How to write essay questions for the 2018 Shandong College Entrance Examination, and how to review the questions (comments and analysis)
During the grading work of the Shandong College Entrance Examination essay in 2015, many candidates’ essays were reviewed during the period , the problems in the article made the author feel heavy. After that, I read the college entrance examination essays written by candidates from Jiangsu, Shanghai, Hebei and other places, and found similar problems, some of which have evolved into major flaws, which made people worried. This shows that the current writing of domestic high school students has reached the point where it is necessary to get to the bottom of things.
1. Main symptoms of college entrance examination composition
(1) Lack of independent thinking and no position
From the perspective of the marking process, there is no Few candidates lack their own independent opinions, copy established views or are confused, and lack the weight of thinking. For example, some candidates elicited from the question materials "If it is not used to distinguish, why bother? Only by correctly positioning yourself can you achieve success." This kind of writing logic itself has problems. There is no necessary logical relationship between "why to distinguish" and "correct positioning" and cannot be deduced. Some candidates wrote "Dare to Challenge", but "What is the challenge?" The article did not explain, and then wrote about the difficult cases Helen encountered, which was obviously out of the scope of the material discussion, and the thinking went further and further. Some candidates derived from the "edible" in the father's words in the materials that they should pay attention to the "essence" of things, which is divided into three levels: Paying attention to the essence of things means knowing its purpose; paying attention to the essence of things also requires corresponding measures. methods to explore; attaching importance to the essence of things, fantasy or futility is meaningless. The candidates' writing does not focus on the explanation of the "essence", and there is no correlation between the materials before and after the article. It is a typical "platter-style" composition. In essence, it is the so-called "copying", that is, deriving opinions from the topic and then preparing it yourself. Good articles or materials are included or listed. The crux of this problem is that candidates do not have their own independent thinking, do not understand the meaning of the questions, and do not know how to express their views and positions in a hierarchical and organized manner, so they have to use prepared materials. Judging from the candidate's question composition, the candidate's thinking has an obvious dualistic thinking mode of either/or, black or white, and regards his own thinking mode as the correct thinking mode, rather than scientific and rational thinking. For example, some candidates wrote that Qu Yuan was extremely pure and loyal to the emperor and loved the people, and that Madame Curie was as "holy" as a nun and devoted herself to scientific research. This extreme thinking mode makes the candidates' compositions unthinking and prone to extremes and rigidity.
(2) Logical confusion and failure to distinguish concepts
Many candidates’ compositions are logically inconsistent or even confusing, resulting in incomprehensible reasoning and the content of the writing being disconnected from the center.
Mandela did not distinguish between all the torture the prison warden inflicted on him, and did not distinguish between true and false, beauty and ugliness, which made him strong and lead the South African people to usher in liberation. Assuming that Mandela desperately wanted to discern what the prison warden had done to him, to retaliate tooth for tooth, eye for eye, would he still have the trust of the people? Abandon things that don't need to be distinguished, and don't let discrimination hinder your progress.
There is a logic problem in the writing of this paragraph. If Mandela did not punish the prison warden who tortured him, did he "fail to distinguish between true and false, beauty and ugliness"? In fact, it was Mandela's spiritual quality that stood at the height of human nature, but the candidates simplified it and stuffed it into their own articles. As a public official, the prison warden's violent behavior is obviously illegal. If Mandela prosecutes or punishes him, it is reasonable and well-founded in law. Then the South African people will not trust him? He can't move forward? Mandela had a noble heart and grasped the issue of "masochism" from the perspective of racial reconciliation, rather than the issue of discrimination. There is obviously a disconnect between the candidates' thoughts and expressions, and they need to learn correct expressions.
Candidates have unclear distinctions between concepts and mix them up, which also reflects logical flaws. For example, if you confuse the concepts of "flexibility" and "transformation":
Learn to be flexible and find the correct way to solve problems, and you will successfully reach the other side of success.
The famous writer Chen Zhongshi is well-known to the public for his majestic "White Deer Plain". An important person who prompted him to achieve this achievement is his father. When Chen Zhongshi was young, he was disheartened and depressed after failing the exam. At this moment, his father's words rekindled his hope, "Do you know how the stream flows out of the mountain?" When they encountered a mountain, they could not break it down or climb over it, so they walked around the mountain and changed directions to flow out of the mountain. ’ Yes, if you change the direction, you can flow out of the mountains. Life is just like the stream in the mountains. If you don’t know how to change the direction and find the right path, it will eventually become a pool of stagnant water.
