Writing requirements:
Write down the life phenomena you have learned, or the stories about your love for life that have happened around you. Choose what you feel the most and write down the feelings and inspirations you have gained from it. (For example, what kind of understanding and perception does this phenomenon or this incident give you about life? )
writing tips:
1. The exercises are extensive, and you can use the materials in the textbook or choose another angle to write.
2. Learn to learn from the similarities and differences in the expression of this group of texts, that is, to express your understanding and perception of life by thinking about one thing or a life phenomenon.
We can use this expression for reference to write down the most touching thing, scene or life phenomenon among the people or things we choose. For example,
(1) To highlight the disabled people's love for life, we can choose how the protagonist practices calligraphy hard, and then add our own thinking and understanding on this matter.
(2) To highlight the positive and optimistic attitude of hard-working farmers to create a better life through labor, we can choose the happy scene that farmers are not afraid of all hard work under the scorching sun and see the seedlings grow sturdily, and add our own understanding.
3. If you want to write this composition well, you can think from the following aspects:
(1) From the perspective of writing, you can write what makes you feel valuable in life; You can write how you cherish your own (or others') life; You can write your understanding, knowledge and sentiment about life; You can write the course of "life" from scratch to nothing; You can write about how some people don't love life, and then remind readers to love life … and so on. You can choose one of the above aspects, write deeply and thoroughly, or write comprehensively, as long as you can finally express the central meaning of "love life".
(2) in writing content: you can describe one thing you have experienced in detail, or you can write a few things by combining details. Whether writing one thing or many things, it is most important to explain a truth related to loving life around a central idea.
(3) On the object of writing: you can write about human life, animal and plant life, and "life" of all inanimate objects in the universe. Choosing the latter to write may give people a refreshing feeling. Of course, it is more difficult to write well.
(4) In terms of expression, you can not only put your love and praise for life into the narrative and between the lines of the article, but also express your feelings directly at the end of the article, giving out praise, love and eulogy for life.
(5) In order to make the article more profound and vigorous, and to glow with strong "life" power, you can collect some famous sayings or great men's examples about "life" and skillfully insert them into the article, which will greatly enhance the cultural content and value of your composition and make people more instructive.
writing examples
ode to life
In the laboratory, researchers tried to separate human skulls, but they tried their best to separate them completely. A scientist buried the seed in the skull, and a miracle appeared: the seed germinated, but the seed gave off great energy with a weak body-the skull was completely separated along the bone seam. I am amazed at the creativity of scientists, and even more amazed at the strong vitality of such a weak seed.
Xing Linzi, a writer in Taiwan Province, said: An unremarkable seed often hides the brilliance of a flower season; An ugly caterpillar may turn into a colorful butterfly. Because life is a miracle.
Maybe you have read the works of Hugo, a French writer, but few people know how he fought against disease and created a miracle of life.
Hugo started publishing at the age of 2, and created Notre Dame de Paris at the age of 29. However, when he was at the peak of his creation and was full of passion, he had a malignant heart attack. He was 4 years old this year.
people are so sorry that this superstar is going to fall. However, Hugo was not pessimistic. Under the guidance of doctors, he exercised, punched, ran, swam and climbed mountains ... He fought against the disease tenaciously, his health improved and his physique improved, and he picked up a pen again ... Until his later years, he made unremitting efforts to create Les Miserables at the age of 6 and the drama Duerkema at the age of 8, and he radiated the brilliant light of his life to the world.
Xing Linzi, a writer in Taiwan Province, has a deep understanding of life, which stems from his love for life. At the age of 12, he suffered from "rheumatoid arthritis", most of his joints were damaged, his legs could not walk, his shoulders could not be lifted, his hands could not be lifted, and his head could not be turned. He was such a disabled person, who persisted for decades and wrote more than 4 books, and was praised as "the top ten outstanding young people in Taiwan Province". She not only creates the value of life with a pen, but also inspires and inspires the world to make progress and cherish life with spirit.
Life is given only once. Let's cherish life, let limited life create infinite value, let the fire of life burn brighter and release more energy!
Comment: This article selects three typical cases, and talks about them, praising the power of life, praising the miracle created by life, encouraging people to cherish life and let life create greater value.
