Lyricism in composition is to express love and hate in words. Lyric, to express sincere feelings.

lyric can be direct or indirect. The so-called direct means that the author expresses his feelings directly. By indirect, we mean by narrating, describing and discussing, or placing our feelings in the things and things written, or in the phenomena and things discussed.

lyric should pay attention to the following points:

first of all, the author should have true feelings. Emotions and sorrows are human nature. When writing, the author has already developed feelings for the people, things, things and scenes he wrote. This kind of feelings exist objectively and should be expressed truthfully. Happiness means joy, and anger means anger. Never say, "Ah! I love you. . . . . 。” This pretentious lyricism is not desirable.

Secondly, lyricism should be natural. When writing, don't always think about direct lyric here and indirect lyric there. Good lyricism in the article should be involuntary and natural. It can be arranged, but it seems artificial.

Thirdly, rhetorical methods should be used appropriately. With the help of metaphor, parallelism, personification and other rhetorical devices, the effect of lyricism can often be enhanced. 2. How to write a lyric composition

First, the characteristics of topic composition

Topic composition is a propositional form that uses a revealing language to inspire thinking, stimulate imagination and limit the scope.

topic composition generally consists of four parts: materials, hints, topics and requirements.

The function of topic in topic composition lies in its guidance, guidance and stimulation. The purpose is to stimulate students' interest, arouse their creativity, and promote their association and imagination, so as to conceive in writing.

The topic in composition is different from the topic in daily life, which is set by the proposer and known by the writer, and ensures that the author has something to say. The materials provided by the topic are only a source to arouse students' thinking, an example to inspire students' thinking, and it is the "one" in drawing inferences from others. The author can start from the material, but not rigidly adhere to the material, but to write out of the material. The content and central idea of topic composition are not determined by the words expressed, but by the writer according to his own material selection. It pursues divergent and creative thinking. We should emancipate our minds, broaden our writing ideas and express rich and colorful contents. It can be seen that topic composition has the characteristics of extensive selection of materials, diversity of topics and flexibility of expression. Therefore, when examining questions, we should choose our own angle, title, meaning and style.

Writing on the topic of "schoolbags" can explain the changes in ideology of several generations from the historical evolution of schoolbags; It can reflect the improvement of people's living standards from the texture change of schoolbags; We can talk about reducing the burden from the perspective of the weight and lightness of schoolbags; The schoolbag can lead to an unforgettable memory as a clue; You can write a story about a schoolbag or science fiction story ...

Second, the selection of topic composition

With a topic, many words can be drawn. A big topic can be divided into some small topics, and each small topic will have many different angles. Only when you have a topic can you determine what to write according to your own experience, knowledge and expertise, and you can gallop freely and make the article new.

We can choose hot topics from social life, such as environmental conditions, the development of northwest China, anti-corruption and promoting honesty. Screen the latest topics from media information, such as paying attention to life, society and current events; Looking for topics from nature and natural phenomena, on the one hand, directly from nature, on the other hand, getting inspiration from natural phenomena and expounding life philosophy; Extract unusual topics from ordinary life, such as things that excite you, things that impress you, and things that enlighten you.

We can choose topics from unique life experiences, and explore the social significance and aesthetic value contained in these experiences in the world where people have their own characteristics and others have their own characteristics. Exploring topics from unique psychological feelings, students all have their own emotional world, and their feelings are different in terms of people, events, sights and things, living environment, life experiences and hobbies. Choosing a topic from a special emotional experience, each student's inner emotional world is rich and colorful. Due to the differences in family background, moral cultivation and life experience, the emotional waves that things surge in their hearts are completely different: the joy of meeting, winning prizes, making friends, and the pain of parting, frustration, failure and falling out of the list; There is the pleasure of being admired, the anguish of being misunderstood, etc., so we should be good at choosing topics from them.

Third, the countermeasures of topic composition

Starting from the loose, open and flexible characteristics of topic composition, we should make clear the direction, make plans, grasp the key points and be targeted, so as to be prepared.

1. Establish a new concept

We should establish a concept of "big language" and expand the vision of composition to vivid real life and rich extracurricular reading materials, because life and books are the inexhaustible "content" of composition with few restrictions. It is necessary to establish innovative consciousness, cultivate creative ability, and put the development of imagination in a more important position than knowledge.

2. Establish the key points for preparing for the exam

(1) Pay attention to the life of the times, and put pen to paper from the familiar life of the times, which is fresh and novel.

