1. Get straight to the point and get to the point

A narrative mainly written by people can directly explain the characters or directly get to the point by describing the dialogues and actions of portraits; Narrative-oriented narrative can point out the time, place and relevant background of the incident from the beginning.

1. Her name is Wang Qianqian, and I was the monitor of Grade Two. Although we have been apart for more than a year, the anecdote of the monitor is still vivid and unforgettable. (There is such a good monitor)

2. Teacher Tang is ill. At the end of the evening, the students all sat in their seats sadly. The classroom is as silent as stagnant water. ("True Love")

Second, write the scenery and render the atmosphere

Start with writing the scenery, render the atmosphere, set off the characters and unfold the story. Such as:

1. In the flowering season, there are fragrant scents everywhere, but I have no intention to watch them, because at this time I lost my classmate friend-Qiang (Classmate)

2. The morning sun came out and the lake dressed it; The new moon has come up, and the stars are its companions; Spring blossoms, green leaves set off for it; Birds sing, crickets play the piano for it ... Everything in the world is telling us the story of love. ("Love Forever")

3. In the summer night, it is very deep, and occasionally there are frogs in the water and cicadas in the trees. The breeze blows and brings coolness. I meditated and couldn't sleep for a long time. When I was a freshman in senior high school, it happened that my first novel was published in the newspaper. At that time, I was so happy that I even forgot everything. I was so high that I wasted my time. It was not until tonight that I found that I seemed to be missing something. ("Love is Invisible")

Third, lyrical discussion, determine the tone

Use a few brief comments and appropriate lyricism to make the beginning of the article, or infect readers, or point out the main idea and lead the following. For example,

1. Summer vacation is finally over. Like a long-awaited bird, I rushed out of the "birdcage" and flew to my grandmother's house in the country to relax my muscles and breathe fresh air. I decided to learn roller skating during this summer vacation. (I can do it)

2. Grandpa is my favorite relative. I spent my childhood with my grandfather. Grandpa took my hand and taught me to walk; It was my grandfather who made me understand a lot of truth since I was a child. I regard my grandfather as a crutch for my childhood growth. ("I Love Grandpa")

Fourth, set suspense, which leads to the suspense set at the beginning of the following

, which can catch the reader's heart at once, stimulate people to think and play a fascinating role. For example, the wall clock is unhurried and walking rhythmically. It's almost 4 o'clock. Why didn't Mom come back? (Worry)

2. What will my tomorrow be like? I often ask myself this question when I am running around in my life at two o'clock and one line, when I am struggling in the boundless sea of questions. ("Facing Tomorrow")

5. Cite poems and essays, and the center of emergence

Start with poems and essays and famous sayings, which can not only stimulate readers' imagination and interest, but also improve the taste of articles; It can not only reveal the main content, but also highlight people and events. For example, "Man, his greatest enemy is himself. As long as you believe that you can do it, you are a winner." This is my favorite saying. Whenever I see it and the report card that is no longer clear before my bed, the dreamlike past comes to my eyes. (Past) 2. How to write at the beginning of the composition

As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle."

You must have had such an experience: once you get a topic, it is always difficult to write, but once you start, especially after you have a good beginning, you can write an article with a flowing mind. If it is a good, novel and vivid beginning, it will make readers have a strong reading interest and goodwill; On the other hand, if it is vague and disconnected from the content, it will make readers feel bored and even preconceived that the author's writing ability is poor and the quality of the composition is not high.

the importance of the beginning of a composition can be seen. How to get the approval of teachers and marking teachers for their compositions? A good beginning is very important! Below, I will give some explanations to the students on the two common beginnings of "straight to the point" and "setting off the scenery" for your reference, hoping to help improve your composition level.

first, the "straight to the point" style "straight to the point" is a widely used opening method. It is widely used because it goes straight to the subject at the beginning.

In today's information age, time is precious, and people who read the article hope to understand what the article is about as soon as possible. If you beat around the bush at the beginning and wander around the topic blindly, then even if the content is good, it is difficult to arouse readers' interest in reading.

For the composition in our examination room, the marking teacher is responsible for the heavy marking task. A "straight to the point" and "not rambling" beginning will certainly win the favor of the marking teacher, so that the marking staff will leave an excellent impression on your beginning and your composition, which will help you get ideal results in the exam. The beginning of the "straight to the point" style is very common in junior high school Chinese textbooks, which can be said to be bow down, such as: 1. My father and I have not seen each other for more than two years, and what I can't forget most is his background.

