1. What are the requirements for writing this essay?

1. Review the topic. This is the first thing to do when writing an essay. Otherwise, it will directly lead to "the essay is not on the topic" and "the writing is worth a thousand words". , thousands of miles off topic.”

How can I review the questions well? According to the form of common composition topics, they can generally be divided into two categories: proposition composition and material composition. To examine the topic of a propositional composition is to examine the specific requirements of the given article title, to review the intention of the topic, to clarify the requirements outside the topic, and to determine the "title".

Through reviewing the questions, clarify the content range, time range, quantity range, person range, location range, etc. of the composition. Cannot exceed the given range.

When reviewing the topic of material composition, we must mainly grasp it from two aspects: first, it must be "inseparable" from the ideological content of the material, and second, it must be "inseparable" from the requirements of the composition form. 1. Propositional composition Let us first focus on the topic review of propositional composition and what things should be paid attention to.

Determine the scope of the content. For some topics, stipulate the writing content. Therefore, when reviewing the topic, you must determine the scope of content specified in the topic: if you are describing people, what person should be remembered; if you are describing a narrative, what things should be described; if you are describing a scene, what scene should be described; if you are describing an object, what should be described, etc.

2. Concept Concept is to determine the theme of the article and clarify the central idea that the article should reflect. The purpose of the article should be to refine the basis of life and strive to reflect some of the fundamental things in life.

In order to achieve this goal, we must strive to be correct, focused, novel and profound. 1. Correctness Correct intention is the fundamental requirement of composition.

We often hear that so-and-so’s articles are very thoughtful, which mainly depends on the profoundness of the author’s creative intentions. Generally speaking, the intention of our compositions should be positive and healthy, strive to reflect the essential content of life, and have a certain degree of social universality.

In other words, the theme of the article should be something that everyone can recognize or actively advocate. 3. Formulating the title Formulating the title of the article is the first thing to determine before writing the article, just like we must "make up our mind" before starting to do something.

The title of the article can reflect the starting point and motivation of writing. Through the title of the article, readers can basically understand the theme and main content of the article.

The title of the article should be a highly concise summary of the core content of the article. It should be accurate and vivid, so as to attract attention and arouse the reader's interest. According to the need to express content, article topics can be roughly divided into the following types.

When writing, you can use it flexibly according to the actual situation. 2. What are the three major requirements for writing a composition?

There are three levels to writing a good composition: outer layer, inner layer and deep layer!

Outer layer: text, language! Du Fu once said, "If you are obsessed with human nature, you will never stop writing good sentences, but if your words are not shocking, you will never stop!" That's the truth.

Inner layer: image (character, environment, psychology), which can also be understood as "storytelling" in a narrow sense, in the genre of novels.

Deep level: artistic conception, meaning. For example: what to express, what to praise, what to criticize. These are the soul of literature.

In short, to learn to write well, you need to observe more, think more, and know how to live!

When writing a composition, the most important thing is the idea, which is the main core of the composition, the intention or point of view that you want to express, and then connect it through some examples or words, or add it with examples and facts. evidence. Of course, this refers to articles such as reviews. There are many types of essays, and the writing methods of different types of articles are different. Of course, if the intention of an essay is good and it stands far away, the composition will be half successful. Secondly, it also requires beautiful sentence modifications, vocabulary, the use of different structures, and the use of different narrative methods, which will have different effects.

3. The composition requires a complete story. Can you write a few things?

Enthusiasm

The operation of machines creates the prosperity of the city.

One after another The city was built on the fragrant plain. Human beings used infinite wisdom to build the city. The blue-gray city bricks and the cement floor with specks of moss reveal the history of the city and human labor.

Walking on the crowded streets, those urban-flavored words reminded me of urban civilization. The urban civilization created by people unknowingly is an eternal topic that exists in an inadvertent moment. We enjoy our The civilizations we created all believe that material and spiritual things make our lives fulfilling. The invisible radio waves over the city still spread the emptiness and insecurity of city people.

Yes, no sense of security!

