Question: Pay attention to the directionality of the argument.
A material can extract multiple viewpoints, which means that it can prove multiple viewpoints.
Take the material "Goujian Destroys Wu" as an example:
In 49 1 year BC, Gou Jian, king of Yue, was pardoned by Fu Cha, king of Wu, and returned to China. He established the goal of rejuvenating the country and destroying Wu, and firmly believed that this goal could be achieved. So he works hard, makes unremitting efforts and is determined. "Ten years of reunion, ten years of lessons" made him a rich country, and he tried to destroy Wu in 473 BC.
According to the materials, the following viewpoints can be extracted:
1. Only by setting clear goals can we succeed and create brilliance.
You are more likely to succeed only if you are full of the belief of winning.
Only by perseverance can you achieve your career.
It is not enough to have good wishes, but also to take practical actions. Only by combining the two can we reach the peak of our career.
5. Since ancient times, great talents have suffered a lot.
6. Worry can rejuvenate the country.
7. Suffering is often a fortune in life.
8. Remind yourself.
If this material is used to prove the above eight points respectively, then when it is used as an argument, the focus must be appropriately adjusted, mainly reflected in the focus of description. discuss
1. Only by setting clear goals can we succeed and create brilliance.
In 49 1 year BC, Gou Jian, king of Yue, was pardoned by Fu Cha, king of Wu, and returned to China. He secretly formulated his ambition-to prosper and destroy Wu. The goal cleared the fog in his mind, lit the lamp in his heart, and lit up his way forward. Although he was tired and tired, he was tireless all the time and was finally wiped out in 473 BC.
Only with the belief of winning, can you be more likely to succeed.
In 49 1 BC, Gou Jian, the king of Yue, was pardoned by Fu Cha, the king of Wu, leaving only 13000 soldiers, thus establishing the goal of rejuvenating Yue and destroying Wu, and firmly believing that this goal can be achieved. Faith is fire, lighting the lamp of struggle; Faith is a lamp that illuminates the road to struggle; Faith is the road, leading him to glory. With unyielding fighting spirit and strong self-confidence, he devoted himself to the resumption of production and construction in Vietnam, and the rich countries finally destroyed Wu.
Only by perseverance can you achieve your career.
In 49 1 year BC, Gou Jian, king of Yue, was pardoned by Fu Cha, king of Wu, and returned to China. In order to achieve this goal, he worked hard, "ten years of life, ten years of lessons." Gou Jian personally cultivated and his wife personally weaved, encouraged production, and was diligent in training armored soldiers. He persisted for ten years, and it was worth it every day. Finally.
It is not enough to have good wishes, but also to take practical actions. Only by combining the two can we reach the peak of our career.
In 49 1 year BC, Gou Jian, king of Yue, was pardoned by Fu Cha, king of Wu, and returned to China. He aimed at prospering and destroying Wu. The goal is good, but the road is hard. He helped the poor and sympathized with the families of the deceased. Looking down, corporal courtesy; Hands-on, share weal and woe with the people, step by step, and strive for the goal. Finally, in 473 BC, the State of Wu was wiped out in one fell swoop, which can be said to have both goals and actions, and hegemony and fame spread with it.
5. Since ancient times, great talents have suffered a lot.
In 49 1 BC, Gou Jian, the king of Yue, was besieged by Fu Cha, the king of Wu, and was able to save his life under the lobbying of the doctor Wen Zhong. But he had to put down his royal airs and become a vassal of the king of Wu, humiliating the country and the people. But Gou Jian was a great genius before his death and never forgot to take revenge. In order to remember this terrible experience, he put his courage on his seat, licked it every day and went through hardships. Finally, in 473 BC, Wu was wiped out in one fell swoop. "After a bitter cold, you will eventually be famous all over the world." It can be seen that suffering is an abyss for the weak, but a ladder for success for the strong.