(Zhu Ziqing's "The Back") begins with a topic, which lays an ambush for the following "the back" that expresses deep fatherly love. 2, poplar is really extraordinary, I praise poplar.

(Mao Dun's "Praise of Poplar") The first sentence at the beginning defines the object of praise-poplar, and sets the emotional tone of the whole text-praise. 3. In the vast sea, the wind is gathering dark clouds.

Between the dark clouds and the sea, Haiyan flies proudly like black lightning. (Gorky's "Haiyan") first explains the fighting environment of Haiyan's brave and soaring, and then shows the heroic fighting spirit of Haiyan's rapid and soaring from three aspects: color (black), shape (lightning) and spirit (arrogance).

There are many successful compositions that begin with "straight to the point". Seeing this topic, I couldn't help but burst into applause, which expressed my daughter's approval and admiration for her mother.

two years ago, I would have booed my mother. (Composition magazine, No.1, 1999) This is the beginning of "Applause" by Jiang Jingfei, the first prize winner of the junior middle school group of the 1999 "Wenxin Cup" national middle school teacher-student composition competition.

This opening comes straight to the point, and at the same time, it wants to promote and suppress first, and it also lays an ambush for the following and constitutes a suspense. 2. My hometown is surrounded by mountains and reeds are everywhere.

As soon as autumn comes, reed flowers rush to open, hiding their hometown in a sea of flowers, which is very beautiful. (Same as the second prize Guo Huifang's "Reed Flowers in My Hometown") 3. In the spring when I was nine years old, my father bought a black buffalo.

He said, "Our family has a lot of fields, and we can't do without cows in the busy farming season. When this cow grows up, use it to cultivate the land. "

(Same as the second prize Ren Meijuan's "Becoming attached to cattle") 4. I can't forget her smiling face that encouraged me, her simple words that inspired me to make progress, and the green she once brought to my life. I can't forget her, my dearest friend.

("I can't forget her") Second, if a painter paints the moon with a "setting off the scenery" style, if he paints a moon alone, it will be particularly monotonous and even lack of expression. If a few wisps of clouds are hooked around the moon, the situation will be very different, and the moon will be especially magical. This technique is "contrast".

composition also needs this technique. As a junior high school student, most of the exams are about writing narrative compositions. A good beginning of "setting off the scenery" is conducive to setting up an emotional environment and atmosphere for the portrayal of characters and the narration of things.

As a practical and easy-to-understand writing technique, there are also many exemplary examples in junior middle school Chinese texts. Such as: 1. Mountain, what a big mountain! The ups and downs of the green hills are changed one by one, extending into the distance and disappearing into the confused twilight.

(Peng Jingfeng's "Pear Blossom on the Post Road") This is the beginning of the novel "Pear Blossom on the Post Road". The description of the mountain is the basis of the plot.

With such a big mountain and dusk approaching, it is indeed a necessary and difficult problem for people traveling on the road to stay at night. How anxious they should be! It can be seen that a series of plots, such as guessing and praising the owner of the hut, pave the way for the "setting off the scenery" style.

2. The time is eight o'clock in the evening. Although the sun has already set, the summer heat has not subsided.

Without the wind, which ancient trees are standing in the park are quiet. The leaves are also quiet.

The outdoor labor theater is also quiet. (Ye Junjian's "Going to the Theatre") Use "quietness" to set off the quiet atmosphere of people waiting for the show to begin.

not only that, but also compared with the scene when Mei Lanfang performed the tsunami, it shows the penetrating appeal of art and contrasts Mei Lanfang's superb performance skills. 3. On the clean blue sky, a dark cloud sneaked in and the wind pushed it up the hill.

In Yamanobe, the crops in the terraced fields are like waves rolled in the green sea. (Gao Feng's "Golden Big Hat") Similarly, there are quite a few articles that students succeeded in starting with the style of "setting off the scenery", such as: 1. On February 28, 1999, there was a heavy rain in the sky.

The bright blisters on the ground are round and broken, broken and round, crying one by one about the sudden death of a century-old man. Bubble repeats an eternal name for thousands of times: Bing Xin (Fan Rui's Hundred Years of Bing Xin is in the tenth issue of Composition in 1999). 2. My hair is wet and covered with mud.