(2) Reading after class, the composition should be full of personality, novel and original, and you must read more and think more. Read literary classics, read Chinese and foreign fine works, read exquisite current articles, read extensively and highlight key points.

(3) There are three main aspects to cultivate writing ability: first, creativity, writing creative and individual articles through bold and reasonable association and imagination; Second, speculative power, through dialectical thinking on problems, to write articles with depth and credibility; The third is expressive force, which expresses the content of thinking and imagination through accurate and vivid language and natural and appropriate novel skills, and writes articles with profound thoughts and exquisite art.

3. Pay attention to improvisation

(1) Learn to choose, foster strengths and avoid weaknesses. First, choose the style you are good at; The first is to choose familiar content. Adhere to the topic "related" around the center, choose familiar "materials", or as narrative material, or as arguments for argumentative papers.

(2) turn the big into the small. Topic composition has few restrictions, a wide range and a big topic, and it is easy to be empty when writing. The essay should start from a small place, see the big picture from a small place, "focus" on the big background, write accurately, realistically and carefully.

(3) show your skill. Will think about life, reading accomplishment, writing skills, cut into a certain point of the test questions, and show your talents to the fullest. Take some feelings of life as the theme of the article, take famous sayings with educational significance read after class as the argument, and "transplant" a unique idea of a certain article into your own article, and so on.

In recent years, college entrance examination composition and topic are also developing, and topic composition is the current hot spot. Topical compositions often appear in some provinces and cities in the senior high school entrance examination. It is a common phenomenon for middle school students to feel speechless in their compositions. However, there is nothing to say. Not all fields are like this. Practice has proved that with a good topic, most students can broaden their horizons and write better articles. So here, instead of talking about material selection, we talk about the topic. 3. How to express emotion when writing

In daily life, people will have various experiences.

In these experiences, people will have different feelings and feelings due to different experiences, and expressing these feelings and feelings is called lyricism. In primary school students' compositions, most of them are written in the first person.

Therefore, when writing a composition, lyricism means that the author expresses his feelings about the people, things and things written in the article. There are two ways of lyric, one is direct lyric, and the other is indirect lyric.

direct lyricism means that the author expresses his feelings directly. This kind of lyricism, because of its strong feelings, expresses one's heartfelt feelings directly and is very infectious.

however, it should be noted that if the reader doesn't understand what you mean, your direct lyric will not arouse the readers' admiration. There are many examples of direct lyric, for example, the beginning of the article "Goodbye, dear ones" in the primary school Chinese textbook: At the beginning of this paragraph, it is typical to express directly the feelings of parting of the volunteer soldiers who deeply respect the Korean mother.

indirect lyricism is to express one's feelings by combining narration, description or discussion. Indirect lyricism is often used in lyricism, but in writing articles, indirect lyricism combined with narration is more common.

indirect lyricism combined with narration, specifically, expressing feelings between the lines of narration. For example, the text "Cat" in the Chinese textbook: The full-moon kitten is cuter, and her legs and feet are still unstable, but she has learned to be naughty.

a chicken feather and a ball of thread are all their good toys, and they play endlessly. As soon as they play, they don't know how many somersaults they have to fall, but when they fall, they get up immediately, run and fall again.

they are in the yard. The flowers and plants in the courtyard were badly damaged.

They wrestled in the flowerpot and played on the swing by pulling the branches. When they passed, the branches broke and the flowers fell. You will never punish them when you see them. They are so lively and innocent and lovely.

The description of various cute situations of kittens in this paper is full of affection, and finally, the words "They are so lively and innocent and lovely" are used to express their feelings directly, which makes the author's affection for kittens jump to the page. From this passage, we can also see that indirect lyric and direct lyric are often used together to enhance the effect of lyric.

It must be noted that to express the true feelings, it should be appropriate. If it goes too far, it will lose its sense of reality and make people feel that the author is deliberately artificial, which is counterproductive. 4. How to write a lyrical composition,

Description is very important, and it is best to combine the psychological activities and scenes of the characters, and to describe it in detail.

The key is to express one's true inner feelings and express feelings by borrowing scenery.

