In normal study, work and life, everyone is familiar with composition. Composition is a verbal activity in which people express their feelings in written form. I believe writing a composition is a headache for many people. The following is my composition evaluation, for your reference only, and I hope it will help you.
Composition comment 1 Do you like reading, children? If you don't love, you will suffer.
Books are good friends of mankind; Books are indispensable partners on the road of human growth. Reading more classic and useful books can not only broaden your horizons and increase your knowledge, but also cultivate your sentiment, thus benefiting you for life.
When reading, we will feel completely relaxed, so as to really enjoy reading. Through stories full of wisdom or imagination or full of love or affection. We can see the good and evil in the world. Broaden the world in my heart. Many accidents can also help us establish lofty ideals and a correct outlook on life.
Many famous people have said many famous words about books. For example, Gorky said that "books are the ladder of human progress" and "I jump on books like a hungry man jumps on bread." Shakespeare said: "Books are human nourishment" and so on.
Reading has so many benefits, son, fall in love with reading!
Simple comment: "reading has so many benefits, son, fall in love with reading!" " This sentence is not only an argument, but also the hope and call of the little author to the readers, with good intentions. Unfortunately, this article only quotes some famous reading quotations, and there are no typical examples. The argument is insufficient and the argument method is single, which weakens the persuasiveness of the article.
Composition evaluation 2 1. The metaphor ... is well used.
2. Describe it very carefully with various senses.
3. Briefly explain the time, place and result ...
4. Simple and standard language is very attractive from the beginning.
5. be more innovative from the beginning ... explain the cause and effect.
6. The opening is concise, concise, refined and orderly; Focus on description ... leave a deep impression on people
7. Starting with a scene metaphor is quite innovative; Rendering artistic conception at the beginning of flashback
8. Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing.
9. The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.
10. The beginning of the rhetorical question attracts readers.
1 1. It is obvious to get to the point at the beginning.
12. The words used at the beginning are very attractive.
13. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot to the article;
14 ... briefly describe the wonderful place; Link local work with overall work.
15. briefly introduce the situation and naturally transition to the next paragraph;
16. The situation description causes suspense;
17. Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and visual.
18. Briefly describe the antecedents and pave the way.
19. Dialogue or some psychological description can be added to this part.
20. It is more appropriate to change … to ….
Comment 3: February 10 this year is the Spring Festival. There are many customs, such as setting off firecrackers, eating glutinous rice balls and posting Spring Festival couplets. Among them, what impressed me the most was setting off fireworks.
The fireworks in the Spring Festival are very beautiful! Flowers bloom at night. These "little flowers" are beautiful, including red, yellow, green and purple. Some fireworks have "lines" and "beads" at the end of the "lines". Some fireworks are like meteors across the sky and dancing golden snakes. Others are like beautiful chrysanthemums.
The most beautiful fireworks are red, yellow, green and purple. It seems that the sky is a big jade plate, and these "colored beads" are scattered in the big jade plate.
Dad lit the fireworks he bought. "bang!" The deafening noise deafened my ears. I looked at the sky and said, "Wow!" Our fireworks are as beautiful as a proud peacock, and it is also like the "king of fireworks", which shows its great power among the "fireworks residents".
Beautiful "flowers" are blooming in the sky, which makes the sky particularly beautiful.
Teacher's comment: "February 10 this year is the Spring Festival, which can enrich the customs, such as setting off firecrackers, eating glutinous rice balls and posting Spring Festival couplets ... Among them, Fireworks impressed me the most. "Some are like meteors crossing the horizon, and some are like dancing golden snakes. Others are like beautiful chrysanthemums. The use of metaphor and parallelism vividly shows the beauty of fireworks.
On August 23rd, our little host newspaper conducted a social interview in Jibei Park.
After the previous exercises, I am still very nervous. Finally, it's our group's turn. The teacher gave each group an environmental protection bag, and we collected garbage together to be an "environmental guardian". I laughed and bickered all the way, and my nervousness was suddenly thrown out of the cloud nine. But during the interview, I was a little confused. When I came to my senses, I asked questions nervously, but my aunt didn't seem to cooperate with me, and my mind suddenly went blank. Thanks to my quick wits, I didn't lead to an embarrassing situation. It seems that preparation after class is essential!
After the interview, on my way back to the meeting, I thought to myself: Hey! It seems that my experience is not enough. I will definitely work harder in the future!
Back to the meeting place, we left the park singing the song of the little master. Writing here, I want to say: "Although this activity is over, environmental protection will never end. Protecting the environment starts with me!
This is a narrative. The little author's narrative is detailed and concrete, and the details are vivid and lifelike. I can vividly remember the nervous picture during my interview. The language is lively and full of childlike interest, which expresses the author's expectation of "building a green home and enjoying a beautiful life" with a positive theme.