Tomb-Sweeping Day's unique rain will never stop, falling silently from the distant horizon in the desolate Yamanoue. I trudged through the mud, looking for it, and let the rain spill on my head, face and body ... (Paul Hu, "Meet again. 3. How to write the beginning of a composition

There are many ways to start an article. In recent years, there have been many wonderful beginnings in the composition of the college entrance examination and the usual training. Now I will summarize them for your reference when preparing for the exam.

1. Quoted sentences have a high starting point. (1) ask what the world is like, and teach people to live and die together.

Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions and is also good at asking questions. His question can be said to have been asked for ages.

Over the years, how many people have lingered on this question, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as everyone's face.

Xi Shi said, "Love is a tool. ..... "("What is the love in the world ") (2) The aesthetic master Rodin once said:" Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. "

today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective." Many times, we are all puzzled by the problem or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more opportunities for success.

("Spinning this Kaleidoscope") (3) The ancients said: "The benevolent is Leshan, and the knowledgeable is happy with water." Leshan is tall and straight, and the water is light and agile.

It is no wonder that a Qingxi will attract people like Li Bai and Du Fu to stop and stare, which will make many successful or unsuccessful literati willing to spend their lives here, instead of "straying into the dust net" again. (the association of water.

1 ") (4) The way of heaven is beneficial but not harmful; The way of a saint, do not fight for it. Mencius said: "If what you do seems good rather than good, you would rather not do it;" If what you do seems evil rather than evil, you would rather do it. "

a hurried journey of life, a hurried pace of walking, and a hurried choice of mind. What kind of heart lamp should be lit between this rush? ("Heart Star Lights") 2. Borrow letters, and see the strange in the ordinary.

(1) Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am an ordinary descendant of yours. After thousands of years, I dare to write to disturb you, not only to pay my respects to you, but also to wait for your advice with a few difficult questions. (A Letter to Confucius) (2) Damn standard answer: I am really filled with indignation when I see you.

so, driven by the flames of anger, I wrote this letter to denounce you. The answer is colorful, but you have to wear the hat of "standard".

You know, because of the word "standard", countless tragedies have happened. The following are your three major crimes: ("A Letter to the Standard Answer") (3) Qu Gong: After thousands of years, are you safe? Every time I read a masterpiece, or stand on my desk, or watch a dragon boat race, I can't help feeling it.

after careful consideration, I can't help but regret your ending or "end". With your skill, there are several people who can compete with you in the future generations. Why throw your life away for a mere king of Chu? I read Han Fei yesterday and saw one thing: There were rich people in the Song Dynasty, and houses were damaged by heavy rain. His son and his neighbors all said, "If the house is damaged without repair, thieves will come."

if so, why should the rich appreciate the benefits of their sons and doubt their neighbors? Children are close to each other and far away from each other. ("Chen Qingbiao") 3. Make comparisons and create momentum; (1). The seeds break through the imprisonment of rock strata and face the light; The eagle flew through the storm and flew into the sky; The steed broke through the shackles of the rope and ran Yuan Ye; Haiyan rushed to a more violent storm.

(Free from bondage) (2) Bees envy the eagle for fighting the blue sky and flying freely, but they don't realize that they can spread pollen to make nature colorful and fruitful; Gravel envied Jasper's lush green and considerable value, but didn't realize that he would eventually achieve flat roads and towering buildings; The ugly duckling envies the white swan's flawless beauty, but she doesn't know that she is glowing with a unique style. ("It's gold, it always shines") (3), Yingying moonlight, I scooped a cup of the clearest; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I pick up the hottest one; Beautiful grass, I pick a bunch of the most colorful; The vast sea of people, which life should I choose that best suits my temperament? (("Where does the soul belong?") 4. Interesting and anthropomorphic, unique.

(1). "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. question mark cleared his throat and said, "The seminar on time and space is now officially started. Today, our theme is' What is beauty'. Please let scholars from different times and countries speak actively." ("What is Beauty") (2). You jumping spirit, running happily, slowly flowing from a distance, with endless stories, flowing into my mind, oh, water, I saw, saw your past.

(Association of Water 2)(3) When the spring breeze comes, the dandelion mother will let go of her children's hands and let them follow the wind to find their own living place. Such a seed, after leaving her mother, resolutely chose the land suitable for her growth.

It came to a flower bed with the wind. "