6. Worry can rejuvenate the country.
In 49 1 year BC, Gou Jian, the king of Yue, was pardoned by Fu Cha, the king of Wu, and returned to China, which aroused his unstoppable fighting spirit. In order to realize his dream, he was in a hurry, developing production, making weapons, recruiting and being close to the people. Work tirelessly, cultivate fields, observe people's feelings, help victims and educate people. "Ten years of reunion, ten years of lessons" has long worried about the country and the people, and finally brought the people's prosperity, people's support, military equipment and national strength. Achieved hegemony, it can be seen that worry and fatigue can rejuvenate the country.
7. Suffering is often a fortune in life.
In 49 1 BC, Gou Jian, the king of Yue, was besieged by Fu Cha, the king of Wu, and was able to save his life through the lobbying of the doctor Wen Zhong. However, he had to put down his dignity as a king and humiliate his country. This incident greatly insulted Gou Jian's dignity and aroused his strong fighting spirit. It is this fighting spirit that makes Gou Jian conscientious, plowing the fields personally, and his wife weaving personally. "Ten years of reunion, ten years of lessons" took ten years to enrich Qiang Bing, and it took painstaking efforts and days to repay it. Finally, in 473 BC, Wu was wiped out in one fell swoop. If there was no humiliation at the beginning, there would be no hegemony after Gou Jian! It can be seen that suffering is not necessarily a bad thing for life, but it can become a driving force for life development and an unstoppable wealth for life progress.
Exercise:
Use Washington materials for the following topics
[Materials]1September 796 19 Washington published the resignation speech of American Advertising Daily, in which he dissected himself and said, "Even in the best period of government operation, misjudgment is inevitable. In the end, I realized that I was ignorant and inexperienced, which prompted me to doubt whether I was competent, perhaps even more so in the eyes of others. "
Washington took the initiative to step down and give way to Adams, which set a good precedent for democratic changes in political arena. Since then, re-election has stopped at two terms and has become an unwritten rule of the President of the United States. Jefferson, the fourth president, decided to give up his third chance to win the championship. Roosevelt made an exception for World War II and stayed in office for four times.
History will always remember this day. 1On March 5, 797, 65-year-old Washington successfully completed the handover of power and easily returned to his Mount Vernon. His granddaughter once recorded: "Grandpa, he is very happy to be a farmer Washington again."
However, not long after this extremely happy day, Washington was called to the front again. This time there was a sharp conflict between France and the United States. Adams wrote to Washington: "Your reputation is better than thousands of troops." "Give my life to the national disaster and treat death as if I were home", and this feeling of serving the country arises spontaneously. Therefore, old Washington packed his bags and went to Philadelphia to deal with military affairs.
I-Vernon Meditation from Zhou Ruijin.
Please use the above materials for the composition topic of the 2006 college entrance examination, such as reading, people and roads, walking and stopping, crows catching sheep and shoulders. I want to hold your hand and carve an angel in my heart and write classic fragments.
1, reading
Reading mountains can make you calm; Reading water can make you smart; Reading people can improve your realm and sublimate your soul.
Facing the reality of power struggle and dependence on power, let's read Washington. As the first president of the United States, he has the prestige and ability to be re-elected. However, faced with the temptation of power, he resolutely chose to leave. He analyzed himself and said, "I realize that I am ignorant and inexperienced, which makes me doubt whether I can do it, perhaps even more so in the eyes of others." What an open mind and a noble realm. He didn't miss the enviable presidency, but chose to give way. Look at Washington's move for power and profit. He can not only reassure you, but also win people's respect.
In the face of the temptation of power, let's read Washington to analyze our active concession; In the face of the temptation of power, let's read Zhuangzi, who is "ignoring the pole"; In the face of the temptation of power, let's read Guan Yu, who "hangs seals and seals gold"; Facing the temptation of power, let's read Tao Qian in Gone with the Wind. ...
2. People and Road
There are thousands of roads. Facing the fork in the road of life, choosing a correct life path can better reflect your noble soul and maximize your life value.
The great man Washington chose the most valuable lifestyle. As the first president of the United States, he is qualified to remain president until he dies, but he is clearly aware of his ignorance and lack of experience. In the choice of staying in power and giving way to saints, he resolutely stepped out of the road of leaving his post and gave way to Adams, which set a good precedent for the democratic reform in American politics.