Life
Have you thought about it? What is life?
once, by the flower bed, I saw a grasshopper. I took it home with great interest and put it in the basin. But this ant didn't stop, banging, which made me unable to sleep. I turned out of bed and looked at it: it fluttered desperately and struggled. Suddenly, my conscience scolded me, and a little life was going to be destroyed by me. I couldn't help letting it go.
I have a pot of Clivia at home. I cleaned the room, accidentally broke the flowerpot and left it in the corner. But a few days later, I found that new branches had grown. In the absence of sunshine and water, Clivia has grown tenaciously, ah! This is great vitality.
I have heard the story of Sister Heidi since I was a child: She was seriously paraplegic and couldn't go to school, so she taught herself all the courses in primary and secondary schools with tenacious perseverance and obtained a master's degree in philosophy awarded by Jilin University. She studied acupuncture and cured many patients. He translated books and presented them to people one by one ... She worked hard and created constantly, playing a perfect life movement with an incomplete body.
Life is given to insects, plants and people only once, because once is more precious, so we should cherish life, make it meaningful, and let limited life create infinite value.
comment: parody is a writing method that is easy for us to learn. This article obviously imitates the structural arrangement method of the text "Life, Life", starts with questions, and lists three typical examples like the text to prove my point of view (that is, the truth that I want to talk about, that is, the truth that I understand from it): Life is only once. To cherish life and make it more meaningful, we must constantly create ourselves.
Caring for life
The sun is like a young child, blushing and peeking at something. "Get up, lazy boy, come with me to the vegetable field and get rid of the weeds." Mom is waking me up. "Hurry up, or Hua Hudie will fly away." "Hurry up, I'll get up soon." I acted in panic, and I replied childishly.
in a short time, my mother and I came to the vegetable garden carrying hoes. Looking at it, it was golden yellow, and I was fascinated by those Hua Hudie that suddenly rose and fell. I ran around among the flowers and vegetables, carefree as the princess of these flowers, completely forgetting that I came to the vegetable field with my mother to weed. Mother was weeding among the flowers, only to see the hoe rising and falling from time to time; Looking up at me from time to time, it's like I'm afraid I won't find it if I run into the vegetable garden. I jumped out of the flowers and stretched out my chubby little hands to catch those beautiful butterflies.
"ahhh, I got it, I got it." I held the caught butterfly tightly and jumped to my mother: "Mom, I caught it, I caught it." Mom said, "Let go of your hand and let me see what you have caught." I let go of my little hand gently, but there was a dying butterfly with broken wings. I was shocked. I don't know how this happened. I couldn't help crying. Mother said quickly, "Don't cry, don't cry, don't catch butterflies like this again." Let them live and fly freely, and you can play with them every day. Do you understand? " I nodded my head.
I looked up at the butterflies flying on the cauliflower while wiping the tears from the yellow pollen on my face, thinking about the butterfly that I crushed to death. I felt that life seemed so short, so fragile and so small. However, if I can cherish its life and care for the lives of other animals like it, then our life will be even better.
Comment: The main writer of the article caught a butterfly and hurt a life unintentionally. From this, the author realized that life is short and fragile. Let the author understand that we should cherish life. And everything else related to life. The language of the article is simple, meticulous, rich in profound meaning and intriguing. This way of writing is to write a specific thing first, which can be something that hurts one's life or something that protects one's life, and then understand a certain truth about life. Have you learned this writing?
Loving life
Loving life is the basic of human beings, like some people who commit suicide by taking poison and die of leukemia, SARS and AIDS just don't love life. Sister Zhang Haidi, who was so seriously ill, didn't give up her life, but still faced life firmly. She is a person who loves life very much.
When Zhang Haidi was five years old, she suffered from spinal hemangioma and was paralyzed at a high position. Therefore, she never went to school. Since childhood, she began to teach herself knowledge with tenacious perseverance. She taught herself professional courses in primary schools, middle schools and universities. When Zhang Haidi Qing was 15 years old, she was sent to a poor mountain village in Shen County, Liaocheng with her parents. However, she was not afraid of a hard life, but dedicated her youth with an optimistic spirit. There, she taught children in primary schools in the village, overcame all kinds of difficulties, learned medical knowledge, and enthusiastically treated villagers with acupuncture. During her stay in Shenxian County, she treated people for more than 1, times without compensation and was warmly praised by people.
