The beginning and end of primary school composition

"A good beginning is half the success", the beginning of an article is very important. A good beginning of the article can not only drive the whole article and make the article develop smoothly, but also catch the readers and make them fascinating. The ancients said that the words "crested head, pig belly and leopard tail" in the article contain this meaning. Here, I would like to introduce to you several ways to start a narrative that are easier to master:

1. Straight to the point method

(1) Narrative method that explains the basic elements of the event

The beginning of "Between Waves" explains the time and place of the incident: "In the early morning of August 28, 1945, looking down from Qingliang Mountain, I saw many people walking along the mountain road toward the east gate. Walk to the airport."

The beginning of "Remembering a Table Tennis Match" explains the characters, causes and time of time.

(2) A point-and-answer method that gets straight to the point and reveals the theme

The article "Back View" begins with: "I have not seen my father for more than two years, and I cannot forget it the most. The most beautiful thing is his back. "

The article "Praise to Poplar" begins: "The poplar tree is really extraordinary. I praise the poplar tree."

"A Beautiful Life. This method is also used at the beginning of "Silhouette".

(3) The natural starting point of the article is to use the beginning of the matter as the beginning of the article.

An article titled "Remembering a Biology Class" begins like this: "The bell rang. , everyone walked into the biology laboratory. ”

2. Non-cutting to the point method

The "non-cutting to the point method" mentioned here does not mean that there is no "door", but the use of writing. Techniques (such as argumentation, description, lyricism, quotation, etc.), rhetorical methods (such as asking questions, metaphors, etc.) or other methods (such as setting up suspense, etc.) can decorate the "door" more beautifully, making the article more literary, and thus Express the theme more profoundly and vividly, and be more fascinating. Such as:

(1) Describing the environment and exaggerating the atmosphere

The beginning of "Yilu Lihua" describes the natural environment: "Mountains, such big mountains! Ups and downs The green mountains stretch one after another into the distance, disappearing into the confused spring scenery. "This exaggerates the profound and confusing atmosphere in the Ailao Mountains, and plays a role in setting off the touching deeds of the soldiers and civilians on the border to help others."

This method is used at the beginning of the examples "The Passing Years" and "Dividing Houses".

(2) Argumentative and lyrical method to deepen the theme

The text "Who is the cutest person" and the example article "Unusual Examination" both use this opening method.

(3) How to quote famous quotes, aphorisms, and poems

The beginning of "The People's Servant": "Human life is limited, but serving the people is unlimited." I will devote my limited life to unlimited service to the people." This is a famous passage in Lei Feng's diary. The beginning of this passage undoubtedly plays a "literary" role in describing Lei Feng's deeds in the following chapters. role.

Bing Xin's article "Every Holiday" begins with a quote from Wang Wei's poem "Remembering the Shandong Brothers on September 9th": "I am a stranger in a foreign land alone. I miss my relatives even more during the holidays. I know my brothers from afar. At the top of the mountain, dogwood trees are planted everywhere and one person is missing. "The title is novel and the emotion is sincere, highlighting the theme of missing relatives overseas.

(4) Fascinating prompting method

The beginning of "The Second Examination" brings up a strange thing, which attracts the readers' attention and naturally makes people think: "This Why?" Eager to find the answer from the following text, thus enhancing the attractiveness of the article.

(5) Questions to attract readers

There is an essay titled "My Hometown", which begins like this: "Friend, have you been to my hometown?" Hometown? Have you climbed the mountains of my hometown, swam in the water of my hometown, or eaten the fat carp of my hometown?”

There are many ways to write this article, but here is just a hint of them. Some common ones. In writing, sometimes you cannot use a single method, but a combination of several methods.

Which method to use at the beginning should be considered based on the overall concept of the article, the need to express the central idea, the overall design throughout the article, and the most appropriate starting method.

End

Like the beginning, the end of the article is also very important. A successful ending can enable readers to understand the content of the article more deeply and thoroughly, and further understand the central idea of ??the article; a wonderful ending can arouse readers' thinking and excitement, and enhance the appeal of the article. The ending should be like ringing a bell. , "more than enough clear sound". The choice of ending method must also be considered from an overall perspective, so that the events described are complete and clear, and the structure of the article echoes from beginning to end, so as to better express the center and achieve the purpose of writing. Here are some commonly used ending methods.