Cong Fei chose the life path of helping poor students go to school, helping others and making themselves happy, which touched a generation of China people. Tai Lihua chose the road of perseverance, bravely faced and overcame difficulties, and let people struggling in the face of difficulties see the dawn of hope; Wang Zhaojun chose the road of "She went out of the Purple Palace into the desert" and saved thousands of people in Qian Qian. The road is what people come out of, and they all choose the most valuable road, so as to realize their own life value to a greater extent.
Step 3 stop and go
When you are alive, you should keep running for your career and your honor and actively fight for it. But when you realize that your ability is limited and this road is blocked, you must resolutely stop, change your role and give way to the sage.
Washington deeply understands the truth of stop and go. During the war years, he kept running and struggling for the independence of the United States, and he did not hesitate to give his life. However, when peacetime came, he realized that he was too ignorant and inexperienced to lead the American people to prosperity. At this point, he resolutely stopped, took the initiative to step down as president, gave way to more capable Adams, and retired to his Mount Vernon calmly. Stopping fleeing not only won the respect of the people for him, but also created a precedent for political and democratic changes in the United States. Stop and go, show the wisdom and broadness of Washington.
Washington, which has stopped, enjoys his old age and is content with the status quo. However, when the relationship between the United States and France was tense and the motherland called him, he resolutely fled the stopover. Pack your things and leave for Philadelphia to receive military affairs. "Forget the national disaster for one's life, die suddenly", stop and run, showing Washington's feelings of serving the country.
When it's time to run, go all out to work hard; When it's time to stop giving up, you should give up freely. People who spend money should stop to enjoy their family when they run for a certain period of time. Will people who draw power stop as freely as Washington when they realize that their abilities are limited? Running and stopping show two completely different attitudes towards life; Running and stopping show two completely different realms of life.
The crow caught the sheep.
People are self-aware, and only by correctly judging their own abilities and choosing their own position can they exert their own limits. Streams don't envy the vastness of the rivers and seas, but they are silent and gaze, making the rivers and seas full of youthful vitality; Sandstone does not envy the magnificence of mountains and rivers, but accumulates silently, adding magnificence to mountains and rivers; Vegetation does not envy the vastness of the forest, but grows quietly to build a broad mind for the forest.
Washington has self-knowledge. After being re-elected for two terms, he resolutely chose to step down. He didn't envy the presidency, but clearly realized his ability and knew that he was inferior to Adams in both intelligence and experience. This voluntary resignation not only won people's respect and admiration, but also set a good precedent for American political democracy. However, when the relationship between the United States and France was tense, he responded to the call of the government and set out resolutely, because he clearly knew that his prestige was better than thousands of troops. It was with this conscious move that he successfully resolved the national crisis.
Washington's retirement from the mountain is a concrete manifestation of correctly evaluating its ability. It is with this self-knowledge that Washington has brought his intelligence to the extreme.
5. Shoulder
People are born with a pair of shoulders, and they should shoulder the responsibility for family, society and country. Only in this way can they realize their life value better.
After Washington stepped down as president, he easily returned to Mount Vernon to enjoy his old age. However, when the relationship between the United States and France was tense, he responded to the government's call and set off. When the country was in crisis, he immediately shouldered a citizen's responsibility to the country.
"If you die in a national disaster, you will die." It was Washington who shouldered the heavy responsibility of saving the country in times of crisis, won the respect of China people and realized his own life value.
One should bravely shoulder one's responsibilities when family, society and country need it. Li shouldered the heavy responsibility of saving lives in ten miles and eight townships with thin shoulders; Wei Qinggang shouldered the responsibility of saving the drowning man with solid shoulders; Should we also shoulder our responsibilities?
6. I want to hold your hand
The wheel of history has run over your body and fallen dust has buried your body, but I still want to hold your hand, Washington, and learn from you. You are worried about your husband when you are far away from the rivers and lakes.
As the first president of the United States, you don't miss the throne of power, but you still leave office and go back to Mount Vernon to enjoy the peace. However, when the relationship between the United States and France was tense, you responded to the government's call and set off. You know, you don't just belong to yourself, but to the people and the motherland. Your dedication to the country has set up an eternal monument in people's hearts.
