In the afternoon, several female classmates joked around me and said, "Cheng, do you still want your father to see you off?" Isn't your father afraid that you will get lost and be abducted by swindlers? I reluctantly smiled: "No! It's just that you happened to see him pick me up suddenly today. "They thieves looked at me with a smile and said nothing.
But now almost every day, my father will pick me up. Those female classmates laughed even deeper ... "Dad, can you not pick me up? It's not that I don't know the way! " Once again, I couldn't hold my breath and took all my anger out on my father. Dad's pale face was full of smiles: "How can this be done? It's been raining recently, and it's raining slowly ... "I slammed the door with a black face, and my dislike for my father deepened. ...
I forgot that when I got up in the morning, my father gave me a "be careful on the road" reminder;
I forgot that in the middle of the night, my father always got up and covered me with a quilt that was kicked on the ground, fearing that I would catch cold;
When I bought snacks on the road, I forgot that my father was trying to make money;
i forgot ...
"mom"
"I finished playing the piano!" I came out and had a stretch. "Where did you play? There are still ten minutes away! " My brother ran out to look at the clock. "mental derangement! When you are finished, you will say that you have not finished. " "You haven't finished!" Brother is not convinced. "Go! It's your turn to play! " I waved him to play the piano. "Anyway, you don't play I won't play! Hey! " We often quarrel and even use our fists. "rolling! Go to hell! I died in the New Year! " Mother was very angry and pointed a kitchen knife at us. We snorted, and no one spoke to anyone. "Every day noisy, are you tired? ? I told you today! Your father and I divorced a long time ago! I tell you clearly that I left because of you! " After that, my mother threw the divorce certificate on my desk. "See clearly? I've had enough! Noisy again! " On the divorce certificate, the names of mom and dad are clearly written and conspicuous. I suddenly froze. Tears. It didn't flow down. Never shed tears when you are most vulnerable, it can only show your vulnerability.
I forgot that my mother was chopping vegetables when I quarreled with my brother, even though it was bleeding.
I forgot, when I talked back to my mother, she was secretly crying in the toilet.
I forgot my birthday. I didn't know how painful my mother was when I was born.
i forgot ...
Yes, I completely forgot. When I was reading, I was moved by the fictional things in the book and was indifferent to the love in front of me. When my father gave me an umbrella in the rain, I was so ignorant that I hated him. While my mother was secretly crying, I was still criticizing her in my heart.
I gave a wry smile. I don't seem to have grown up.
Everything is so thorough, in my heart, love has never turned up any waves or ripples. Occasionally, it wakes up and becomes active ... it gives me a powerful shock, deep and deep. ...
I'm confused, confused and guilty. Like a mountain, it looks vast from a distance and quiet from a distance; A river, though silent, still has a deep sound. And I, for many years, have put it in the corner of life, beating feebly.
oh ...
Mom and Dad, I love you!
Interviewee: Amo99 | level 1 | 20 10- 12-4 22:48
This is more emotional and can be widely used! A total of about 500 words, you can add more.
My favorite person-mother. My mother is tall, white, neither fat nor thin. Mother has thick curved eyebrows and big eyes, from which shines the light of wisdom. This is my mother. How's it going? She looks beautiful.
My mother is my first teacher. I remember the first time I wrote a composition, and I didn't know how to write it. My mother took me out of the house to the fields and asked me to write down what I saw, heard and thought. Every Sunday, my mother will take me to the People's Park to observe the scenery and the characteristics of animals. My mother asked me to write down what I observed when I got home. In this way, under the careful care of my mother, I am like a bird learning to fly, and my feathers are full day by day.
My mother is always my first reader when I finish writing. After reading it, she always praises me. Even if my handwriting is wrong, my mother will kindly say, "It would be better if this sentence were written like this." I always make faces to correct my mistakes and feel relaxed and happy.
Under the eyes of my mother's appreciation and recognition, I hobbled out of the first step. My heart is so happy and proud!
My mother is also my closest friend. I will tell my mother everything, because I don't have to worry that my mother will accuse me if I am wrong. When I was in danger, my mother did not hesitate to relieve my worries; When I was confused, my mother showed me the direction; When I am depressed, my mothers will be full of enthusiasm for me; My mother gave me confidence and courage when I failed.
