Into the Sunshine of Books

I say, books are flowing water, flowing forever, flowing under the wheel of history, towards a brilliant tomorrow and a bright future...

Here I am, gently opening the title page of the book and slowly entering the world of books. As a result, the cool water of wisdom slowly flowed into my heart, giving me endless knowledge, spiritual support, emotional edification, and character enlightenment. I bathed in the flowing water, admiring every grass and flower in the book, every character with a unique life journey, every earth-shattering or ordinary thing...

I always thought that the Grand View Garden was a land of prosperous flowers and willows, a gentle and wealthy land, a fragrant, beautiful and desirable land of daughters, but the book proved me wrong. The running water told me the truth with a general sound, so I finally knew the pain of the girl in the quiet Xiaoxiang Pavilion: the green lantern shone on the wall and the person was not sleeping, the cold rain knocked on the window and the quilt was not wet! Under the prosperous appearance of the Jia family, there are actually the pain of swallowing gold, the pain of jumping into a well, and the pessimism and despair of becoming a monk in youth! The book is like flowing water, and its splashing crystal water shows me the laughter and tears, love and resentment of youth.

When the eastern horizon reveals a red light, when the green Jialing River ripples, when the gorgeous clouds radiate thousands of rays of light, my heart cannot be calm, for the sky that has just broken. , for this dawn that was bought with blood... The flow of books flowed in my heart, and my heart was full of passion. I can't forget Sister Jiang's calmness and determination before she died, and I can't forget Xu Yunfeng's unyielding and unyielding spirit of enduring the pain and digging out the stone with his nails. Perseverance, I can't forget the red rock that Qi Xiaoxuan dyed red with blood... The book is like running water, and her empty waves tell me that today's happy life is hard-won.

In the cold windy morning, the water dragons spraying water, the whips raised high, and the bullets flying over the heads, nothing can stop the patriots! The brave and fearless marchers shouted the voice of the entire Chinese nation! Their throats are hoarse, but their fiery hearts refuse to stop. They shouted with their lives: Drive away all those who trample on our land. Books are like flowing water, and her deep sound flowing through thousands of mountains explains to me the greatness of patriotism.

"Over the millennium, I observe the world's affairs and see the seas flowing across the sea; I show my grand plans and ask who is in charge of the ups and downs of the vast land; I have thoughts and sing that the mountains and rivers are like picturesque and I aim for thousands of miles." Chairman Mao's poems have become an art. "On a frosty morning, the horses' hooves are deeply broken, and the trumpets are swallowing." "The frost on the trees and the sky are red, and the heavenly soldiers are angry in the sky"... The book is like flowing water, and her shocking words show me the wisdom of a generation of great people.

Books are like running water, flowing forever, interpreting the true meaning of history. I would like to bathe in this water forever and let it flow through my heart...

Comments

The unique perspective of selecting materials and the gorgeous language of the article are the two highlights of this article. How to be original in topic composition without going off topic is probably the key point that many students consider. The author of this article takes "Books are flowing water" as the theme, and compares the rich emotional world displayed in books, which is either "earth-shaking" or "plain as water", with the "general", "light splashing", "surging" or "emptying" of flowing water. The characteristics of the book are cleverly combined. In just a few dozen minutes in the examination room, he not only fully demonstrated his rich reading accumulation, but also reflected his profound ideological conception and high-spirited and positive attitude towards life. This is worth learning from candidates. Su Shi said: "When writing is young, it must be majestic and colorful...". The language of this article confirms this. The rhythmic combination of long and short language, the random parallelism, and the random allusions and poems all create a majestic atmosphere and add to the brilliant color of the article. The gorgeous language and grand temperament reflected in the article are probably the key to winning the appreciation of the marking teacher.

Shore · Flowing Water · Unrestrained

I love the dancing energy of "turbulence is as fast as an arrow, and the waves are as fierce as rushing", which drives my youthful and upward soul; I think of "small bridge and flowing water" The wanderer's nostalgia of "people" touched my young thoughts and plucked the homesick strings of my soul; I realized that "the sunrise and the river flowers are as red as fire, and the spring comes and the river is as green as blue." The silence and the peace caressed my youthful arrogance. The idea gives me a calm mind.