I want to hold your hand tightly, even if it is buried by years together, I feel honored, because what I hold in my hand is not a pair of ordinary hands, but a pair of hands that have touched the world, soft and firm.
7. Carve an angel in your heart
There are angels and demons in your heart, which need your constant carving and cultivation. Only by constantly strengthening the beautiful things in your heart can you constantly turn yourself into an ideal "perfect person".
Washington has been carving angels in his heart. As the first president of the United States with outstanding achievements and high respect, he can choose to continue to be re-elected, but he deeply analyzes himself: he has little knowledge and experience, and he can no longer lead the United States to continue to develop. At this point, he resolutely chose to make way for Adams. It was Washington who deeply analyzed himself, bravely abandoned his obsession with the power devil, put the interests of the country and the nation first, and made him open-minded, which not only improved himself and made him an ideal angel, but also won people's respect for this "angel".
When there was a conflict between the United States and France, Washington, which enjoyed its old age in Mount Vernon, once again faced a contest between angels and demons. Should we respond to the call of the country and serve the country, or "not in place, not seeking politics" In the end, the angel defeated the devil, and he resolutely came out of the mountain and shouldered the heavy responsibility of saving the nation. Once again, by carving the angel in his heart, he showed his love for his country by "dying of national disaster and sudden death"
Carve the angel in your heart constantly, and he will make you purify your soul, improve your realm and move towards perfection.
The above classic fragments are about 300 words each. If a composition can choose two angles, write two classic fragments, add words related to reality, and add the beginning and end, an article of about 800 words can be completed quickly.
If teachers can teach students a multi-purpose method and train such classic fragments many times, it will not only solve the problem of students' lack of materials, but also enable students to write wonderful paragraphs and add color to the article.
College entrance examination composition-one article can be used for many purposes
First, the articles in the textbook are versatile.
We have learned a lot of articles from primary school to high school, which are the materials we should accumulate in our study and writing. For example, in the previous chapter, Gou Jian destroyed Wu.
Second, already written articles can also be used more.
For example, a student once wrote an article entitled "A pure heart".
The heart of a newborn baby-innocence
In this world where disposable chopsticks and instant coffee blend, too many people look at society with colored eyes. There seems to be a thick wall between people that separates purity from truth, but circles money and power in the middle.
Therefore, people should have a pure heart.
"The old man crouches, aiming at a thousand miles." Over time, people often say that things are different. Faced with all kinds of obstacles in life, they have long forgotten that "the sky will fall to the people of Sri Lanka." The "bitterness" of "mind" and "fatigue" of "bones and muscles" make people who have experienced the world tend to be mediocre. Childhood naive dreams are broken and heartbroken; Sweet words have long been put on the bottom of the box, which has deteriorated and rotted. However, someone stepped forward. The failure of four senators, the breakdown of love and the embarrassment of life not only did not crush his thin body, but also honed his strong will, which enabled the poor American boy to realize his presidential dream. This is Abraham? Lincoln. Have a pure heart, don't let your dreams dim!
"Rice, oil, salt, sauce and vinegar tea." A man should be like this poem by Tang Yin. Although superficial, it has various flavors. "Don't hurt others", you don't have to be "delicious" when talking to others, but you must never be "honey"; When something happens, it doesn't have to be like Chongqing hot pot, sometimes "take a step back"; Look down on everything, trivial things in life are like spices. If you look too hard, the taste will be greatly reduced. Therefore, people should keep a pure heart and cherish the simplicity of returning to nature!
"Don't let the dark clouds cover your eyes." Life is full of temptations, just like the gorgeous coat of poppies, which contains endless sins. Tao Yuanming is an independent garden with yellow flowers, and the elegance of "leisurely seeing Nanshan"; Dongpo's "The River Never Returning" swept away all worries and cynicism, and regarded all fame and fortune as a passing cloud. Don't let them cover the distant mountains. There is a childlike innocence, let them go with the wind when they come.
Have a pure heart! Seek a trace of purity in the noisy world, keep a dream, keep a purity and pursue an open mind!
Later, in an exam, he slightly revised this article as a "remind yourself" topic.
