Shanghai examinee

I have deeply rejected darkness, because it is not as gorgeous as light, and it only gives people endless sadness.

Thinking and hope.

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Enjoy the darkness alone.

I fell in love with the darkness unconsciously. In my friend's photo album, I left a darkness. I said, take this quiet darkness as me.

I used to admire white persistently, but later I found that white was too pure and real to tolerate any noise, which made people feel false, just like I used to.

Although black does not have the enthusiasm and boldness of red, the freedom and hope of yellow, and the nobility and elegance of purple, it has its own unique beauty: massiness and simplicity.

When the tired sun hurried off work, I closed the curtains alone and enjoyed the peace.

In the opaque world, there is no meaning in my eyes except darkness, and I can't see my existence. But that's not important. The important thing is that my heart is going on and my mind is running at full speed.

It is best to make a pot of black coffee in the dark and smell the aroma of coffee, which can accompany you all night. You can remember the past without closing your eyes.

I can laugh when I see happiness and wantonness; I can cry when I see sadness.

Don't worry that others will spy on your true side. At this time, only darkness is with you, and the world is you.

Only friend. Take out the most precious things in your heart, share them with the earth and enjoy them with the sky. Look up at the twinkling stars in the night sky. They all embraced their little secrets in the dark!

Darkness has taught me to gain strength from enjoyment-tenacity and tenacity.

When the aroma of coffee in the room gradually dissipated, I opened the curtains, and the darkness in the distance quietly sent the little secret of dim light to your ears.

Enjoy the darkness alone, don't think that black is the keynote of sad losers, and darkness is the thoughtful eyes of smart and wise people.

Exclusive darkness, exclusive dark fun, exclusive dark spirit, exclusive dark freshness.

Authoritative interpretation

This is a masterpiece affirmed by many marking teachers. Different from many candidates, the author has found a new way to appreciate the word "darkness". "Enjoying the Darkness Alone" is really different, and the author's understanding is very distinctive: he can enjoy peace alone, keep thinking in the dark, laugh heartily, cry loudly and so on. This unique thinking reflects the maturity and calmness of candidates' thoughts and their distinctive personality, which is of course favored by marking teachers. So this composition was scored 62 points.

Two warm moments

Today's classroom is particularly depressing. Without the sound of reading in the past, there is no usual red-faced argument. Everyone felt very sad because Xiao Qiang's mother, who lived with her classmates, passed away yesterday, leaving only him and his sister.

In our class, happiness belongs not to one person, but to the whole class. Xiao Qiang's loss of his mother's love is not only his own, but the pain of the whole class. Xiao Qiang came in from the outside. He wore a black veil on his arm and his eyes were red and swollen. He trudged into the classroom step by step. Everyone looked up at him and looked at him sitting in his seat. The whole morning, the whole class was particularly heavy.

At noon, after lunch, everyone gathered around Xiao Qiang. Some people looked at him with gratified eyes, some people hesitated and sighed, and some people patted him on the shoulder. Xiao Qiang stood up, walked to the door of the classroom, looked back at everyone, smiled at everyone and went out. This is not an ordinary smile, but a forced smile when a child loses his mother's love. In order to comfort everyone, he is afraid of affecting his classmates' study. This smile means that he can survive. I firmly believe that he will survive.

In the first class in the afternoon, Xiao Qiang has a notebook on his desk. Xiao Qiang opened his notebook. There is such a famous saying in the notebook: "Life is not a happy dinner, but a struggle and tribulation; Struggle again and suffer again. " There are also precious words from classmates in the book. Xiao Qiang saw it with tears in his eyes and wrote at the end of the notebook: "I am a member of Class 3 (1), and my heart will be integrated with fifty-three hearts ..."

At this moment, I felt an invisible force, that is love. When Xiao Qiang was frustrated, the whole class warmed his already cold heart with a heart of gold.

That moment was so warm!

