By what means did the author vividly describe the ventriloquism?
The first part: making sounds to scare soldiers;
1. The word "good" dominates and runs through the whole text, and the development of the whole text is closely linked with the word "good", which is expressed by front description and side description.
2. The combination of positive description and profile description.
3. The bottom line is: Is the chaos in Qiaozui Zhang true or false?
First, interchangeable characters
1. Sit quietly. Sit: Pass the "seat".
Second, the flexible use of parts of speech
1. You can't name all the names. Nouns are used as verbs: say it.
Women caress their children's milk. Nouns are used as verbs: hello.
Hold a grand banquet for the guests. Nouns are used as verbs: catering.
There are good ventriloquists in Beijing. Adjectives as verbs: good at, good at.
5. The guests are not feeling well. Described as an adverb of degree: slightly.
Third, the different meanings of ancient and modern times.
1. Sit slightly. Abbreviation: ancient meaning: gradually, slowly; Meaning: a little.
2. But smell the barrier and stroke the ruler. But: ancient meaning: only; Modern meaning: a conjunction indicating a turning point.
I heard that there is a mouse as a cable. Smell: ancient meaning: listen; Meaning: smell with your nose.
Although people have hundreds of hands. Although: ancient meaning: even, a hypothetical conjunction; Modern meaning: a conjunction indicating a turning point.
There are two wars, and I want to fight first. Femur: ancient meaning: thigh (leg); Today's meaning: butt (hip). Go: the ancient meaning: run; Modern meaning: refers to walking.
6. Give a banquet to entertain guests. Will: ancient meaning: coincidence; Meaning: meet.
7. The guest is not feeling well. Less: ancient meaning: a little; Meaning: small quantity.
8. The sound of the middle force pulling and collapsing. Chinese: ancient meaning: it is mixed; Meaning: somewhere in between.
9. So all the guests changed their colors and left. So: ancient meaning: at this time; Modern significance: connecting conjunctions.
10. I want to go first. Go: ancient meaning: escape; Today's meaning: walking.
Fourth, the word is polysemy.
Milk: a woman caresses her child's milk (nursing); The baby cried with milk (nipple).
Absolute: smile and sigh silently, thinking it is wonderful (extreme); Suddenly, with a stroke of the ruler, the group sounded (disappeared).
Verb (abbreviation of verb) special sentence pattern
The guests will have a big meal. Prepositional object, guests at the party.
Ellipsis: one person, one table, one chair, one fan and one foot. Omit quantifiers between numerals and nouns.
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People who live in Beijing/are proficient in/good at ventriloquism. Meeting/guest banquet, in the northeast corner of/hall/,give/eight-foot obstacle, ventriloquism/sitting/obstacle, a table, a chair, a fan, a ruler/just. All the guests/groups are seated. After a while, I heard/touched the ruler in the barrier, full/silent, and no one dared to wow.
If you hear/bark in a deep alley, there will be/women/shock, and their husbands/babbling. When you woke up, you cried. Husband/also woke up. Woman/caress/breast, child/tolerance/breast, woman/pat/and woo. Wake up again/a lot, talk/keep talking. When it's true, the woman/hand patting the child, mouth/blare/sound, the child containing/crying/sound, the older child/waking/sound, and the husband/scolding the older child/sound are all wonderful/ready. Full house/guests/without exception/stretching their necks, staring sideways, silently smiling and sighing, thinking/wonderful.
After a while, the husband/haze sounded and the woman/clapping/clapping gradually stopped. I smell/have a mouse/make a cable, a basin/tilt, a woman/dream/cough. The guest/Italy didn't feel well and sat down a little.
Suddenly a man shouted "Fire", husband/up/down, woman/up/down. Two children/crying together. Suddenly/hundreds of people/yelling, hundreds of children/crying, hundreds of dogs/barking. The sound of China/Pull/Collapse, the sound of heat, the whistling wind, and hundreds of works together; There are also people who cry for help, tow houses, promise, grab water and splash water. Everything is/should be, nothing/nothing. Although/people have hundreds of hands and fingers, they can't/point to one end; A man has a hundred mouths and a hundred tongues in his mouth. So/the guests/without exception/changed color and left the scene, bravely raised their arms, fought two wars, and wanted to go first.
Suddenly/with a stroke of the ruler, the group rang/finished. Take off the screen/look, just one person, one table, one chair, one fan and one foot/.
The full text can be divided into three parts.
[Edit this paragraph] Overall analysis
The first part (the first paragraph) explains the time, place, facilities, props and atmosphere before the performance of ventriloquists. This part is the foreshadowing of the wonderful performance described below.