Remind yourself
In this world where disposable chopsticks and instant coffee blend, too many people look at society with colored eyes, and people come and go in a hurry. Often sober, it is easy to stop in such a hurry and give others a piece of advice. But as soon as we let go, people forget to remind themselves.
Therefore, people should always remind themselves.
"The old man crouches, aiming at a thousand miles." Over time, people often say that "things are different from people." Faced with all kinds of obstacles in life, people have long forgotten that "God will be a great responsibility to Sri Lankan people". The "bitterness" of "mind" and "tiredness" of "bones and muscles" made my dream slip away. Dream, broken; Heart, cold, those brave words have long been shelved, deteriorated and rotted. But some people sounded the horn in the deep valley of their hearts, reminding themselves that even in the lowest valley of life, there will be a glimmer of light. Four defeats in the Senate, the breakdown of love and the embarrassment of life did not crush his thin shoulders, but tempered his strong will. The poor American boy realized his presidential dream by constantly reminding himself. This is Abraham? Lincoln. Always remind yourself not to let your dreams dim!
"Rice, oil, salt, sauce and vinegar tea." To be a man, you should be like this poem by Tang Yin, which is plain but intriguing. At the dinner table of life, it is inevitable to take part in accidental amusement. What you say to others may not be "delicacies", but it must not be "honey"; It doesn't have to be like a hot pot in Chongqing when something happens. You should always remind yourself to be normal, even a simple meal can't lack flavor. Look down on everything, trivial things in life are like spices. If you look too hard, the taste will be greatly reduced. Always remind yourself to keep it simple in a muddy world.
"Don't let the dark clouds cover your eyes." There are too many temptations on the road of life, just like the gorgeous coat of poppies, which contains endless sins. At this moment, we should always remind ourselves not to be eroded by the world. Brilliance is like a deep pool, and the moonlight shines on flowers. We should be familiar with the flow of years. Everything will turn into a cloud, but always remind yourself not to let it block the distant mountains. The magnanimity of Tao Gong's sentence "Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely"; Dongpo sang "The River of No Return" in a disheveled way, put aside all his troubles and was open-minded. He was a post station riding a horse with a whip. Remind yourself that since the cloud has come, let it go with the wind.
When we admire the index finger's Believe in the Future and sing Haizi's Facing the Sea and Blooming in Spring, we think of the poet's insanity and the clanging sound of Shanhaiguan railway tracks. These lovely life moments are warning us, reminding others and reminding ourselves at the same time.
Life is short, remind yourself to keep a dream, a simple and an open mind in the noisy world!
Therefore, every student should read more and write more, and skillfully use the method of one material and one article to improve learning efficiency.
How to improve the literary talent of composition
One cold winter, on a busy street in new york, there was a blind beggar. The beggar hung a sign around his neck, which said, "I have been blind since I was a child." Passers-by walked away without looking.
One day, a poet approached him and he begged the poet. The poet said, "I am poor, too, but let me give you something else." After that, he casually wrote a sentence on the beggar's sign.
On that day, beggars received sympathy and charity from many people.
Please use your imagination to think about what the poet wrote to beggars, and why passers-by are more willing to offer their sympathy and charity to beggars after reading this sentence.
Answer: Spring has come.
But I can't see her.
Second, the method of guidance.
It is no exaggeration to say that the college entrance examination composition occupies "half of the country" in the whole volume. According to statistics, there are not a few candidates who miss out on the university every year because their compositions are not ideal ("20% of the candidates' compositions are not well written, and the implementation of the new Chinese curriculum reform in senior high schools means that the composition of the college entrance examination is facing a' great revolution'." )
Although there are many factors that determine the composition score of college entrance examination, from the practice of marking papers, the most important factor that restricts the composition score is "language expression". Because, under the premise that there is no "hard injury" in the examination of questions, structure and content, language has become the main factor that touches "special readers" (examiners). Imagine that when the sun is hot and sweating, the marking teacher will review a lot of papers every day, which will inevitably lead to physical and mental fatigue. Reading articles with tasteless language aggravated fatigue. It is an undeniable objective fact that "one reader takes two or three minutes" when marking papers. To impress critics, literary talent is particularly important. Therefore, we must pay attention to the cultivation of literary talent when preparing for the college entrance examination composition scientifically. Moreover, the cultivation of literary talent is also easy to achieve results. So, how to carry out literary talent training is the most effective? Here are some common methods for your reference.