Comments:

1, the language is vivid, accurate, fluent and expressive.

2, the structure is complete, the beginning is fascinating, the main narrative is detailed, and the end is intriguing.

There are many variables in this composition, such as love, touching, facing ... and our class. ...............................................................................................................................................

3 Happy Pufan

There is an old cattail leaf fan on my bedside table, with a flat and wide handle and a huge fan head. The fan has turned yellow and several broken places have been fixed with cloth. Although it seems that it should have been eliminated long ago, I still can't bear to part with it, because it is a happy cattail leaf fan!

"Once upon a time, there lived a beautiful princess in a kingdom ..." From the age of three, grandma always told me fairy tales in her soft and soothing voice for many nights. In the hot summer, although it is difficult to understand the heat at night, I don't know when a refreshing wind blows, it's grandma! She shook a huge cattail leaf fan. In an instant, the rhythm was even, and the wind was comfortable and pleasant. Whenever I fall asleep sweetly in such a breeze.

Later, when I grew up, I asked my grandmother why she didn't use the electric fan at home to enjoy the cool. Grandma said that because I was weak and often sick when I was a child, I was afraid of catching a cold by blowing a fan, so she had to use a fan to enjoy the cool. Year after year, the fan slowly turned yellow, and I grew up under the care of my grandmother. Now I don't need grandma to fan me, but the cool wind has always stayed in my heart.

One noon the other day, it was hot and dry, and grandma was exhausted. She lies in bed to rest. On a whim, I decided to give her a fan. Grandma smiled and said, I can't hold on any longer. I am not convinced. My heart says you can do it at your age, and I'm sure you can. So I picked up the cattail leaf fan. At first, I slapped it hard for five minutes, ten minutes ... gradually, the speed slowed down, and my wrist was sour and hurt like vinegar. I looked at my watch and fanned it for less than fifteen minutes. Grandma used to fan for half an hour or even an hour! Grandma fell asleep soon. Looking at grandma's tired face, my heart was pricked and two lines of tears rolled out of my eyes. Grandma, my good grandma ...

I suddenly understood that grandma's cattail leaf fan is a happy cattail leaf fan with deep affection and love. Its cool breeze will accompany me all my life …

Comments:

Appreciate the metaphor of throwing vinegar. I appreciate Ye Zi's writing style of "borrowing things to write people". But this article is not a good creation, because the author's narrative only focuses on grandma, me and fans. In other words, the narrative of this article is not full enough, even a little skinny. In fact, fans are not only related to heat. In the memory of a sensitive and affectionate author, hot and dry is also a kind of warmth, and the buzzing of mosquitoes is also a kind of gentleness.

My future is up to me.

Since I was a child, my parents hoped that I could become a business tycoon, that I could earn a lot of money and not live in poverty. And I have a great ideal since I was a child.

When I was in kindergarten, I was determined to be a great scientist like Edison. So after I told my parents my ideal, I was immediately opposed by my parents. They said, "What's so good about scientists? Poor and white, living a poor life, and may be infected with various diseases due to scientific research. How dangerous! Let's become business tycoons and enjoy the life of the rich! " Because I was young at that time, there was no reason to refute them, so I had to submit to humiliation.

After I went to primary school, my parents bought me many books on economics, hoping that I could be influenced by them and concentrate on developing into a business tycoon. And every time I just pretend to look at those books that make people dizzy at first sight, I will still pick up The Story of a Scientist and 100,000 Why behind me and delve into the mystery. Once, I was secretly reading in my room and my parents found me. At first, they thought I was reading the book they bought me, and they were very happy. But when I picked up the book, my face immediately turned "sunny to cloudy". Then he swore: "I really don't understand why you must stick to the ideal of scientists." We all told you a lot of truth when we were young! " Don't you want to live a rich life? Don't you like living with four walls? ""Because Madame Curie said,' People should have perseverance, otherwise they will accomplish nothing'. Only by working hard to stick to your ideals can you succeed. "I hit them back." But if you put this perseverance on the ideal of becoming a business tycoon, you can also achieve something! ""But interest is the best teacher. I'm not interested in your future arrangements. How can I succeed? In addition, Gu once said, "Every man is responsible for the rise and fall of the world". At present, science and technology in our country are not developed. Only by making efforts to contribute to the country can life be meaningful. "I thought of a reason. But parents still "excuse": "But Bill Gates' life is also very meaningful." "Edison or Einstein, which life is more meaningful?" "Well ..." My parents couldn't fight back, so they had to follow my advice and stop forcing me to become a business tycoon.