Mom is a magical power, which makes me grow up healthily and happily. Mom, I love you, and I want to tell the world: "Mom, I like you best!" " "
Interviewee: steamed bread and cake | Grade 1 | 20 10- 12-4 22:49
The method written at the beginning (another: the method written at the beginning)
1, cut to the chase
Stick to the theme from the beginning and point out the people, things and things related to the content.
Paragraph example:
In my memory, there is a European face. A broad forehead covered with brown curly hair, a high nose, dark blue sunken eyes and lips pressed into a line ... constitute a firm and cheerful face. This is my French teacher, Mr Ivan.
(Mr Ivan Zhang Tong)
2. Metaphor begins.
Take one thing as an example to illustrate another truth.
Paragraph example:
Books are called "longevity fruits" of human civilization. This metaphor, I think personally, is particularly cordial.
Just like a butterfly flying through flowers, just like a clear spring flowing through a valley, whenever I recall my youth, I can't help feeling the pleasure of seeing and hearing. In the memory, the reading life of youth is like a colorful picture scroll, and it is also like a cheerful movement. (Ye Wenling, "My longevity fruit")
Step 3 ask questions at the beginning
The article starts with a question to inspire people to think and stimulate readers' interest in reading.
Paragraph example:
Friend, have you read "Spring and Snow in the Qinyuan" by Comrade Mao Zedong? Aren't you intoxicated with the grand occasion of "the original wax elephant of the mountain dancing silver snake"? Have you ever heard of the thunderous north wind? If you are a gentle and delicate southerner, you must be full of eager yearning for the winter in the north. Ok, please swim with my poor pen! (Yang Xiaolan's Winter Notes)
Step 4 set suspense
Ask questions at the beginning, put forward contradictions and set doubts, but don't answer them, so as to stimulate readers' interest and curiosity.
Paragraph example:
On Monday, the sixth class is the class meeting time as usual. Usually, before the class meeting, the class teacher is either a class cadre giving advice or busy in the classroom. But today it's the opposite. I haven't seen the head teacher since noon.
"Today's class teacher must have forgotten."
"Today's class meeting must be cancelled."
"Today's class meeting must be held. Who knows what tricks the class teacher is playing? "
Sure enough, one of the students was right. As soon as the bell rang, Mr. Liu walked into the classroom with steady steps, but unlike before, he wore a strange suit and hat, and his face was mysterious and unpredictable. The classroom is so quiet that everyone seems to be waiting for some explosive news. Only the students' eyes kept turning with the figure of the class teacher.
Or a few "know-it-all" in the class couldn't hold back and whispered, "This is a doctor's suit, a doctor's suit!" "Oh, what good air!" Almost at the same time, many students screamed loudly.
At this time, Miss Liu took out a small packet of red silk from her arms and opened it slowly and carefully. What the hell is this? The students were puzzled, straight neck, eyes staring at the red envelope. Some simply stood up, and the quiet classroom seemed a little turbulent. (Tang Tianjun's "Mystery Class Meeting")
5. At the beginning of the discussion
The article begins with a thought-provoking philosophical and intellectual language, clarifying one's own views, opinions or opinions, and leads to the following.
Paragraph example:
At the end of the 20th century, the Internet enveloped people's lives. The network is turning a tangible world into an illusory space. It has narrowed the distance between people, but at the same time it has alienated the realistic distance between people. (Han Jie's "Online Love")
6, lyrical beginning
At the beginning of the article, I expressed my love and hate for myself or the characters in my works, which infected the readers emotionally.
Paragraph example:
In the morning, a few golden rays of sunshine gently recline on my small window. I think at this moment, there must be a colorful light radiating from my face, so that happiness and warmth surround me. There is a music card from a friend on the desk. Opening the card, suddenly, a familiar and cheerful melody lingered around me, and the words "Happy Birthday" flashed red with the rhythm. I am so excited. I look up at the blue sky and white clouds, and I will blurt out a kind of joy: today-I 16 years old. (Duan Xuemei's song to the world)
7. Scene fusion
At the beginning of the article, it depicts a special atmosphere and mood, which covers the whole article and is introduced into the text.
The drizzle dripped on my cheeks, and I looked around leisurely while enjoying the cool air. A small tree suddenly jumped into the eye, and the tender branches revealed a tender freshness, and some new greens proudly shone on the leaves covered with raindrops. What a lovely little tree! I stopped and watched it swaying in the autumn rain with deep affection ... (Autumn rain in Bing Lin)
8. Introduction
Quoting some famous aphorisms at the beginning of the article can enhance the persuasiveness of the article.