For example, prose refers to those styles that focus on directly expressing the author's feelings about life and pay attention to subjective expression without paying attention to parallel rhyming. According to the traditional view, prose is a prose article that is different from verse and parallel prose. It can also be said that all articles without rhyme and rhythm, such as biographies, memoirs, travel notes, fables, myths and notes, can be included in the category of prose. This is prose in a broad sense. Prose in a narrow sense refers to short and pithy articles written in concise, beautiful and vivid literary language, which describe people, things and scenery.

There are many kinds of lyricism, including expressing one's melancholy feelings and expressing one's ambitions. Most middle school students write about their ambitions, and those who write about their melancholy may even lose points. Lyricism should also pay attention to what kind of memories this scene reminds you of, and it will be very successful if you can express your wishes.

To express your grand ideal, you can add a sentence from Zhang Juzheng, "

Go straight to the end!" It will definitely make teachers look at you differently (because middle school students generally don't know anything about Zhang Juzheng)

It's a little difficult to discuss, but it can't be said that it is difficult. In order to improve your writing level, I suggest you read Liu Yong's books, such as "I'm not teaching you to cheat", which may give you some inspiration, and his "Let your mood light up" should make you fall in love with writing.

In fact, the difference between a master writer and a novice writer is affectation and non-affectation, and procrastination and non-procrastination. Maybe your teacher will teach you that the composition should start with a phoenix head and end with a phoenix tail, but I don't think so. Generally, the composition should start with a straight point and end with a clever topic. Don't copy a topic directly, especially the argumentative essay has no beginning and end. Generally, the argumentative essay is progressive step by step, with a total score.

Writing is about reading more books, reading classical novels and modern prose, which are very helpful. 5. How to write a lyric composition

Model essay: Looking up at the sky, beautiful clouds fluttering in the air will make my mood as relaxed as clouds.

The clouds in the sky are varied and varied. If you are not careful, it will become another cloud, so that you can't find it. It is moving slowly, sometimes like a dragon, sometimes like a crocodile with a big mouth, and sometimes like a luxurious car you have never seen before ... Look! The cloud closest to me seems to be a beautiful angel. She is looking at me as if inviting me to be a guest. Look again, the clouds on the distant horizon are different in shape, each with unusual characteristics. The clouds on the horizon are very light in color, just like all the clouds have gathered there and paved. There is a cloud, which looks like a white palace. Around the palace, there are many small islands. It seems to spread a carpet for me, and it seems to want me to pass by.

The evening glow cloud is very beautiful, which is different from the daytime clouds. But people expect it to appear in the evening.

Because there is a folk proverb, "Burn the yin early, and it will be sunny later." It means that there is a flaming cloud in the morning, which means it is cloudy. If there is a flaming cloud in the evening, it means it will be sunny tomorrow, so people expect it to appear in the evening.

I have carefully observed the shape of the flaming cloud. It is orange, and this deep color almost renders half the sky, which is very beautiful. Look at it carefully again, its color has changed from light yellow to orange, which is integrated with the color of the sky, just like watercolor painting in art.

When it was dark that day, the sky turned completely black, and there was no cloud in sight, only countless little stars blinking. The bright moon hangs in the sky, illuminating the way forward for pedestrians.

clouds, beautiful clouds, white clouds, all kinds of postures, float from one side of the sky to the other. Not long ago, a scholar told me: "If someone looks up at the sky with rapt attention, that person must be very lonely. Only when he looks up at the clouds in the sky, all his troubles will disappear without a trace."

I firmly believe this sentence. Whenever I am lonely, I will look up at the sky. Really, as scholars say, all my troubles have disappeared. Looking up at the sky, the clouds are moving, which will make my mood flutter with the clouds ... There is also an autumn rain (Zhang Ailing), like silver-gray sticky spider silk, which weaves a soft net and nets the whole autumn world.

the sky is dark, too, like the roof of an old house covered with spider webs. That pile of gray clouds in the sky is like white powder peeling off the roof.

under the cover of this old roof, everything is extremely dull. Old durian, mulberry and grapevine in the garden.

They all represent the prosperity of the past summer, but now they have become the remains of ancient Roman architecture, shivering in the rustling rain and recalling the glorious past. The grass color has turned into a melancholy yellow, and no fresh flowers can be found underground; The delicate daffodils planted outside the dormitory wall hung their heads with tears in their eyes, sighing their poor luck there, only after two days of beautiful days and such a musty rainy day.

Only osmanthus fragrans in the corner, the branches have been decorated with several tender buds as precious as gold, carefully hidden under the green oval leaves.