Composition evaluation 5 1. The article is novel at the beginning, which serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
2. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
3. The language of the article is vivid and readable. The beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers from the beginning, touching people's hearts and feeling the truth.
4. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text. The novel selection of materials in this article aroused readers' desire to read.
He described with passion that ... the key points are outstanding, the details are appropriate and the content is specific. The metaphor is apt and the words are vivid.
6. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read. ... in a relaxed and pleasant tone, it is memorable.
7. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, coherent connection with nature and prominent center.
8. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.
9. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.
10. This article is lyrical as well as narrative.
Comment 6: I like puppies very much, so I asked my uncle for a little male dog.
The puppy's fur is soft and white with black spots. It's beautiful. Soft to the touch, more loving. This puppy is neither fat nor thin. It has a round head and oval ears, and its hearing is very sensitive. When the stranger came, it pricked up its ears and cried. The puppy's eyes are very energetic. One looks here and the other looks there. It has a small nose, a small mouth and two rows of sharp teeth. It eats in a lovely way and is always so hungry. Its four legs are a little short, and there are four small meat pads under its feet. It runs fast and light, and sometimes I can't catch up with it. I took him out from home to play. As soon as he got to the lawn, he rolled around. It was really fun! This puppy brings me a lot of fun!
Comments: This is a vivid composition with lively language and childlike innocence. Some words are more accurate, such as "sensitive", "sharp" and "wolfing down". The writing is fluent and the structure is reasonable.
Composition evaluation 7 1. The characters' thoughts and attitudes, true and delicate psychological process, make readers clear at a glance.
2. The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching, which is really the heartfelt words of the author.
3. Seeking the gains and losses of life from self-reflection and revealing the true feelings in confession are powerful and shocking.
4. the language is concise, concise, concise, concise and powerful, and a few words can convey the appearance of the characters.
5. The language is fluent, fluent, meticulous and vivid; The meaning of this sentence is implicit and euphemistic. After reading, it is like drinking, and the fragrance is endless.
6. The language is vivid and humorous, which makes people laugh.
7. The language is too brief, like an outline narrative, but it fails to get an outline. The narrative is dull, dry and lifeless.
8. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It is very artistic to contrast the emotions of the characters through the description of the environment. The beginning is concise and to the point
9. The novelty at the beginning of the article has phonetic effect. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
10. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
The topic of my speech today is "We should protect the environment".
I think most people have heard of the word environmental protection, but how many people have done it? Let me talk about it!
One: When we go to play, you will see how much garbage there is in the river. We will definitely think, "How can it be so dirty here!" "But if you think about it, isn't the river in our life just as dirty?
Two: Have you seen the clean street where we live? If you accidentally step on a piece of chewing gum, you will definitely say, "Who! How so wicked! " Come to think of it, haven't you ever thrown garbage? I can assure you that no citizen never litters. Why can't we throw the garbage into the trash can?
Can't these two kinds of "landscapes" that we can all see in our lives make the cities in our lives more beautiful?
We support environmental protection! We want a clean society! We want environmental protection!
In this speech, the author first expounds the causes of environmental pollution in our lives, and tells us the truth of protecting the environment by enumerating two examples in our lives. The language of the article is relatively concise, without flowery rhetoric, and the structure is relatively complete and clear, so it is a good article.
Composition evaluation 9 1. Clear context, strong sense of hierarchy and orderly narrative.
2. Appropriate details, clear focus and clear thinking. The carefully selected materials seem to be tailored to the theme.
3. Describe the details, describe the details, describe the vivid characters, highlight the personality, and the image is full and vivid.
4. Set off the characters' moods and scenes with the environment, and integrate the feelings and scenes.
5. The imagination is rich, the idea is strange, and the association closely related to life broadens the reader's thinking and makes people feel lively and interesting.
6. The scenery description is vivid and vivid, and the words and sentences are just right. This scene is presented to the reader like a vivid sketch.
7. Imagination is wonderful not only because life is true, but also because it broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.
8. Although there are countless detailed descriptions of the event process, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and planning ability of the article layout.
9. The appearance is vivid and the characters are lifelike. Wearing the right clothes is like a mirror, which can reflect the character. It's really called "life depends on each other"
10. Environmental description The objective and real environment serves the character, which better explains the ins and outs of character formation.
1 1. The expression is vivid and vivid, and a few words outline the character's personality characteristics at a glance. Characters have distinct and unique personalities in their speech and behavior.
12. The content before and after is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.
Composition review 10 1. The selection of materials is too popular, unrepresentative, old themes and old ideas.
2. Although I chose events with certain narrative value in my life, because
3. The analysis is not thorough, the excavation is not deep, and there is no deep reflection on the hidden truth of the incident.