The article begins with "a ventriloquist in Beijing" and introduces the ventriloquist, which is a general introduction of this article, that is, the full text is intended to explain the "cleverness" of this ventriloquist's skills. "Banquet guests" pointed out the time and reason for ventriloquists to offer their skills: this ventriloquism performance was at a "banquet guests"; Because it is a "big feast", there is such a grand occasion. "Eight-foot barrier in the northeast corner of the hall" indicates the location and simple facilities of the performance, indicating that this is a temporary performance place with little space. According to the characteristics of this performance, it is pointed out that ventriloquists are performing behind the scenes. Simple props are listed one by one, indicating that there is only "a table, a chair, a fan and a ruler" to show nothing else. The ventriloquist's performance mainly depends on his "mouth". Finally, "Touching the ruler, the room was silent, and no one dared to wow" touched the solemn and tense atmosphere at the beginning of the performance. In this part, apart from the word "goodness", there is no praise for the ventriloquist, but there is a strong suspense about his superb skills everywhere, which makes readers look forward to a wonderful performance.
The second part (paragraphs 2 to 4) describes the wonderful performances of the performers and the responses of the audience. This part is the main body of the full text, describing two scenes performed by ventriloquists: one is a scene in which a family of four wakes up from sleep in the middle of the night and wakes up again; The second is the case that a fire broke out near this house.
The first floor (the second paragraph) is about a performance in which a family was awakened by a dog barking in the middle of the night, and the guests' heartfelt admiration for the ventriloquism performance.
The ventriloquism performance began with the barking of dogs from the depths of a distant alley. Then take a family of four as an imaginary "stage" to shift the audience's attention from appearance to heart. Write "The woman was startled and stretched" first, and woke up when she heard the dog barking, which opened the curtain that the family was woken up late at night. Write "His husband is talking nonsense" again, and the picture will gradually become clear. Moreover, because of "lack of extension" and "nonsense", the children panicked and cried. At this time, the curtain was wide open, and many noises appeared one after another: the husband was woken up, and the eldest son was woken up, so "the woman clapped her hands, her mouth rang loudly, the child cried, the eldest son woke up, and the husband scolded the eldest son" all appeared at once, breaking the silence in the middle of the night and making the ventriloquism performance reach its first climax.
On the second floor (the third paragraph), write and perform the situation of family members waking up and going to sleep, as well as the emotional changes of guests.
Write her husband's "voice" first, and with the clap of the woman's hands, "the beat gradually stops", giving people the feeling that time is slowly passing and the voice is getting weaker and weaker. Then, the sound of mice coming to steal food, the sound of "pot tilting" and the cough in a woman's dream indicate that the night is getting deeper and the whole family is asleep again. This floor shows that the family wakes up and goes to sleep, falling from the last climax to the low tide and preparing for the next climax.
On the third floor (the fourth paragraph), write and perform a sudden fire, as well as the guests' demeanor and movements.
I began to use the voice-over technique, with "one person shouting' fire'", and suddenly accelerated the pace. Then write this sudden accident of a family of four: "When the husband shouts, the woman shouts. Two people cried together. " The atmosphere suddenly changed. Then, from the inside out, people's panic is expressed by "the cries of hundreds of people, the cries of hundreds of children and the barks of hundreds of dogs", and then the fierceness of the fire and the chaos of the fire are expressed by "the cries of hundreds of people for help, the cries of married with children, the shouts of looting and splashing water", and it is messy and vivid to say that "everything should ... not be named in one place". At this point, ventriloquism performance reached the second climax, which is the climax.
The third part (the fifth paragraph) describes the scene at the end of the performance. Thirdly, the performer's props are just "a table, a chair, a fan and a ruler". Echoing the first paragraph, it means that there are no props in the performance, and the wonderful performance just now really came from the mouth.
1. How do the following two places express the quiet atmosphere at night by writing?
(1) "I heard a dog barking in a deep alley."
The ventriloquism performance begins with "hearing dogs barking in a deep alley". This sentence is about a dog barking, far away, coming from a deep alley. This creates a dead-of-night atmosphere, brings the audience into a specific life situation, and naturally attracts the audience's attention to "dog barking", and they want to know what will happen. This sentence not only sets off the quiet atmosphere in the middle of the night by moving and writing quietly, but also paves the way for a family to awaken from a woman to a noisy family.
(2) "I heard a mouse making a noose, the washbasin tilted, and the woman coughed in her dream."
This is the sound of mice running around stealing food, the sound of "pouring pots" and the "movement" of women coughing to compare the tranquility of the night after a family wakes up and falls asleep.
