Comments on a well-written article begin like this:
1, the beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the environmental description sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic.
2, the beginning is concise and to the point
3. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
5. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
6, the beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers.
7. The beginning is touching and has real feelings.
8. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.
9. The choice of articles is novel, which arouses readers' desire to read.
Synthesis process:
1, full of passion, describing ...
2, focused, detailed and appropriate, specific content.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.
5 ... tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.
6. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, coherent connection with nature and prominent center.
7. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.
8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.
9. This article is lyrical in narration.
10, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques.
1 1. The author observes carefully and narrates orderly.
12, the use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.
13, the article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.
14, the article is reasonable.
15, through vivid language description, let readers feel like they are in a dream.
16, the article has clear clues and prominent themes, closely surrounding …
17, the details are quite clever. Extremely rich in skills.
18. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail.
19, delicate description, strong life breath, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
20. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.
2 1. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their identity characteristics.
22. The article comes from life, so although the language is not so beautiful, it is true and interesting, and the writing is reasonable.
23. The article writes in detail that ...
24. The language is lively and interesting.
25. A lot of spoken English in life makes the article more natural and friendly.
End of synthesis:
1, the ending is just right, the center is clear, the language is concise and profound, and it is thought-provoking.
2, use the feeling switch, ending with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.
3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
4. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
5. Focus on the end to express emotions, give consideration to the beginning, and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
6. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.
7. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.
8. At the end of the article, the central sentence is really clear, and the conclusion is short and powerful.
9. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm. Words are done, meaning is still unfinished.
10, the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.
1 1. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and the indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.
12. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.
13, the end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
14, ending in …, clear and meaningful.
General comments:
1, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
This article fully and appropriately exaggerates the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
3, ... practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, exciting and emotional to read.
This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
5. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.
6. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
9. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
10, the close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.
1 1. This article can be described in fresh and interesting language ... Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest and laughter, which is a masterpiece.
12, appropriate details, and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article ... the content is richer and more vivid.
13, the full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, and it is worth learning.
14, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
15, the full text is easy to understand and interesting.
16, the full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.
17, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper.
18, the article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.
19, the article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
20. This article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, novel ideas, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
2 1, the full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.
22. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions and interesting reading.
23. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful and hit the floor, which makes people excited and excited.
24. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
25. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it looks very enjoyable from beginning to end.
26. The full text has a lively rhythm and fresh language, and it is always full of humor and fun to read.
27. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
28. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.
29. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.
There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
Narrative comment
1, elegant words and vivid scenery.
2. The layout is novel and the text is concise.
3, elaborate, clear and gratifying
4. Beautiful writing and vivid scenery.
5, write landscapes, incisive.
6. Clear organization and rigorous structure
7. The writing is free and easy, interesting and meaningful.
8, away from love, meaningful and subtle.
Comments on classic exercises
1. Description category
Elegant and elegant words, vivid scenery. The layout is novel and the text is concise. Detailed explanation, clear and gratifying. Write a landscape and get down to business. Clear organization, rigorous structure, free and easy, interesting and meaningful. Light and far away, relaxed, meaningful and subtle.
Plain and straightforward, and romantic. Concise and fluent, with profound implications. Far-reaching and far-reaching, different from many tastes, vivid description. The content is tortuous and intriguing. Interesting, very enjoyable to read. The story is compact and gripping.
Fluent and tactful, true and true, rich in content and fluent in writing. Your leisurely travel and delicate description. Tell the truth and speak freely. The words are calm and elegant. Narrative lyricism, are quite appropriate to write a beautiful and vivid scenery.
Smooth layout and realistic description. Many words are redundant and the words are not vivid. The content is poor and there are too many typos. It's too early to finish, and it's not enough to write vigorously and unconventional. The article is full of emotion and touching. Detailed description and good organization.
Every word, flowing. Exquisite, lifelike, extraordinary, can fly. The meaning between the lines is calm and elegant. Fresh, smooth and natural. Rich in materials and vivid in words. A rather humorous and relaxed style.
Natural, smooth and orderly.
2. Lyric class
Bright and fresh, quite charming. Smooth and appropriate, wonderful description. Narrative lyricism is quite appropriate. Incisively and vividly, quite to the point. The structure is complete, fresh and meaningful, and the pen is smart and poetic. Anger flows in calligraphy.
The meaning is wide and the realm is halal. The wording is elegant and comprehensive. Speak freely, the words are clear, cheerful and magnificent. Easy and interesting, quite interesting. The words are magnificent and the delivery is gratifying. The writing is sophisticated and thoughtful.
Lyric and sincere, the words are used in one go, and the artistic conception is good. Emotional and interesting events. The true feelings are revealed and touching. Wen Chang is big and bears haunt it. Speech is blunt, meaning is unclear, and language is unclear.
This sentence is rough and doesn't express the meaning. Hastiness and bias are of little significance. The look of happiness shines on the paper. Improper choice of words, unrealistic and wrong metaphor, irrelevant. The language is blunt and fails to convey the meaning. The meaning is empty and the sentence is not fluent.
3. Argumentation category
Use proper words and discuss accurately. Warm and generous, gripping. Get rid of vulgarity and straighten out the meaning. Seriously verify and be meticulous. Strong brushwork, extraordinary opinions, proper wording and fair argument. Simple and appropriate, structured.
Every sentence is powerful and every word is incisive. When you are in love, you will see purity. Use your pen calmly, use words boldly and unconventional. All aspects are covered and the judgment is correct. Explain clearly and use appropriate words. Reasoning is fluent and discussion is appropriate. Full of literary spirit, clear paragraphs, quick thinking and far-sightedness. The context is clear and orderly. It's a waste of words and meaningless. The writing is clear and concise. The content is messy, the words are unclear, the sentences are crude and the meaning is unclear.
The analysis is unclear and the language is too detailed. Loose structure and poor sentences. Many words are repeated and the words are not fluent. Improper choice of words, unclear meaning, improper use of words and inconsistent tone. The analysis is unclear and the language is too detailed. Knowledge is not high, and sentences are awkward.