Now, I am still fighting for my ideal and my future. I firmly believe that Dr. Sun Yat-sen said, "As long as we persist in struggle, we can embark on the road to success." I don't care about the opposition of others, no matter how the environment changes, I firmly believe what Einstein said: "Regardless of the trend of the times and the fashion of society, people can always go beyond the times and society and take their own correct path with their noble quality." Now, everyone is running, chasing, fighting for refrigerators, cars and houses. This is the characteristic of our times. But there are still many people who don't pursue these material things. They pursue ideals and truth and gain inner freedom and peace. "

I want to make my own decision about my future!

Comments:

What I said in the article is of great concern to me. I dream of becoming a scholar of literature and history, Rainbow Guowei, but my major is engineering. I really admire you for sticking to your ideals and not being moved by reality.

I wish you can realize your dream! When the wind and waves hit, raise my muddy sail and build a bridge on the deep sea!

Five people were poisoned.

As soon as I entered the room, I saw Cen Cen sitting in front of the computer playing with a small plane, sitting next to her grandmother. Cencen is an uncle's child, and now she is still in the middle class of kindergarten. Grandma often brings him to see me.

Cencen ran quickly. "Sister, sister, your computer grandma has someone to fix it!" " "

Fixed it? Is my computer not broken?

Seeing my puzzled look, grandma said, "That's right ..."

"I said, I said, I want to make a small plane, but after pressing the switch, the box rang for a long time, but there was nothing on this screen ..." Cen said.

"You're not at home, parents are busy, it's not good to call to disturb their work. What do I know about this? He cried and insisted on playing, so I contacted the computer repairman by the phone on the small advertisement on the stairs. " Grandma turned the corner.

"What did they say?" I began to realize that something was wrong. I used the computer this morning and found nothing unusual.

"To the two people, busy for about ten minutes. They checked carefully before and after. Finally, they said that they were infected by something ... what virus, fortunately, was deleted in time, otherwise the computer would be broken! "

I looked at the monitoring records of Rising on the computer, and there was no virus at all! Everything is clear, I met a liar! Before I left in the morning, my father asked me to replace the computer with a new plug-in. I remember leaving in a hurry, and the monitor cable was not connected to the computer at all!

"The two men were very accommodating and said that they would charge 50 yuan according to the regulations. They charged me 30 yuan according to our age. But 30 yuan is quite expensive, which can cover two days' food expenses. Fortunately, it can be used now, and this money is worth it! " It seems that grandma is quite grateful to those two liars.

I can only smile bitterly, and I can't tell grandma the truth. Grandma can't stand it when she knows.

Alas! Computer poisoning is not terrible, because there is anti-virus software; But people can't be poisoned. If people are poisoned, their eyes will always be black! .

Comments:

Short and pithy works! Very impressive! Personally, I think the penultimate paragraph is the best. "For the sake of all ages, we only received 30 yuan …", which is really the tone of an old man; The "old and small" is even more harmful to scammers than computer viruses.

A teacher is like water.

Some people say that teachers are hard-working gardeners, others compare teachers to burning candles, and I think-teachers are like water.

The post of a teacher is ordinary, just like the level is still and there is no wave, ticking. There are no earth-shattering feats, no flowers and applause, only day after day, year after year, silently guarding the small three-foot platform, sending away groups of students and leaving them tired.