My fingertips slid across the city wall that was riddled with holes. People’s insecurities created this city wall and gave them their own formal sense of security. People really felt safe. There used to be How many times have the city walls not been impregnable, and the people living inside the city walls have been attacked by foreigners? How many times did the city wall fall down and then be repaired? No one knows. The Xi'an City Wall is still there, but now it has only become a tourist monument to commemorate history. The Forbidden City Wall is still there, but it is no longer the boundary between the royal family and the common people. These walls that once gave their owners an infinite sense of security are only It may be an ordinary special scene in the city. The city people have lost their instinct to survive in nature and become fragile

and become vulnerable. People from outside the city want to come in , this is the sorrow of people in the city, and even more of the sorrow of people outside the city. The city wall will still repeat the same story, and batches of human beings have become accessories to the city.

So, I heard it again The city people said: City people, come out!

City people come out! Step out of the urban civilization circle and the city walls we have created. The breath of nature can rob us of all our breaths and suck away the emptiness and insecurity from our bodies. No one can bear the oppression and burden of the city for a long time, and Will not refuse a request that can relieve the burden. City people come out. This is a request from city people. They go out of the city, integrate into the original vitality, and restore their instinct to survive in nature. Then they can use themselves conditions to create new cities one after another, with new insecurities, and new stories happening in the cities.

People and cities are constantly repeating the same fate. This It is the sorrow of mankind and the sorrow of the city. When will the drama of the master and its accessories come to a finale?

Enthusiasm to help others has always been a beautiful virtue of human beings. It may be thought that people who are full and have nothing to do are looking for something to do, but people who help others are always very happy. Australians have fully demonstrated this. .

If you are not a local and are not very familiar with the streets here, or you can’t find which building or street you are looking for... don’t worry about getting lost, because there are always people here. Very enthusiastic to help you. Any Australian, whether they are walking or in a hurry, if they see you holding a map at a loss, they will immediately come over and ask if you need help. If They know the place you are looking for, and they will tell you in detail which way to go, or take you directly to the place you are looking for. If they don't know, they will not just point to a place and tell you. They will apologize to you sincerely, saying that they don't know the place, as if they did something wrong.

If you are at a tourist attraction and don't know where to go back, there is no need to do so. If you are worried, you can go to the information center of that attraction and ask. The staff there will also be very enthusiastic to help you. Not only will they tell you which way to go, they will also tell you where to go closest and where to go. You can see more spectacular scenery, and where to go to avoid traffic jams... As long as you need it but don't know it, they will tell you. They will even introduce you to the scenery here to see if you have seen anything. Yes, they will tell you as long as it is worth seeing. Moreover, the maps and manuals here are all free. They will give you all the information during the introduction so that you can fully understand where you are. Required information.

Everyone is for one, and I am for everyone. This phenomenon is almost a habit here. No one will deliberately punish anyone, and no one will not help anyone.

.I hope this habit can reach China and make China more civilized! 4. What story topics can be written to write a composition?

1. To write a composition, you must learn to accumulate the following summaries: "Reading thousands of volumes, writing is like a god", "It is difficult for a clever woman to make a meal without rice", summarized by the ancients, from the pros and cons. This aspect illustrates the importance of "accumulation" in writing.

"Rely on accumulation in daily life, and rely on performance in the examination room." This is the common experience of students in the examination room. (1) In terms of language, a "vocabulary library" must be established.

Vocabulary is the cell of the article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.

There are two ways to build a "vocabulary": the first is reading. You should read extensively books, newspapers and periodicals, and take notes on your reading. Excerpt some beautiful words, sentences, and passages in a specific book, or make reading cards.

The second is life. Usually, you should capture the vivid language spoken by the public and write down these words in a small notebook or card that you carry with you. In this way, over time, you will be able to speak well and write wonderfully in your compositions.

(2) It is necessary to strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article.

Because many students don’t pay attention to accumulating materials, they make up or plagiarize every time they write. The way to solve this problem is to accumulate materials.

If possible, you can bring a video camera and tape recorder to observe life in depth, actively participate in life, and record family life, campus life, and social life in a timely manner through sketching, diary writing, observation notes, etc. experiences in. When recording, you should grasp the details and grasp the characteristics of people, things, objects and scenery.

In this way, the articles written will have flesh and blood. (3) Strengthen ideological accumulation.

Point of view is the soul of the article. If the center of the article is not clear or the intention is not profound, it often indicates that the author is shallow in thinking.

Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two methods: first, think well.

"The more you think, the more you gain." You should think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when encountering problems.

In this way, we can see the essence through the phenomenon. You should also record the "sparks" of your thinking and the conclusions of your thinking at any time.