Standing on the high mountains, I think of the endless flowing water. The water in the mountains is called waterfalls, like a roaring lion, majestic; the water in the plains is called rivers, like dancing dragons, graceful; the water in the desert is called oasis, like the ribbon of destiny, containing miracles. Praise the flowing water and think about the great achievements of historical figures; look at the geniuses that the rushing Yellow River has given birth to from generation to generation: Qin Shihuang's feat of unifying China; the magnificence of Tang Xuanzong's Zhenguan rule; Mao Zedong's majestic liberation of China; the great men of history are the pride of the Yellow River Children are the life force of the endless gurgling water;

Sighing at the flowing water, I think of the dignified four treasures of the study and see the great brush strokes in history. Wang Xizhi's vigorous and powerful handwriting, Qi Baishi's Longyou dive was tricked by a shrimp, Xu Beihong's horse has the vitality of success; the vast and profound Chinese literature and art are the approval of the roar of the Yangtze River and the source of the never-ending water.

The understanding of flowing water is based on the solid shore struck by the flowing water. The shore becomes water, and the water flow becomes the shore. Touch the cool water, don't forget the land we stand on, love the clear water, don't forget the bank channel that leads the water. Yes, if the flowing water is the petals of the earth, the bank is the pedicle under the petals. If you love flowing water, don’t forget to love the embankment too.

When I picked up a bottle of cool water and washed my face, I saw the earth rising from the blue sky and green water; when I stepped into a clear stream and took a refreshing shower, I saw the rushing water. The vitality bred in the world; embracing a majestic waterfall and clearing my mind, I saw the inexhaustible power in unrestrained.

Yes, water is the source of life, and flowing water is the rising sun of life; water is the mountain of life, and flowing water is the vast plain of life; water is the light of life, and flowing water is the fiery sun of life!

Looking back, we lament the long river of history; looking far away, we can see the river of the future. The future is not a dream, because the running water will take me to find the boundless sea; the future is not a dream, because the running water will give me endless motivation to pursue dreams; the future is not a dream, because the eternal running water will impact every vast area for me The world!

Cheer for the unrestrained flowing water and cheer for the future of youth!

Comments

The most important thing is "exquisite" ideas, and the most important thing is "new" ones. The conception of this article is ingenious, linking together three seemingly unrelated things "shore, flowing water, and unrestrained". The association is appropriate and shows the author's positive thinking about the value of life. Especially the theme at the end is more charming, allowing readers to understand the philosophy and connotation of life, and inspiring people to move forward. Judging from the content of the article, we cannot say that the young author has been thinking and writing for eight years, but we can see his gushing literary thoughts and unique feelings; from the language expression, we can see that the young author is fond of reading, thinking hard, and saving money. Since you are rich, you can always find them when you need them. The prose-like language and rich associations give people a beautiful enjoyment.

Listen to the singing of flowing water

The sky burst into tears, and the water droplets on the ground happily gathered together, so there was me - flowing water. Close your eyes and listen quietly, do you hear the sound of flowing water singing...

I sang all the way, flowing across the plain. I don't envy the majesty of the mountains, nor the tranquility of the lake, because I have a flowing life. I don’t look up at the powerful wings of the eagle, and I don’t lament the lightning speed of the cheetah, because I know that I am small, but not insignificant. look! The peach blossoms on the bank are smiling brightly, washing themselves against the clear water; the willow trees stretch out their sleeves and fly because they are nourished by me; the fish in my body are playing happily. Life is bright red and dazzling because of me. On the endless plain, I sang loudly, watching the clouds roll in the sky and the flowers blooming and falling in front of the court.

Faced with the obstacles of the mountains, I did not feel sad or complain about the injustice of fate. On the contrary, I smiled and played passionate music. There will always be ups and downs in life. Listen! It was Qu Yuan who sang loudly and wrote the immortal "Li Sao"; "No one has ever died in life since ancient times, leaving his loyal heart to illuminate history." Wen Tianxiang sang his unyielding spirit on the long river of history; Li Bai abandoned fame and fortune and The ambition of "There will be strong winds and waves, and the clouds and sails will sail across the sea" is engraved in the long river of history. Those difficulties and mountains can only block my way forward, but they cannot stop my progress. I will not be discouraged or disappointed, and I will march triumphantly into the distance...