The teacher is great, just like the stormy waves of water, beating the coast. Each drop of water is small in itself, but when they are gathered together, it has infinite power. The efforts of countless teachers can cultivate scientists, politicians, writers and artists ... and all talents who are useful to society.

Teachers are weak, just like water. A thin piece of paper can separate them. Teachers are also ordinary people, including secular desires. But they are role models and models for students, so they can only leave their physical injuries and inner pains to themselves deeply, and always smile when facing students.

But teachers also have a strong side. Like water, no matter how hard the stone is, it can't resist the repeated infiltration of water. In the eyes of teachers, there are no stupid students, only unqualified teachers. It is with this patience and perseverance that teachers can turn decay into magic and train ignorant children into useful people.

Water is changeable, but teachers' hearts, feelings and love for students are unchanged. ...

Comments:

Good as water. Laozi's Tao Te Ching has played an excellent role in the quality of water. Take a look at this classic when you are free, which may inspire more creative inspiration.

"Teachers are like water". Such a topic is very lyrical, in fact, it is very suitable for writing poetry. It is a good idea to write the teacher's hard and soft sides in the original text, but the description of "face" is general because of the lack of "point" In a word, this topic can be written in a purely lyrical style, and talking about it is not the best choice.

7 stand on tiptoe (narrative)

Hunan examinee

It is late at night. I tossed and turned in bed. My parents have not come back yet. I'm a little scared and angry. A family of three crowded into this two-bedroom and one-bedroom house with little furniture and an old black-and-white TV set. Although poor, I am still unwilling to bow my head. In this strange big city, I have no money to go to an excellent high school. But I have my own ideals and goals. Although I am in rags, I have my own dignity. This year is the second year of senior three, and the college entrance examination is a turning point for me to realize my life dream.

The only thing that makes me a little dissatisfied is my parents, who always get up so early and leave and come back so late every day. I really want to go to the park on weekends and go to the river to blow the wind, but even this small request has not been promised by God.

No, we must wait until they come back today. I know they want to make money, not for me, but I don't want them to be so tired. I am willing to live a harder life. After all, I still have a long tomorrow.

A faint voice came from the stairs outside the door, so light, so weak, so slow, and the voice slowly approached and stopped at the door.

After a long time, I slowly heard a slight metal collision, and an object was slowly inserted into the keyhole, which was a gentle rotating sound. The door opened quietly. "Be gentle, the child is asleep." This is the mother's voice.

I can feel her tiptoeing towards me.

There is no sound, but I can feel it. Light footsteps warm my heart step by step. "I licked the quilt again!"

Mother gently pulled the quilt, slowly moved to my side and slowly pulled it away. ...

From beginning to end, the lights at home didn't turn on and didn't make any loud noise. Only my parents stood on tiptoe and stepped on my heart step by step.

I pulled the quilt over my head, trying to keep my voice from coming out, but tears fell down line by line. I don't know. I cried that night. How long has it been? All I know is that it is wet.

Men don't cry easily, but I will cry a thousand times tonight! How many years, how many days and nights! Every night, my parents tiptoe around the dark room. What am I still angry about?

Zhu Ziqing has his father's back, Shi has his mother's body pushing a wheelchair, and there are letters from Mr. Fu Lei, and I, what do I have? I have my parents on tiptoe!

Parents are ordinary, but their love for their children is great and unparalleled, which is the greatest wealth of a person's life.

On tiptoe, my parents' love will never be forgotten in my life, and I dare not forget it!