The second is to compile, that is, to excerpt famous quotes, aphorisms, etc. In short, we must strengthen the accumulation of compositions and establish three major writing warehouses: "vocabulary library", "material library" and "thought library". They must be regularly inventoried, sorted and classified into categories, and they must be continuously enriched and expanded.

2. To write a good composition, you must first learn to observe. Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points when answering the question of "how to write a good article" by literary youths: first, read more, and second, practice more. “See more” here means observe more.

This means: to write good articles and master skilled article writing techniques, you must observe more and learn to observe. Observation is the necessary prerequisite and foundation for writing. The Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself to become an observer with a keen eye and never give up! - He must train himself until observation becomes a habit, as if it becomes second nature. ”

Turning observation into a habit and second nature is a skill that takes time to hone. It is very effective and a great skill. You should pay attention to the people, things, scenery, and objects around you to obtain the materials you need for your composition: you should become interested in things that may not seem big but are actually very meaningful, and pay attention to the causes, processes, and results; you should Pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors throughout the year, and learn to inquire deeply to understand the ins and outs of these changes; you have to go out into the society, contact more people, observe their words and deeds, and think about something at any time. Merge them into the long river of your own thoughts.

This is the process of observation. During the observation process, you should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with your eyes". Observation in a broad sense and with more practical significance means mobilizing all the five senses of a person: listening with ears, feeling with body, and more importantly, thinking with heart and brain, so that such observation will be more delicate and profound. .

(2) Pay attention to the good use of "bad pen" during the observation process. As the saying goes: A good memory is worse than a bad writing.

Many students see a lot every day and think a lot, but they are not good at writing it down at any time. This will make the observed material go to waste and many valuable things will be wasted. Wasted. (3) Pay special attention to perseverance in observation.

Don’t suffer from "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not beneficial to writing a good composition. You must observe and think about life throughout every day of your life, so that you can write Come out with wonderful articles and excellent works. Learning to observe has a huge foundation and impetus for writing good compositions. Without observation, you will often find it difficult to write.

I hope you can learn to observe, continuously cultivate and improve your observation skills, and make great progress in your writing practice. 3. If the idea is high, the writing will be successful. To establish the idea is to establish the center and intention of the article.

So what issues should we pay attention to when writing an article? (1) The purpose of an article must be correct and correct. Correctness means ensuring that the feelings and thoughts of the article are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with my country’s basic political principles, in line with the basic moral requirements of human beings, and in line with the basic moral requirements of human beings. Give people positive inspiration. (2) The purpose of writing must be specific. "Composition is more important than specificity. Specificity makes skillful, and divergence makes people stupid."

No matter how complicated the matter is, the main idea cannot be scattered. If an article wants to explain this issue and that point of view at the same time, and rambles on, the purpose will inevitably be unclear.

In fact, if you want to cover everything, you will definitely miss the point. Moreover, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than you can chew", it is better to concentrate on expressing one center, even if it is through several things. To express the center, we must also adhere closely to the center of the text, with consistent goals, focusing on the connection point between the material and the center, so that all the power contained in the material is directed toward the center. (3) The purpose of the article must be novel. The most taboo thing about an article is to follow others' opinions and follow what others say. A novel perspective is the core of innovation in composition.

Novel ideas require jumping out of the old box, not following conventional thinking, habitual thinking or original mental stereotypes, but using a unique perspective to examine the alternative content contained in the topic and avoid Write what others often write, and write what others have not written. Even the same writing object can always be approached from many angles, as long as we break the stereotypes of thinking, stand at the height of the times, avoid the "conventional" and pursue the "different", think from multiple angles and sides, or associate, expand, or make analogies , or in the opposite direction, where people have not yet done anything, they can be colorful. 5. What are the types of compositions? There are ten types

Topic compositions, narrative compositions, propositional compositions, quotation essays, semi-propositional compositions, and many more, such as 1. Material composition (1), text material composition 1. Old New extension of the text 2, re-editing of old stories 3, making up stories with new materials 4, writing stories according to outline (2), composition of objects and materials 1, composition of looking at pictures 2, composition of graphics 3, composition of objects 4, composition of sound (3), abstract Material composition 1, word composition 2, image composition 2, hypothetical imagination composition 1, time hypothesis 2, space hypothesis 3, role hypothesis 4, function hypothesis "Sun Wukong fights Ouyang Feng, Xiao Yixiu stumped Da Jigong, there is no rematch between the tortoise and the hare." Whether you win or not, you can travel to the mountains and space in your dreams."