There is an obvious logical flaw in the expression of this paragraph. "Adaptation" means that things become accessible due to changes, but the candidates confused "flexibility" with "transformation" and used "transformation" to change the direction of the stream. Substituting concepts. Chen Zhongshi's father's instructions to him did not match the "changing" direction of the stream. The stream flowed according to the situation and had no meaning of change and accessibility. This example is not appropriate for "changing". The crux of the problem is still that candidates lack comparative analysis of different concepts and cannot accurately understand the concepts. Regardless of whether they are accurate or not, they just use them, resulting in a disconnect between opinions and examples.
(3) The language is gorgeous and empty
The current college entrance examination writing seems to have fallen into a new strange circle in terms of language. In order to make their language gorgeous and outstanding, candidates use long and short sentences or parallel sentence patterns. Quoting or using celebrities, famous sayings or famous works are all over the place in turn, but after reading them, many of them are empty and have no expressiveness at all. They are just like chewing wax.
In the full moonlight, I pick up a handful of the clearest ones; in the setting of the afterglow, I pick up a wisp of the warmest ones; in the scorching red leaves, I pick up a piece of the hottest ones; in the luxuriant fragrance, I pick a bunch of the warmest ones. Brilliant.
Drink a pot of clear tea, recite poems and rhymes among the chrysanthemums, plant five willow trees, drink sake, enjoy the beautiful scenery, recite poems and books, play the flowing water, find close friends, live a comfortable life, and drink wine to the moon.
Lin Huiyin built a fence and planted chrysanthemums in his heart, Kawabata Yasunari gazed at the begonia flowers at four o'clock in the morning, Haizi faced the sea and waited for the spring flowers to bloom, Thoreau chanted and admired the mist at the bank of Walden Pond, and the central warehouse Gyatso is walking on white deer in the snowy land, and Kant is looking up at the moral starry sky.
Such gorgeous sentences are everywhere in the compositions I read. Regardless of whether my position is to "dare to question" or "grasp the main contradiction", they all use these materials extensively. On the surface, it seems that the candidate has excellent language skills and is well-read, but in fact, the paragraphs are beautiful but not appropriate, have nothing to do with the topic, and are out of touch with the center. It is boring to read. The crux of the problem is that many candidates believe that as long as the language is beautiful and brilliant, it belongs to the category of "development level" and seems to be able to get high scores. Therefore, they suffer from the "beautiful sentence" syndrome, desperately listing, reciting and copying in large sections, regardless of whether it is Regardless of whether the sentences used in the article are appropriate and natural, they are often self-defeating and appear to be useless, making it difficult to get the ideal score.
2. Thoughts on the way out for composition writing
(1) Encourage thinking and independent opinions
Composition writing should be a display of independent thinking and requires a certain degree of Thinking ability and language expression ability. The composition proposition, writing and evaluation should encourage and facilitate students to write their true feelings and reflect their independent thinking. Eighteen-year-old young people should have their own thoughts and positions. It would be very sad if they are still expressing their emotions and praising blindly. At present, the composition propositions of the domestic college entrance examination are moving towards rationality and development in the direction of speculative criticism. This is very correct. It can further connect with the American SAT essay questions and the French philosophy proposition composition format, which is conducive to the reform of middle school composition teaching. "Salute to Children", one of the full-score essays that emerged in this year's Shandong Examination, reflects the candidates' independent thinking and depth of thinking:
When adults laugh at children's ridiculous behaviors nonchalantly, little do they know that in the eyes of children How absurd the adult world is, how strange it is that adults betray their hearts countless times for fame and fortune! How sad it is to forget the truth-seeking principles taught by people...
What is even more sad is that adults who have lost their aura wipe out the shining points of children with authority. "Let's go, child on earth, holding hands with an elf, walking through the wilderness and rivers. There are too many cries in this world, and you don't understand." When Yeats lamented like this, we should also ask ourselves whether we should use adult will Dominate the spirits of children so that they age rapidly and reach so-called maturity?
The author "pays tribute" to children who are full of inquiring spirit, criticizes the encounter of this spirit in the face of the world, and points out that adult society not only fails to encourage children, but also dispels and stifles children's inquiring spirit. Speculativeness is the highlight of this essay's high score. It focuses on explaining the profound in a simple way, contrasting positive and negative, from the outside to the inside, going deep layer by layer. The language is full and expressive, and the examples are accurate and powerful.