The full text describes a period of lying in bed late at night, showing parents' love for "me" and their desire for understanding when they tiptoe home late at night, which is in line with the meaning of the question. The overall thinking of the article is clear, emotional and infectious. The application of structural arrangement and expression also shows the examinee's quite good literacy and ability. At the beginning of the article, a specific situation is briefly introduced. The second and third paragraphs are not only the footnotes of "anger", but also the necessary bedding for the following. The description of my parents coming home "tiptoeing to find me" accords with the feeling of lying in bed and expresses the truth. Writing is enough, and emotions naturally erupt. By comparing the parents' "toes" with Zhu Ziqing's father's back, we can sublimate this concern and affection to the height of human emotion universality and make the theme more meaningful. (Gao Xingyun comments)

8 autumn night

In my backyard, you can see two trees outside the wall, one is jujube, and the other is jujube.

The night sky overhead is strange and high. I have never seen such a strange and high sky in my life. He seems to be leaving this world, so that people will never see his back again. But now it's blue, shining with dozens of stars' eyes and cold. He laughed off his quarrel as if he thought it was meaningful and sprinkled countless frost on the wild flowers and plants in my garden.

I don't know what the real names of those flowers and plants are and what people call them. I remember a little pink flower. It is still in full bloom, but it is smaller. In the cold air at night, she timidly dreamed of the arrival of spring and autumn. She dreamed that the thin poet wiped tears on the last petal and told her that although autumn came, winter came and then spring came. Hu Die flies around, and bees are singing the songs of spring. She went on laughing, and though her face was red with cold, she still winced.

Jujube trees, they just lost all their leaves. In the past, one or two children came to beat the dates left by others, but now none of them are left, even the leaves have fallen off. He knows that after the autumn, there must be spring. He also knows that the dream of falling leaves is to go to Qiu Lai in spring. He lost almost all the leaves, leaving only qianzi. However, he took off the arc when the tree was full of fruits and lush foliage, and he was very comfortable. However, some branches are still low, protecting the skin injury he got from the tip of jujube, while the straightest and longest branches have been stabbing the strange and high sky silently like the subway, making the sky shine. Stabbed the full moon in the sky, making the moon pale with embarrassment.

The sky with ghost eyes is getting more and more blue, which is disturbing, as if to leave this world, avoid jujube trees and leave only the moon. However, the moon also sneaked to the east. And qianzi, who has nothing, is still silently stabbing the strange and high sky like a subway, bent on killing him, regardless of his various eyes.

Wow, a bad bird that swims at night flies by.

I suddenly heard laughter in the middle of the night and ate all over the floor. I don't seem to want to disturb the sleeping people, but the air around me should smile. In the middle of the night, there is no one else. I immediately recognized the voice in my mouth, and I was immediately driven away by laughter and returned to my room. The ribbon of the lamp was immediately turned over by me.

The rear window glass clanged, and many small flying insects bumped around. Soon after, a few came in, probably from a hole in the enough paper. I bumped into the glass lampshade as soon as I came in. One crashed into it from above, so I met a fire. I thought the fire was real. Two or three of them leaned against the paper cover of the lamp and gasped. The cover was just changed last night. It is made of snow-white paper, folded with wavy lines and painted with a scarlet gardenia in one corner.

When the scarlet gardenia is in full bloom, the jujube tree will dream of a pink flower, which will bend into an arc luxuriantly ... I heard the laughter in the middle of the night again; I quickly stopped thinking and looked at the little caterpillar wrapped in white paper, with a big head and a small tail, like a sunflower seed, only half a grain of wheat, and the color of the whole body was lovely and pitiful.

I yawned, lit a cigarette, exhaled smoke, and silently paid tribute to these green and exquisite heroes in front of the lamp.

1September, 924 15.

Appreciate:

This is an essay with profound meaning and unique artistic conception. It uses symbolism to express emotion through scenery and ambition through things, and endows itself with the spirit of fighting against the dark forces and persevering in difficulties. Its ideological and artistic combination is perfect. Here, only the art itself-its cold and profound artistic conception, its deep and strong confused and persistent state of mind, and the image of a lonely seeker are briefly analyzed.