(1) A natural and smooth method of explaining results

Nie Hualing's "One Less Person" writes about the different images and expressions of a female beggar three years ago and shows how It explores the profound theme of the degradation of personality. The author did not add any comments or analysis in the article, but simply described the events in a line description. The ending reads: "With a bang, the door was kicked shut. The woman turned around, sneered, and then looked at me indifferently. She no longer recognized me!" This unmodified natural ending gave The readers are left with unlimited room for thinking and are endlessly evocative. The example article "Remembering a Table Tennis Match" also uses this ending method.

(2) Echoing the beginning and ending method

The ending should echo the beginning. This is a common way of writing narratives, and many articles reflect this feature. Mr. Guo Moruo's "Egret" begins by saying: "Egret is a delicate poem." At the end, he says: "Egret is really a poem, a prose poem that rhymes in the bones." "Egret is poetry." This An unusual metaphor, especially the ending that is embodied as a "prose poem", highlights the ordinary and beautiful, simple and noble characteristics of the egret, and praises the beauty of the egret.

(3) The finishing touch of the full text summary method

This method generally uses an argumentative or lyrical way to summarize the center of the full text or to comment on the characters and events in the text. The concluding paragraph of the article "Who is the Loveliest Person" belongs to this type. This paragraph ends the article in both argumentative and lyrical ways. The last sentence highlights the topic: "You will definitely love our soldiers deeply, - they He is indeed our most lovable person!" The endings of the examples "The Colors of Spring" and "Dividing Rooms" are also like this.

Sometimes, famous quotes, aphorisms or verses can be used to summarize the full text. Such an ending is more concise and comprehensive, and plays a finishing touch. For example, in the last paragraph of "The Pear Blossoms on the Post Road" "I looked at this group of energetic little Hani girls and the white pear blossoms, and I couldn't help but think of the saying, 'The pear blossoms bloom everywhere on the Post Road.'"

(4 ) Implicit and profound inspirational association method

The ending of Mr. Lu Xun's "Hometown" is the most typical example: "I think: Hope does not matter whether it is there or not. This is just like the road on the ground; in fact, on the ground There is no road, but when there are more people walking, it becomes a road." This sentence is implicit, profound, and full of puns. It inspires people to bravely open the way to create a new life, sublimates the thoughts and feelings of the full text, and embodies Lu Xun's "tough" fighting spirit. The example article "The Passing Years" makes such an attempt at the end.

(5) An exclamation method to inspire readers

The end of some articles is neither a summary center nor an inspiring association, but the author expresses his heart and expresses strong love and hatred. The end of "Praise to the Poplar" loudly declares: "Let those who look down on the people, despise the people, and stubbornly regressive people praise the aristocratic nanmu (which is also straight and graceful) and despise this extremely common and easy-to-grow tree. The poplar tree, I want to praise the poplar tree loudly!”

The end of the article is the same as the beginning, the methods are also flexible and diverse, and there is no fixed pattern. The methods provided above are for reference only. It should be used appropriately according to the needs of the content and center, and cannot be applied mechanically.

v Writing training v

1. Try to write a narrative orally with "Why has my father, who loves to talk and laugh, suddenly become taciturn in the past two days?" as the first sentence of the article.

2. Try to use "My father who doesn't like singing the least came back from get off work today and suddenly started humming a ditty" as the first sentence of the article, and write a narrative orally.

3. Try to end the article with the following sentence, and write a paragraph before it, either describing the situation or describing the character's psychology.

"At this moment, the loud 'beep beep' sound of the car horn sounded like a cheerful and melodious music to her ears."

4. Conclude the article with the following sentence and write a narrative.

"Well, when you long for something, you often dream of it very beautifully, but once you have it, you will find that it brings you joy and trouble."

5. Check the beginnings and endings of several previous essays to see if they can be revised better.

Everything is difficult at the beginning, and the same is true for composition. A good start can lay the foundation for a smooth development of the article. The ancients wrote articles and compared a good beginning to a "crest", which makes sense. An opening that can make people fall in love at first sight and trigger endless reveries in others can often add a lot of color to your article. Especially in exam-oriented essays, "crested" can attract the attention of examiners and make your essay stand out.