This is childishness, this is innocence. Cartoons, flowers and animals, heaven and earth, legends and anecdotes... whatever your imagination brings, you can write it as you like. This is "imagination composition"! Regarding imaginary compositions, the "Chinese Curriculum Standards" say - "Be able to write simple narratives and imaginative compositions"; "Write about imaginary things"; "Be able to write down what you have seen, heard, felt and imagined in an informal way"; "Use association and "Imagine and enrich the content of expression"; "Inspire students to expand their imagination and fantasies, and encourage them to write about imaginary things"; "Provide favorable conditions and broad space for students' independent writing, reduce the constraints on students' writing, and encourage free expression and creativity Expression. ”

… It’s really liberating, liberating, and liberating! Composition teaching has ushered in an era of great liberation, and children have gained more freedom in their writing. Against this background, our county held a number of county-wide special teaching and research activities on composition teaching in the 2001~2002 school year.

Several teachers from Experimental Primary School, Zhaishan Primary School, and Tongling No. 4 Primary School also gave three successful open classes on imaginative composition. These have broadened the horizons of most of our front-line teachers and provided us with valuable experience.

After synthesizing the teaching and research experience in our county in recent years, summarizing my own teaching practice, and synthesizing relevant information from various newspapers, magazines, papers, and the Internet, the author was delighted to find that imaginary composition is indeed rich in connotation and charm. endless. Content determines form, and composition teaching must start with content, and imaginative composition is no exception.

The author believes that from the perspective of subject matter and content, imaginary compositions can be roughly divided into two categories: material compositions and hypothetical compositions. Among them, material composition can be divided into three categories: text material composition, object material composition, and abstract material composition.

1. Material composition (1), text material composition This type of composition uses certain article texts, stories and legends as materials and support, expands and extends, allowing students to use their imagination to expand and continue writing Or rewrite the story. In terms of subject matter, there are mainly the following situations: 1. New extension materials of old texts come from texts in the textbooks, such as the continuation of "The Little Photographer" taught by the author: "Will the Little Boy Come Again?" "Hard Times" Imagination What will the future of the Little Red Army be like? "The Little Match Girl" imagines "if I were on the street", "Uncle Yule is Back" published by "Dongshan Island Primary and Secondary School Composition Garden" (rewritten as "My Uncle" Yule") and so on.

2. Re-edit old stories. Use the familiar myths, fairy tales and legends (the sources are different from the textbooks) as the source of materials to continue and adapt the stories. For example, "The Tortoise and the Hare" by teacher Chen Yukun of the Experimental Primary School, "Journey to the West Afterword" and "Journey to the West" published by "Composition Garden", the masterpiece "The New Romance of the Three Kingdoms" by a 7-year-old primary school student in Shenzhen reported online, etc.

This type of composition is often particularly attractive with its new spin on old tunes. 3. Make up stories with new materials. Based on the new materials provided, expand your imagination and make up stories according to the prompts.

This is the case for the third prize essay "Moral Court Trial" in the National "Spring Bud Cup" that the author directed. The title is about a monkey who likes to throw away melon and fruit peels and cores, and does not listen to warnings.

For this reason, the animal kingdom held a "moral court trial" to educate it, so that the little monkey finally realized his mistakes and determined to change them. Participants are asked to specifically imagine the situation of the trial and expand the material into an article of more than 500 words.

Most of the training questions in "Write with Me", which became popular across the country in the early 1990s, are typical of this type of composition. 4. Write stories according to the outline. This type of composition has certain limitations, but because of this it is challenging. This is undoubtedly beneficial to training primary school students to be intentional and purposeful in their imagination.

For example, write "Cloud Doll to the Desert" according to the outline: 1. Cloud Doll comes to the desert; 2. Cloud Doll sees a camel; 3. The camel asks Cloud Doll for help; (think: Camel asks Cloud Doll for help) What's the deal?) 4. Cloud doll helps the camel; (Think: How can the cloud doll help?) 5. Cloud doll bids farewell to the camel; (2) Composition of objects and materials uses children's imagination to write stories composition. According to the different items, it can be divided into: 1. Picture composition. This is a more traditional type, like the "tree planting picture" we wrote before.