Lack of independent thinking is a common characteristic of current domestic high school students, which is very obvious in their composition writing. High school writing guidance must break the bottleneck in this area. As a teacher, you should not use your own "adult" judgment to limit children's thinking, but let students think, question, and criticize. As for the evaluation level, which is the core of composition guidance, it is necessary to reduce "sets" for students and not restrict students. We can learn from the "writing portfolio" model in the evaluation of American composition teaching and avoid being rigidly bound to the framework of "scoring standards." Because the more detailed the scoring criteria, the easier it is to limit students' writing horizons and limit students' thinking, and writing can easily become stereotyped and rigid.
(2) In-depth thinking and clear logic
From the perspective of college entrance examination composition, students have something to write, but their understanding of materials and mottos is not comprehensive and thorough, and their language is not logical. Clear, unable to serve the center. We need to guide students to pay attention to and think about themselves, society and the world, and to reflect and criticize history, society and ideological culture. This is an essential thinking characteristic for high school students and an essential requirement for modern citizen literacy. Make the composition loud or penetrating. Students' logical thinking needs guidance and training, otherwise it will be experience or life logic, not rational logic. Let students distinguish facts, boldly explore, learn how to distinguish right from wrong, true from false, and restore the truth of history and reality, so that they can deeply explore the essence of things.
It is necessary to continuously train students’ thinking, such as using origin thinking, lateral thinking, reverse thinking, divergent thinking, etc. to analyze phenomena, analyze problems, and solve problems; various philosophical relationships, such as cause and effect, material and spiritual , quantitative and qualitative changes, primary and secondary contradictions, internal and external factors, subjective and objective factors, etc., guiding students to skillfully use them to analyze and reason, and deepen their understanding. For example, the recent "Fudan Gate" incident can make students think: first from the outside to the inside, a university that is an ideological engine has become an object of plagiarism. It is not just Fudan University, but also reflects on the shortcomings that exist in the entire Chinese education and even society. Then from the shallower to the deeper: lack of original soil, not only in the education industry, agriculture, manufacturing, cultural industry and even ideological aspects, why not be in a copycat and fall into the whirlpool of counterfeiting? This also involves the huge market for counterfeiting and copycats, which are extremely low-cost, and bad money drives out good money, making plagiarism and other problems intensified. Comparative reflection: A nation without originality will definitely have no future. Western developed countries have good experience in protecting originality and have very little plagiarism. This is worthy of China's reflection and reference. The final solution to this problem must be found: how to generate originality? It is necessary to reflect on the institutional level and design a development path that encourages and protects originality. In this way, students' thinking can be gradually advanced, from point to surface, from shallow to deep, to analyze and express rationally, rather than rambling.
(3) Appropriate and accurate expression
The beauty of language is a requirement for the development level of composition, but no matter how beautiful the expression is, it must serve the center, otherwise it will be nonsense. Good composition language should be meaningful, full of rational thinking, logical, and serve the central point. For example:
When a child walks past the stems of melon beans indifferently, we also lose our flawless nature: the persistence in seeking truth, the free soul that is not bound to the times, and the short spirit of the times. The board was cut again...
Bai Yansong once said: "There is a fashion in the world that never goes out of style, and that is to distinguish between black and white." I still remember the "road rage" incident a few days ago, facing the front When a vehicle was parked illegally, no pedestrian came to warn or remind it. Instead, it was a middle school student who bravely and decisively resolved a dispute. Have the many adults on the roadside really lost their conscience to distinguish right from wrong? Another example is that Jiang Fangzhou mentioned a scene in his article. Those middle-aged successful people who are famous and have a big belly come up to you with a smile, pat you on the shoulder and say to you: "You are still too young!" What I want to say is, If the entire society is so sophisticated and sophisticated, and every young and exciting innocent heart is deliberately aged, when will we pay attention to the red sun rising vigorously from the horizon in the east?
The paragraphs of these two candidates do not pursue the gorgeousness of language, and do not use a lot of parallelism or rhetoric, but they are appropriately expressed, have depth of thinking, and rigorous examples, which give people strong appeal and persuasion after reading. It is also expected to become an excellent composition and become a reference and direction for high school students' writing.