Zhang Haidi's spirit of loving life shocked me. What prompted Zhang Haidi to love life so much? It took me a long time to understand, in fact, it depends on my own thoughts: I want to live well, I can't just sleep in bed and wait for death, then my life will be meaningless, so what's the use of being born? There are people who are as optimistic as Zhang Haidi, such as Helen Keller.
I know that people's life is to be created. If you create it well, life will definitely be better.
comment: the writing (or thinking arrangement) of this article is: first explain what kind of person you think is a person who loves life, then tell the story of a person who loves life in detail, and finally point out the enlightenment you got. The author introduces Zhang Haidi's optimistic attitude towards life, actively facing life and fighting against illness, instead of succumbing to physical disability, but his heart is full of hope to meet a new life, which is really touching! Have you learned this way of writing?
knowledge link
what is life? (Various metaphors about life)
Life is a great sculptor, who has sculpted different shapes of countless creatures. From microbes invisible to the naked eye, fish swimming in the water, birds flying in the sky to insects crawling on the ground, fierce liger, gentle sheep, and people who are the spirits of all things, each has its own characteristics and skills.
Life is a great designer. It designs beautiful patterns of different leaves, such as needles, swords, circles and ovals ... It designs colorful flowers, such as white pear, pink peach, lilac lilac, yellow rape and red Chinese milk vetch ...
Life is a musician. It gives every bird a euphemistic voice to sing, and gives insects tens of millions of voices to ensemble music.
Life is a chemist. It synthesizes the fragrance of various fruits. Make each flower fragrant, and make green plants into factories for making sugar, starch, protein and fat.
Life is an engineer. It installs the legs of grasshoppers and fleas, making them the best in the high jump team in the world. It makes dandelion flowers like umbrellas, and carries seeds everywhere with the wind. It makes the elephant's nose long and curly, and it can move big trees. Make rhinoceros's horns extremely sharp. Cats' eyes change with the light.
Life is a Hercules. Grown roots can crack rocks and penetrate the earth. Small seeds can break through the cover of thick soil, and they are tenacious and never stop without seeing the sun.
Life is a brilliant doctor. It can repair tissues, heal wounds, enable earthworms to reproduce in stages, and enable lobsters to regenerate their limbs.
Life is an accurate timeteller. The autumn wind blows away withered leaves, the branches sprout in spring, the migratory birds come from south to north, and the cock crows, all of which carry the pendulum of time.
what a wonderful life, what is it? Where did it come from? This question has hurt many people's brains and made many wise people show their lack of intelligence.
Love the story of life
Draw a leaf for life
As long as you believe, there will always be miracles. Although the hope is slim, it will last forever.
American writer ou? In his novel The Last Leaf, Henry told a story: In the ward, a dying patient saw a tree outside the window from his room and fell one by one in the autumn wind. The patient looked at the rustling leaves in front of him, and his body went from bad to worse. She said, "When all the leaves are gone, I will die." When an old painter learned about it, he painted a leaf with green veins and hung it on the branch with a colored pen.
the last leaf never fell off. The patient miraculously survived because of the green in his life.
Warm reminder (inspiration from the story): Life can be without many things, but only without hope. Hope is an important value of human life. Where there is hope, life is endless!
Cherish life and not be afraid of setbacks
There is a man named Abag who lives on the grassland in Inner Mongolia. Once, the young Abag and his father got lost on the grassland. Abag was tired and afraid, and finally he couldn't walk. Dad took out five coins from his pocket, buried one coin in the grass, put the other four coins in Abag's hand, and said, "There are five gold coins in life, one for childhood, adolescence, youth, middle age and old age, and you have only used one now, that is, the one buried in the grass. You can't throw all five coins in the grass. You should use them bit by bit, and use them differently every time." We must walk out of the grassland today, and you must walk out of the grassland in the future. The world is very big. If people are alive, they should go to more places and see more. Don't throw away your gold coins if they are useless. " Encouraged by his father, Abag walked out of the grassland that day. When he grew up, Abag left his hometown and became an excellent captain.
secret (story revelation): cherish life, and you can get out of the swamp of frustration.