Paragraph example:
"Industry is diligent and lazy." This is the motto left by Han Yu, an ancient China writer. This means that diligence can make your study more profound, and laziness will make your study in vain. At present, our knowledge is still very poor and superficial. If we don't study hard, we can't make a good contribution to the construction of our motherland. Diligence should be our motto. (Anonymous "Talking about Diligence")
The way to end a work
1, the end point of the point
Point out the topic at the end of the article.
Paragraph example:
It's been several years now, but the majestic Daqingshan, which stretches for thousands of miles, and the rolling mountain stream that has been flowing for thousands of years will remain in my memory forever, because there are a group of people who are closest to nature and have lofty qualities and firm beliefs. When I was growing up, they were like dazzling stars, guiding my life. (Zhang Hui "Star")
Step 2 show the future
It aims to predict or show a bright future at the end of the article.
Paragraph example:
When we walked out of the school gate, the melodious electronic piano sound floated behind us, and the children sang in childish voices: "Our hometown is in the field of hope …" Yes, Pear Town is a land full of hope. I looked up at the transport vehicles shuttling back and forth on the main road in the village, and I felt an unprecedented passion in my chest: "Fly hard, Pear Town, and fly towards a better tomorrow!" (Zhou Hongyi, "I like to see the new changes in pear town")
Step 3 end abruptly
It refers to the intention to stop suddenly when the article is closed in order to obtain a straightforward and neat expression effect.
Paragraph example:
He arrived at school. The teacher was surprised that the top students didn't report. Suddenly I saw a student standing at the door in blue homespun clothes and trousers.
"Come on in!" The teacher said.
He silently put down the basket, took out fifty yuan and put it on the red cloth.
The teacher unveiled the red cloth with surprise-
Ah! ? A basket of scrambled eggs!
The teacher took his report card and looked at the dozens of dollars and a basket of eggs-
Startled and speechless! (Guo Hao "Untitled")
4. Unexpectedly
Refers to the method of ending with unreasonable language, behavior and situation.
Paragraph example:
In the bookstore manager's office, Mr. Fang patted a check for 20 thousand yuan on the table and said to the lady who received him, "Would you like to make a big deal with me?"
The young lady said, "Of course. But we don't have any big business here, only books. Please feel free to choose. "
Mr. Fang threw the check in front of the young lady and said, "I'm too lazy to choose, please." At two o'clock in the afternoon, I will pick up the goods. "
The young lady stared at the rich man in front of her in surprise, not knowing how to deal with it. Mr. Fang was about to turn around when she woke up and asked, "What do you want?"
"As long as it is a book, as long as it is famous." Mr. Fang said without looking back.
At two o'clock in the afternoon, we drove to the bookstore. The lady returned the check to Mr. Fang and said, "Sorry, our manager doesn't want to accept this business."
Mr. Fang froze again. He growled, "where's your manager? Let him come out to see me. "
"No need." The young lady smiled and said, "Our manager read the check and knew who you were." He asked me to tell you that there is not a scrap book that can be put on the shelves in this bookstore. Every book is a life with a soul and has a special liking. In the end, it belongs to it forever. "(Xu Shengao" Want to Ask for a Book ")
Step 5 be careful at the beginning
Refers to the method of ending with a word corresponding to the beginning.
Paragraph example:
After collecting the flowers, I watched you go away in the light rain, and suddenly remembered that I had not paid for this branch of Chinese milk vetch, so I called out to you. You turned around, smiled and said loudly, "The flowers are for you, big brother. Come in, it's raining hard. "
I stood for a long time and watched you go far-a small bamboo basket, a small umbrella and a pair of little feet. Selling flowers, selling flowers ... (Cheng Yahong's "Red Flower")
And the beginning of the article is like this:
I dreamed of you, Honghua. I dreamed of you, a flower girl in a water town in the south of the Yangtze River. A small flower umbrella, a small bamboo basket, and the cry of peddling wet by light rain. ...
6, full of philosophy
Refers to the method of using philosophical language as the conclusion of an article.
Examples of paragraphs: such as the text "Take one step, take another step"
7. End of reference
Refers to the method of quoting famous sayings or proverbs as the conclusion of an article.
Paragraph example:
Finally, I leave a motto of Douglas to encourage you:
"If you can't do the road, then you can do a road; If you can't be the sun, you will be a star. " (Zhao Junfeng's "Be the Best Oneself")
In addition, some methods of beginning can also be used for ending, such as lyricism, scenery writing, metaphor and so on.