2. How does the text combine the positive description with the side description?
This paper describes the performance of ventriloquism, which not only captures the performers, but also captures the audience: on the one hand, it describes the performance of ventriloquism artists, which directly shows their superb skills and is a positive description; On the other hand, it describes the audience's demeanor and movements, and sets off their superb skills with the audience's reaction. This is a profile description. In the three paragraphs describing the performance process, the performance of the ventriloquist is written first, and then the audience's reaction is written, so that the performance and effect are organically linked, and the audience's reaction is used as a foil to show the "good" ventriloquism performance from the side. In addition, the very simple props are clearly explained twice at the beginning and end of the article, indicating that ventriloquism is not made with other utensils, but only with one mouth, which highlights its skill in "mouth" and also shows the performer's extraordinary ventriloquism ability from the side. This paper uses profile description to express the charm of this ventriloquism performance, which sets off the superb skills of the performers and enhances the appeal of the article.
Read the text first, draw and experience the sentences that describe the sound in the text according to the prompts.
1. Show the process of a family of four from sleeping to waking and from waking to falling asleep in the middle of the night.
(1) From far and near, from outside to inside, from small to large, from point to near.
(2) from big to small, from dense to sparse, slightly heard the sound of jade.
2. Show the situation from fire to fire fighting.
(1) is noisy, from less to more.
(2) all work together, everything.
The purpose of the topic is to make students familiar with the main parts of the text, try to figure out the acoustic description in the text, understand the artistic conception of this ventriloquism performance, and feel the superb skills of ventriloquism. Attention should be paid to guiding students to carefully understand the scenes expressed in the sentences describing sounds in the text, adding some details reasonably, exerting students' imagination and cultivating students' sensibility.
Stomatology is a traditional folk art that uses oral pronunciation skills to imitate various sounds. According to the characteristics of ventriloquism, this paper vividly describes the acoustics performed by ventriloquists and brings readers into the specific life scenes represented by these acoustics. The description of this ventriloquism performance in this paper is not only orderly, but also wonderful, complicated and ups and downs, which vividly shows the "cleverness" of a ventriloquist's skills.
"In the distance, dogs are barking in the depths of the alley ... all the beautiful things are ready", and the writing sounds are from far and near, from outside to inside, from small to big, from separation to combination, vividly showing a family of four waking up from sleep in the middle of the night. Among them, "I heard the barking of dogs in the deep alley ... and kept talking", which wrote about the quiet atmosphere in the middle of the night and the sound of a family of four waking up one after another; "When the time is right ... all the beautiful things are ready" uses compound sentence's sentence pattern to write five kinds of voices in a hurry, just like a chorus, which makes people feel the noisy atmosphere of a family of four in the quiet night.
"The husband's voice began to ring ... the woman coughed in her dream." The voice was from big to small, from dense to sparse, and the jade sound was heard slightly, which showed that the family woke up and went to sleep. "Sound Up" describes her husband from waking to sleeping; "Beat gradually and stop gradually" describes the change of beat sound from big to small, giving people a gentle sense of sound, indicating that women and children are slowly falling asleep; The word "sniffing" means that the sound is very weak. The rattling sound of the mouse, the tilting sound of the pot and the coughing sound of the dream woman are all very slight, which sets off the quiet atmosphere in the middle of the night.
"Suddenly, a man shouted" Fire "..." One hundred dogs are barking ",and it was written loudly, from less to more;" The sound of the intermediate force falling ... can't be named in one place ",and there are hundreds of works to write sounds, everything. It vividly shows the situation of a fire near this family. First, use three words "..." and one word "... cry together", followed by three words "100,000", and then add the words "... 100,000 work together" and "100,000" to write about this fire, its spread and people's fire fighting. "Everything has everything, everything has everything", two sets of the same sentence "Although people have hundreds of hands ... they can't name a place", there are too many voices, and they always write about fire. Trying to render the tense atmosphere of the fire scene makes people feel the urgency of the fire, the fierceness of the fire and the panic of firefighters, just like being in the fire scene.
Answer the following questions according to the text.
1. Describe the audience's reaction many times. What do these descriptions do?
2. Extremely simple props, which are clear in the article twice. How does this affect the structure of the article and the performance of ventriloquists' skills?
The purpose of setting the topic is to let students know the skills of profile description. Instruct students not to talk about personal data in isolation when answering questions. For example, when writing a performance, in addition to the content of the performer and the performance, it is often natural to write the reaction of the people who appreciate the performance, while the latter is described in profile. Another example is the coordination of the beginning and the end, which not only maintains the integrity of the structure, but also serves as a foil to the side, showing the "goodness" of ventriloquism.