(1) Be good at association and figurative description.
Language is tasteless, often due to the lack of association, not good at metaphor and description. In fact, the straightforward effect cannot arouse people's association and imagination, and the aesthetic effect must be very poor.
It is boring to say that "beauty is everywhere in life, and beauty is colorful". But if you make good use of metaphor and description, supplemented by parallelism, and write the following sentences, the effect will be very different.
Beauty is a few pieces of residual snow wandering in the cold winter.
Beauty is a few clouds walking in the blue sky.
Beauty is a touch of sunset jumping on the lake.
Beauty is a few birdsongs echoing in the dense forest.
The arrangement of these sentences, due to the use of metaphor, description and parallelism, makes the abstract concept of beauty concrete, which not only points out that beauty is "everywhere" but also shows its "colorful". Very vivid, very infectious.
Exercise: Write a set of sentences on the topic "Beauty is everywhere in life, and beauty is colorful".
(2) Quoting or using ancient poetry
1, method 1:
Brilliant ancient poetry of Han Dynasty is a treasure in Chinese traditional culture. We have accumulated a lot of ancient poems (or famous sentences) in and out of class, so we should vigorously carry them forward in the exam composition, be good at quoting or using ancient poems, and let the flowers of poems bloom in the composition!
Please write a set of sentences on the topic of "life":
Life is Gong Zizhen's persistence in "falling in love is not heartless, but turning into spring mud can better protect flowers". Life is Wen Tianxiang's lofty meaning of "who never dies since ancient times, keeping the heart of Dan as a mirror in history", life is Su Dongpo's detachment and open-mindedness, and life is Du Fu's "where petals are like tears, where lonely birds are lamenting".
This passage directly quotes ancient poems to explain the connotation of life and leaves a deep impression on people.
Exercise 1: Write a set of sentences on the topic of "life".
Life is sometimes the helplessness of "the bridge is broken outside the post, and no one is the main driver", but it is also the persistence of "the road is long and Xiu Yuan is awkward, and I will go up and down for it"; Life is sometimes the embarrassment of "I want to cross the Yellow River, choke on the ferry with ice and climb the Taihang Mountain with snow", but it is also the heroism and optimism of "I want to ride the wind and break the waves in and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea"!
Exercise 2: Write a set of sentences with "Love" as the topic, quoting ancient poems.
An example of affection is Zhu Ziqing's father's back, which is a needle and thread in the hands of Meng Jiao's loving mother. Affection is Wang Wei's sigh that he is "in a foreign land, and he misses his family twice during the festive season", and affection is Su Shi's wish of "wishing people a long time and traveling thousands of miles".
2. Method 2:
The other way is not to quote directly, but to use it, which has its own "creation" component.
On the topic of "optimism":
Optimism is a line of egrets soaring into the sky.
Optimism is 10,000 white sails beside a sunken ship.
Optimism is the lush grass fluttering in the wind on Nautilus Island.
Optimism is turning into spring mud to protect flowers.
Ancient poems are used here, just right, which enhances the meaning of the sentence.
(3) Inject humanistic spirit and enhance cultural content.
When explaining the connotation of a concept, language will be more meaningful if metaphor can be combined with increasing the cultural connotation or humanistic spirit of the article. You can consciously dig and train in your usual writing, including celebrity anecdotes, allusions, famous sayings and aphorisms.
On the topic of "destiny":
(1) Celebrity+Event.
Fate is the cry of Xiang Yu's hero when he committed suicide in Wujiang River. Fate is the string of painful inquiries left by Qu Yuan on the bank of the Miluo River. Fate is Beethoven's tragic symphony when he was deaf in both ears. Fate is a brilliant chapter written by ostrovsky after he lost his sight.
This passage skillfully uses celebrity examples from different angles to form a sentence with rich meaning and cultural significance, which constitutes the literary talent and appeal of the article.
