching, emotion, reason and scenery should be combined.
When writing travel notes, we should write the beginning and the end simply, and guide the writing skills of the model essay for primary school students' travel notes. Explain clearly the time, place and person at the beginning. For example, at the beginning of "You Shan Juan Cave", there is a famous tourist attraction in Yixing, Jiangsu, my hometown-Shan Juan Cave. At the end, you should write down your feelings in a discussion or lyric way. For example, at the end of "A Roaming in the Nature Zoo", we wrote' Haha ...' We ended this pleasant outing with laughter. The fun of the trip to Zhukumi Nature Zoo is endless, and it is no wonder that people from all over the world come to visit in an endless stream. In this way, the article written has a beginning and an end, which gives a complete impression when read. We should melt our feelings into the scenery and write the true meaning. When writing, we should pour our thoughts and feelings into it. In addition, while we are writing the scenery, we may explore the true meaning of life, or talk about ideological issues and the spirit of scholarship, so that readers can be enlightened and educated while enjoying the natural scenery.
Don't:
First, don't write travel notes as a travel route map;
second, write a composition about the scenic spots that left a deep impression on a certain place you visited;
Third, we must consider the order, space, time and angle of travel notes (from far to near);
fourth, the description does not need to be comprehensive, but should know how to delete branches and leaves;
5. Choose the points that leave a deep impression to play, among which there must be details, and you must think clearly about which ones to write;
6. Pay attention to historical things and events, and the clever combination of legends can highlight the significance of the tour and the depth of the article;
Seventh, the technique of expressing emotion by borrowing scenery should be used;
8. In the description of human landscape, it is necessary to set off the environment, and choose the appropriate scenery to set off it;
9. Rhetoric should be used in the description of natural landscape, but don't be conventional, feel it with your own heart, and it is best to have some appropriate rhetoric innovation.
Seven tips for writing in primary schools
As the saying goes, half the grain is planted well, and half the essay is written well. This shows that it is very important to write a good composition title. Good composition titles generally have the characteristics of novelty, image, conciseness, implication, deduction and distinctive stylistic features, while bad composition titles generally have the characteristics of being too straightforward, too plain, too tacky, too wordy, too obscure and unclear stylistic features. The title of the composition is the first sight of the reviewer, and this first impression is very important, which will directly affect the score. So, how can we write a beautiful composition title?
one is to use metaphor. It is to use some appropriate and clever figurative sentences as the title of the composition. Its characteristics are vivid, vivid and novel. For example,
Thought is an outdated beauty
Smile is a magical key
Communication-a bridge of understanding
Integrity-the cornerstone of career success
Struggle-the springboard of a better life
Second, application. It is to use some poems, famous sayings, famous sentences, etc. as the title of the composition. It is characterized by its implicit meaning, rich connotation and strong cultural background. For example:
Understanding and Lonely Qi Fei
Understanding is heartless but affectionate
Modesty is outside the castle peak building
Conscience should not be small but not good
Diligence asks how clear the canal is
Third, it is practical usage. It is to change some poems, famous sayings, famous sentences, etc. into one or two words to make them into their own languages for composition titles. It is characterized by its rich cultural background and smart colors. For example,
Mid-Autumn Festival, if the moon is full of affection, sings a long song
Talented people are close to the water tower, and virtuous people get the moon
Honesty and self-cultivation
Hometown, infinite scenery in hometown
Details, setbacks often accumulate in a slight renovation idiom: "Worrying about water" < p Is to use dual sentences, like the double-line titles of classical novels. Its characteristic is that it has a strong classical meaning, and its momentum is particularly attractive, which can best reflect the author's aura and talent. For example:
Tolerance in Trust wins trust, and understanding makes success
Listening to coachable at the same time makes everything smooth, while listening to it at the same time makes it dark.
Self-examination needs more practice, and no one is perfect.
Dedication makes everyone gather firewood, and you and I contribute happiness for a long time.
Frustration is not a cold. It is to deliberately set some confusing or suspenseful questions in the title of the composition. Its characteristic is attractive, which can make people think continuously and increase the charm of the article. For example:
Where are the aliens in Fantasy?
"personality" strange words+grotesque =?
network-advanced virus of human beings?
Who is our killer in Environment?
jealousy+? = success
Sixth, the use of stylistic methods. It is the title of the composition written that has stylistic characteristics.
on the relationship between "advance" and "retreat"
On the principle of abandonment
Unforgettable narrative of maternal love in Family
Happy childhood narrative in Childhood
Youth, seasonal prose of singing
Memories. It is to firmly grasp the central word and theme of the topic, and make the topic slightly processed to become a better composition title. Its characteristic is that it can quickly and accurately capture the central meaning of the topic, giving reviewers a sense of clear theme and accurate direction. For example:
thrift is a virtue
regret tastes regret
faith goes hand in hand with faith.
Tolerance, a kind of beautiful demeanor
The righteousness of "Benefit and Righteousness" puts the benefit first and the last eight, and uses the reverse thinking method.
We often use dialectical methods to understand things. For the topic in the composition, we should also think from both positive and negative aspects, abandon the usual thinking formula, think about the things that have been concluded in turn, and then conceive the topic.
if you want to write your thoughts after reading "Yu gong yi shan", it can be titled "moving mountains is better than moving".
in view of "those who are near Zhu Zhechi are black", it can be drafted as "those who are near Zhu are not necessarily red, and those who are near Mo are not necessarily black".
For the "Three Movements of Meng Mu", it can be titled "Dirty environment can make people better".
Another example is "It is not necessarily beneficial to open an book", "Why not make a mountain out of a molehill", "Teenagers also know the taste of sorrow" and so on. Such a proposed topic can arouse readers' curiosity and attract readers to read.
In a word, a good composition title should give people a sense of distinctive stylistic features, clear theme and the author's position and attitude, and at the same time, it should also have the characteristics of image, novelty, conciseness, implication, and endless meaning, so that readers can read smoothly, taste well and remember deeply, and play a leading role.