"Falling flowers are intentional, flowing water is ruthless", falling flowers fall on me A soft whisper in the ear. I said: "Please follow my flowing path, and you will understand that the flowing water is not ruthless, but takes you to a broader world. The meteor streaking across the night sky is only for a moment, but it passes through the hot atmosphere and will My life burned brightly, and I selflessly dedicated my light to the earth, thus building eternity. "Luo Hua didn't believe it, I smiled happily, and continued to flow forward.

In the distance, I heard the call of the rough waves of the sea. I sang loudly and said to Luo Hua: "Look! I took you to find paradise." I packed my bags and bravely threw myself into the embrace of the sea. The falling flowers couldn't help but sigh: "A gurgling water that sings because of life merges into a sea of ??life!"

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Listening to the singing of flowing water, we hear it; because of life, The flowing water is bright red and dazzling. Although the flowing water is small, it is not insignificant. Although it is blocked by mountains, the flowing water still smiles at the ups and downs and sings triumphantly. The flowing water gurgles away, not ruthlessly, but just to find the paradise of life. The young author heard the philosophy and the true meaning from the sound of running water, and his insights were wise and original. What is even more valuable is the grandeur of the conception of this article. It is based on the delicate observation of the spirit of flowing water. The young author wrote it in a letter, citing classics, and it is natural. The article is always filled with a kind of high-spirited enthusiasm and has strong appeal.

The charm of the water is long and graceful

The flowing water is clear and clear, rippling the rhythm of sound and color, emitting the brilliance and splendor of life.

The soft flowing water tinges the gentleness of emotions and spreads the spring dew of love.

The flowing water stirs up the symphony of strength and beauty, bursting out the tenacity of the soul.

Ah! The clear and bright water gushes out from the ancient well shaded by flowers and trees, blooming with the dreams and passion of life. It slowly flows down with the reflection of red flowers and green trees, carrying the fragrance of flowers and rain and dew, gracefully and slowly. land. The soft waves of the gurgling water are the mother's smile, sweetly filled with the fragrance of love. I can't help but recall the gentle calls and sweet kisses of my childhood. Oh, the gentle waves of love are rising! The glistening splash of long flowing water is the tears of a child's laughter, the chords full of joy, and indispensable looking back at the rays of sunshine in childhood, and the sweetness of the lollipops. Oh, the ripples of emotion swirling around.

Flowing water, this tender water.

Look! The turbid water of the river rushed from the horizon, exuding the smell of strength and wildness, crashing into the high dam, full of heroism and stubbornness, surging and surging. The vigorous morale of the flowing water is the courage of the warriors. It shakes the heaven and the earth vigorously, making people miss the shouts of the wind, snow and lightning on the banks of Quyuan River, Li Bai's ambition of "there will be a time when the wind breaks through the waves, and the cloud sails will sail across the sea", Lu Xun The arrogance of "having the courage to face the bleak life". Ah, the melody of passion is rising! The splashing waves of the turbulent water are the tenacity of the fighters, deeply shocking, and make people understand the tenacity and unyieldingness of Sandia Song written by Hemingway; the bravery and determination of the Peking University mountaineering team to attack the peak even if they die; Sanmao gives up The city yearns for the determination of the desert. oh! The tough waves are rolling!

Flowing water, this masculine water.

Flowing water, flowing water, not only delicate and gentle, but also extremely majestic and powerful. Go ahead, run the water! Live forever in heaven and earth. Sublimate it, realize it! Accompanied by this long water charm, it shines in the annals of history! Oh, Shui Yun Youyou!

Comments "Water", from soft to strong. The author accurately grasps the characteristics of "water", interprets "tender water" with maternal love and childhood, and interprets "masculine water" with strength and courage. Soft and graceful, strong and bold, strong and soft at the same time. Secondly, water is called "flowing water" because it is moving rather than still. Whether it is "whirlwind", "splash", or "rush" or "impact"; whether it is "call", "kiss", or "shout" or "impact", the author is all flowing down the river in his writing, or Light and lively, or turbulent and vigorous, it perfectly demonstrates the ability to grasp the topic.