This article describes the audience's reaction in three times:
First of all, "all the guests stretched out their necks, looked sideways and sighed silently, feeling wonderful." "craning one's neck" and "staring sideways" mean that the guests are fascinated and deeply attracted, for fear of missing something; "Smile" means that the guests are satisfied with the performance. "Silent sigh" describes the way that guests are impressed by the performer's skills, but it is not convenient to applaud. At this point, the audience has entered the scene of ventriloquism performance and can still hold on.
The second is "the guest is not feeling well, just sit down." Comparison between "sitting up straight" and "stretching your neck" and "staring sideways" "Slightly" means "gradually" and "gradually", which shows in detail the gradual process of the guests' mood from tension to relaxation. It shows that the audience's mentality changes with the content of the performance and has been integrated into the situation of ventriloquism performance, which is difficult to control.
Third, "all the guests changed their colors and left, bravely armed, and wanted to go first after two wars." Writing about the panic-stricken manner and movements of the guests shows that the ventriloquism performance has reached a wonderful state, which makes the audience feel like they are in a sea of fire and can't help but enter the life scene created by ventriloquism performance without any self-control.
These three descriptions vividly and delicately depict the psychological changes of the audience, showing the great attraction of this wonderful performance to the audience, thus setting off the superb skills of ventriloquists.
Third, explain the words added in the following sentences.
Braille in these sentences can be roughly divided into two categories: one is different in ancient and modern meanings, such as "Jiang", "Dan", "Wen", "Shao", "Although" and "Qu"; The other is that there are different usages in ancient and modern times, such as "feast", "milk", "woo" and "name", which are all verbs in the text and are now nouns. Students should be reminded of these easily misunderstood words.
1. Guest banquet ...
Will: Just right, just right. Banquet: Banquet. Hall service: hall and living room. Stone: Set it up, set it up. Barrier: refers to screens, tents and other things used to block the line of sight. Foot stroke: props used by artists to perform, also called "awakening wood".
But when you smell the barrier, you will be full of silence, and no one dares to wow.
But smell: only smell, but: only smell. Smell: I heard it. Sit: Pass the "seat". Of course: ...
3. The woman caresses the baby to eat milk, and the baby cries with milk.
Milk: feeding. Whoops: humming a child to sleep.
The guest is not feeling well, just sitting.
Less: a little. Slightly: gradually (adverb of time). Shu: Stretch and relax.
People have hundreds of mouths and hundreds of tongues, so you can't name a place.
Although: even if. Name: say it.
6. So the guests changed color and left, bravely armed to the teeth, and fought two battles, wanting to go first.
Femur: thigh. Go: Run. Roll up your sleeves and raise your arms. Finn: Lift it up, lift it up. A few: almost. War: trembling, fighting.
7. Can't point to one end: can't point out (any) one of them. All kinds of sounds describing ventriloquism simulation are issued at the same time and intertwined, making it impossible to recognize them one by one. One end: one end, which means "one kind" here.
4. Identify the following words indicating time and fill them in the lines respectively. Then take these words as clues and recite the full text.
There are many words expressing time in classical Chinese, which should be sorted out within a certain period of time, so as to effectively master their usage and gain a solid memory. This question is actually a way to arrange for students, and other ways can be used.
In order to explain the sequence of sounds, this paper uses some words to express time, which is both accurate and changeable. For example, "later" is used between the audience seat and the performance, which means that the time is not long, and it also means waiting for a while; "As soon as possible" means a short time after receiving the last sound; "When" means at that time; "Once" refers to the same time; "Sudden" and "sudden" both indicate the time when the accident happened suddenly. The diversity of words shows that the author is good at choosing the most appropriate words to express the content accurately according to the characteristics of the things reflected and the needs of the article.
After a while, it was a moment, and then suddenly.
1. means suddenly: suddenly.
At the same time: once.
It means one thing after another: right away.
It happened in a certain time: it was timely.
It happened in a short time: after a while.
First of all, about the scene description of this article.
The article "Kouji" is very vivid, vivid, delicate and vivid in the description of scenes, especially the description of lively scenes.
First of all, if you want to write a good scene, especially a lively scene, you must first have a comprehensive bird's eye view.
The first part (the first paragraph) of the article Stomatology is about the preparation before the performance and the situation of the whole audience. There is a bird's-eye view of the scene at the beginning of this passage. At the beginning of the article, there is a sentence "There are people who are good at ventriloquism in Beijing". When I put pen to paper, I always write a note, pointing out the place ("Beijing") and people ("people who are good at ventriloquism"). Then point out the occasion of the performance of "Grand Banquet Guests". The author wrote a little here, without laying out the details, but on the whole, he wrote the overall atmosphere and scene of the audience. The author vividly showed us a vivid picture of life.