4. The materials are plain, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and there is no new idea, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the authenticity of life.
5. Failure to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and lack of proficiency in the expression of "seeing the big from the small".
6. Lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.
7. Strong emotions, such as volcanic eruption, can deeply move readers.
8. Sincere feelings, strong feelings, like mellow wine, make people drunk if they don't drink it.
9. Emotions are true and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Express your true feelings with a plain heart.
10. The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are clear to readers at a glance.
The comment on the composition is 1 1. 1. Appropriate use of the method of comparison and comparison, through the disparity and difference between things, effectively proved the center of the article.
2. Taking advantage of parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
3. Using personification skillfully, the images in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, thoughts and feelings, and reflect the spiritual course of the protagonist in the text from the side.
4. Material selection can choose themes with typical significance in life, and events are more representative.
5. The selection of materials is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing to sweep away pedantry.
6. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, highlighting the essence of the incident.
7. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.
8. Multi-angle material selection fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full.
9. The selection of materials is too popular, unrepresentative, old themes and old ideas.
10. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and mining.
Composition review 12 1. Describe passionately ...
2. Focus on the specific content.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
The language of the article is easy to understand, close to real life, and makes people feel very cordial to read.
5 ... explain it to us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is memorable.
6. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure and natural coherence.
7. A concise and accurate description language of scenery is a natural fusion of touching the scene.
8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.
9. This article is lyrical in narration.
10. Make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor and personification.
1 1. The little author is organized when he carefully observes and narrates.
12. The use of some subtle words adds a lot of interest to the article.
13. The article is elegant, graceful, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.
14. The imagination of the article is reasonable.
15. Through vivid language description, readers seem to be in a dream.
16. The article has clear clues, prominent themes and closely focuses on …
17. The details are quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.
18. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail.
19. Describe the delicate life with strong breath, and make accurate and vivid sentences with words.
20. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.
Composition comment 13 once, I went to the park to play and saw a peacock showing off its beautiful clothes-as proud as a peacock. Peacock's tail is like a gorgeous fan cut with colorful brocade, which is particularly charming. At this moment, I can't help but think of a story I once heard.
This story is about the old-timer of this peacock. He thinks he is the most beautiful animal, so he shows off his beauty everywhere. Once, it saw a crow. Of course, this peacock was boasted by the old lady selling melons. Later, it came to a lake and found an animal as beautiful as itself in the water. The proud peacock was very angry. It wags its tail, and so do the animals in the water. Peacock is even angrier. It wants to compete with animals in the water. It just lifts its feet forward and jumps into the water. It became a drowned rat and attracted many crows to watch. The proud peacock bowed his head in embarrassment.
This is just a story. In life, not only animals, but also people. Proud people will be arrogant, self-righteous and do many unrealistic things. I think, if you are proud, will you have the same fate as that peacock!
Comments use metaphors to describe the appearance of peacocks, which are vivid; In the story of peacock, there are some details that can make the image stand out, such as seeing its things; The truth realized from this is also reasonable; In short, the narrative of the article is coherent and the center is prominent.
Composition review 14 1. The appearance is lifelike, the characters are lifelike, and the clothes are decent, just like a mirror reflecting the character. It's really called "life depends on each other"
2. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the characters, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the characters' personalities.
3. The expression is vivid and vivid, concise, and the personality characteristics of the characters are outlined at a glance. The words and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.
4. The content before and after is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.
5. The narrative is simple and rough, with only one frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
6. Inappropriate details and unclear priorities.
7. The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking point-by-point description. Not in line with the atmosphere of the times, the content is too old and aging.
8 focused, clear center, clear thinking.
9. Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, make people clear at a glance.
10. Directly highlight the theme in content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.
Composition comment 15 Some people love slender lotus flowers, some people love proud frosty plum blossoms, but I love ordinary grass.
When early spring comes, ordinary grass emerges from the corner and can be seen everywhere in the street, adding vitality to the street.
Grass has indomitable spirit, even in the cracks of rocks, it can grow, has a tenacious life, never fears and never flinches. Every autumn, when the grass becomes Huang Shi, people burn it with torches. However, in early spring, the grass often comes out to show its little head and say hello to Sister Chun, which also adds vitality and color to spring. This is really "wildfire never consumes them, they grow taller in the spring breeze".
Grass-selfless devotee, paver, full of vitality, adds color to nature. Grass! Although you are not as beautiful as the lotus, you have indomitable spirit, and you inspire people in obscurity! Thank you for your dedication to people, thank you!
Comments: This is a vivid prose scene. From your article, the teacher felt your love for life. Ordinary grass has become indomitable and indomitable under your writing, and has become an inspiring messenger. This is a successful exercise.
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