The first is its unique artistic conception, cold and profound. The sky is extremely high, the cold stars are reflected, countless frosts are sprinkled on wild flowers and plants, and bad birds wander at night ... All these constitute a cold autumn night that seems to be of great significance. The author is a master of creating artistic conception and rendering atmosphere. The scenery he chose for this characteristic autumn night was cold, quiet and solemn. Most of them are static, and they are often suddenly mixed with completely different dynamics. For example, after a series of static descriptions, the pen suddenly turned: "Wow, a nocturnal bird flew by." So I received the effect of "Tonamiyama is more secluded". And that kind of solemn, cold and profound artistic conception is highlighted.

Secondly, the complex mood of loneliness and tragic, hesitation and persistence, self-discipline and lack of sobriety runs through the article. The successful expression of this artistic conception benefits from the use of symbolism, the lyricism of scenery, the expression of material ambition and the atmosphere of material conveying the artistic conception of the subject. In this paper, all the leaves have been stripped off, such as the small pink flowers that "stab into the sky silently like the subway", the small pink flowers that know that "there must be spring after autumn", the fallen leaves that dream that "there must be autumn after spring", the evil birds that swim at night, the midnight laughter, and the small caterpillar that "wears lovely and pitiful colors" are all infiltrating the writer's feelings silently. This strong feeling and desire, combined with the cold, lofty and deep autumn night, set each other off and became interesting, resulting in a plump, multifaceted and three-dimensional aesthetic effect of compound beauty.

Then, the image of the lyric hero, the lonely seeker, is established, which is one of the reasons why the article feels strong. The whole article is a landscape, in fact, the mentality of the lyric hero can be seen everywhere. This is because all the scenery is expressed through my vision, hearing and feeling. Moreover, "I" is mostly in static thinking, confused and rarely moves, but the image is clearly visible. There are only two places that directly describe my activities. One is that "I" heard laughter in the middle of the night and went back to my room. "The light band was immediately turned up by me." The second is the ending paragraph. These two concise words clearly outline a meditation on weak light. The image of a lonely and sad seeker clearly shows the soul that has been silently guiding the full text. The article is also more vivid and easier for readers to understand.

9 I found my self-esteem (title 1)

Examinees of Henan Province

I can't forget the "old-fashioned" coronation ceremony held by my English teacher.

On that day, the English teacher came to teach us in western fashion with a smile on her feet. Her leather shoes rattled back and forth on the teacher. Suddenly, "Kaka" paused, and she stopped in front of me in surprise. "Whose smelly shoes are these? Take them off in the aisle?" It turned out to be my shoes. I have beriberi and have the habit of taking off my shoes. I sat on the edge of the aisle again, and I don't know when my shoes ran to the middle of the aisle. "Sorry, teacher, it's mine." I said. "It's yours-look at your dress, you old-fashioned, you don't pay attention to appearance at all!" The eyes of my classmates fell on me like daggers, and I had to throw away my self-esteem and accept the laurel of "old-fashioned".

I have to listen to my father's instruction: "If you lose your self-esteem, lose it." . Just don't neglect the teacher, don't offend the classmates, and learn to bow and keep your eyebrows down ... "So, when someone says," Old-fashioned, give me duty today! " I said, "All right, all right! " ; When someone says, "antique, do my English practice!" " I said, "All right, all right! " ; When the teacher says "old-fashioned, sit in the back, it will affect the class capacity here!" " "I said," All right, all right! " ……

(There are 2 abridged paragraphs here)

I want to laugh with my head held high, like a chivalrous man who laughs after drinking a jar of wine in a movie. But I opened my mouth, but I couldn't remember the technical essentials of laughing at the moment.

At this time, our head teacher rushed into the class. "Tell you a good news, the composition of AA students in our class has come out," I am an old country without dignity ",which is very touching!" "AA- old school?" "Old school-AA?" Finally, my classmates gave me another look. I cried with a "wow", but it was the baby's cry.