Writing has creative characteristics. This creativity is destined to personalize the composition. The writing of high school students must be more critical and critical. However, the current status of domestic high school composition writing is really This must be taken seriously and needs to be resolved urgently. The improvement of thinking ability is a long-term and arduous process, which poses challenges to teachers. Only by raising the banner of "independent spirit and free thought" can we gradually have thoughts, be able to think, and be able to express. This is the hope of writing teaching and the hope of education.
3. Four essays with full marks
1. Tribute to children
Because of a well-known proverb, curiosity was born to try Verification, in this world, probably only children do this. I can't help but smile, look at how innocent, how cute, and how valuable it is!
In Western fairy tales, children are sent by cranes and are gifts from God. I deeply agree with this. Children have many noble qualities that adults do not possess. Wang Kailing wrote in the book: "Learn from children." Then, I also want to pay tribute to children, their fearlessness, their truth-seeking heart that dares to question, and their free souls.
Children’s hearts are always spotless, they are real and fearless. When the emperor paraded in new clothes that did not exist and accepted praise from everyone, he told the truth in one word. Wasn't it a child who dared to tell the truth? That is a pure and flawless angel, who has never been intimidated by authority or tainted by the world. He has a clear sense of right and wrong in his heart. The truth-seeking nature has never been swallowed up by the crowd. When he illuminates the blind darkness like a kind star, how can he not be worthy of everyone's tribute to him! ?
However, the reality is still far from our singing songs for children. When the child tries to distinguish the tangled stems, this noble pursuit of truth is regarded as ridiculous by his father. It seems that in the father's eyes, the so-called theorem has replaced the truth, and in his eyes there is only the edible value of melons and beans, as if the child's pursuit of truth is dimmed in the face of material things. Who should we cry for?
Aristotle said: "I love my teacher, and I love the truth even more." When the young Watt was confused by the beating lid of the pot, we saw the "ridiculousness" of children from his future The shining point.
How can we let those beautiful shining points disappear? Saint-Exupéry's "The Little Prince" is called "a fairy tale for adults." The author said through the mouth of the little prince: "The world of adults is really strange." Isn't it worth thinking about?
When adults laugh at children's ridiculous behaviors indifferently, they don't know how absurd the adult world is in the eyes of children. How strange it is that adults betray their hearts countless times for fame and fortune! How sad it is to forget the truth-seeking principles taught by people...
What is even more sad is that adults who have lost their aura wipe out the shining points of children with authority. "Let's go, child of the world, holding hands with an elf, walking through the wilderness and rivers. There are too many cries in this world, and you don't understand." When Yeats lamented like this, we should also ask ourselves whether we should use adult will. Dominate the spirits of children so that they age rapidly and reach so-called maturity?
When a child walks by the stems of melon beans indifferently, we also lose our flawless nature: the persistence in seeking truth, and the free soul that does not stick to the times. The spiritual shortcomings of the times are Cut again...
Please stop, please pay tribute to the children! Please awaken the radiance of freedom!
I am eighteen years old this year and have entered the ranks of adults, but I know that in my heart, I am still seeking truth and simplicity and fearlessness, and I am still and willing to be a child.
2. Pragmatism can be put to rest
Peas are for human consumption, but Mendel carefully distinguished and summarized the genetic rules; fruit flies are quick after removal, but Morigan Carefully distinguish and observe that in addition to sex-linked inheritance, it is these two people who are doing "useless work" that make today's genetic engineering shine and flourish.
Then I sighed, would my father, who firmly believed that melons and beans were grown for eating, still think it was ridiculous for a child to tear off the stems and leaves? Will a basin of cold water dampen the child's enthusiasm for exploration? Can that narrow pragmatism raise its head in the face of truth? Alas, pragmatism can be put to rest.
Mo Yan once said: The usefulness of literature lies in its uselessness. I take it for granted. Qian Zhongshu is a great scholar who practices this view. One day, Mr. Qian was studying at home and came across the allusion of "a broken mirror reunites". He was puzzled, so he threw away the ancient mirror he had collected at home and smashed it with his hand. Ordinary people would block it in every possible way and shout, "That's for collection, how can you smash it!" But Mr. Yang Jiang stood aside with a helpless smile on his lips. Qian Zai was busy for a while, and finally picked up the mirror with satisfaction, turned around and said, "I've tried this allusion, and it's not wrong." Then there was a smile on the corners of his eyes and eyebrows.