Exercise: Write a set of sentences on the topic of "Fate".
(2) celebrities+famous sayings+famous virtues.
The backbone is the constancy of Mencius' "wealth can't be immoral, poverty can't be moved".
The backbone is Li Bai's "Ah, how can I solemnly bow and scrape to those high officials whose sincere faces will never be seen?"
The backbone is Yu Qian's perseverance. "I am not afraid of death, but I want to stay on earth."
The backbone is Ye Ting's awe-inspiring "How can a human body climb out of a dog hole".
(4) Make good use of bedding and foil.
In writing, if only the meaning to be expressed is directly conveyed, the sentence will be monotonous. In fact, if there are only red flowers and no green leaves, the flowers will look monotonous. When writing, why not use bedding and foil techniques? First determine the central meaning to be expressed, then expand association, pave the way from different angles, and then introduce the main sentences to be expressed, which will be more charming and literary.
For example, to express the center of "sincerity is the bridge of friendship", you can make a sentence like this-
Flowers push open the door of spring, shade pushes open the door of summer, fruit pushes open the door of autumn, flying snow pushes open the door of winter and sincerely pushes open the door of friendship.
The original intention of the article is to highlight the importance of "honesty", but it is not directly said. But first spread four vivid sentences from four aspects, and then grandly introduce the central sentence. This kind of writing avoids the usual way of taking in everything in a glance, gives people the feeling of "a bright future", expands the imagination space of sentences, makes the meaning of words full and smooth, and leaves an aesthetic aftertaste.
This kind of writing can also be emphasized by determining the central sentence first and then expanding from other angles.
(5) Clever use of parody.
Imitation is imitation and imitation. It refers to an artistic technique of deliberately imitating and imitating existing language forms, creating new language forms and expressing new ideological content. I have read many famous books and articles in and out of class, so don't forget to learn from and imitate them during the exam.
Please look at the following passage:
A "master" wrote such a passage: Friendship is a useful savings in life. This savings is to give all help in a difficult situation, to give severe advice on the wrong road, to help you sincerely when you fall, and to wipe away your tears when you are in pain.
Our classmates "imitated" such a passage: trust is also a valuable savings in life. This savings is a kind look at you when rumors strike, a firm companion on the way forward, all-round support when encountering difficulties, and a heart lamp to drive away the pain when being slandered. (Trust can also buy beauty)
(6) Adopt hierarchical distribution.
That is, the deepening of layers leads to the deepening of semantics, making it vivid, powerful and magnificent.
For example:
A tolerant friend must be like a brother,
A tolerant family must be happy,
A tolerant country must be strong and lasting,
A tolerant world must be peaceful and beautiful.
(7) Using contrast
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Still life is the beauty of solidification, and moving scenery is the beauty of circulation;
Straight lines are smooth beauty, while curves are euphemistic beauty;
A noisy city is a prosperous beauty, and a quiet country is an elegant beauty.
Everyone is confused about the value of life. There is an old saying in China that "a gentleman does not eat", but there is also "a gentleman can bend and stretch"; Li Bai couldn't stand the slightest injustice and said, "Oh, how can I seriously bow and scrape to those who have high positions? They will never stand being shown an honest face"; There is also Gou Jian's humiliation; Xiang Yu was outspoken and committed suicide in Wujiang River; There is also Liu Bang, who swallowed his words and eventually became the king. Deng Xiaoping with punting in his belly; And Mao Zedong, who was forced to walk the 25,000-mile long March.
Mr. Yu Guangzhong, a Taiwan Province writer and poet, wrote an article comparing airplanes with trains, and the language is vivid and interesting.
Although the plane can be regarded as a leisurely trip to Zhuangzi and a trip to meet the wind by Liezi, it is shrouded in mist, with constant procession, little change and narrow windows, which is unattractive for a long time. Unlike the long distance of the train, the hypnotic rhythm and the changeable scenery. Looking out from the wide window, it's like being on the earth, opening up the world. Therefore, whenever I travel abroad, I always stand on the platform-a veritable "pavilion"-where the double-track track can reach, waiting for the masculine train to rumble into the station and take me far away.
I hope I can solve your problem.