Poetic language is another distinctive feature of this article, and the profound accumulation of poetry is obviously its source. Not to mention the feminine and graceful poems of Li Qingzhao and Xu Zhimo, the romantic and tragic poems of Li Bai and Qu Yuan - these literati's poems are cleverly used to add luster to this article. Pengpeng" makes the beautiful melody of "The Book of Songs" echo in our ears. The language of poetry blooms like a flower, and "watery rhyme" is the sound of this flower blooming.

The structure of the entire article is like a beautiful woman playing the piano - looking at it, you will see beautiful features: the beginning sets the tone, the middle is soft and the other is strong, and the ending is sublime and clear at a glance; listen carefully, the rhyme is harmonious: "The soft waves of love are in "Qingyang" and "The melody of passion is soaring", "The ripples of emotion are swirling" and "The tough waves are rolling", one sings and the other harmonizes. The writing is symmetrical and can be unfolded and retracted freely, which makes people marvel at the young author's skillful writing skills.

That time, I understood myself

Each of us has a back garden in our hearts. When we feel worried or confused, we open the back garden, where the spring light is bright and the water is flowing. There is a Xiaoyao Bridge inside, with Wangyou Spring flowing and birds of paradise flying. Walk inside and let your soul fly...——Inscription

In the early morning, I was wrapped in a narrow bus and shuttled through the besieged city under dusk. Regardless of whether it is cold, stormy or rainy, I have walked alone on this street countless times. I don't know why this time I feel that my steps are so heavy, as if I am wearing iron shoes and walking in a huge magnetic object, and it is difficult to move an inch.

Maybe it was influenced by what happened in the morning! When I learned that I, who was considered to be firmly on the throne, had been pushed out of the English tutoring class, it was like a thunderbolt. The glory suddenly left me, and my heart seemed to have entered the woods in the late autumn. I am like the person picking up fallen leaves. I am remembering the passing greenness with a wry smile.

I was walking feebly, and the road seemed extremely long. Suddenly, a ray of sunlight stung my eyes strongly. What a beautiful scene it was! The sun is struggling to escape from the shackles of the horizon. It is a character that is unwilling to admit defeat! Under the clouds, the sun's rays gradually disappeared, only to be replaced by frightening shadows. Could it be that the sun is still unable to defeat the boundless forces of darkness? However, I thought wrong, and wisps of light showed up again, desperately fulfilling that persistence, "The emperor and the sky pay off," the sun shines brightly on every corner, and the clouds succumb!

I suddenly realized that my situation was similar to this scene. It turns out that I am just a young man who does not know myself. There was a young man who often complained that his talents could not be used. The philosopher told him: "Can you pick up that grain of sand in the ground?" "Of course this is impossible!" the young man said scornfully. "If there was a pearl on the ground, would you still worry about not being able to pick it up?" The young man understood: work hard to become a pearl! This is yourself, your true self. I feel resentful that "the road is like the blue sky, I can't reach it alone", but I still face life with the confidence that "there will be strong winds and waves, and I will hang my clouds and sail across the sea". Have I gained some insights from this?

I am really grateful that I walked into my back garden, understood and asked the answer in my heart.

I am the same, with the changing sun, moon and stars above my head, running non-stop at my feet, with my own special insights, pursuing bravely on my own road...

Comments

The same kind of ordinary raw materials can be used to make delicious dishes with full flavor in the hands of a skilled chef. However, the seemingly ordinary theme of "enlightenment of getting out of a depressed state of mind" is actually different in the author's writing. There can be a sudden enlightenment after such a winding path leads to a quiet place.

The rhetorical techniques of parallelism, personification, and metaphor are used freely in the article, especially in the paragraph describing the heavy mood. The unique metaphor reflects the author's excellent sense of language, which can't help but impress people.

That time, I understood the sound of falling flowers

The boundless dusk cannot outline the brightness of the sun, and the tired birds spread their wings to the wind. Confused, I silently walked home under the shadow of the trees, secretly dreaming about my future.

