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Which one has composition materials about "innovation"
The ancients said that writing an article is "seven points solid, three points article", and said that "chest full of John Wan depends on throughput, and the pen has a close call." . This is to emphasize the importance of the materials in the article. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article. Before writing, it is the basis of forming the theme; After writing, it is the carrier of expressing feelings and the pillar of supporting opinions. The author believes that the possession of material should be "the more the better": "time" does not distinguish between ancient and modern, "land" does not distinguish between Chinese and foreign, "quality" does not distinguish between positive and negative, and "class" does not choose words and deeds. However, the use of materials should be "key": true (true and conclusive), accurate (relevant and urgent) and accurate (typical and representative). Through this paper, the author tries to talk about the innovation of middle school students' writing materials from three aspects: collection, selection and tailoring. First, the innovation of finding materials Professor Liu Chifu pointed out in How to Become a Writing Talent: "Writing must have a strong ability to collect materials. To cultivate acquisition ability, we must first practice investigation and interview ... On the other hand, we must learn to get rich writing materials from books through reading. These include extensive reading, using scientific methods, recording and sorting out materials. " So how should middle school students collect innovative materials extensively? 1. Be bold. The value of an article depends on its content. A good article must be "substantial". We should follow the principle of "no best, only better" to "find" the material. As long as you can "cook", it should be counted as "rice", regardless of the willy-nilly, "bring it" first. You can only choose if you have something. Without writing materials, no matter how high the writing level is, you can't write an article. As the saying goes, "A clever woman can't cook without rice." Life materials are the source of students' creative inspiration. The material accumulated in life is a good choice for narrative writing. My own stories and feelings, people and things around me, anecdotes of others in the countryside and so on. They are all good materials for narrative writing. Students should be good at discovering and collecting these materials in life, and only in their own compositions can they solve the trouble of "cooking without rice". 2. Use divergent thinking. It is not enough to boldly get rid of the shackles of ideology. Be bold, solve problems that dare to think, and solve thinking problems with divergent thinking. What is divergent thinking? Divergent thinking, also known as radiation thinking, scattered thinking and divergent thinking, refers to the thinking activity that starts from an information source (this "information source" refers to the "topic" of composition) and seeks the thinking result from many aspects. The flow of this kind of thinking activity is not one-way and single-line, but multi-direction and multi-line. Generally speaking, divergent thinking has no certain direction and scope, and is not limited to tradition and stereotype. It emphasizes that the thinking subject actively seeks multiple answers, emphasizes the flexibility of thinking and the mobility of knowledge, so as to obtain novel and distinctive thinking results through this kind of thinking activity. 3. Use aggregate thinking. Zhu Guangqian's approach is half divergent thinking and half convergent thinking. Among them, "convey relevant meaning and delete irrelevant parts" and "look at the messy subtitles, weigh them carefully, throw away irrelevant points and choose what should be said." Is to use aggregate thinking. By using aggregation thinking, we can also say "merging similar items" to bring together closely related composition points. This "commander in chief" who can bring together a lot of materials is the center of the article to be written. Therefore, the practice of topic composition is: first have the content, then have the center, then write the idea, and finally finish it. 4. Rebound the pipa and sublimate the theme. If the understanding of an event in the composition can rebound and reverse thinking, there will often be a breakthrough, which will make the article unique and innovative, and also sublimate the theme of the article to a new height. For example, the article "Stabbing Qin" is a masterpiece written with this idea. In this paper, "stabbing" is changed to "not stabbing" and "missing" is changed to "not wanting to stab". Both loyal to historical facts and higher than historical facts. There is a great legacy of Mr. Guo Moruo's "Crashing for Similarity". The character has also changed from the chivalrous image of Jing Ke who helped the weak and helped the poor and resisted violence in Jing Ke's "Stabbing the King of Qin" to a man with lofty ideals who understands the righteousness, the overall situation and the overall situation. The author wrote in the article: "My heart is torn: the people's suffering is because of the war. If Qin unified the world, would there be a war? " Qin's national strength is the strongest among the princes, and the six countries naturally have nothing to contend with. What good is killing the king of Qin to the world? Which is more important, the prince's personal feud or the fate of everything in the world? I am a prince, how should I choose? After suffering for two days, my heart ached and I finally had a choice. I didn't stab the king of Qin with a dagger, but I gave him a chance to escape. Walking around the column, I had nine chances, but he could draw his sword and hurt me; Leaning on the pillar and cursing, I want to keep the dignity of the prince. When the courtiers killed me, I thought of all the people in the world. They didn't see the heroic tears in my eyes. "5. Pursuing the novelty of material content. Seeking novelty and pursuing smallness are the ways to create charm in material selection. Only novelty can be fascinating; Only when it is small, can we see the big in the small and see the new in the clever. First of all, we should pay attention to the latest reports, latest achievements and novel events in newspapers and periodicals. Secondly, we should rely on field screening to find out the materials that are most relevant, most in line with the spirit of the times and best reflect the essential laws of things. Only in this way can we write articles with fresh content and receive ideal results. Second, the innovation of material selection: not all the collected materials can be used. Writing an article needs to choose materials, just as a tailor needs to choose materials for clothes and a carpenter needs to choose wood for furniture: summer clothes should be thin and winter clothes should be thick. How to properly select materials from the list of materials with a unique vision in composition, so as to achieve unique vision and outstanding personality? 