Composition opening method
The starting method of writing
"The article looks like a mountain, not like peace", which means that the article must be tortuous and vivid to attract others to read; "Phoenix head, pork belly, leopard tail" tells that the beginning of the article should be like the head of a phoenix, brilliant; The middle should be as full and rich as pork belly; The ending should be like a leopard's tail, loud and powerful, so that such an article will be loved by people.
Of all the writing skills, the beginning is the most important. The beginning is well written, wonderful and vivid, powerful, infectious, resonant and suspenseful, which will attract others to read it. Otherwise, your writing content will be vivid and interesting, and without a good beginning, the attractiveness of the article will be greatly reduced, and the value of the article will be greatly reduced. This is why there is a saying: "A good beginning is half the battle".
So, what are the common ways to open people's compositions?
First of all, cut to the chase and get straight to the point:
Narrative writing based on people can directly explain the characters or directly get to the point by describing their portraits, dialogues and actions.
1, beginning of memory:
Example 1: There is such a good monitor.
Her name is Wang Jinghong, and she was my monitor in the fourth grade. Although we have met many times, the anecdote of the monitor is still vivid and unforgettable.
Example 2:
2. Description of appearance at the beginning:
Example 1: My favorite little friend
I have a good friend who is inseparable. Her fleshy little face has a pair of slender arch eyebrows, and there are a pair of watery big eyes under the eyebrows. There is a smooth cherry mouth under the delicate nose. All in all, this is a lovely little face. You know who she is. To tell you the truth, she is my good partner-Zeng Yushu.
Example 2: My favorite person
My favorite person-mother. Mom is tall, fair-skinned, thin but not thin, plump but not fat, with thick curved eyebrows and big bright eyes, always shining with wisdom. This is my mother. How's it going? She looks beautiful.
3, appearance description+opening features:
Example 1: My grandma
My grandmother is a middle school teacher. She has bright eyes under her black eyebrows. She is not tall and her chubby body is always so busy. Grandma is very serious and responsible for her work, and I admire her very much.
Example 2: My father
My father is tall and thin, with two thick eyebrows and a pair of particularly round eyes, always shining with wisdom and alertness. He can sometimes make people feel humorous. He is only in his early forties, and his black hair has somehow fallen off very little. What I respect and admire most is his fighting spirit.
Example 3: The lovely gardener-my teacher.
She has bright eyes, a mouth that can impart thousands of knowledge to us, and a motherly smile on her face. Who is she? She is our head teacher-Miss Liu.
Example 4: Little musician
My little friend Zhang Mengyao has big eyes and neat white teeth. She's cute. Tell you, she is still recognized as a "little musician" by her classmates!
Example 5: My grandfather
My grandfather is in his sixties, with a thin face and a high nose. Although his temples are gray, he looks very energetic. He always has a smile on his face. My cousin and I both like to be naughty with him and tease us. I nicknamed him "the old urchin".
4, the beginning voice description+character characteristics:
Example 1: My good partner
Before I got to her house, I heard a crisp and pleasant reading sound. I know it's her, my good friend, a good partner who studies hard, so don't guess.
5. Describe the characteristics of the characters at the beginning:
Example 1: My partner
I have a good partner. She is a Chinese learning committee member in our class. She was told to be serious and responsible for her work, never careless, and to complete all the tasks assigned by her teacher meticulously. The most special thing is that she cherishes the collective property.
Example 2: After Grandma became the general manager,
People call my grandmother a strong woman. Although she has watched it for half a century, the bones are still hard. After she became the general manager of the supermarket, a few crow's feet climbed on her forehead, and there were many silver threads in her black hair. Usually, a pair of bright eyes are often bloodshot. And those who ask for help to send gifts, like running water, flock to my door one after another, to my exhausted grandmother.
6. Direct narration at the beginning:
Example 1: "Mom, you are wrong"
I sat at the dining table and spilled soybean soup all over me. I cried sadly.
Example 2: My mother
After school, I walked quickly on my way home, because I kept singing "Empty City Plan" in my stomach. I walked happily, thinking: at the moment, maybe my mother is cooking something good for me! Thinking, thinking, I seem to smell the tempting fragrance of the food, and I can't help but speed up the pace.
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Interviewee: Ortaffa _ Deng | level 5 | 2010-12-4 22: 53
Forward to: Zuo Jiannan, my question, my answer.