Suddenly, a broken petal of a flower fell on my shoulder and rolled down my body under the wheel. I was so moved by this little bit of desolation that I got out of the car and pushed forward. There is a short flower tree not far away. It is doing its best to bloom its last flowers. At the same time, those once beautiful pink flowers cannot resist Xiao Feng's call to "fall into mud and grind to dust." I held the car and walked toward the tree. I seemed to feel that the nameless flower tree was conveying some message about life. This was what I was confused about. Suddenly, another petal quietly fell on my left cheek, and then it lay down at my feet. I intuitively discovered that the word "Autumn" was clearly engraved on the remaining petal. It was once passionate and unrestrained, once full of life and interest, but at this moment when the flowering period is over, it can only be turned into fragments of life. I couldn't help but lament: Why do flowers wither? There was an inexplicable burst of excitement and sadness in my heart, as if something was being thrown away between raising my hand and letting it go, and what was thrown away was something that made me feel heartbroken and happy at the same time.

At this moment, I suddenly discovered that the nameless flower tree was densely covered with small green fruits. I don't know what it is called or what it does, but at first sight, I fell in love with that green and shiny little thing. Oh, the blooming and falling of the flowers are just to give birth to this little fruit! In an instant, my heart brightened. The true essence only emerges after you have experienced the noise and loneliness. Of course, this kind of noise requires you to use diligence, resilience and persistence to improve and survive, and this kind of loneliness requires your patience and active enrichment. Flower trees exchange petals falling for trees full of fruits, but what about our lives? Those beautiful praises, persistent pursuits, and countless tears of falling and climbing should become personal lofty ideals like flowers, rather than painfully pity the price of success. Because the sound of falling flowers is beautiful and happy, they leave more important essence for the continuation of life, more little lives!

The blooming of flowers is beautiful, but the falling of flowers is more meaningful. I want to scatter the petals of life one by one on the road to success. I will not regret, nor will I lament the inevitable stagnation between hard work and the end. Because I understand the greatness of falling flowers, I have also left the most beautiful things for the continuation of life!

Comments: The language of this article is fluent and the conception is clever. The author uses delicate writing techniques to turn the "silence" of falling flowers into sound. The "I" in the article inadvertently touches the heartstrings from the fallen flowers, and then from the noise when the flowers bloom and the loneliness when they wither, from the spring flowers and autumn fruits, I feel the philosophy of life and the meaning of life, which deeply enlightens people. The article can be said to be full of passionate emotions and meaningful meaning. The young author seems to have accidentally felt the philosophy contained in the falling flowers, but he is actually a thoughtful person in life.

That time, I understood them

I remember the chemistry class. The teacher told us in class that most of the waste of resources in China is due to unreasonable mining, such as the mining of small coal mines. The rate was only over 20%. When the coal kilns were abandoned, more than 70% of the raw coal was wasted. At that time, the students said angrily: "It's because the people in those areas are of poor quality and don't know anything about it." The importance of protecting resources and the environment. ”

Of course we are knowledgeable and we know the importance of protecting the resources and environment, but we are not them and we have not yet understood them.

When I opened "Wumeng Miners", when I saw a pair of faces trapped in darkness, when I saw the black ravines on the faces of the old miners, when I saw the black ravines of the young miners, Their tarnished faces—these photos are only in black and white, like charcoal sketches. But this is their true color. Their lives are only black and white. How can they be as colorful as ours?

Zhou Qiyuan, I remember such a name. He looks no more than ten years old in the photo, similar to my cousin. My cousin is the only son in the family. He is cute, innocent and loved by everyone. However, when it comes to Zhou Qiyuan, I can't see that all the delusions and innocence of a child of this age are reflected in his eyes as black as raw coal. In the photo, Zhou Qiyuan is puffing away. At the age of ten, he is a very addicted smoker. If you give him a cigarette, he can smoke a third of it in one breath. From the side notes, I also learned that Zhou Qiyuan is the youngest child in the family, but he has no choice but to go to the coal mine to make money to supplement the family. The only joy of the workers is drinking and smoking after work, so Zhou Qiyuan also learned... I couldn't help but cry when I read this - drinking? Smoking? He is still a minor! But he is also a miner. He has coal pouring down from his side every day, and his body is covered in the blackness left by coal dust. This also covers up the childishness on his round face and washes away the childishness he had when he was born. The longing...

The black coal has ground out the sophistication and vulgarity of the name "Zhou Qiyuan", instead of the gorgeous color photos of us in the city and the wealth and glitz of the name - bleak black and white!

Looking at the picture complicatedly, Zhou Qiyuan's eyes stared blankly into the distance. That time, I understood him and them—the miners.