I held my head high in that English class, but later the English teacher bowed his head and finished the class. Haha, find the feeling of self-esteem, cool!

Comments: This article is ingenious in conception, complete in structure and seamless in full text; The language is vivid and concise, natural and fluent, the description is delicate and vivid, the feelings are sincere and simple, and the description of the changing process of psychological activities is reasonable. In particular, the first and second paragraphs of the article are worth mentioning: the first paragraph of the article, a short sentence, played an important role in outlining, which led to the development of the following story and was used very skillfully. The two short sentences at the end of the article not only describe the mentality of "I" at that time, but also point out the theme of the article. The word "Shuang" at the end can be simply used as a comment after reading the article.

10 shore? Running water? bold and unrestrained

I love the dancing energy of "flying arrows, if the waves beat on the shore", which drives my young and upward mind;

I miss the homesickness of the wanderers living on the small bridge, touching my young thoughts and plucking the homesickness strings in my heart;

I realized that the silence of "sunrise is like fire, spring is like a blue river" caressed my young and arrogant thoughts and gave me a calm mind.

Standing on the high mountain, I miss running water. The water on the mountain, called waterfall, is as majestic as a roaring lion; The water on the plain is called river, like a dancing dragon, graceful; The water in the desert, called oasis, is like the ribbon of fate, which contains miracles.

Praise the flowing water and think about the great achievements of historical figures; Look at the generations of Tianjiao bred by the flowing Yellow River: the feat of Qin Shihuang's reunification of China; The great emergence of the rule of Zhenguan in Xuanzong of Tang Dynasty: Mao Zedong liberated the magnificence of China; The great man of history is the proud child of the Yellow River and the vitality of flowing water.

Sighing about the flowing water, thinking about Four Treasures of the Study's dignity, and looking at the huge historical sum. Wang Xizhi's vigorous and powerful calligraphy, Qi Baishi's Long Qian was played with shrimp, and Xu Beihong's horse was also a great success; The profoundness of China's literature and art is the approval of the roaring of the Yangtze River and an endless stream of water.

Realizing that flowing water is a solid shore where flowing water beats, the shore is built into water, and the water becomes shore. Touch the cool water, don't forget the land where we stand, love the clear water, and don't forget the bank canal for water diversion. Yes, if running water is the petals of the earth, the shore is the flower base under the petals. Love flowing water, don't forget to love the river bank.

Holding a basin of cold water to wash my face, I saw the earth rising in Ran Ran in the blue sky and green water;

Stepping into a clear stream and taking a refreshing shower, I saw the vitality bred in the flowing water of the stream;

Embrace the magnificent waterfall and clear my mind. I see endless motivation in my freedom.

Yes, water is the source of life, and running water is the sunrise of life; Water is the mountain of life, and running water is the vast plain of life; Water is the light of life, and running water is the flaming sun of life!

Looking back, lamenting the long river of history; Looking into the distance, I can see the river in the future. The future is not a dream, because the running water will take me to find the boundless sea; The future is not a dream, because the rushing water will give me endless motivation to pursue my dreams; The future is not a dream, because the eternal water will impact every vast world for me!

Cheer for the unrestrained running water and cheer for the future of youth!

Comments: the idea is "fine" and the idea is "new". This paper is ingenious, putting three seemingly unrelated things on the "shore"? Running water? Bold and unrestrained ",Lenovo is just right, which shows the author's positive thinking about the value of life. In particular, the theme at the end is clear and the charm is endless, which makes readers feel the philosophy and connotation of life and inspires people to forge ahead. Judging from the content of the article, we can't say that the little author has been thinking for eight years and his writing has been barren for eight years, but we can see his overflowing literary thoughts and unique feelings; From the perspective of language expression, it can be seen that this young author loves reading, is diligent in thinking, has rich savings and can be found at any time when needed. Prose-like language and rich associations give people beautiful enjoyment.

Hope to adopt! !