Some people may ask: What is the use of this? I think its usefulness lies in Mr. Qian's magnanimity when he relieved his doubts, and his inner confidence when talking about things after his death.
Also not pursuing practicality is Xue Yifan, who shocked many people last year. Regardless of the obstruction from his family and pressure from the outside world, he decided to choose the unpopular major - the Department of Paleontology. Although there is only one professor in the whole department, she, I sincerely admire this person's courage. In this climate of eagerness for quick success, she is like an orchid in an empty valley, not blinded by pragmatism. Pursue your heart's desires alone. I believe that such an unpopular major, with Xue Yifan's passionate passion, will also hang in the sky like a red sun.
The water of the Yellow River flows under three mountains, changing for thousands of years like a horse. Nowadays, the whole society is shrouded in pragmatism. When faced with the choice of major, the one that makes more money is always popular; when faced with the results of scientific research, there is an obvious impatient concern for learning; when faced with the operation of the enterprise, the reputation of "useless" is always thrown aside. What’s wrong with our society! Is it just to let it sink like this? Of course you, her and us, a group of passionate young people, the world will change in our hands!
Use useless things for great use. End of pragmatism!
3. Distinguish between right and wrong with an innocent heart
There is a saying in "The Catcher in the Rye": "Growing up is a necessary decay for people." I also always believe that every day Every sophisticated adult once had an innocent heart that could tell right from wrong, but the desolate currents of the world have changed them.
Just like the child and his father in the story, the child insisted on distinguishing the difference between melons and beans, but the father laughed it off. It was too many "life experiences" that made him give up the exploration of facts and the right and wrong. Distinguish?
The poet Szymborska lamented like this: "Our falcons walk close to the ground, our peacocks give up their feathers, and our poisonous snakes yawn in front of their cages." An innocent heart is filled with despair. Dismemberment, the ability to distinguish right from wrong is nowhere to be found. Isn't it a mistake of such a "life experience" sophistication? This is a question that each of us should think about. At this moment, it is even more inappropriate to let the pursuit of facts and the belief in distinguishing right from wrong be covered by secular barriers.
The sentence "All adults were once children" in "The Little Prince" made me think deeply. Just like what Lu Yao mentioned, "the enthusiasm that once existed was gradually worn away." The key to being able to live in the secular world without compromising is to have an innocent heart that is free from hypocrisy, toward good, and able to distinguish right from wrong.
Not to mention the innocent demeanor of the Wei and Jin Dynasty celebrities and the Seven Sages in the Bamboo Forest, the naive manner of Jin Yuelin, a modern scholar, raising roosters and fighting crickets also makes people happy.
Similarly, in academics, they retain an innocent heart and "let mountains be mountains and water be water", and their academic style is widely spread. Or Gu Zhun, the pioneer of truth, was willing to tear off his own ribs and burn them as torches, just to illuminate the way to light and truth. Maintaining a pure heart in academic research allows them to break down the intricate rules and limitations of the spiritual world.
Host Bai Yansong once said: "There is a fashion in the world that never goes out of style, and that is to distinguish between right and wrong." I still remember the "road rage" incident a few days ago, when faced with the illegal parking of vehicles in front of me , no pedestrians came to advise or remind, but it was a middle school student who bravely and decisively resolved a dispute. Have many adults on the roadside really lost their conscience to distinguish right from wrong? Another example is that Jiang Fangzhou mentioned a scene in his article. Those middle-aged successful people who are famous and have a big belly come up to you with a smile, pat you on the shoulder and say to you: "You are still too young!" What I want to say is, If the entire society is so sophisticated and sophisticated, and every young and exciting innocent heart is deliberately aged, when will we pay attention to the red sun in the east leaping vigorously from the horizon?
As the "People's Daily" wrote: "Perhaps the environment of kindness still needs to be cultivated, and the system of kindness still needs to be supported. We must first ignite the blazing fire in our hearts." Yes, we First of all, we must stick to our innocent hearts.
Whether it is the pursuit of excellence in academic research, or the step-by-step progress of reform and development; whether it is the profound meaning of personal qualities, or the harmony of social atmosphere, a pure heart, and a determination to distinguish right from wrong. Nian, how can it be missing!
4. Throw away the fetters and accept the final harvest
Tagore said: "Just walk over, and the flowers will bloom along the way." Even if there are too many disturbances on the way forward, Even if you are tied down, you must also have a peaceful mind, recognize the essence, and achieve the final gain.