When we fearfully think about hope before entering the examination room, when we are distracted in class and think about where to play during the holidays, the miners have been struggling in the "now" for a long time.

We have the "future", but they only have the "now", because the "now" is "survival". And "survival" means they just dig coal, because if they don't dig coal, there is no survival. If you can't survive, how can you think about education or the future? Those beautiful dreams for the future, even if they existed, were absorbed and buried by black.

I understand.

When the miners who were suffering from selenium lung disease and were dying on their knees shed tears, I understood.

Please let us find their future, grow up with these "two futures" on our shoulders, and then give it back to them.

I understand, because we are all lives. When life is painful, one life will look for another life. Their vicissitudes, their complexity, their black and white are no longer far from our colors!

Comments At first glance, this article seems to have nothing surprising, but if you chew it carefully, you will realize that the idea of ????this article is novel and unconventional. The article begins by criticizing the waste of coal mining. Following this line of thought, many people may mention the importance of protecting resources and caring for the environment. However, this candidate made a special decision and used the article "Wumeng Miners" he had read as an entry point to select from it. One detail - the dark face, especially the description of a small miner, arouses people's attention to the miners and the living conditions of a special group. It reflects humanistic care and can be said to be innovative.

Sunshine·Morning ·Appreciator’s eyes

When the first ray of dawn shone slightly on the earth, how many young people in the darkness radiated life because of its appearance of dazzling light.

The morning glow gave a young man great literary charm. Once, Turgenev accidentally saw a wonderful article, but after he inquired about it, he found that this was just an unknown person with no good works. However, Turgenev never gave up. After finding the author's aunt, he said to her: "Your nephew is a genius. I believe he will be able to create a brilliant career in the literary world. Please continue." Creation. "This young man did not expect that when he was down and out, his helpless scribblings would be appreciated by a great writer. From then on, he embarked on the road of creation, and he became the world-famous Leo Tolstoy.

The appreciators have morning glow and bright sunshine in their hearts. Without Turgenev's appreciation and adult beauty, the world would be missing a famous thinker, some meaningful books, and many loyal readers. Taiwanese writer Lin Qingxuan also had this experience. Once, when he was lamenting the state of the world, he casually wrote: "Thieves, their thinking is so cautious and their hands and feet are so flexible. People like this can achieve a great career in anything they do in the world. Why should we embark on the road of no return? "It was this sentence that inspired the confused mind of a young thief. He changed his past bad habits and now became the owner of several chain stores in Taiwan, with a prosperous business. When he talked about his initial experience in starting a business, he said excitedly: "Everything I have was given to me by Mr. Lin."

Bacon said: "In the heart of the appreciator, there is morning glow, dewdrops and Flowers that bloom all year round; those who ignore them freeze their hearts, the sea water dries up, and the mountains become barren. "Appreciation is a kind of giving, a kind of fragrance, a kind of communication and understanding, a kind of trust and blessing...

People. While longing for the sunshine, it has given many people the color and vitality of life. The appreciators have the morning glow in their hearts, and the sunshine has given them the vitality of the morning glow. Sunshine, light of hope! The light of life! Let us create our own blue sky with the company of the sun and play the strongest note in life.

Comments: The author of this article was able to innovate ideas based on the topic "sunshine" and prompts in the examination room, and gained from reading the idea that "appreciators must have sunshine in their own hearts in order to give sunshine to others" Philosophy should be established as the center of the article, and ideas should be planned around it; literary anecdotes and famous quotes from reading should be used as appropriate arguments to prove the point of the article. The young author talks about the past and the present, is rich in life philosophy, and stands out among many narrative-based articles. This is one aspect where this article succeeds. Secondly, this argumentative prose has a profound understanding and a novel perspective. It avoids the general pattern of argumentative essays and is written in a relaxed and lively manner. It starts with vivid description and ends with vivid discussion. The beginning and end reflect nature and are rich in literary talent. In short, reading extensively is the biggest secret to the success of this examination essay.

My close contact with suffering

In the sunshine that is still the same as before, walking into the gate of middle school, how many ambitions and dreams, how many ideals and ambitions, in the windy day In the beautiful sky, gallop and swim to your heart's content, don't linger or wait, stand tall, prove yourself, and fight for campus life!