The beginning of a good composition should be: first simple, second new, and third beautiful.

The so-called simplicity means that the beginning should be concise and clear, without being wordy and repetitive. Such as:

Everyone has a home, some are happy, some are happy and warm, some are united and harmonious, and some are deserted and lonely. Similarly, I also have a family, but my family is different from other families. My family values ??democracy and loves science. "I Have Such a Family"

The content that could be written clearly in just one sentence has to be preceded by so many long-winded narratives, making the beginning seem sloppy. You might as well modify it as follows:

If you want to ask me what kind of family I have, I can answer you in one sentence. I have a family that values ??democracy and loves science.

Cut out all the nonsense and make it appear straightforward and clean.

The so-called new means that the beginning is unconventional, novel and unique. For example:

I am a little bird, a little bird with its wings cut off. I flutter in the miserable wind and rain, but I don’t want to lose my way.

A voice calls from the bottom of my heart: I want to fly, I want to fly high... - Inscription

I am a middle school student, running around in the "sea of ??inscriptions" all day long. "I Want to Fly High"

The author writes the call from the heart in the form of "inscription". "Fly high", be the master of learning, and find your lost personality from the overwhelming pile of homework. This beginning is eye-catching.

The so-called beauty means that the beginning can give people a sense of beauty.

First of all, we can use vivid descriptions, such as:

1. Through the window, I saw the flowers of the locust tree blooming again. It still blooms as white, crystal clear and fragrant. "Locust Tree Flower"

2. Finally, in the dim lights of the road, the bloated body of the No. 51 bus appeared. People who had been waiting for more than an hour in the night began to come alive. "Squeeze the Car"

Secondly, we can use appropriate rhetoric and quoted poetry. Such as:

1. Maternal love is as long-lasting as a long river, as fresh and sweet as a spring. I am also a lucky person who is bathed in the sunshine of maternal love. "Endless Love"

2. "The flowers have no choice but to fall away, and the familiar swallows return." Whenever I think of this poem, I can't help but think of the face of Pu Pu in front of my eyes, the flowing Pu in the pen, and Qian's English comes to mind again. "Good Teacher"

In short, as long as the content is fresh, the form is novel, and the language is bright, such an opening will give people a sense of beauty.

The final sentence of our elementary school composition must be killed!!! Nostalgia

I wonder if children today can still use these sentences...

1. "The students looked at the clean classroom, wiping the sweat from their foreheads and laughing..." (used to describe after the general cleaning)

2. Ask: "Thank you, kid, what is your name?" "Name?" (used after helping an old man cross the road and waiting for a good person to do something good)

Answer: "My name is Red Scarf."

"(Golden killer sentence~~~)

3. Xiao Ming, Xiao Hong, Xiao Gang, Xiao Li, Xiao X... (Actually, Chinese names are easy to come up with~, Li Shouyin, Shi Sanba They are all

Celebrities~~~)

4. "The weather is sunny today and cloudless. We went to XX Park for a spring outing. The first thing that catches the eye is the rockery. . ”

“Under the afterglow of the setting sun, we reluctantly left XX. I will always remember this happy and meaningful day! "

(Why do I have to write a weekly diary every time I come back from a spring outing?)

5. "I love my home, and I love my great motherland even more! ”

“Looking at the slowly rising red flag, my admiration arises spontaneously”

6. “When I was shopping, my aunt gave me an extra 2 cents.” Looking down and seeing the red scarf fluttering on his chest, he stepped back. "

Then the next thing is: I lowered my head and found that the red scarf on my chest was even brighter.

7. "Today is my first time to wash clothes. Washing dishes, today is my first time folding quilt, today is my first time. . . " (The first time is indeed very memorable)

8. "In my memory, there is such a story like the brightest star..."

9. " My feet felt like lead. . . . "

10. "get out of class is over, some..., some..., and some.... How rich our after-school life is!

11. Countless revolutionary ancestors sacrificed their lives and shed their blood to achieve the happy life we ??have today. Compared with them, I feel extremely ashamed

..." "Five stars The red flag is dyed red with the blood of martyrs. ”

(Childhood was really bloody — —)

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