It may seem cliché, but as long as the material is attractive, good results can be achieved. For example, comic strips and cartoons are very attractive to children.

The most typical one is "Lenovo Rubik's Cube" in the mid-1990s. It uses the combination method of Rubik's Cube to string together several groups of unrelated pictures into a fairy tale or science fiction story. This greatly stimulates children's creativity and imagination. 2. Graphic composition Use geometric figures to express your imagination, or use ○□△ and other graphic puzzles to write an imaginative composition based on the meaning of the picture.

In the 1991 college entrance examination essay, candidates were given a round figure and asked to imagine this figure as different objects. They were allowed to choose appropriate foils to form a picture and write a composition. Some candidates imagined the "circle" as a ball, balloon, etc., some imagined the "circle" as the selfless sun, and some even realized many life concepts from the "circle" and "recurrence". philosophy.

6. Practice compositions, read the requirements for writing compositions,

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There is heaven above, and Suzhou and Hangzhou below Time: 2010-06 -23 08:36 Source: Unknown Author: admin Clicks: 1056 times

People say that there is heaven above and Suzhou and Hangzhou below. I have visited the West Lake in spring and the West Lake in summer. I have admired the West Lake in the autumn colors, but I have never seen the scenery of the West Lake in winter. This year’s winter vacation, I came to Hangzhou again to enjoy the mountains and rivers of West Lake in winter. Drifting on the West Lake, looking into the distance, the mist that has not receded in the early morning is looming under the sunlight. More related essays>>

People say, "There is heaven above, and there are Suzhou and Hangzhou below." I visited I have experienced the West Lake in spring, the West Lake in summer, and the West Lake in autumn colors, but I have never seen the scenery of West Lake in winter. This year’s winter vacation, I came to Hangzhou again to enjoy the mountains and rivers of West Lake in winter.

Floating on the West Lake, looking into the distance, the mist that has not receded in the early morning is looming under the sunlight. The mountains are surrounded by fog, and the fog is like a naughty child, lingering along the mountainside. On the top, it is like a white ribbon, winding and floating into the distance. Nearby, on the mirror-level West Lake, there are several small boats, swaying in the wind. The microwaves stirred up by the boat oars are like the scales of fish. As the cool breeze spreads and spreads around, my thoughts are also wandering. So far, so far...

West Lake is indeed known as the "Wonderland on Earth". In spring, when walking along the banks of "Subai Two Embankments" with peach and willow trees, I was amazed by the scenery in front of me, and even ecstatically wondered if I had entered a paradise. The shadow of the tower stretches across the sky, giving it a unique scenery. In the summer, I experienced the wonderful artistic conception of "the lotus leaves touching the sky are infinitely green, and the lotus flowers reflect the sun are uniquely red". Walking on the winding bridge, it is like rippling among the lotus bushes, with the human face and the red lotus flowers reflecting each other. In autumn, "Three Pools Reflecting the Moon" is unique, with an island in the lake and a lake in the island, which is pleasing to the eye. After visiting many scenic spots in the West Lake, I couldn’t help but sigh like an ancient saying: “If you want to compare the West Lake to the West, it’s better to put on light makeup and heavy makeup.”

I took a sightseeing car around the lake with my grandpa, letting the breeze blow through my clothes and feeling cool. Then I looked at the slowly receding beautiful scenery and breathed in the crisp air, feeling refreshed and relaxed. The driver's aunt was explaining on the side, enjoying the influence of history. In the distance, there were empty mountains and green indigo. Although the water was calm nearby, there were dots of cruise ships. This unusual feeling made me feel happy. It's indifferent and peaceful.

West Lake is a poem, a natural picture, and a beautiful and moving place. Whether it is people who have lived here for many years or travelers passing by in a hurry, they are all fascinated by this unique beauty in the world. No matter what season it is, West Lake can bring you its unique beauty. The forest area with thousands of beautiful trees under the spring light, the lotus blooming in the sky in summer, the three pools soaked in moonlight in autumn night, the red plum blossoms with sparse shadows in winter, and the orioles singing in the willow cage gauze, The terrace in the mist of drizzle - no matter when you come, you will experience the unusual style.

Time is always so short, and soon we will say goodbye to the West Lake and go home. Under the setting sun, I reluctantly look back at the West Lake left behind, and sincerely wish the West Lake that the sky will be bluer, the grass will be greener, and the water will be greener. Clearer and more tourists!

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