Secondly, in addition to a comprehensive bird's eye description, the author also took a typical close-up.
For example, the scene of "building an eight-foot barrier in the northeast corner of the hall" after the description of "Banquet Guests" ... no one dares to wow "was written. So far, the author has adopted the method of meticulous painting, combining typical occasions ("an eight-foot barrier is erected in the northeast corner of the hall"), characters ("ventriloquists sit in the barrier" and "guests sit in groups"), props ("a table, a chair, a fan and a ruler") and performance effects ("nothing later ..."
In short, the overall atmosphere is written with a bird's eye view of the whole audience; The close-up shows the characters, props and ventriloquism effects concretely and truly. In scene description, bird's-eye view and close-up are often combined and used alternately. It can't give up this and that, and it can't give up that.
Furthermore, the description of scenes, especially lively scenes, in the article Kouji is not only orderly and rigorous, but also complex and changeable.
For example, the second part (the second, third and fourth paragraphs) is about the wonderful performance of the performers and the reaction of the audience. This passage is written in an orderly and rigorous way, such as:
The order of performance: write the situation before the performance first; Write about performers' performances; Don't write at the end of the performance, the performer's props are reproduced.
The process of performance: a beginning, a development, a climax and an end.
Description of the scene: ① the site where the barrier is set; (2) There is a scene of a family of four moving indoors during the performance, and there is a noisy scene when the fire is put out; ③ The reappearance of the scene after the performance.
The description of ventriloquism itself: as far as voice is concerned, it is from far and near, from outside to inside, from things and people, from small to big, from little to many, from faint and noisy, from slow and urgent, from simple and complicated, from one family to neighbors. All the voices came out together, one after another, until all the voices came. When it was inexplicable, it was really overwhelming and amazing!
Write the audience's reaction: after the beginning of "Fu Chi", it was a quiet field, "the whole field was silent, and no one dared to wow"; In the performance, when writing about the activities of a family of four, it begins with "All the guests are full of necks, ……", followed by the words "The guests are uncomfortable and just sit down". In the scene of fire fighting, it is written that "All the guests change color and leave, and …… want to be first"; After the final performance, "off-screen viewing" is still a simple prop.
As you can imagine, the guests were amazed.
Author's praise: From "all good things are ready" to "everything that should be … can't be named in one place". After writing its exquisite performance and the audience's reaction, the author's praise is added to enhance the artistic effect of the work.
All the above are written at the beginning and the end, with clear eyes, orderly levels and strict order. At the same time, according to the needs of performing ventriloquism, the author describes a well-written, rigorous and orderly scene in a complicated and changeable way from the audience's point of view, according to the sequence of performances, interspersed with other aspects, taking into account alternately, and integrating casting and weaving. Such as the second part:
The second paragraph wrote the voice of a family of four, which is "all at once" and "all good things are ready", forming the first climax of the article. However, with a change of pen, the author turned his attention to the audience and led to the words of "craning his neck, staring sideways, smiling and sighing silently", which vividly portrayed the audience who were absorbed, amazed and intoxicated.
In the third paragraph, the family went back to sleep, and it was quiet. There were mice, the noise of turning over pots and the cough in dreams, but they were moved and quiet, which set off the characteristics of quiet night. This is the aftermath of the previous climax, falling together and adding waves.
In the fourth paragraph, when writing a fierce fire fighting scene, the article suddenly rose, like a riot, breaking the quiet state, leading from the bedroom to the fire, organically linking the two scenes, forming the climax of the article. Describe a complex, ever-changing, thousand words, long-awaited, close call, dangerous, changeable and real scene vividly and vividly!
The complexity and ups and downs of this writing make the article full of waves and swaying.
Also, we should not only describe the life picture centered on the activities of characters, but also reflect the colorful struggle life. The former describes the life picture centered on the activities of a family of four in the bedroom; The latter, in turn, reflects the fighting life at the fire-fighting site, thus showing complex and changeable stories and depicting the voices, voices and modality of many characters.
As for the end of the article, it echoes the beginning, ups and downs. After the performance, the scene reappeared, and the words came to an abrupt end, crisp and powerful. The reproduction of props emphasizes the simplicity of its performance tools, highlights its "mouth" skills and points out the significance of the topic. This vivid description, when you read it, sounds like it's almost the same. Why not let people be fascinated by it and cheer for it!
In short, the description of the scene should be selective and have a clear purpose. In literary and artistic works, scene description is used to express the typical environment of characters' activities, contrast the characters, render the atmosphere, promote the plot development and deepen the theme. The scene description in the article "Kouji" has played such a role.