The vines of loofah and nutmeg are intertwined together. They seem to be intricate and annoying, but the purpose of planting these two plants is to harvest the final fruits, so why bother because they are inevitable in the growth process? But irrelevant worries? The same is true in life. No matter how tedious the process is, as long as you recognize what you really need, the results will be long-lasting.
"You are the flowers blooming on the trees, and the swallows whispering among the beams. You are love, warmth, and hope. You are April in the world." Lin Huiyin devoted his life to the construction industry , using his delicate body to support the bridge of Chinese architecture. In the protection of traditional ancient buildings, she had a passionate heart and fearless firm belief. When Wu Han presided over the demolition of ancient buildings in Beijing, she stood up and denounced them with all her strength, keeping her inner love for the beautiful tradition. firm belief. In her life, she has been tied down too much by the world, but she has no fear and has determined her direction. Using her dreams as a horse, she has realized her own value in both architecture and literature, and reaped the rewards. Full of arms.
Lin Huiyin is like a ray of warmth and gentle spring breeze in April, vividly explaining how to face all kinds of things calmly and reap the final results.
Mandela said that he would like the world to remember his gentleness. In a South Africa with strong racial discrimination, he single-handedly devoted himself to the practice of realizing equality and freedom for the people of the north and south, and devoted his life to realizing harmony between the north and the south. Even though his efforts could not be realized so quickly, he reaped the last hope. He himself was imprisoned for twenty-seven years, but he was not bound by the temporary troubles in front of him. Instead, he chose the distance, just to care about the wind and rain.
Mandela’s efforts eventually made South Africa a rainbow nation filled with democracy, harmony and equality. Maybe there were too many obstacles on his way forward, but he did not forget why he set out in the first place because he had gone too far. In the end, he chose to put aside all the obstacles and troubles on the way forward and move forward. , until you reap the beauty of life.
How many people come from mountains, rivers, lakes and seas, but are limited to day and night, kitchen and love. Recognize the ultimate goal, abandon all unnecessary ties, and use dreams as horses all the way until the end, accept the final harvest, and be filled with fragrance.
IV. A question essay
Clear purpose and firm goals
As the child’s father said: “Grow them for eating, not for use. To distinguish. "The same is true in life. No matter what you do, you must be clear about your purpose, be firm in your goals, and sail towards the other side of your dreams. Only by clearing your purpose and sailing in the target direction can you reach your destination.
The famous contemporary writer Lin Qingxuan has dreamed of traveling around the world since he was a child. However, his father's ridicule and blows forced him to temporarily make a living working for others. But Lin Qingxuan knew what he wanted and what he wanted to do, and he never gave up on his dream. After working, she insisted on reading and writing. Eventually, he became a writer and traveled to Egypt.
The reason why Lin Qingxuan is successful is that he has a dream in his heart, has a clear purpose and is firm in his goals. And this is how Lamborghini, the world-famous car that is famous all over the world, has been able to move into the ranks of world-famous cars.
Lamborghini was not very famous when it was first launched. Once, a customer reported to the sales department that there was a problem with his car: a stalling event that lasted too long would make it difficult to start the car again. The sales department immediately reported to the head office, which took this very seriously.
After inspection, it was found that there was a problem with the car's engine. After an overhaul by Lamborghini head office, the car's engine was upgraded, and Lamborghini gradually entered the ranks of famous cars.
The reason why Lamborghini has become a famous car is because the company department is committed to developing and producing first-class quality cars. They know their purpose and strive to be the best, so that Lamborghini can become a world-famous car.
People are like this, and so are flowers.
The Puya flower that grows on the Andean plateau of South America has huge flower spikes. When the wind blows, the floral fragrance fills the entire plateau. However, its flowering period is only two months, and for these two months The Puya flower has been waiting for a hundred years for its extremely spectacular bloom. In a hundred years, it has to experience the invasion of cold and the roar of strong winds, but it still persists, just to bloom in that hundred years. It understands that it was born to bloom, and this is its goal, so it sticks to its goal, goes through all kinds of hardships, and finally waits for the moment when it blooms for a hundred years.
Clear your goals, be firm in your goals, work hard towards your dreams, and think about success. In this way, you can reach the ideal shore.
Clear your purpose, carry your goals, and sail toward your dreams!