1. It is written with depth and originality. If the content of the article can transcend the general cognitive field and show the depth and breadth of knowledge, it will give people a refreshing feeling. Get a lot of time-sensitive materials from life and newspaper news. Take personal experience as a breakthrough, dig deep and explore the hidden treasure in the soul; Have a keen eye to grasp current events and examine the trajectory of social development; Having a correct understanding of textbooks is like entering the ocean of history to scoop a spoonful of water; Some can also borrow the existing old themes and write accordingly through appropriate techniques, which can also make the articles "innovative". 2. It feels new to write it. A new "enlightenment" should be a discovery full of individual thinking and insight. The smiling service in our store written by a candidate in Wuhan is an example. This paper describes the details of "Honesty" store, such as smiling to welcome guests, smiling to ask questions, smiling to introduce, smiling to say goodbye and even smiling to play tricks, and details the experience that "I" was cheated by "smiling". The innovation of the article choice is not only reflected in the event itself, but also in the author's incisive rational thinking. At the end, the author didn't sigh, but was "enlightened" by something: "No matter how beautiful a smile is, it can't hide the fake and shoddy nature of goods. The best service is the quality assurance of goods." The author does not simply deny "smiling service", but calls for the return of a humanistic spirit of both internal and external cultivation. This kind of understanding is novel and unconventional, which is enlightening. 3. Write the truth and bring forth the new. Love is precious and true, but true feelings are personalized. Only by choosing personalized "feelings" can we be novel and moving. Students should be deeply aware of discovering new things from ordinary things, especially strong and novel things, and discovering things of great significance to the times from some small details. With new understanding, new viewpoints and new angles, readers will get new inspiration. There should be nothing to rely on in the original meaning, which really means "do what you say." "Third, the creative cutting of materials, colorful contemporary life is the source of writing. Only by maintaining the passion for life, keeping up with the times and being close to real life can middle school students constantly activate the freshness of life and write vivid articles with strong flavor of the times. Summarizing the characteristics of composition cutting in recent years, we can draw the following four experiences. 1. Cutting materials should keep pace with the times and pay attention to hot topics. Real life is rich and colorful, and new things and advanced figures emerge one after another in today's society, and new phenomena, new information and new problems appear every day. If we can pay attention to the accumulation of these moving things, eye-catching things or philosophical things, and put them in order and apply them to our own writing to become vivid materials, then our articles will have a higher foothold and deeper insights. 2. Cutting materials should focus on contemporary new styles and express truth, goodness and beauty. " The article should be written at the right time. "We should hold high the main theme of the times and promote righteousness. We should have a correct understanding of the dark side of society, as Gorky said: "In sunny days, dirty things and rotten things are always particularly conspicuous, but often we are too focused on it and run counter to the hope of good things, so we can't see the sunshine and feel its power to breed everything. "We should write about the good things that make us happy. Writing a composition with a lot of complaints can only reflect the author's immaturity. 3. We should give priority to celebrities at all times and all over the world to show the soul of the nation. When the argument needs corroboration or narrative needs circumstantial evidence, the editing eyes should be scanned by celebrities at all times and all over the world to show the souls of all ethnic groups. For example, Choose with Heart: I was deeply impressed by Chen Yinque's hard character. He has always maintained a person's independent personality, respected facts and maintained the ultimate concern for history and people's livelihood. During the Kuomintang period, he wrote "Jiu Ding Ming Ci for Praise"; During the ten years of turmoil, he wrote "The article only praises Tao Tang". Because of his disloyalty, he was persecuted repeatedly, so that he lamented that "tears died and his heart was broken, so don't miss his life", but he never gave up his responsibility as an intellectual and wrote Liu Biezhuan, an imperial work. The author chooses the little-known life choice of the historical master Chen Yinke as an argument and examines this historical figure with profound eyes. It is out of the responsibility of intellectuals, out of concern for the people's livelihood and out of seriousness about history that Chen Yinque willingly chose this difficult road and finally won a lasting reputation. The selection of materials is typical and representative, and it is also "explosive", which greatly shocked people's hearts and highlighted the central point of view. Pay attention to society, life and self. In today's increasingly life-oriented composition, middle school composition teaching should pay attention to guiding students to refine their thoughts, cultivate their accumulation ability, pay more attention to people and things in reality and think more about the characters in classics. Hot spots and classics, as the two ends connecting ancient times and contemporary times, are equally important to article writing and have always attracted people's attention. Therefore, the innovation in the use of writing materials is the most important. There are many ways to use material innovation in composition, which need to be gradually recognized and enriched in writing teaching practice. Wang, a teacher of the 11th High School in Xiaoshan District, Hangzhou, Zhejiang; Yu Songnan, Senior Teacher of Writing Teaching Studio of Zhejiang Gold Research Institute.